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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan Love hurts ….. Love heals ( Episode 17)
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Swasan Love hurts ….. Love heals ( Episode 17)

ShreeyuBy ShreeyuNovember 6, 2016Updated:November 14, 201665 Comments7 Mins Read
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Heya everyone m very happy as many silent readers of my ff broke their silence in last Episode…. So a big thanks to them … But m really disappointed with those who earlier use to comment but now r not commenting …. May b the storyline is getting boring …. But m so glad with the ones who comment … Thnkew so much and continue commenting? ….

Episode 16

All Episodess

So let’s start with the next part

Episode 17

The next half of the way passed in complete silence …..
Sometimes silence speaks better than words but here it was nothing more than silence filled with Awkwardness and Misunderstandings which eventually led to pain …..

Sanskar was trying to concentrate on road which seemed nearly impossible as his mind was filled with many thoughts ….
Whereas Swara was busy looking outside the window trying to divert her mind..

The song which was unintentionally played few moments back was obviously completed by now but it did the work for what God intentionally played it ….

They were abt to reach when car stopped with a jerk …. With this sudden jerk Swara came back to senses and looked towards Sanskar with a questioning look as if asking what happened

Sanskar was also not knowing abt the reason for sudden halt of car so he came out if the car to check the problem ….

Swara also got down from the car following Sanskar….

Finally sanskar spoke
: I think there is some problem with the engine which m not getting ….. Its quite late so there’ll be not mechanic available …. Ur house is in the next lane only so let’s go on feet ….

Swara was abt to deny, when Sanskar said:I know u can go urself but I’ll trip u…. I don’t want to argue ….

Swara just nodded and both began to walk…

( please don’t think that it will rain and they will get shelter in some shade or hut as nothing like this is gonna happen …. It looks to filmy nd fictional …
Although its a fiction but I want to make it as simple as possible )

They soon reached outside swara’s house …. Sanskar was abt to go after dropping her there when Swara spoke
Swara: Its quite late Sanskar … U will not get any taxi …. So it’s better u take my car … The driver must have brought it by now… I’ll bring the keys…

For which Sanskar just nodded….

Swara went inside to bring the let’s when Ragini saw Sanskar outside the house from her room’s window

She wondered that y he is there at that tym and thought to check herself …..

Ragini came outside to meet Sanskar

Sanskar also saw her

Ragini: Sanskar Bhaiya u here. ?

(Look let me tell that she’s calling him Bhaiya as he is Laksh’s brother )

Sanskar: yes Ragini actually I met Swara in a restaurant then I thought to drop her as it was getting late..
And on the way my car broke so we came via Walk….

Ragini: oh thnk u for dropping Di here…. But now how will u go Bhaiya its very late right now…. U do one thing u go with our car I’ll just bring the keys….

(She was abt to go)

Sanskar: no Ragini …. Swara already went to get it…

Ragini: so Bhaiya wat r u doing here? Come inside don’t know y Di is taking so long

Sanskar:no dear m gud here waise bhi its too late it will not look gud…

Ragini: no Bhaiya..
No need to b so formal…. (She continued to request him)

Finally Sanskar agreed and went in

On the other hand ….

Swara was finding the keys in her room but she was not getting them ….. As Sharmishtha kept them somewhere when driver gave it to her and now she was sleeping so Swara didn’t wanted to disturb her…..

After searching for long finally she got it…. And headed downstairs….

And was shocked to c Sanskar in the living room talking with Ragini ….

She marched towards them and kept the key on the table…

Swara: Sanskar here is the key…. U may take the car

Sanskar nodded and was abt move when Ragini again started

Ragini: are Di … Just now he came… U two wait I’ll just get coffee for us….

Sanskar:are no Ragini… No need for that u don’t trouble urself ….

