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Home»Fan Fiction»Love u zindagi (Raglak) – Part 1
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Love u zindagi (Raglak) – Part 1

crystal089By crystal089November 17, 201678 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hello everyone I am back with another ff its a raglak ff one more question is swaragini going off air due to less trp I have not watched show and have less idea about current track will anyone tell me what’s all this
And know enough of my bak bak guess in advance I am telling I am irregular I can’t promise to be regular but’ll try my best to update soon I’ll update my other ff soon my next update will be on 2nd December or before that I possible
Sorry guess I read many raglak and ragsan ff but unable to comment sorry for that

So know lets come to story its about raglak totally about raglak by title what u think………… love u zindagi………………… a idea came to my mind after hearing this song I liked it so thought to pen it down hope u people like and plsz give ur valuable comments about the story line and suggest some ideas
Coming to story its all started when ragini pushed swara in river sanskar saved her ragini did emotional backmailing drama (which I feel spoiled her character) and married laksh, swara was heart broken knowing the betrayal by her sister and her love sanskar and swara’s fake marriage drama to expose ragini, after all lots of drama that happened in serial (about which I have very few idea because I didn’t watch show) and they finally were successful in exposing ragini by that time swasan fell in love they wanted to expose ragini to prove swara innocent by the time laksh too realised that swara was his just attraction
It was when swasan kidnapped laksh and ragini kidnapped sharmistha and forced swasan to get married laksh some how escaped and was heart broken to see the scene but some where he was ok with all that but his ego and so called anger that swara betrayed him didn’t allow him to accept the truth
Swasan convinced laksh and trio made a plan and exposed ragini

Scenes start with mm
Ragini was exposed in front of family she was standing in middle of hall whole maheswari and gadodia family was their swara was giving helpless look sanskar was standing supporting her laksh was angry he had mixed emotions
Sujitha was giving her disgusting look ap was helpless she knew at what depth ragini loved laksh and she liked swara but never wanted her to get married to laksh she felt that ragini was idle of laksh no one could ever be a better life partner for him than her she was disappointed when laksh said he loved swara she could clearly feel ragini’s pain when raglak got married she was happy she belived that it was their destiny to be together and they were dp rp pari adarsh whole family was angry on her but two pairs of eyes were watching her helplessly one was ap and other was of laksh for some reason he felt sad for her she was once his friend ragini was standing in front of all having no emotions she had realised her mistake long back and was guilty but didn’t wanna accept that
Dadi slapped her ragini held her cheek she was shocked dadi was her helper in all what she did and when time came she was like those mice in drowing ship which tries to save themselves first she was first time feeling helpless and angry on her fate
She didn’t utter a word
“I am ashamed of u ragini how can u do that” shekar said holding her by shoulders
“we trusted u ragini but what u did” sharmistha said ragini some where felt that she was like her mother though she never gave her that place but she was like her mother but she knew reason for her doings but then too she wanted her daughter swara’s safe future
“swara loved u more than a sister and friend and u stabbed her back how can u, how can u separate her from her love how can u answer me ragini” sharmistha said
Swasan were shocked listening to her words how can she do that she knew that swasan loved eachother and wanted to give their relation a chance and she was the one after dida who knew whole truth of ragini’s doing
“what sin we did that u did so much to us how can u for once also u didn’t think of us” sujitha said
“I am ashamed to call u daughter” shekar said ragini looked up her eyes were moist and teary she never got father’s love from shekar but then too he was her father
laksh looked towards her he knew very well about ragini and shekar’s relation he was feeling sad for her his heart pained for some unknown reason
all abused her all were angry on her she left from their
it was night
ragini was walking like a lifeless body on road she reached the place where she pushed swara she smiled slightly at her helplessness

