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Rhythm of Life – Tune 13 (RagSan)

AsthaBy AsthaDecember 4, 201646 Comments7 Mins Read
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Thnq sooooooo much for ur fab support frnds

Recap: sanky’s arrival to native

After 5 days…..

Rag: after went to native he totally forgot me….. not even single hi msg also……. She murmurs…..
San: I wanna call rag….. I wanna talk to her….. but here no one let me to touch my phone….. now sure I’ll call her
Ap snatched his phone…… what always u doing with phone? Go ur useless frnds r calling……
San nods n goes n stares his phone poorly
Then all r chatting eating….. suji, AP, pari, parvathi n children all joined with them…… all r enjoying…… n playing games

Uttra: dad u r out…..
RP : ok u carry on…. I’ll join after drinking water… feeling thirsty
Sanky’s phone is ringing …sanky didn’t listen as the place is noisy… RP saw caller name as “JUNGLI BILI” he lifted the call,
Rag: hey idiot sanky…. Did u forgot all of us? Ok leave I called to info that coming 15th is inter college culturals….. u r participating that’s final…. Ok…..
RP: stop stop….. if u called anyone 1st let them to tell hello….. then u can start… ok…. I’m not sanky, I’m that idiot’s father.

Rag: oops….. sry uncle….. jai shree Krishna
RP: jai shree Krishna beti
Everyone is freeze to hear jai shree Krishna as its hindi ppl use to greet elders
Parameshwar: who is on phone?
RP: sanskar’s frnd (sanky came near to rp n dp)

DP: girl friend?
RP: no… its boy…
DP: then y u said beti…. He grasped phone from rp’s hand n said hello….
Caller: namasthey uncle…. U r sanky’s I mean sanskar’s periyapaa ri8? (it is male voice)
DP: haan sanky is with his frnds I’ll tell him to call u….. (actually sanky is near them only)

Caller thnq uncle ….. call disconnected. DP left to hall were others also present
Rag exhales her deep breath…… thnk god bhaiya u was here only…. Or else sanky will be in big prob…
Rv: anything for u my dear sis….. bye….
San: appa phone……

RP: if jungle bili matter came to know ur grandpa n periyappa u r dead…..
San: appa she is just frnd……
RP: if it is then it will be good for u both….. be careful….
San called rag: hey idiot…. If u call anyone….

Rag: ur dad told the same dialogue so no need to prove that u r his son by saying same dialogue in same tone
San: ok tell what matter?
Rag: asking what matter? U don’t even thought to call me na….
San: hey now u saw na….. my phone Is not with me….. they not allowing me to touch phone…..
Rag: its ok….. we have culturals…. U r participating that’s pakka….
San: but…. No but vut…. Bye… come soon….

After 4 days

Entertainment place of our frnds is wall of village temple where is holy pool belong to temple….
(kovil theppakolathada kutty sovaru than payabullagaluku entertainment place)
Ramdom gossips is going….. bulbul stands in pool step….. she saw small insect n jerk abt to fall…..
San screamed ragini careful…….
All glared him like he is a criminal
Chorus: who is ragini?

San: raa… ragini….. who is ragini…. Pretended like he don’t know
Abhi: don’t act…. Tell
San: I said bulbul only…. U heard wrong….
Purab: if anyone heard wrong then that’s acceptable…..
Prag: but everyone cant heard wrong as same

Utt lak: ri8….
San has no option left….. voh… ragini is my frnd….
Aliya: only frnd?
San: only frnd….
Parvathi: sanskar…… come here….. u have to pack ur stuffs na…..
San: haan I’m coming ….. bye frnds…..
Rest: u cant escape……
Then he packed his stuffs n next day afternoon he left………

Next day Clg reopened
Aryan: see clg opened yet this sanky didn’t came……
Aham: haan we also went to native now came on ri8 time na…..
Shivanya: u know na their family is somewhat strict….
Rithick: whatever…..

Aradya: where is rag?
Rag: present mam…..
Rest: y late?
Rag: boring that’s y…… ok u know abt cultural na…… what had u decide?
Rest: till now we didn’t decide tmrw we will tell….
All attended their cls.

Next day
Aryan & aradya: ragini we decided to dance……
Rithick: I too decide the same…… but don’t know will anybody dance with me…… he saying while staring shivanya
Aham: hey shivanya will give u company…..
Rag: will u na shivanya?

