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Home»Fan Fiction»Can our children do what we couldn’t? A DevAkshi FS (Few Shots) : Part 1
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Can our children do what we couldn’t? A DevAkshi FS (Few Shots) : Part 1

Niki645By Niki645November 19, 201619 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys, this is Niki. Seeing the positive response on my last OS, Love Forever, I decided to write an FS this time.
I hope you guys like it. Let’s start.
So, this is about DevAkshi, who were happily married. Sona gave birth to two children, Raj and Trisha. However, Ishwari and Radharani created differences between them, and the two left each other. Sona was pregnant with a third child and took the other two little kids along.

Present:
IN DELHI, A BUNGALOW:
A sweet little girl of 7 years is shown, combing her chestnut-brown, long hair. A 9-year old boy comes along, with a 5-year old boy in his arms.
9-year old Boy: Chal na Trisha (Come na Trisha), come fast, Mummy’s waiting.
Trisha: I am coming Raj bhaiyya. Have some patience!
All the three kids go downstairs.*
Raj(to the little boy in his arms): Vivaan, aaj ma ne kya banaya hai bol.(Vivaan, tell me what Mummy has made today.)
Vivaan: Halwa!!!!
A pretty woman comes out of the kitchen.
Lady: Sahi kaha!! Trisha, tumhara favourite Halwa! (Rightly said!! Trisha, your favourite Halwa!)
Trisha: East Or West, Sona Mummy’s Halwa is the Best!
Sona serves the halwa, and the family shares a hug.
*You can take Raj as Meet Mukhi, Trisha as Spandan Chaturvedi and Vivaan as Shivansh Kotia.

IN DELHI, A HUGE MANSION:
A woman is shown in the kitchen, cooking something.
A man comes in.
Man: Kya bana rahi ho, maa? (What are you cooking, Ma?)
Woman: Tumhare pasand ka Halwa, Dev (Your favourite Halwa,Dev)
Dev: Thank you Maa!
The woman of course, is none other than our devil Ishwari 

AT SONA’S HOUSE:
(Sona has gone out to the market)
Raj, Trisha and Vivaan are sitting on their bed, chatting with each other.
Vivaan: Bhaiyya, my friend told me thatit is his daddy’s birthday today. Where is our Daddy, and when is his birthday?
Trisha: Yes Raj Bhaiyya, where is our Daddy?
Raj: I think there is something serious about our Dad, that Mummy doesn’t want to tell us.
Trisha: Then how do we find out?
All of them think, and think.
Trisha: IDEA! Let’s look in Mummy’s diary. I am sure she wrote something about Daddy.
Raj hesitates but agrees.
Raj: Ok fine, let’s go to Mummy’s room and find her diary.
The children go to Sona’s room.

TO BE CONTINUED………..

So, how did you like it? I hope you enjoyed the track. Do let me know in your comments below.
Thank you so much!

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    19 Comments

    1. AnShIta on November 19, 2016 10:41 pm

      Hey Niki di!!
      This was AMAZING!!! Loved it!!
      It’s really such a unique idea!
      Honestly, I think I might just be able to crack the mystery, but I’ll keep my lips sealed for now!???
      Please do post the next one soon!
      Love ya!?????

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 5:39 am

        Thank u so much Anshi!!!
        I will definitely post the next part asap?
        Lots and lots of love???

    2. Ria on November 19, 2016 11:21 pm

      Hey Niki,
      It surely sound interesting and engrossing. Please, try posting the next one sooner. I’d be waiting.

      Loads of love❤

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 5:40 am

        Thank u very much Ria di!!
        Wii surely post next part soon.?
        Love u?❤️

    3. Manya on November 20, 2016 12:05 am

      Hey niki
      Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Epi
      Post soon?
      Love love?

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 5:41 am

        Thank u so much Ayushi!!!!!
        Will post asap??
        Loads of love??❤️

    4. Zuha Fatima on November 20, 2016 5:58 am

      Hey Nikki,
      The story seems to be engrossing and interesting and coming to this update, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up.

      Loads of love and support ❤❤❤

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 10:59 am

        Thank u so much di!!!!??
        Yes,seeing ur sweet comment surely brought a smile on my face!!?
        Lots and lots of love ❤️

    5. Maleeha on November 20, 2016 8:20 am

      Amazing idea……??????????……..and very nicely written……❤??…….the kids are so????…..mama’s diary……??

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 11:01 am

        Thank u so much Maleeha di!!!
        So happy to know that u liked the kids?
        Lots of love??

    6. rockzzzzzz on November 20, 2016 8:46 am

      Hey it was really amazing..i was completely lost and presently there are so many guesses..so many questions coming in my mind..want to know their answers soon
      so plz plz post soon?????

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 3:14 pm

        Hey Pari di,thank u so much!!!!!
        Hope u saw my reply below???

      • rockzzzzzz on November 20, 2016 3:16 pm

        Yup i did?

    7. Aarti32 on November 20, 2016 9:54 am

      U hv chosen all cute cute kids as Devakshi’s kids..n d kids r really vry chaloo..??

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 1:09 pm

        Thank u very much di!!!!
        Yes, they are super chaloo??

    8. Niki645 on November 20, 2016 11:39 am

      Thank u so much di!!!!!
      Hopefully will post next part today itself ??
      Loads of love❤️️?

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 1:08 pm

        This comment is meant as a reply to ur comment Pari di??

    9. Princess. on November 20, 2016 12:02 pm

      Awesome beginning please post next episode soon

      • Niki645 on November 20, 2016 1:10 pm

        Thank u so much!!!
        Will try to post next part today??
        Love??❤️

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