Again Ragini was again n again requesting…. And again he had to agree

Just then Ragini was abt to head towards kitchen ….. When her phone rang … It was from one of her close friend who was with her in fashion designing and now needed some help so she excused herself from SWASAN nd asked Swara to prepare coffee

Swara had no other way out so she agreed as whatever happened between them shud not affect the gratitude…. As Sanskar dropped her and was now her guest …. And being noble it was her duty to treat him well…

After sometime Swara came with three cups of coffee she prepared one for Ragini

By the tym Laksh also entered as Ragini informed him abt Sanskar’s arrival….
Ragini also came back after hanging up the call

Swara: are Laksh u here….

Laksh: yes Swara Woh Ragini informed me abt bhai being here so i also thought to come….I hope o didn’t disturbed u all

Swara hits him playfully
Swara: achha now u r also becoming so formal

( Sanskar was feeling sad as Swara was talking freely with Aditya nd Laksh but not with him)

He held one cup of coffee as he didn’t wanted to stay there for long

He sipped coffee and next second he felt burning sensation in his tongue or shud I say whole mouth

(Don’t think that Swara added chilli or something just read )

Sanskar: Ahhhhh….

Swaraglak immediately turned three faces towards him as they were busy in chit chatting….

Laksh: Oh ho bhai wat happened?

Sanskar: Woh I sipped the coffee and didn’t noticed that it was hot so my tongue got burnt

Swara(worried and in a flow): Oh ho Sanskar… R u nuts ? Y u always neglect the fact that we shud b careful while drinking coffee but u…. Since school u r burning ur tongue….

Sanskar smiled as she referred him as Sanskar… On the other hand Raglak were shocked…. Laksh again became suspicious

When Swara realized what she said …. She again started

Swara:(stammering) Woh…. Woh in school canteen… I….I once saw u drinking coffee and spitting it out the next moment…. Han han otherwise I don’t know anything abt….abt …u

I think my phone is ringing …. I’ll b back

She left to her room….

Precap- Cats out of can may be

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Well I seriously don’t know what rubbish I wrote…. I know it was boring but I wanted to give at least one chapter before Rabia Di leaves …. So here it is…. I was not at all in a mood to write…. And my hand got twisted that too right hand so it took two days for me to write such a small one…

Rabia Di this is truly dedicated to u … I know u must b thinking that which boring and rubbish Episode I dedicated to u… But I was not getting tym and wrote whatever came in my mind…. Di will m is u sooooooooooooooooo much…. Go slowly nd come back as fast as possible….
I wish u get successful in ur lyf ….. And achieve all ur dreams…
Jaldi aana…..

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    65 Comments

    1. Shreeyu on November 6, 2016 8:52 pm

      Well it is Di will miss u

    2. hemanshi on November 6, 2016 8:53 pm

      Shreeyu bachha it was just awesomeee???????
      N take care of yourself……..??
      It was not at all boring……?

      • hemanshi on November 6, 2016 8:59 pm

        Rabia we will miss u a lottttt…..I couldn’t post an episode today as I had to give some time to my hubby and my family also……so sorry dor that……..a very very all the best to you?????
        Nd come back with a positive result???
        N I am sure u will win

      • rabia on November 6, 2016 9:25 pm

        oooo God hemanshii u alreadyy dedicated to many things to meee soo there is noo need to say like thisss and u just give full time to your job and our jiju 😉 and i will surely be back :* 🙂

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:38 pm

        Thnks a lot Hemanshi Di…???

    3. Soujanya on November 6, 2016 8:56 pm

      Awesome…..?

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:39 pm

        Thnk u dr…
        ?

    4. Kakali on November 6, 2016 9:06 pm

      Cutieee !!! At that moment u was thinking about rain na alll hahhh !!!
      but my brain was revolving around chaat,panipuri,ice cream shop…
      it’s kinda they will go n enjoy n i can feel that sensation… haaaa !!!
      Love it dear…
      Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:41 pm

        Haha Di…. Panipuri , chat… U r really foodie… Aren’t u? Thnkew so much Di…. M soo sooo glad u liked it… It was totally an unplanned Episode just wrote it randomly…

      • Kakali on November 9, 2016 11:53 am

        Yeah yeah !!! I wholebodily except that m a foody …. *spicy lover… hahh !!! TAKE CARE
        ..