Shi: voh… she stammers….. ha… haan…. I’ll
Aru: that’s great…. Aham what did u decide?
Aham: audience? Encouraging is good habit u know?
All gives dead glare…..
Aham: ok ok…. I’ll participate in essay competition
Voice: everyone deciding without me……

Boys went n hugged….. now sanky also came……
Shivanya: how was ur days?
Rag: y not just fab…… enjoyed well n forgot us….
San rubbing his head….
Aryan: ok leave…. Sanky in which competition ur going to participate?

San thinks….. mmmmmmm
Rithick: y don’t u play guitar?
Rag: does he play guitar?
Aham: if he started to play music then no one can hold their stress….. he have fastest medicine for all pains…. Its his music
Aru: good….

San: ok then I’ll enrol my name in music….. by the way madam selected which competition?
Rag: make up……
Shivanya: haan subject oriented…… studying fashion design n participation also make up…..
San: that’s ok but how u thought that ug n pg can dance together?
Rivanya: oye…. This is inter clg competition…. So we r participating behalf of our clg that’s it…. no pg kg…. got it?

San: ok ok cool…..
Competition date is coming near…… all r practicing well…… really lucky are our aradya&Aryan and Rivanya…… they practicing for dance….. its sooooooo romantic…… when the heroes placing their hands on heroines’ waist….. the blushes to hell….. due to this their face turned pink like rose
Rag doing demo make up in clg parlour n sanky also there n practicing guitar……

Rag: sanky…. Till now u didn’t got single lead?
San sees her cute face n smiles…. Hey…. If u show ur face in close up then how can I play sweet music….. if I see it horror bg only I can play….
Rag: u…..scold sanky….. he closed his ears as she turned opposite side
Aham sooooo sad…… the boy who wont touch book b4 exam day have to take lots of hints for essay competition bcoz on spot heading will be announced

COMPETITION DAY

All assembled at competition place

FIRA & SUHANI: welcome one and all present here…… here we gathered for inter college cultural function…. The winners will be selected by jury……..young n multi talented……PAVANI ma’am, SINDHURA ma’am, AKHILA ma’am and JANANI ma’am are the jury members…… beginning levels will be supervised by person’s decided by jury…… after filtering contestants in 4 level’s final level judged by jury…. All the best to all…..

All filtered to final level as they r really talented

Aham writing essay on SUCCESSFUL & PEACEFUL INDIA
Aryan & aradya and Rivanya danced together……. Their genre is romance for final both pairs beautifully danced…….
Akhila: well done….. fit for final level
Pavani: loved ur performance….
Sindhura: ya…… the feel of love is clear in ur eyes…..
janani: ya everyone will say u r lovers….. that’s much exact feel u showed in ur performance
Pavani: u all r so nervous as u r the 1st performers….. but we will tel result at end only….
Sindhura: so be nervous for
Akhila: some more time….

Rag: san…. Practise once again na…..
San: mmm….. he opened the guitar bag n shocked….
Rag: what happened?
San: guitar is changed
Rag: what?
San: this is not my guitar……..

Screen freezes on shocking face of sanky

To be continued…………………

QUOTE OF THE DAY
I’m not a perfect person. I make a lots of MISTAKES but I really appreciate those PEOPLE who stay with me after knowing how I really am

Howz the chappy frnds? I know it’s a wrong question bcoz chappy is really boring….. I’ll try to give better chappy next time…. Support me plz… frnds from tmrw/today (Monday) my clg re opens so I’ll be inactive n irregular…. I’ll post my chappy when I gets free…. Do support….. Keep smiling by urs loving Aastha

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    46 Comments

    1. Sherin on December 4, 2016 11:35 pm

      awesome…..just loved it

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:15 am

        Thnq sooooo much dear

    2. abi on December 5, 2016 1:00 am

      It’s awesome
      Machi kalakita poo

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:15 am

        Thnq sooooo much machi (u r boy r girl)

    3. silent_writer on December 5, 2016 3:56 am

      Woooooooooow detective i am getting ur influence heheheh awsmeee chapppy yaaa lovedddd it soooo sooooo soooooo muchhhh itssss fabbbbbbbbb hehehe sanky kuch to hua haiiii loveddd itttt

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:14 am

        Thnq sooooooo much my dear…. Ur cmnt is fab… Loved it…. Love u ?

