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Home»Fan Fiction»I cant live without u (part 23 and 24)
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I cant live without u (part 23 and 24)

ayathBy ayathNovember 7, 201630 Comments16 Mins Read
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Hi IB fans i am ayath back with a new epi i hope u all like this part and guyz there is a surprise for u so enjoy it and plz share ur comments so let’s start

Scene 1
Oberoi mansion
Shivaay wants to make sure everything is perfect or not so he was busy with his works anika was passing by the corridor she saw shivaay and get teary eyed
Anika[in her mind]; billu ji this is our first karwachauth i want u to break my fast but i dont know that is possible for u or not
Shivaay; turns back
Anika; saw this and she hides the corner
Shivaay; why i sense that anika is here…..ohh god what is happening with me
Pinky; shivaay beta…
Shi; yes mom come here
Pinky; what preparation going on
Shi; mom..Tomorrow u keep fast for dad so i dont want u to take any type of stress
Pink;ohh my maata pinky; haa jethanjii come see this..Our shivaay made every preparation for us
Janvi; so cute…..

Ishaaana and om also joins them
Shi; wow ishaana thumb hi aavo
Ishi; kya baath hei bhayya
Shi; kuch nahe thum aavo
Om; sits beside janvi
Shi; where is our rudra and sumya
Rumya; we are here bhaiyya
Others also joins them but except anika
Shi; now all are here but…
Om; shivaay everyone is here so start
Shi; lekin kuch tho missing hei
Om; person or something else
Everybody knows what shivaay saying but they all are acting
Shi; wo…wo…
Ru; what bhaiyya tell naa
Shi; ha..Where is anika
Rud; bhaiyya kya farak padtha
Shi; nothing she is our family
Everyone like what
Shi; i mean she is our prinku’s wedding planner so she can also join us
Anika hears everything and came to the hall
Ani; am here all
Shi; just stare at her
Ani; kya hua billu ji
Shi; not in his sense
Ani; billuji….why are u staring at me
Shi; then came into his sense and said nothing
[GUYZ I DONT KNOW ABOUT THE RITUALS BCZ AM A MALAYI [KERALA] SO IF ANY MISTAKE IS THERE PLZ MAAF KARO]
Shiv; mom and papa this is for u
Papa; thanks shivaay
Shi; papa this is my wife’s duty but am not married yet

Shi; now this is for my bade papa and bade maa plz take it
Tej; shivaay u na impossible
Shi; why bade papa why u keep fasting
Tej; i want my wife for long years
Everyone get happy with his words
Then mistakenly shivaay anika was next to bade papa [tej]
Shi; anika u also keep fasting
Anika; of course
Shi; i mean are u married
Anika was hell shocked but she stucked for a minute
Shi; anika are u here
Ani; yea billu ji am not married yet [when she saying this words a big stone is hitting her heart]
Anika; but i want agood husband like u
Shi; what like me
Ani; then understood what she said
Ani; no i mean i want a good husband nad not like u kadoos waala
Shi; ohh god that’s great i also dont want a mad girl like u
Everyone watching their cute fight but ishaana interrupts them
Ishi; bhaiyya we are waitibg here plz after this u too fight with ur tadibaaz
Shi; moves towards ishaana
Shi; take this ishaana am so happy this is your first karwachauth i wish u all the best and one more this fast for om right[he was juzt playing with ishaana]
Ishi; no bhaiyya this is for u
Om; what ishaana not for me
Ishi;ohh my zulfi singh bhaiyya is teasing me and now am teasing him but u can’t understand and she smiles….
Om; then its okay my Barbie
Shiru; ahem….Ahem.

Om; shut up guys
Shi;ok now this is for rumya
Rud;thanks bhaiyya
Soumya; am soo glad bade bhaiyya
Shi; hugs her
Soumya;starts crying
Then our soumya’s hero cant tolerate this so he react and his reaction shocked everyone except soumya bcz she knows him
Ru; soumya dont cry we all are ur family only if u need anything plz tell me..i will do anything for u

