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Home»Fan Fiction»Fallen apart – shot two
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Fallen apart – shot two

ChikuBy ChikuNovember 29, 201618 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello guys. I am back. Guys its going to be 5 shots.
Its specially for vaasu di and my orange. U both requested me to post so here it is. Hope u both like it.

FALLEN APART………….SHOT TWO

Next day everyone was sitting and enjoying as they have booked one full beach for themselves and it was the idea given. They were all sitting and enjoying. Twinkle was wearing a very beautiful floral off shoulder dress and chapals. He hair were dancing along the air and she was also dancing with yuhis 7 months princess kaira.

Everybody was enjoying. Rishabh, Aditya, Chinki, Mahi were irritating twinkle. They were teasing her, throwing things on her and making her crazy. Stop ittttt screamed twinkle.
They all looked at her and then at each other and started laughing.

Maa tell them na cried twinkle. Dont disturd her leela odered them and the very mext moment she also started laughing. Kunj was sitting just opposite to twinkles shack
and he was continusally looking at her. His face was completely blank. He was just emotinless. Usha was cursing her. Manohar and bebe didnt pay any heed to her. Anand and niiki were playing with ishaan.

They had spent all their day sitting, relaxing , playing, eating. They all wanted to enjoy the next day to the fullest , so they were storing energy.
It was night and dadi asked everyone to go to their room and get a good sleep. Everyone went except twinkle. She was sitting and drinking vodka. She has become an alcoholic and a partyholic in these two years. She was running from all her situations and was living a hell life.

Chinki saw her and came and sat next to her. They sat in complete silence and twinkle then finally she broke it. Chinki i always wanted a happy family, I always wanted to be happy but that never happened. My happiness is always snatched from me. Chinki its my personal advice if something wrong, please dont blame urself and dont dare to do ever sacrifice you can make. Let bhai also make sacrifices. Look here i am now, all alone. You know wat chinki my best partner is this alcohol now. Always being by my side and you know wat the reality of my life. I am lobed for my body not for my soul. Many men want to heat their bed with me. Its wat where i am standing. You know why they want to do this, they know i am alone. Chinki can i tell you one more thing, i ha…ve stomach cancer chinki. Chinki was shocked and she started laughing like a maniac. I am not joking chinki. Its true. Chinki looked at twinkle and slapped her hard.

Why didnt you tell it to anyone twinkle???? How can you do this with us???? Screamed chinki.
I am going and telling it to everyone. Come twinkle. Said chinki.
No we are not going anywhere chinki and not telling it to anyone. Chinki i have never been a good daughter to my mother. Please dont do this. I am living my life to die one day. Everyone does that but others die happily and i will die because i dont have anyother option said twinkle.

Chinki i am taking another vodka bottle , do also want asked twinkle. Are you out of ur mind blurted out chinki amd snatched bottle from hand and threw it.
You will not drink anymore twinkle , if you did ill tell everyone said chinki.

Kunj, manohar, usha and bebe were standing and listening to their talks. Chinki and teinkle saw them and chinki went towards them.
Hey, how are you?? You seems to be extraordinarily good. I am i right. Of course i am said chinki taunting him.
Chinki lets go, you need to get up early tomorrow morning. Cmmon bhai will come to see us please lets go yaar. I am not feeling well chinki. Please said twinkle.

They both went to their rooms, leaving them behind.

I know its boring. Hope u all like it. I know i didnt show any romance or teinj interaction but further episode are going to show their love again. Dont worry
Plzz do comment. Its last piece of my writing. Hope u all like it.
Plz do comment and support me
Love u all????
Thank u to all of u who commented on my last shot. Thannk uuu very much
Aadaya- mom me maaf nahi kara. Chupe ke likh rahi haun?????
Bieeee
Hope u all like it

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    18 Comments

    1. SarahKhan on November 29, 2016 11:55 pm

      Hey. I literally loved it. Pls post the next part soon and show twinj’s confrontation. (If it isn’t going against your storyline). Will be waiting for the next part. :’)