at MM
laksh was unable to sleep after she left swasan confessed that they wanted to give their relation a chance sharmistha unty was happy very much I felt angry on her she knew everything but still she selfish women and dadi I have no words to say about her he knew that she was greedy and selfish but he thought she loved her ladoo too much and could do anything for her but what she did today proved that everyone was wrong he was turning his sides on bed
he was feeling more sad for ragini thinking how much she would have been hurted she loved her dadi too much and scarified her every dream for her but today she was heart broken no one cared for her no one paid any head to her even I was among them
wait she was heart broken what if she commits suicide oh no poor girl he sat on bed with sudden jerk
Scenes shift to ragini
She looked down towards flowing river
Shall I jump If I die I am sure no one would cry swara she may feel sad but no one else they don’t need me they would be happy if I go away from their lives she headed few steps forward but then stopped
At laksh’s room
Wait I am sure she won’t do anything like that she’s brave she may think something like that and what if she does she mad and can do anything what if that senseless girl jump in river or come in front of car or truck or what she hangs herself from fan
Ragini stopped
Wait why should I jump If I drown and die it would be difficult for some police people to find my body what could be more creative way to suicide what if I come in front of truck or car…………. yuck no all blood blood I don’t wanna die like that and if my face gets spoiled by that it would be difficult for my family to recognise me wait why would they ohhh ragini stop plan cancelled what if I hang my self from fan…………… ummmmm but for that I would need fan and rope and where would I get that dadi won’t let me enter her house and any other place………… think think ha hotel but no if I commit suicide their the hotel name would get spoiled and their staff will become jobless

So plan cancelled
What if I drink poison but for that I need poison and I need to buy fist but who’ll do so much hardwork serach for a shop at this time where I could ger poison and then but it and drink it
It would be tiring so plan cancelled
Laksh laid back with a smile
No she is not that stupid and she is afraid of blood so no chance of coming in front of vehicle and deing she’s lazy I don’t feel she would prefer poison and hanging to fan where would she get dadi won’t allow her and if she thinks of hotel I am sure she won’t because the mother Teresa in her won’t allow her to do anything like that she won’t like if anyone because of her becomes jobless
Ragini moved back from corner of bridge
Why should I die and for whom should I die if I die I won’t become immortal like remo Juliet or heer ranjaah no one would remember me for my scarifies for my love…………… but my love story it was one sided always so why should I waste my percious life for some stupid heart break reason and for that family which never cared for me
Laksh got up from his bed
I should search that mad girl I can’t trust her she and her stupid brain she can so anything
He started moving towards the door but stopped himself
Wait what am I doing laksh u have gone mad why the hell am I thinking of creative ways in which she would commit suicide and why should she , she won’t become immortal by this she’s smart girl I trust her so stop pressuring u brain but what will she do
Ragini stressed her hands feeling the cold breeze
So dieing plan cancelled
Know what will I do where will I go oh no I didn’t think about it
No problem i have lot of time to think about it I am sure I’ll find some way
Laksh moved towards window he was adoring moon
I am sure she would find some way she strong and will manage herself she is not that weak I trust her if she can break all limits to get her love I am sure she would strengthen herself to fight to her rights and leave a life which she wants to live

So guess how was it plsz comment and I’lll soon tell about rest of story and I’ll post the intro soon
Plsz comment…………………………

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    hello peeps its crsytal u can find my other stories on wattpad my id @crysta09 https://www.wattpad.com/user/crysta09

    78 Comments

    1. Raglakholic on November 17, 2016 11:25 pm

      It’s just amazing
      Loved the way laksh had thought about ragini’s pov about suicide
      He understands her pretty well
      Eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds more
      Please do continue soon

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:18 pm

        thank u so much dear ur comment means a lot i am happy u liked the concept and story

    2. tisha on November 17, 2016 11:42 pm

      superb. seriously I laughed while reading it, how can anyone think, how to die. haha plz post next part soon I’m waiting for next part

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:20 pm

        thank u tisha

    3. Ammy on November 17, 2016 11:44 pm

      Wow dear it is awesome.loved it

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:21 pm

        thank u ammmy

    4. Jayanti on November 18, 2016 12:06 am

      nice…next part soon

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:22 pm

        thank u jayathi

    5. Sreevijayan on November 18, 2016 12:21 am

      Nice start dear

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:24 pm

        thank u sreevijayan

    6. LovelyAliya on November 18, 2016 12:25 am

      Yeah amazing and funny too 🙂 Hope Ragini came back with more attitude and fearless!