Shiom;what rudra
Ru; yea bhaiyya i can do anything for my family and sumo
Shi; by the way rudra for whom u fasting
Rudra; stares at soumya and said
Bhaiyya actually this for soumya
Everyone in the hall was hell shocked
Why rudra anything happened to u
Ru; no not all i want to tell u something
Shiom;what
Ru; walks towards soumya and kneels down then he proposed her
Sumo u know u always call me cry baby but its cutee too if u look too fat then also i dont have any problem……she smiles at him after sometime he proceed with his words
Ru; will u marry this cry baby oberoi
Everyone is shocked but happy too bcz soumya is a good girl rudra matches her only so they all are excited
So; yes cry baby
Ru; then everyday make protein shake for me
So; okay
Ru; hugs her and she also reciprocates
Shi; now everything fine and sleep everone early bcz u have to wake up before sunrise
Everyone leaves the hall while leaving shivaay just stares at anika she also does the same

Scene 2
Shivaay; ohh its 4.00 now i have to call them
At pinki’s room
Shi; mom, open the door
Pi; ha shivaay am coming
Shi; ok mom
Then he goes to tej room
Bade maa wake up u dont get much time to eat and prepare
Janvi; ha shivaay am ready u go i will come with tej
Shi; ok bade maa
Shi; om,ishaana plz come fast
Ishi heards shivaay sound and try to wake up but somehold her hand from behind
Om; ishi wr r u going
Ishi; leave me i want to go
Om; no ishi plz come here naa
Ishi; no om get up and dekho time
Om;for what
He completely forgot the fast
Ishi; om u want to fast right right
Om; ha
Ishi; then pathi dev get up
Om; understood and he wakes up from the bed
Ishi; finally u come back from ur dream
Om; yes ishi
Ishi; come lets go shivaay bhiyaa is waiting us
Om; ha but …
Ishi; now what
Om; pulls her and they are too close to each other and then he kissed her cheeks she blushed and hugs him tightly
Shi; guys stop ur romance and come down
Om and ishaana break their romance and said yea coming
He does the same with rumya also
Now all are assembled in the hall but now also anika didn’t come
Shivaay notice this
Janvi; takes the sargi and give ishaana
Ishi; hugs her takes sargi from her hand
She goes to soumya

Janvi; somya this is for u
Sou; aunty for me
Jan; now dont call me aunty call mom
This is my duty to give to me hone waala bahu
Pinky feels sad and she takes sargi in her hand

Dadi; where is anika
Shivaay wants to check her bcz he didn’t called her…he leaves from the place
Pi; i will go to her room
Pinky goes to anika’s room before shivaay get a call and he stucked in the middle way
Pi; anika beta
Ani; mom…u here
Pink; u look so beautiful kash mera billuji pehchane hoti ho
If shivaay can remember u
Ani; dont be sad soon he will
Pink; gives sargi to her
Ani; she take her blessing
Shivaay saw this and get doubt shi; why mom gave this to her…actually this is given her bahu right i should ask he
Shi; mom what are u doing here
Pinky and anika get shocked if shivaay hears their conversation
Pinky turns while shivaay came to her
Pi; what shivaay
Shi; why u give sargi to her
Pi; wo beta……
Shi; kya mom

Pi; bcz she is also a part of this family right
Shi; yea mom but why
Pi; shivaay no more question come with me
Shivaay was just see….she is in pinkish lehenga with full pearl works this dress given by her mother in law[pinky]
Shivaay was mesmerised by her beauty and she also in his kanji eyes
She eats sargi and walk towards hall
Shivaay was talking in his phone he sense her and turned back not only shivaay everyone were looking at anika bcz she is very beautiful than ever
He was lost in her eyes
Just then she slips from the stair and our hero came their and hold her in his arms they shared a cute waala eyelock
Ani; shivaay
Sh; ha anika bolo
Ani; plz leave me down
Shi; came back to his sense and put her down softly
She doesn’t want to do that but whe she saw her family members are looking at them so she asked him
Shivaay and anika too walks towards the hall

Hi IB fans i am ayath back with a new epi i hope u all like this part and guyz there is a surprise for u so enjoy it and plz share ur comments so let’s start

Scene 1
Oberoi mansion
Shivaay wants to make sure everything is perfect or not so he was busy with his works anika was passing by the corridor she saw shivaay and get teary eyed
Anika[in her mind]; billu ji this is our first karwachauth i want u to break my fast but i dont know that is possible for u or not
Shivaay; turns back
Anika; saw this and she hides the corner
Shivaay; why i sense that anika is here…..ohh god what is happening with me
Pinky; shivaay beta…
Shi; yes mom come here
Pinky; what preparation going on
Shi; mom..Tomorrow u keep fast for dad so i dont want u to take any type of stress
Pink;ohh my maata pinky; haa jethanjii come see this..Our shivaay made every preparation for us
Janvi; so cute…..
Ishaaana and om also joins them
Shi; wow ishaana thumb hi aavo
Ishi; kya baath hei bhayya