    2. Shakti on November 30, 2016 12:56 am

      Chiku…today I decided not to be silent reader & comment….And all the stories r sad….Somewhere I still want a happy ending as I love stories that ends on a happy note…rest is up to you…
      If u don’t mind may I ask why it’s ur last piece of writing?
      Stay blessed always…

    3. paavu on November 30, 2016 1:36 am

      lovely and painful

    4. Adya on November 30, 2016 5:45 am

      Ohhooo…nahi maaf Kiya…!!!! Koi ni chup ke likhne ka bhi alag hee Maza hota h…
      Vaise agar meri mummy ko pata chala n …to vo mera TU pe last day Hoga….
      Well the episode…every part was full of twists…I loved it..Nd plzzzzzzzzz post soon…
      Love u….

    5. Komal123 on November 30, 2016 6:02 am

      Chiku amazing!
      What a comeback!
      I thought you will never write again!
      Please post soon!
      #love ??

    6. ranabulbul on November 30, 2016 6:16 am

      i know chikii that i am so bad but kya krun mai tere first shot le bhi cmnt ni kiya or na hi hi tujhe message kiya but kya karun yr ptujhe pta hai ki ghr pe kya halaat hai hain or uper se exams or uper se mera skit kr uper tum sabke ff or uper se mera et pack kHTAM ye papa ke phone se kr rhi hun message ye shot padh ke bura lga hope tw ko ye bimari na ho yr or ek kam kr apne mamma ko jor se jhappi de or sorry bil de han han guve my heart emojis to vasu didu and ayu coz they asked u to extend it na hug to nhi kr skti main。。。。。。 or agr lkoi miss kare mujheto batana aacha abhi bbye i will be back in the grup on 5 pane sath ek treat leke so abhi ke liye bie

    7. Ramya on November 30, 2016 6:43 am

      Hey it’s awesome amazing bt feeling bad fr twinkle n I hope dey unite soon
      Plsssss asap dear
      Loved it n love u

    8. Sushmitha on November 30, 2016 9:32 am

      Amazing episode chiku feeling sad for twinkle pls post the next asap if you can

    9. Ayu on November 30, 2016 11:07 am

      ???tumne bhi mujhe rula diya! Pehle smile karaya phir rula diya!
      How can they be so insensitive to her?! Bechari Twinki!
      Par i am happy that she is trying to move on from that awful family…but i still want them to be together!
      Cont soon
      Thank u darling!
      Love u❤️

    10. kruti on November 30, 2016 11:33 am

      Hey chiku
      This was so emotional….hope twinkle gets well
      Continue soon

      Loads of love???

    11. Jisha on November 30, 2016 12:01 pm

      Awesome episode… fabulous…waiting for next part…

    12. Priya23 on November 30, 2016 12:57 pm

      Hey chiku…..the episode is very emotional…. Felt very bad 4 twinkle…..kunj what r he doing….uurrrrgg.,,,,,,,,,I m filling like slapping him…..plsss ending on a happy note…… Luv u sooooo much….plsssssssssssss post next epi soooooon……I m waiting ….tc.. byyyyy……

    13. TwinjSidMin on November 30, 2016 1:10 pm

      Hey chiku I thought of saying you to write 5 shots instead of 3 but then kept quiet as u r hiding from your mum and writing…but now I’m happy that u will be writing 5 shots…this shot is amazing…felt very bad for twinkle…dont let twinkle forgive Kunj easily…freaking damn excited for next shot…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next soon…if possible post it by today night next shot…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

      Thank you so much for posting it soon on my request…

      #XOXO

    14. Simiyy on November 30, 2016 1:55 pm

      Hiii
      It was really good but I am feeling sad for Twinkle
      Post soon
      ???

    15. twinj on November 30, 2016 4:49 pm

      Hey chiku,
      Luved the epi.Awesom plus amazing plus emotional epi.Felt very bad for twinkle.Post soon.Hope it ends with a happy note.

    16. twinjfan.tamanna on November 30, 2016 8:54 pm

      woowww… ur epi was so emotional chico… I seriously loved it…

      love you

    17. Purnima.agrawal30 on December 1, 2016 12:56 am

      awesome amazing emotional sad epi

    18. Aanya_pandey on December 1, 2016 2:43 pm

      Super story line yrr.. awesome epi

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