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:27 pm

        thank u lovely alia
        yeah ragini would defenitely come with attitude and fearless
        the story would have justification with title

    7. Ragz_teju on November 18, 2016 12:35 am

      it’s amazing dear… I loved it so much

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:28 pm

        thank u so much raz teju

    8. Eba on November 18, 2016 1:10 am

      It’s just AWESOME. 🙂

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:36 pm

        thank u eba

    9. Alia on November 18, 2016 3:02 am

      LOVE IT

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:37 pm

        thank u alia

    10. A.xx on November 18, 2016 4:30 am

      nice loved it and love how he understands her soo much maybe this is love???
      love ragini’s phatoo (scared) nature ,,,u killed it and post soon.xx

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:39 pm

        thank u axx
        yeah they have some connection so they have a much better understanding

    11. Mohini on November 18, 2016 4:54 am

      Like always, I have been a big fan of your fanfictions.
      Anything for you (ragsan) will always remain my favorite of all the fanfictions I’ve read.
      Love this new story loved the way you expressed feeling’s if the characters
      Lol funny on how to die part.
      Can’t wait for you to update next I will wait ??

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:42 pm

        thank u so much mohini i sm glad that ur liking my stories i am really very much happy after reading ur comment i can’t express thank u
        and i’ll try to update soon

    12. mark ekon lotha on November 18, 2016 5:40 am

      dear itz reli reli a aswne story…plz 2 upload d next prt soon..

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:43 pm

        thank u mark ekon lotha

    13. Sindhura on November 18, 2016 7:01 am

      Nice

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:44 pm

        thank u sindhu di

    14. Vk on November 18, 2016 7:27 am

      Awesome

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:45 pm

        thank u vk

    15. Ashnoor on November 18, 2016 7:57 am

      Awesome and seriously i was laughing all the time to read about suicide part .

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 3:46 pm

        thank u ashnoor

    16. lovely on November 18, 2016 8:09 am

      Superb

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:20 pm

        thank u lovely

    17. sangini on November 18, 2016 10:13 am

      nice and post next soon

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:21 pm

        thank u sangini

    18. IQRA222 on November 18, 2016 11:37 am

      One word superb

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:22 pm

        thank u iqra222r

    19. Niriha on November 18, 2016 12:14 pm

      It’s very funny…awesome I loved it waiting for next part

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:24 pm

        thank u niriha

    20. Fairy on November 18, 2016 1:04 pm

      Ahhh dr m feeelng sooo good after readng dis!!!loved it yaaar…d title stole my heart…m sooo xcieted to seee dis ragz 😉 …raglak thoughts r soo similar 🙂 ..it ws so so sooo amaznggg!!!waitng eagerly for nxt part…keeep rockng n stay blessed dr 😉 😉 😉

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:27 pm

        thannnnkkk uuuuuuu so much fairy i am glad that u liked the the story and title…….. i’ll try my best to update soon thank u once again

    21. Kutty on November 18, 2016 1:54 pm

      Nice start dr. I loved the way laksh thinking abt Ragini. he knows her well maybe bcos he was her Frnd, but how his love starts and Ragu’s decision after this, waiting to know all these. Take care

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:29 pm

        thank u kutty
        laksh understands her well because he knows about her past about which u’ll get to know as story proceed and about ragini’s decision u’ll get to know soon

    22. sethidisha002 on November 18, 2016 3:09 pm

      osam

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:30 pm

        thank u sethidisha

    23. Jessica on November 18, 2016 4:58 pm

      nice concept… n ya don’t know about off airing of swaragini its not confirmed yet

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:30 pm

        thank u jessica

    24. Arjuna on November 18, 2016 5:15 pm

      Awesome

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:31 pm

        thank u arjuna

    25. asra on November 18, 2016 6:28 pm

      amazing dear…omg ragini and laksh r thinking same….am laughing when read the suicide part..love thz dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:34 pm

        thankkk u so much asra dear glad that u likef sucide part i am happy that i made u laugh they say bringing smile on some’s face is not easy so i have done that work……… Just kidding
        but ha happy that u liked it