Shi; kuch nahe thum aavo
Om; sits beside janvi
Shi; where is our rudra and sumya
Rumya; we are here bhaiyya
Others also joins them but except anika
Shi; now all are here but…
Om; shivaay everyone is here so start
Shi; lekin kuch tho missing hei
Om; person or something else
Everybody knows what shivaay saying but they all are acting
Shi; wo…wo…
Ru; what bhaiyya tell naa
Shi; ha..Where is anika
Rud; bhaiyya kya farak padtha
Shi; nothing she is our family
Everyone like what
Shi; i mean she is our prinku’s wedding planner so she can also join us
Anika hears everything and came to the hall
Ani; am here all
Shi; just stare at her
Ani; kya hua billu ji

Shi; not in his sense
Ani; billuji….why are u staring at me
Shi; then came into his sense and said nothing
[GUYZ I DONT KNOW ABOUT THE RITUALS BCZ AM A MALAYI [KERALA] SO IF ANY MISTAKE IS THERE PLZ MAAF KARO]
Shiv; mom and papa this is for u
Papa; thanks shivaay
Shi; papa this is my wife’s duty but am not married yet so am giving you
Ani; gets teary but she controls her feelings
Shi; now this is for my bade papa and bade maa plz take it
Tej; shivaay u na impossible
Shi; why bade papa why u keep fasting
Tej; i want my wife for long years
Everyone get happy with his words
Then mistakenly shivaay anika was next to bade papa [tej]
Shi; anika u also keep fasting
Anika; of course
Shi; i mean are u married
Anika was hell shocked but she stucked for a minute
Shi; anika are u here
Ani; yea billu ji am not married yet [when she saying this words a big stone is hitting her heart]
Anika; but i want agood husband like u
Shi; what like me
Ani; then understood what she said
Ani; no i mean i want a good husband nad not like u kadoos waala
Shi; ohh god that’s great i also dont want a mad girl like u
Everyone watching their cute fight but ishaana interrupts them
Ishi; bhaiyya we are waitibg here plz after this u too fight with ur tadibaaz
Shi; moves towards ishaana
Shi; take this ishaana am so happy this is your first karwachauth i wish u all the best and one more this fast for om right[he was juzt playing with ishaana]
Ishi; no bhaiyya this is for u
Om; what ishaana not for me
Ishi;ohh my zulfi singh bhaiyya is teasing me and now am teasing him but u can’t understand and she smiles….
Om; then its okay my Barbie
Shiru; ahem….Ahem.
Om; shut up guys
Shi;ok now this is for rumya
Rud;thanks bhaiyya
Soumya; am soo glad bade bhaiyya
Shi; hugs her
Soumya;starts crying
Then our soumya’s hero cant tolerate this so he react and his reaction shocked everyone except soumya bcz she knows him
Ru; soumya dont cry we all are ur family only if u need anything plz tell me..i will do anything for u
Shiom;what rudra
Ru; yea bhaiyya i can do anything for my family and sumo
Shi; by the way rudra for whom u fasting
Rudra; stares at soumya and said
Bhaiyya actually this for soumya
Everyone in the hall was hell shocked
Why rudra anything happened to u
Ru; no not all i want to tell u something
Shiom;what
Ru; walks towards soumya and kneels down then he proposed her
Sumo u know u always call me cry baby but its cutee too if u look too fat then also i dont have any problem……she smiles at him after sometime he proceed with his words
Ru; will u marry this cry baby oberoi
Everyone is shocked but happy too bcz soumya is a good girl rudra matches her only so they all are excited
So; yes cry baby
Ru; then everyday make protein shake for me
So; okay
Ru; hugs her and she also reciprocates
Shi; now everything fine and sleep everone early bcz u have to wake up before sunrise
Everyone leaves the hall while leaving shivaay just stares at anika she also does the same

