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Home»Fan Fiction»unlucky to have uh…(part 1)
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unlucky to have uh…(part 1)

AnuBy AnuNovember 8, 201623 Comments6 Mins Read
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part 1

#unlucky_to_have-uh…..

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boy- princess….princess where are uh?? come on eat it…..

he hears some kind of sounds coming from washroom…..

he knocks the door of washroom..

boy(tense)-shona are uh there?? shona…

a girl come out from washroom cleaning her face with towel…..

her face is revealed to be swara……

boy-swara..what happen..now also vomitting..wait i will call doctor..

swara- are wait sanskar..(he revealed to be sanskar)…..uh now na its normal in pregnency…

sanskar- ya i know but its your nine month..then also vomitting nd all…vomitting body ache this only remains till 3 months na..i have seen in serials..

swara- offo sanskar that r serials…..they r not true…in real it happpen in all the months to some womens…..dont worry….aahaaa( shouts)

sanskar(concern nd panicks) what happen!!….labair pain?? oo god wait i will mom dad!! no no! wait i will directly take uh to doctor…

swara- uff its not labous pain…only a little pain….it is also normal hubby….now lets go nd sit..i m tired by standing here….

sanskar- oo ya..come on sit sit!! see i brought badam milkshake for uh…..come on drink it…….

swara make faces

swara- ewww sanskar i dont wanna drink it…..i m not in mood..

sanskar- yes means yes uh have to drink it!! it will make my baby more intelligent…..

swara- my baby?? oo hello mr. this is our baby…understand…….
sanskar- kk kk!! our baby..now drink it…

swara- no no..i cant..it smell yucks…chee

sanskar- no no uh have to drink..i dont want to listen anything….

swara- if i will drink this na i will surely vomit on your face

sanskar- WHAT????? (makes faces) fine fine!! dont drink…because i cant trust uh..what if uh surely vomit!! ewwwwwwwwww..
swara laughs..sanskar smile seeing her…nd keep his head on her lap…

swara start careesing his hairs…

swara- sanskar!!…..

sanskar- hmm..swara

swara- waise tell na uh want baby to be boy or girl!!

sanskar- umm..offcouse bou just like me..handsome smart…who will be my prince…totally my carbon copy..i will fulfill all his wishes..i will never raise my voice also…nd both will torture uh…

swara- acha ji..uh will torture us…haha..but i will take him in my team nd will throw uh out of the house.. nd in night will throw uh out of the bed…

swara laughs aloud while sanskar make a pout face

sanskar- haaw swara so mean!!.

swara- waise sanskar!!! what if a girl will be there?? what will uh do for her..

sanskar- girl?? offcouse noo….(he stopd when he see swara getting uncomfortable)

sanskar-swara swara kya hua…pain horha h…..btaoo na….but still one week is left in your delivery…

swara- aah..i dont know sanskar but it is paining very mch..i cant..handle sanskar..i cant ahhhhhhaaa she was winching in pain)…….

sanskar immediately take her to hospital….

she is taken inside OT..

after 2 hours..baby sound came..

sanskar- dr. dr. how is swara..nd my baby??

doctor- aah..mr maheshwari relax..she is in unconsious state rgt now…nd ya congrats uh have become father of a GIRL…

sanskar smiles fades after hearing that swara has given birth to a baby girl!!

sanskar with fake smile- thanks doctor
nd went inside swara ward…

he was siiting there..

after 1 hour…
swara get conciouss..

swara- sa..nskar…

sanskar- swara..how r uh feeling..?? r uh kk…..thanks god uh kk..

swara- sanskar….baby??

sanskar turn his eyes listening about baby..]

swara- sanskar tell na?? where is my..i mean our baby…its a girl or boy?? tell na..

sanskar( not intrested but say for her happiness)..- swara its a….GIRL…

he said this with like what the hell expression!!

swara( happily)- girl..ha…sanskar uh have father of a girl..nd me mother..aahh sanskar i m too happy…(she notice his sad face)…r uh not happy?? what happen..

sanskar-no swara its not like i m happy na….woh.i m just tired…..

swara- oh ya..do one thing uh go home nd take rest for sometime..

sanskar- no need swara…doctor morning uh will get discharged will go that time only..

swara- but sanskar.. no if nd but swara uh sleep for some time..i dont wanna listen anything…
[note: it was mid night]

next morning..

swara get discharged nd both went home with new member…kavya laksh welcome them…

swara was weak so sanskar carry her till room in his arms nd baby was with kavya

sanskar make swara lie on bed..nd kavya gives swara her baby..as baby was hungry…..