    26. Ammu on November 18, 2016 7:21 pm

      Very interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next episode

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:36 pm

        thank u so much ammu i’ll try to update soooonnnnn

    27. jazzy on November 18, 2016 8:48 pm

      amazing concept dear i just loved it alot

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:37 pm

        thank u so much jazzzy
        happy that u liked concept

    28. Malu on November 19, 2016 7:17 am

      awesome

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:38 pm

        thank u malu

    29. tani on November 19, 2016 10:28 am

      Beautiful

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:39 pm

        thank u tani

    30. Anju on November 19, 2016 12:16 pm

      amazing

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:40 pm

        thank u anju

    31. Kiddoo on November 19, 2016 1:48 pm

      Ragini’s pov ws superb di.Superb epi

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:41 pm

        thank u kidooo
        glad that u liked her prov

    32. akaashi on November 19, 2016 2:24 pm

      i dnt think SR z gng offair.namish confirmed tat its nt gng offair.coming to ua story,its nice.i liked the track whch u selected..eagerly waiting fo the upcoming story.stay blessed

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:43 pm

        thank u so much akaashi glad that u liked my ff
        thank u for letting me know about sr not going offair hope the writers do something creative and bring trp back

    33. Sally_blr on November 19, 2016 2:54 pm

      Finally I read it. So happy to read it. The way they think similar was so creative yar. Ragini as strong woman. Really waiting. Your RagSan are my most fav. I think now I will have new fav RagLak. Sucide ideas this is new shade of Ragini it was so funny. No problem you take your own time I will wait for the next update. Love you Zindagi……………………… Love you Zindagi……………… And Love you Crystel. Take care. Before I forget I want Ragini to enjoy her life now for herself, no more sacrifices and no more adjustment just love your zindagi the way your title is.

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:49 pm

        thank u so much sally glad that uliked it ha they understand eachother well and thank u for liking raglak and ragsan u’ll get see many shades of ragini she would defintely be strong its all about zindagi some ups and some downs love etc etc………… whatever it is i love ur ragsan ff ur really a wonderful wtiter and a wonderful peson its my pleasure that u are liking my piece of art……….. Love u sallly……… Lotss of hug and love for u…….

      • Sally_blr on November 19, 2016 4:57 pm

        OMG you really are exaggerating my work. Your RagSan ff is my most fav one. I used to wait to read. Alas that time I was not commenting. You are an awesome writer.

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 5:36 pm

        sally u are really a great person seriously i mean really i am lucky too have u as a frnd oh god today i feel its my lucky day anything but yeah i love u and thank u so much

      • Sally_blr on November 19, 2016 6:35 pm

        So sweet of you. Thank you for being my friend.

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 9:23 pm

        sally we are friends i am glad u made me friendi am happy that i got a wonderful frnd like u
        but we continue like this na it will all be thank u sorry and all but golden rule of frndship no thank u and sorry btw frnds so we’ll end thank u programme here…………
        And like good frnds pull each other leg find each other mistakes that would be more fun na……… Love u

    34. Akshata on November 19, 2016 3:06 pm

      your story touched my heart so deeply. you know i was reading this story so keenly, so that i cant miss any single word or any emotion. wow!!! you have portrayed her side is very beautifully. i was feeling her pain. dont know about laksh and gadodiya and maheshwari’s but i love this ragini so much and really want her to give them answer back becoz they all are somewhere at fault too.

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 4:52 pm

        thaannk u sooo much akstha glad that u liked my story happy that i was able to convey ragini’s prov well and yeah she’ll answer everyone u’ll get to know how soon

    35. Sherin on November 19, 2016 4:00 pm

      Superb

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 5:00 pm

        thank u sherin

    36. ria on November 19, 2016 7:49 pm

      its awesome yaar plzz post the next part soon

      • crystal089 on November 19, 2016 9:18 pm

        thank u so much reha i’ll try to update soon but i can’t make it before 30th november

    37. dharani on November 23, 2016 7:25 pm

      awesome

      • crystal089 on November 23, 2016 8:56 pm

        thank u so much dharani

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