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Home»Fan Fiction»My evil heart chapter 1
Fan Fiction Swaragini

My evil heart chapter 1

Charms22By Charms22December 4, 201648 Comments4 Mins Read
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Chapter 1

Ragini’s pov 2 years ago
“My sis is coming back to Mumbai from London, she was studying their for her weddingplanner degree and I’m getting engaged to Laksh Maheswari, my crush since collage.” “I’m so happy, my life will change after I get married and I want my sister to plan my wedding, cause she is an expert in it.” “I don’t know, how to share my happiness with Neha!”
End of her pov

Laksh’s pov 2 years ago
“I don’t want to get married to this bhenji(A girl wearing traditional clothes) Ragini, but if I get married to her, I will still have affairs with any girl, I want and she won’t even realise that her husband is cheating on her.” “Hahahahah, girls are toys for me.” “I heard that her sister Neha is coming to Mumbai, I hope she is hotter than Ragini.”
End of his pov

Neha’s pov
“I’m coming didi(sister) and I will never ever leave you again.” “I’m so happy, that you are getting married to your dream man, I hope you both wil stay happy together for a lifetime.” “Di, I love you very much and I will marry the guy you choose for me, cause I trust your choice.” “Mom and dad, why did you leave us and made us to orphans?” A crying Neha thought to herself.
End of Neha’s pov

Sanskar’s pov
“Why do you always take the woman, I love away from me Laksh.” “I really love Ragini and she wants me to get married to her sis Neha, cause she thinks Neha will be perfect for and I’m only doing it for your happiness Ragini!” “I don’t know, if I ever can love Neha.” “Laksh, I know you are playing with Ragini’s feelings, but I will never let you hurt her and if you do then I will kill you for ruining my Ragini’s life.”
End of Sanky’s pov

The next day RagSanLak went to pick up Neha at airport, Ragini was very excited, Sanskar and Laksh were shooting daggers at eachother and whenever Ragini would look at them, they behave like bff’s.

Laksh’s pov
“Are you guys looking for someone.” A very s*xy voice said, then my annoying fiancée shouted: “Neha!” “Yes didi it’s me!” The s*xy voice, which belongs to Neha said, at that moment I turned and was lost in her beauty. “So let me interdouce myself.” I said. “My name is Laksh Maheswari.” I said again, while I wanted to shake her hand,but she hugged me instead with her s*xy body and she said: “so you are the lucky guy, who is getting married to my di.” “And this must ve Sanskar.” Neha said and hugged Sanskar too, which made me jealous.
End of his pov

Neha’s pov
“I don’t like this Laksh, something is fishy with him, the way he was staring at me is making me unconfortable, his touch was very harsh on me and he was looking at me lustfully, so I have to be vry carefull with him.” “On the other hand Sanskar is very nice and I have a feeling he loves di, I jope di gets married to Sanskar instead of Laksh.”
End of her pov

Ragini’s pov
“I didn’t like the way Laksh was staring at Neha.” “I think I will ask Neha about Sanky, I hope SanHa get together, so that we both sisters get married on the same day!”
End of Ragini’s pov

Sanky’s pov
“I like Neha, but not the way like I love Rags.” “It seems like Laksh, that pig is lusting on Neha and I will try to protect both sisters from him, cause girls are like garbage for him.” “I don’t want to know how many girls he raped already.” I looked at Neha and saw, how Lucky grabbed her ass, while he was walking passed her and her face faded away.
End of Sanky’s pov

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    48 Comments

    1. Sindhura on December 4, 2016 8:10 am

      Nice
      I hope sansky marries ragini

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 2:53 pm

        Thanks dear❤️❤️❤️

    2. hari krishna on December 4, 2016 8:41 am

      God yaar plz. …don’t make laksh a very bad man …he is also good

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 2:56 pm

        Thank you very much???

    3. Sri on December 4, 2016 8:55 am

      Nice one make it ragsan

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 2:59 pm

        Thanks, but you will get to know soon the couples???

    4. Raglakholic on December 4, 2016 9:03 am

      Interesting one
      Is it ragsan or raglak??
      Poor ragini
      She loves laksh
      Nd sanskar loves ragini

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:04 pm

        Thanks dear???
        The couple can be 50% for Raglak and 50% for Ragsan

    5. nikky on December 4, 2016 9:49 am

      nice next part soon

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:05 pm

        Thanks a lot Nikky???