    4. lovely on December 5, 2016 5:39 am

      Nice

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:12 am

        Thnq sooooo much dear

    5. pavani on December 5, 2016 5:53 am

      He he he pavani mam haaa

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:10 am

        Haan pavani mam…. Endukande nuv ippudu teacher kada…. Andhuke…. I thought to sent u link in fb but for my shock u cmnted…. Love soooooo much di…. Miss u lot… Did u liked ur guest role?

    6. inu on December 5, 2016 6:30 am

      Superb epi. Funny too.

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:12 am

        Thnq sooooo much dear

    7. Sindhura on December 5, 2016 6:52 am

      What is this yarcha ha
      I am jury member
      Loved it as always

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:11 am

        Haan akka kutty surprise…. Nuv chala lovable writer gadha andhuke nuv jury member… Ha ha… Love u akka

      • Sindhura on December 5, 2016 7:20 am

        Love you too sister

    8. Vk on December 5, 2016 8:04 am

      Awesome Akka

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 3:04 pm

        Thnq sooooo much chellam

    9. Sreevijayan on December 5, 2016 8:20 am

      Lovely update my dear…

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 3:05 pm

        Thnq sooo much akka

    10. fira on December 5, 2016 11:15 am

      Wow..what a surprise dear…..thank u so much for indicating my name sis….coming to epi…rprag phone conversation scenes are superb…sanskar bulbul slip aanathukku ragini nu sonnathu semma…yaaru sonna epi boring nu…semmaiya irunthuchu epi….keep rocking..take care….

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 3:07 pm

        Thnq sooooooo much for a beautiful cmnt akka. I’m happy as u also happy. Haan akka both scenes I liked….keep smiling n tc

    11. Asw on December 5, 2016 1:36 pm

      Nice keep going

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 3:08 pm

        Thnq soooo much dear

    12. suhani on December 5, 2016 3:15 pm

      Nice episode…thanks for indicating my ne also…so sweet Dear..ragsan scenes are nice….I hope.ragini will help get sanskaar guitar….waiting for next part soon… Keep smiling….

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 6:18 pm

        Thnq soooooo much akka…. Happy tat u liked it…. Howz the situation there? U n ur family safe na?

    13. Priyanka on December 5, 2016 3:31 pm

      Semma epic dear..
      I love it..keep rocking dear..

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 6:17 pm

        Thnq soooooo much chellm…. Howz situation in ur city? R u safe? Ur family mems reached home na?

      • priyanka on December 5, 2016 8:49 pm

        We r safe dear…unga veetla ellarum safe ah…tc..

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 9:54 pm

        haan da nanga ellam safe tc

    14. asra on December 5, 2016 6:27 pm

      awesome akka….i loved it akka….rp phone conversation superbbb akka….waiting for nxt one akka…tkcr akka…

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 7:49 pm

        Thnq siooooo much chellam anga situation epdi irukuda? Everything safe na?

      • asra on December 5, 2016 11:24 pm

        Na hostel akka so am safe akka….and Veetu ku call panen ellarum safe va than irukanga akka….nenga akka…

      • Astha on December 6, 2016 8:13 am

        Oh ok da…. Three days leave announce pannirukanga? Hostel la Dan irupiya???

    15. nikky on December 5, 2016 7:49 pm

      nice next part soon

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 9:53 pm

        thnq so much dear

    16. dharani on December 5, 2016 7:53 pm

      superb

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 9:54 pm

        thnq so much dear

    17. crystal089 on December 5, 2016 9:21 pm

      awesomeee…….. Loved it waiting for next episosde

      • Astha on December 5, 2016 9:53 pm

        thnq sooo much dear

    18. suhani on December 5, 2016 9:49 pm

      We are safe dear…thank u so much for ur concern dear..

      • Astha on December 6, 2016 8:10 am

        ?

    19. Moni_ragz on December 5, 2016 10:20 pm

      Awesome one… epo sanky ena panna pora nu therila.. bt ragini dhan support ah erukale.. ???

      • Astha on December 6, 2016 8:11 am

        Ya u r right rag is with him as pillar thnq sooooo much dear

    20. jazzy on December 5, 2016 11:25 pm

      superb dear

      • Astha on December 6, 2016 8:12 am

        Thnq sooooo much dear

    21. Ragz_teju on December 7, 2016 5:48 pm

      finally I got time to read it… wow I am one of the jury members hahaha….. thanku for it dear… chappy was awesome

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