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i will always love u…(part 21) udaan

komaljanuBy komaljanuNovember 18, 201626 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys I m really very happy that ul r liking my ff……..and even that ul want me to continue writing.thanks a lot for ur love and support….hope ul like this part too…just keep on supporting me guys…
Enjoy reading…….

Suraj goes to chakor..
Suraj: chatterbox I want to say u something….
Chakor: say na….
He removes a bookey which he was hiding and kneels….
Suraj: I never thought that I will be doing this…but I have to do it…
Chakor: what sadu…..
Suraj: I want u to be mine forever…..i love u………….
Chakor gets shocked…..she make suraj stand…
Chakor: I love u too sadu
Suraj gets very happy and hug her……………..
When some one splash water on him……he gets up………actually it was his dream……….
Suraj: princess……….
Ragini: bhaiya hug bhabhi later…………u r getting late for the college…….
Suraj: how do u know that I was hugging chakor….
Ragini: bhaiya u were hugging bhabhi in ur dreams but was hugging ur pillow in reality…
Vivan: its ok ragini it happens……
And they both laugh.
Suraj: stop laughing guys…
Vivan: yup ragu stop laughing…… I told na it happens.

And again they laugh…suraj gets irritated and goes from there….

They get ready and meet in the college….suraj sees chakor and smiles.
Chakor in mind: why he is smiling so much….god is he planning to irritate me……..

Imli comes to suraj.
Imli: ok so now I have to call u jeeju…..
Suraj: stop it imli.
Imli: why should I stop it..one time it was u who use to tease me and vivan…and now its my turn……
Vivan: guys but there is a problem.
Suraj: what..
Vivan: how should we make chakor realize his feelings.
Imli: yup we didn’t thought of this…
Suraj thinks something and laughs.. imli sees him smiling….
Imli: whats cooking in ur mind.
Suraj: something very interesting.
Vivan: but how will we make her realize this yaar..
Suraj: the same way ul made me realized my feelings…..
vivan: same way..
suraj: wait a sec I will tell u how.
Suraj calls someone and talks with him.
Vivan smiles………imli is confused.vivan explains her..suraj ends the call..and smiles seeing vivan.
Imli: brilliant idea suraj..
Suraj: now I will see.how that chatterbox doesn’t realize that she loves me..
Vivan: yup she will..but for now lets go in class….
Imli: yup the lectures r about to start and di already went….
Vivan: and even arjun.
Suraj: please vivan don’t take arjun’s name in between…..
Imli: yup vivan its enough….
Vivan: ok fine but lets go yaar….

They go in class..suraj sses chakor and sits beside her.and smiles again.
Chakor: sadu r u fine…..why r u smiling so much today……..is it so that u brushed ur teeth very nicely today..
And she laughs….suraj just stare at her lovingly and doesn’t say her anything.
Chakor: oh no it means something very bad happen.i joked on u and u didn’t told me anything.r u fine.i guess u r having fever.
She checks his fever. Suraj smiles again.
Chakor: u don’t have fever so what..
Suraj: this is something that u will realize soon.
Chakor: I will realize soon??
Suraj:yup….

Teacher comes and she explains..
chakor whenever she turns….she sees suraj staring at her and smiling…she was unaware of everything.
Chakor in mind: why he is smiling so much.he is also not irritating me……..god please help me….

Precap: someone comes and blindfold suraj…………chakor gets shocked…………

Hey guys I have to do some work so I m writing only a little today but ya I will write lengthier ones tomorrow hope ul understand….and will support me…sorry and ya…hope ul like it.thanks for reading…and do let me know how it was…sorry once again….

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    26 Comments

    1. CrazygirlS.P on November 18, 2016 12:59 pm

      Superb dear❤️❤️❤️

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 1:35 pm

        thanks sam…..glad that u r liking my ff..

    2. Mitha on November 18, 2016 1:00 pm

      Short ep but good one!
      Smiley Suraj is always cool to imagine!
      Keep writing ! Waiting for tomorrow!

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 1:36 pm

        thanks alot mitha…….

    3. Sia on November 18, 2016 2:59 pm

      Wooh!!! It is owesme…

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:40 pm

        thanks dear…….

    4. Shriya on November 18, 2016 3:00 pm

      It was nice…i guess tina comes and blindfolds suraj…is it correct???

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:41 pm

        we will see tomorrow anyways thanks alot…

    5. Megha on November 18, 2016 3:11 pm

      It was a bit short but this part can revive it…It was amazing

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:42 pm

        thanks megha and i m sorry too.but had some work……..

    6. Priyadarshini on November 18, 2016 3:48 pm

      OMG very interesting and i luvvvvv it. keep going……

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:42 pm

        thanks dear…….

    7. Nisi on November 18, 2016 4:32 pm

      Short and Sweet part……

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:41 pm

        thanks nisi.

    8. Dil dhanushi on November 18, 2016 5:32 pm

      It was amazing. Short bt interesting.

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 5:41 pm

        thanks dear.

    9. Niriha on November 18, 2016 6:16 pm

      Awesome

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 8:31 pm

        thanks dear….

    10. Vivi on November 18, 2016 8:55 pm

      I couldn’t comment for a long time due to exams.. read the FF’S… They were really awesome ???.. very cute scenes.. Well done didi!!!??? Keep writing more and more wonderful scenes..?????

      • komaljanu on November 18, 2016 10:39 pm

        thanks amnu……..

    11. Shweta on November 18, 2016 10:37 pm

      Ummmmaaaaa darling u r just awesome keep writing????????☺☺☺☺☺????☺☺☺☺

      • komaljanu on November 19, 2016 12:29 pm

        thanks alot shweta…..

    12. Khushi on November 18, 2016 10:44 pm

      Amazing

      • komaljanu on November 19, 2016 12:29 pm

        thanks khushi

    13. priti on November 19, 2016 5:38 pm

      Really vry intresting

      • komaljanu on November 20, 2016 2:02 pm

        thanks priti…..

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