kavya left…

sanskar sits on other side of bed nd open his lapppy….

swara was feeling difficult to get up as she was feeling pain nd she was weak also…nd baby was also crying..

baby started to cry more but sanskar was unaffected……finally swara ask sanskar for help

swara- aah..sanskar..sanskar..

ssanskar..hmm swara bolo..

swara- sanskar cant uh hear baby is crying…plz help me na…i m unable to get up…plz take her…

sanskar roll his eyes- fine swara…

he take the baby nd help swara to get up…nd gives her support nd helps her to feed the baby….

like this 1 month passes..now swara is fine…nd is back to ormal…whereas sanskar is mostly involve in his works…he even dont take his baby for a min also….

its evening when sanskar was working on his lappy..nd baby (ops i forget to tell her name is ASHI)..was sleeping on bed..nd swara was downstairs nd making coffee for sanskar…..

suddenly ashi starts crying..

sanskar first ignored..nd continue his works…then she start to cry badly…nd now sanskar was fully irritated..

nd closes his laptop in anger…

sanskar( anger)- oo please will uh shut up! fine..i m only going..from here..

swara comes there nd takes her..

swara(angrily)-what the hell sanskar!! cant uh see she was crying..cant uh take her for a min..she is just more one old..instead of consoling her uh were shouting at her…how can uh do it…sanskarn donyt uh have heart what..she is your child..

sanskar(shouts)- oh plz..shut up..whole day my child my child my child..she is not my child..she is just a BURDEN on me..i dont know what bad deeds i have done that she comne in my fate..i just hate her…keep her away from me…..i want aboy but uh..uh have given birth to her..i m really UNLUCKY TO HAVE HER…urghhhh i just hate her..take her away from here..otherwise i dont know what i will do with her..take her…—

before he could complete swara gives a tight slap on his face…..

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END OF PART 1…

aaha..so now time for my talks……

hmm ya..first note…
swasan live in mumbai with kavlak..nd other maheswari family live in delhi…

nd it is a short story i guess of 3-4-5 parts…nd ya do jism ek jaan..i will continue after some month….

swasan are married in this…its love at first sight…..nd what will happen next?? sanskar willl realize his mistake or not?? swasa will seperate?? or not?? what will happen…next

#samaira

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    23 Comments

    1. vyshu10 on November 8, 2016 10:14 am

      Nice….samaira u again started…i m 1yr baby, i m 4yrs baby…haha

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:25 pm

        thanks di.but aap mujhe janti ho?? apka reak name kya h?? nd ya uh r mu di na as uh 3 yrs elder than me hehe

      • vyshu10 on November 9, 2016 2:17 pm

        starting mein have written few ss na with the name samaira? Waha kisi ne kuch kaha aur tumne reply di ki mein 4yrs ka bacha hun

      • vyshu10 on November 9, 2016 2:21 pm

        Are u the same samaira who wrote dard wala love, judaai??

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 2:42 pm

        ya i have written 2 ss earlier…but i didnt write dard wala love judai..it was with name humdard nd street dancer

    2. Rosey on November 8, 2016 10:24 am

      It’s really nice yar and new concept

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:26 pm

        thanks di…di aap rosey bloom hi ho na??

      • Rosey on November 9, 2016 3:04 pm

        yah i m the one as i always make my id on every social web site with this name so this is me..!!

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 4:42 pm

        aiiiiiii…so my guess was rgt diiiiiii..

    3. Soujanya on November 8, 2016 10:49 am

      Awesome… A different concept…?

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:30 pm

        thanks dear

    4. s on November 8, 2016 1:20 pm

      nice..continue soon..

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:30 pm

        thank uh

    5. xavia on November 8, 2016 4:05 pm

      NIce..

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:31 pm

        thanks

    6. Divyanshri on November 8, 2016 11:08 pm

      Awesome…. yaar….. Post soon….. gayab Na ho Jana…… Tera Saar phod dungi main……

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:32 pm

        thanks sivyu…..chinta mat kr…nhi hongi gayab….

    7. chandu on November 9, 2016 6:52 am

      awesome…!! It’s really a nice concept..!!waiting for next part…!!

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:33 pm

        thank uh

    8. anu on November 9, 2016 11:59 am

      nice

    9. Manasvi on November 9, 2016 12:55 pm

      wow.. samaira dii.. its a nice and interesting concept.. plz post the next part soon…

      • Anu on November 9, 2016 1:33 pm

        thanks alot manasvi……

    10. tani on November 13, 2016 9:14 am

      Marvelous

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