Scene 2
Shivaay; ohh its 4.00 now i have to call them
At pinki’s room
Shi; mom, open the door
Pi; ha shivaay am coming
Shi; ok mom
Then he goes to tej room
Bade maa wake up u dont get much time to eat and prepare
Janvi; ha shivaay am ready u go i will come with tej
Shi; ok bade maa
Shi; om,ishaana plz come fast
Ishi heards shivaay sound and try to wake up but somehold her hand from behind
Om; ishi wr r u going
Ishi; leave me i want to go
Om; no ishi plz come here naa
Ishi; no om get up and dekho time
Om;for what
He completely forgot the fast
Ishi; om u want to fast right right
Om; ha
Ishi; then pathi dev get up
Om; understood and he wakes up from the bed
Ishi; finally u come back from ur dream
Om; yes ishi
Ishi; come lets go shivaay bhiyaa is waiting us
Om; ha but …
Ishi; now what
Om; pulls her and they are too close to each other and then he kissed her cheeks she blushed and hugs him tightly
Shi; guys stop ur romance and come down
Om and ishaana break their romance and said yea coming
He does the same with rumya also
Now all are assembled in the hall but now also anika didn’t come
Shivaay notice this
Janvi; takes the sargi and give ishaana
Ishi; hugs her takes sargi from her hand
She goes to soumya
Janvi; somya this is for u
Sou; aunty for me
Jan; now dont call me aunty call mom

This is my duty to give to me hone waala bahu
Pinky feels sad and she takes sargi in her hand
Dadi; where is anika
Shivaay wants to check her bcz he didn’t called her…he leaves from the place
Pi; i will go to her room
Pinky goes to anika’s room before shivaay get a call and he stucked in the middle way
Pi; anika beta
Ani; mom…u here
Pink; u look so beautiful kash mera billuji pehchane hoti ho
If shivaay can remember u

Ani; dont be sad soon he will
Pink; gives sargi to her
Ani; she take her blessing
Shivaay saw this and get doubt shi; why mom gave this to her…actually this is given her bahu right i should ask he
Shi; mom what are u doing here
Pinky and anika get shocked if shivaay hears their conversation
Pinky turns while shivaay came to her
Pi; what shivaay
Shi; why u give sargi to her
Pi; wo beta……
Shi; kya mom
Pi; bcz she is also a part of this family right
Shi; yea mom but why
Pi; shivaay no more question come with me
Shivaay was just see….she is in pinkish lehenga with full pearl works this dress given by her mother in law[pinky]
Shivaay was mesmerised by her beauty and she also in his kanji eyes
She eats sargi and walk towards hall
Shivaay was talking in his phone he sense her and turned back not only shivaay everyone were looking at anika bcz she is very beautiful than ever
He was lost in her eyes
Just then she slips from the stair and our hero came their and hold her in his arms they shared a cute waala eyelock
Ani; shivaay

Sh; ha anika bolo
Ani; plz leave me down
Shi; came back to his sense and put her down softly
She doesn’t want to do that but whe she saw her family members are looking at them so she asked him
Shivaay and anika too walks towards the hall
precap; siddharth and mallika entry…..she congrats shivaay and anika but shivaay is confused with her behaviour…and he get more suspicious about anika…late he calls someone

guys pls pls share ur views otherwise ………..we writers want comments bcz we dont if u guyz like our ff or not so plz commment and dont worry 2-3 episode s more only to complete this ff bcz i didnt get much response from u guys
can i ask u something am not worth to get atleast 30 comments
i know i have somany silent readers so plz comment guyz i really need ur comment
if i get good response i will upload next part tomorrow itself

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ayath

    I trusted u,bt now ur words mean nothing to me bcz ur actions spoke the truth

    30 Comments

    1. Hriday on November 7, 2016 2:07 am

      Your ff is becoming boring
      Now i think he should get his memory back enough of this

    2. Shivika on November 7, 2016 2:25 am

      Are you a malayalee. I am also. I am silent reader. Your ff is amazing. Keep writing. Update as early as possible.

      • mina on November 7, 2016 9:56 pm

        Hi im also a malayalee

    3. Nida on November 7, 2016 3:18 am

      Great ?

    4. Nithu on November 7, 2016 6:23 am

      Di its lovely di…dnt feel bad…ua ff ia amazing di

    5. Mukta on November 7, 2016 6:52 am

      Finally u posted it!!!!!! I was waiting from so long…..!!!!!! Anyways awesome episode Ayath…. keep rocking…. and keep entertaining us….. loving ur ff….!!!!!

