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Home»Fan Fiction»Seperation made our relation more strong-chapter 8(part 1) YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP FOR ME
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Seperation made our relation more strong-chapter 8(part 1) YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP FOR ME

rainaBy rainaNovember 7, 201618 Comments3 Mins Read
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Chapter 8
Part 1
Flashback
Ragini’s pov
I was so happy that I did’nt even realise that I was sitting on road. I called the inspector and told him about the van number and requested him to help me find about my laksh. I also told about the video, he told me to come to police station. I reached there and did all the formalities and gave my phone to the inspector. He and his team was sitting in front of a system trying to trace the number, while I was sitting at a bench a little far from them, hoping that everything will be alright soon. The inspector called me and told that he found out the number. He showed me that number in the system, I asked him permission and dialled that number in the police station landline as I know, that if I call from my phone there will be surely some problem. The ring was going but no one was picking and when finally I was about to cut the call, it was answered, “hello, who is this?” i was shocked hearing the voice, it was of PARINEETA BHABHI. But still for making sure, i asked in a little tone changed, “is this parineeta maheshwari”. “first tell me who is this” the person asked angrily. It was slowly being proved that it was parineeta bhabhi’s voice scaring me more. i suddenly got an idea and said , “I’m speaking from police station actually your husband wanted to talk to you but I’m sorry if it is a wrong number”.

“what? ADHARSH! I’M ONLY PARINEETA MAHESHWARI. Please give the phone to him”. She said in a pleading voice, I cut the call immediately feeling disgusted. How could she do this with my sister. My thoughts disturbed when the inspector said that he found out about the van. My happiness knew no bounds, he said an area and we went there in search of laksh. We saw the van but laksh was not inside it. There were few goons sitting inside the van. The police enquired them, but they did’nt give any answer. They beat them and after what it seemed like eternity they opened their mouth and told us about laksh’s whereabouts. They also accepted that bhabhi was behind everything. I felt so angry listening all this. They took us to a godown and I saw laksh lying lifelessly. I ran to him and hugged him, I felt so much happy seeing him but my happiness did’nt last long as one of the goons said, “he is in coma”. I froze at my place, no this can’t be happening, what rubbish they were talking. I wanted to yell at them but no words came from my month.

I burst out when they said that he was in coma for the past six months, I realised that when I saw him on the road he was not sleeping, he was in coma .”no, no laksh u can’t do this. Laksh u r my everthing I have no reason to live without u. laksh in this six months I’m living with a hope that everything will be fine one day. I always convinced myself that you cannot leave your ragini. But now…. Laksh please don’t do like this, get up na please” I said crying and shouted that my voice echoed in that godown. After bringing out all my tears I said in a barely audible tone, “YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP FOR ME”.

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raina

    I love music... the rescuer of my stress and boredom!... I make a wish and blow candles every year on 23rd of November an ardent swasan lover.. currently obsessed with riansh

    18 Comments

    1. Ragz_teju on November 7, 2016 10:31 am

      poor ragini… it’s amazing…

    2. mariyajap on November 7, 2016 11:15 am

      raina that was awesome

    3. Manasvi on November 7, 2016 12:50 pm

      It is amazing…
      Plz post the next part soon….

    4. ashka on November 7, 2016 1:02 pm

      wow amazing yaar loved it totally.
      poor parinita. just want next ep soon cant wait. really loved it

    5. Ammy on November 7, 2016 1:07 pm

      Nice

    6. Arshaanya on November 7, 2016 1:49 pm

      Nyc

    7. IQRA222 on November 7, 2016 2:56 pm

      awesome

    8. s on November 7, 2016 4:11 pm

      awesome..

    9. deeksha on November 7, 2016 5:06 pm

      Awesome dear…..!!!!!!! Continue soon….!!!!!

    10. Ammu on November 7, 2016 6:44 pm

      Awesome episode

    11. Simin on November 7, 2016 7:44 pm

      Awesome

    12. jazzy on November 7, 2016 8:22 pm

      Superb feeling bad for ragini

    13. pooja26 on November 7, 2016 8:57 pm

      aww
      its awsm…… dear

    14. Sreevijayan on November 7, 2016 11:33 pm

      Nice update dr….

    15. Aditi Singh on November 7, 2016 11:48 pm

      I don’t know what to say… I can just say that I love you Raina… n ur FF fabulous… please post the next part soon….
      n thank you for the surprise….

    16. Afra96 on November 8, 2016 10:55 am

      Nice

    17. tani on November 12, 2016 10:28 pm

      Superb

    18. mica on November 15, 2016 6:45 pm

      <—– run to next chappy

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