    6. abi on December 4, 2016 10:25 am

      Lucky in negative….
      Interesting

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:07 pm

        Thank you??

    7. Moni_ragz on December 4, 2016 11:18 am

      Nice strt.. hope ragsan get togther..?

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:09 pm

        Thanks dear???

    8. Astra on December 4, 2016 12:40 pm

      Omg..! Laksh is villan here..! It is soo interesting. Hope, neha and rag will be fine. And sanky is soo nice… update soon

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:15 pm

        Thanks Astra dear????

    9. lovely on December 4, 2016 1:03 pm

      Unite ragsan

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:29 pm

        Thanks dear

    10. lisa on December 4, 2016 1:05 pm

      ewww bad lucky

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:34 pm

        Yes he is

    11. jazzy on December 4, 2016 1:46 pm

      hmmm it is superb coool and interesting loved it a lot
      now i m.sure it is ragsan

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:39 pm

        Thanks my Jazz Jaan, love you sis❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    12. mark lotha on December 4, 2016 2:35 pm

      in ery fiction story sanskaar is potrait as gud man bt laksh is alwys potrait as selfish flirty ego centric arrognt who never cares or concern others feelings espically ragini..dear atleast sumtym laksh also potrait as gud man lik sanskaar..plz tis tym mak laksh a weak man n ragini intense lover…

    13. mark lotha on December 4, 2016 2:41 pm

      here also laksh my hero is goin to potrait as a bad man n sanskaar a nice n careing man….plz dear atleast symtym mak laksh a weak man n intense raginis lover…

      • jazzy on December 4, 2016 3:20 pm

        sry dear but she has already a story in mind why she will change it keep faith on the writer she will do something okk she must have planned something
        and i think u should write such a ff in which laksh is a intense lover i would love to read it dear ??

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:40 pm

        Nice reply Jazz yaar❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????

    14. silent_writer on December 4, 2016 3:33 pm

      Wohoooooooo rocked my sasu maaaa itssss superbbbbbbbb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:51 pm

        Thanks my Fizz jaaan❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    15. KritikaRajpoot on December 4, 2016 3:34 pm

      amazing please make it ragsan

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 3:52 pm

        Thanks dear???

    16. Liya on December 4, 2016 4:04 pm

      Nice one crazy lol?seems very interesting! Poor ragini she will be heart broken when she knows about laksh! I think its Ragsan?…

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 5:51 pm

        Thanks Liya yaar??????
        Yeah I too feel sad for Ragini
        I’m sorry for stopping Is enemity the first step of love

      • Liya on December 4, 2016 5:58 pm

        You are stopping it? But why dear?its different story..

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 6:52 pm

        Cause I’m so confused about what to write in it, but I will write it whenever I have some good ideas for it and do read my other stories: A day to remember, Swaragini: You stole my heart and Why me

    17. suhani on December 4, 2016 4:06 pm

      Plz.make it ragsan only no raglak…plz …

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 5:53 pm

        Thanks Suhani??
        In this story, I will show both couples but I don’t which couple will be the endgame

    18. Jessica on December 4, 2016 5:38 pm

      Osm… but can u tell who r d pair i m little bit confused

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 4, 2016 6:49 pm

        Thanks Jessica I myself am confused about the pairs, cause I will go with the flow, so it can be any couple with Rags

    19. hemalattha on December 4, 2016 9:04 pm

      awesome.hope ragsan will get marry

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 5, 2016 1:13 am

        Thank you so much dear???

    20. Moni on December 4, 2016 9:31 pm

      Pls make it raglak..nowadays there are so less raglak ffs..??..even i am a writer but can’t write due to my studies.

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 5, 2016 1:14 am

        Thanks dear you will get to know soon about couples, but please don’t cry

    21. A.xx on December 5, 2016 6:33 am

      Fab hate lakshya and love Sanskaar want Ragsan to get married xx post soon

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 5, 2016 11:38 am

        Thank you very much dear❤️❤️❤️

    22. asra on December 5, 2016 3:32 pm

      awesome dear….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 5, 2016 5:09 pm

        Thanks dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

    23. Ragz_teju on December 6, 2016 9:16 pm

      superb

      • CrazygirlS.P on December 6, 2016 9:37 pm

        Tysm dear???

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