    5. deeksha on November 6, 2016 9:19 pm

      Nice shreeyu….!!!!! Continue soon….

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:42 pm

        Thnkew deekshu ….. Will post after my exams… Soon I’ll b posting an author’s note

    6. rabia on November 6, 2016 9:27 pm

      shreeeyuuuuuuuu (angry pout) u r tooo muchhh dont u dare to say it boring u know i like it very much because today there is no song in it 😉 and i mostly like epis without the songs of lyrics 😉 because song tou we know naa actual interest was in the storyy soo epi was sooo good and thankuu soo much dear and take care of your wrist :* :*

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:45 pm

        Di wat to do I felt that its boring…. Achha sorry for saying that …. And u really don’t like songs …. Chalo its good that I didn’t added any song in this Episode which was for u ..
        Thnkew so much dii… My wrist is much better now … Just a little pain

    7. Kakali on November 6, 2016 9:40 pm

      Cutieeeee !!!! Take care of ur hand okkkiiii !!! No need to write or type…. 1st get well soon ,,, n yooooo u said it boring naaaa,, hmmmm your talks has become baseless… haaaa !!! Love u…
      once again take care or do nagin Dance.

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:47 pm

        Thnkew Di… My wrist is better now just a little pain… I felt it boring so said… So sorry for that … Huh my talks r becoming baseless waise its true due to exam fever … Lov uh too dii … I’ll do nagin dance with u

      • Kakali on November 9, 2016 11:54 am

        Gimme hifi by leg !!! yooo same is happening with me.. haaa !!! *doing nagin steps with Cutieee on stage … ;0;0;0:0 😀 😛

      • Shreeyu on November 12, 2016 7:13 pm

        Hehe Di … Lov uh sooooo much. ….. U r the most adorable person on tu ….

    8. Simin on November 6, 2016 9:45 pm

      Baccha take care of yourself
      Swara still worries for him
      And after a long time she reffered to him as sanskar wowwwww

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:49 pm

        Thnk u dii … Will take care.. Ya she’s just trying to act rude or behave cold but in her heart she’s most concerned one for him

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:49 pm

        Concerned for him#

    9. Stg on November 6, 2016 10:07 pm

      Awesome ? and take care .

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:50 pm

        Thnkew Dr… M glad u liked it… Continue reading dr

    10. Febi on November 6, 2016 10:38 pm

      Awesome dear. Please update soon.

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:51 pm

        Thnk u Dr.. Feeling gud to c ur comment… Continue reading …. Can’t say abt posting soon as my exams r coming but will post an author’s note soon

    11. SHAN on November 6, 2016 10:42 pm

      Awesome…… Loved it sweeto…. No need to strain too much sweeto….. Take care

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:53 pm

        Thnkew didoo… Ya Di I’ll not stain myself… U too tc.. I have a request Di that can u pls upload my heartless queen first… Actually my exams r going to start so wanna read it before them

      • SHAN on November 10, 2016 11:09 pm

        Sweeto i saw this reply…. So that only i updated mhq first…. ?

    12. s on November 6, 2016 10:58 pm

      nice..

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 11:48 am

        Thnkew dr… ??? Continue reading

    13. tvisha on November 6, 2016 10:58 pm

      Awesomr..
      Take care for sure

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 11:49 am

        Thnkew Tvishu …ya Dr m taking care of myself and my hand us gud now… Waise where u disappeared Han… Check my message on fb

    14. Navi on November 6, 2016 10:58 pm

      Superb shree.. it ws not boring… actually i was waiting for u to upload.. bt u revealed ur hurt.. so take cre… get well soon… swara is always swara and sanskar too.. whn we are so connecred we cnt shut our mouth even thou we are in war ie fight.. hahaha..