    6. Mihra on November 7, 2016 7:43 am

      Nice ff

    7. ssn on November 7, 2016 8:38 am

      interesting ff ayath .

    8. san on November 7, 2016 8:57 am

      Hai Ayath….I love your ff so much and I am also from kerala…

    9. Nansshivika on November 7, 2016 9:18 am

      I think u tried to post 23 and 24 parts together but 23 part repeated twice dear. Just go through tat. And episode is awesome shivika moments are cute and lovely
      Ishkara scnese are sweet
      And our rumya they r so cute waiting for the next part

    10. Jayashree on November 7, 2016 9:26 am

      It’s really ayath… Dnt feel bad that ur not getting enough comments…

    11. priyanka_22 on November 7, 2016 9:42 am

      Awesome ayath 😀

    12. sabhya on November 7, 2016 10:01 am

      Hey I am a malayalee too…ur ff was pretty good…❤

    13. Mounica on November 7, 2016 11:21 am

      Hai ayath ur ff is very nice…pls continue ur ff …I think he called doctor
      Pls update next epi tomorrow… Precap is interesting… 23rd Episode posted twice once go through it….
      Shivika movements r lvly
      Ishkara,rumya r very cute
      Don’t worry abt comments yaar ull get it soon…
      Update asap….

    14. Aru on November 7, 2016 2:05 pm

      Hi ayath actuall i am silent reader ur ff are super i really wait for ur ff u know when u stoped to right for long time daily i use remember ur story i was missing u so badly and pls dont stop writting continue now i will promise i will comment every ff pinkl promise pls

    15. Madhu on November 7, 2016 3:39 pm

      Me too after long time u posted grt. Even I want ananya to update her ff it’s been nearly 2 months she din update. Try to update urs regularly

    16. sso on November 7, 2016 3:40 pm

      Great episode

    17. ketaki19 on November 7, 2016 4:23 pm

      very nice part but i think galtise ek hi part double post hua hain…
      liked shivika momnts a lot <3 waiting fr next

    18. Nirmal on November 7, 2016 4:27 pm

      I’m Nirmal and am from Kerala. I’m not new here. Due to exams I didn’t get time to read ffs.. And sorry for that.. Now my exams are almost finished only two more… I love ur ff… It’s superb..

    19. gangu on November 7, 2016 4:37 pm

      hey even i am a malayali from thrissur

    20. Tulasi on November 7, 2016 4:41 pm

      Hey dear…its awesummmm..d way shivaay is loosng himself in her….thts sooo lovely…n u narrated it soo well tht i have gone through it completely…post d next asap n plzz have a look at my ff

    21. Akshaya on November 7, 2016 5:56 pm

      Enjoyed it dear

    22. cuteprincess on November 7, 2016 6:01 pm

      really nice superb…awesome dii…
      hey I am also a Malayalee….

    23. Anu16 on November 7, 2016 6:03 pm

      Hey… I just read all Ur episodes…. Ur ff is too good… Coming to today’s epi I guess u have mistakenly typed or maybe pasted the same epi twice… But it was awesome loved shivika

    24. Tharu on November 7, 2016 6:38 pm

      Finally posted it..I was eagerly waiting for this..you already know na that I am a great fan of your ff..coming to the episode…it’s amazing..rudi proposed somu…how cute.ishkara and shivika parts are awesome too..hope shivay get his memory back.

    25. ishqkum on November 8, 2016 12:13 am

      Didn’t stop writing Dr I really loved it plz continue. Shiviya is feelings for anika is awesome

    26. azizul on November 8, 2016 12:27 am

      Superb dear….plz update next part soon

    27. bshama1239 on November 8, 2016 11:53 am

      Ayath ur ff is always a treat dear thanks for the link and everything was beyond awesome in it hope shivaay regains his memory Rumya was awww.. And ishkara was cute…

    28. raksha.manan on November 8, 2016 3:42 pm

      Hi ayath
      Nic writing…..
      Plz bring shivaay memory back
      Bcoz I don’t want to see anika sad
      Overall awesome

    29. Abhirami c.j on November 8, 2016 5:20 pm

      Are u malayaliii mee too … super episode update daily please .I can’t wa anylonger

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