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 11:50 am

        Haha thnkew so much Dr… M well now… U too tc

    15. Alia on November 6, 2016 11:13 pm

      Awesome…loved it

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 11:51 am

        Thnks a lot Dr… Continue reading

    16. Aditi Singh on November 6, 2016 11:23 pm

      OMG… finally u r back… missed u n ur FFS…

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:55 pm

        Thnks a lot aditi… M sorry for uploading it late but m busy with my studies so m not getting tym… And a saw ur comment on previous Episode but couldn’t comment

    17. Aditi Singh on November 6, 2016 11:32 pm

      it was not boring… but I didn’t understand the precap….
      n please post the next soon….
      n I really liked ur thought of simplicity….
      finally I got something to read today…

      • Shreeyu on November 8, 2016 11:58 pm

        M glad u liked it… Precap means that the truth can come out before Laksh … I’ll try to post soon but could not promise … But will b posting an author’s note soon … So do read it..
        And thnkew for liking my thought actually I don’t want to make my ff too dramatic

    18. Arshaanya on November 6, 2016 11:54 pm

      Nyc chappy shreeyu n take care dear

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 11:52 am

        Thnkew so much dr

    19. vyshu10 on November 7, 2016 9:08 am

      Awesome bachu…..loved swara’s care towards sanskar…i m excited to know how cat will come out of the can.

      Dhyan rakhna chahiye na? Hope ur hand gets better soon.

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 12:06 pm

        Thnkew Vyshu Di… Hehe u will come to know it not so soon but ya I’ll upload after my exams not now

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 12:07 pm

        My hand is gud now di… M fine U too take care

    20. mariyajap on November 7, 2016 9:30 am

      Shreeyu that was awesome

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 12:08 pm

        Thnx a lot Dr… Continue reading ?

    21. maryum on November 7, 2016 11:17 am

      Awesome dear its not boring so cill and get well soon

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 12:09 pm

        Thnkew dr… M well now…. U too tc

    22. P on November 7, 2016 12:59 pm

      I like ur ff but it too short dear…
      Please update soon

      • Shreeyu on November 9, 2016 12:10 pm

        Thnks Dr… M sorry for giving short updates but m hardly managing nowadays so will give long ones December onwards

    23. anu on November 7, 2016 5:14 pm

      nice

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:13 pm

        Thnkew Dr…. Continue reading

    24. Afra96 on November 7, 2016 7:45 pm

      Nice..sry I wasn’t able to comment in few of u’r previous parts..take care.

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:14 pm

        Thnkew dr… Its oky… Continue reading

    25. Semran on November 8, 2016 10:31 am

      Awesome dear continue soon.

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:16 pm

        Thnks a lot Dr….
        Continue reading

    26. Anniya on November 9, 2016 12:14 am

      Awsm part…
      Omg am I dreaming swara called his name.
      Let’s do party then…
      Take care….
      Don’t need to update soon( don’t take it seriously orelse your fans will kill me)

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:18 pm

        Haha thnkew diii…. And u r not dreaming… *pinching u
        Chalo let’s do party m always ready for that but after my exams … *let’s nacho
        Thnk u …. AbdAnd now I’ll update after my exams… Hehe how can I disobey u… Han??

    27. Mirna on November 9, 2016 6:16 pm

      Awwwwwwwww loved it dearrrrrrrr sorry for commentng late dear was tooo busy 🙂

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:21 pm

        Thnkew so much …. Mirna… No problem… Don’t say sorry … That is something which I shud say as m not able to comment on ur ff nowadays… Sry Dr I’ll not b able to comment till December… I’ll not b regular on tu from tomorrow onwards due to my exams

    28. mica on November 11, 2016 3:42 pm

      aaaaaaawwwww.. finally swara..!!! huh! seem i missed so much part

      • Shreeyu on November 11, 2016 3:54 pm

        Well…. To b true Micu I didn’t got much of ur talk… But ya whatever I got is that u missed previous episodes… Is it? So for that u may visit them with the help of the links I gave in this Episode and don’t worry nothing much happened in this ff

    29. tani on November 12, 2016 2:39 pm

      Wonderful

      • Shreeyu on November 12, 2016 7:11 pm

        Thnkew dr… Continue reading

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