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Home»Fan Fiction»My Cinderella – a raglak ss(part-4)
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My Cinderella – a raglak ss(part-4)

maha6By maha6November 5, 201673 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys. I think u r waiting for my ss. So guys do u want to know what did ragini listened in phn that she got shocked… So today u will come to know that. Follow this ss.
Link:www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+cinderella
Rag lifts the phn n remains shocked.
Laksh was just then coming back to home to take his phn…
Rag stood there silently without any expressions.
Laksh comes to her…..
lak:ragini… what hppnd….
Rags just gives the phn to laksh n goes from there with teary eyes.
Laksh didnt notice that she is crying he simply took the phn being confused with her behaviour… As she is very talkative. Never keeps quite.
Lak:what happnd to her suddenly. He keeps phn near his ear.
Lak:hloo…

Os:bhai…
Lak:raj…. Bolo…
Raj:bhai aap kuch bolte kyu nahi.
Lak:kya hua raj… Kuch bolo pehle…
Raj(excited):bhai…. Bhabhi mil gayi….
Lak(extremely happy):what.. Kaha…. Where is she…. How does she looks. Send me her photo
Raj:bhai… I didnt see her yet. I just came to know that they changed their names n his brother is working as a doctor…
Lak:did u find there present names…
raj:no bhai… I met one person who stays near there house… Today ill come to know abt them.
Lak:m coming….
Raj: ok bhai…. Come to the cafe near the studio from there we will go…
Lak:ok m coming…
Scene shifts to ragini….

Rag comes out of the house n sit on a bench in garden. Raj words are echoing in her ears…. “shadi ki tayari karo bhabhi mil gayi…. I found ur Cinderella….”
Rag:wiping her tears… No ragini u shldnt cry… All will not be lucky to get their love. U love laksh sir but he loves someone else…. Loves doesnt expect return it just knows loving the person n want to see him/her happy… laksh sir got his love. U want his happiness. N his happiness lies with his cinderella. She wipes her tears n goes inside the mansion. as soon as she enters laksh hugs her n twirls her.
Lak(while twirling):ragini…. Ragini.. Ragini…. Im so happy today… He puts her down… U know my cinderella…. My love…. I found her…. After so much of struggle i found her… All this while ragini is controlling her tears….he holds her shoulders.. Today m gonna see her… Wohooooo m so… So… So… Happy. He leaves her shoulders. M sry… Actually i excitement… He was interrupted by her…
Rag:no prblm i understand. No need of any explanation… N congrats….
Lak:tq tq tq so much… I have to go bye… He leaves. Rags who was controlling her tears now started crying…..
San calls rags… As zoon as she sees san call she wipes her tears n lifts the call.
San:ragu… Shld i come to pick u…
Rag:n.. No.. Bhai… I’ll come.
San:ragu…. Are u crying?
Rag: no bhai… M not crying…..
San:ragu dont lie to me. I know u cant lie that too to me. Tell me what hppnd…
Rag:bhai….. She starts crying….
San:shshhh m coming right now.
Rag:no bhai… U be there… M ok….
San:no… M coming. Thats it. He. Cuts the call. After sometime san comes n takes rags to their home…

Screen freezes……
Guys sry for short update. But i promise next part will be big.. Till then bye.

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    73 Comments

    1. Sindhura on November 5, 2016 11:29 pm

      Nice

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:50 am

        Tq sindhura

    2. Ammy on November 5, 2016 11:46 pm

      Awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:50 am

        Tq ammy

    3. Fairy on November 6, 2016 12:04 am

      Ahhh!!! Now m confirmed dat cinderella is ragini nly???? yey!!! M sooooo happpy …bt at d same tym m sad also coz of rags condition… Shez thinking dat lakshs cinderella is someone else bt in reality shez nly hes love??? bt..still m nt confirmed about rags being cindrella *fingers crossed,wish dat my guess comes true??? update ws sooooper awesome …keeep rockng n stay blessed dear??????

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:53 am

        Tq fairy. Yeah u r right rags only laksh’s Cinderella. When our beautiful ragu is there then how can i think of other Cinderella. Yeah m also feeling sad for ragu… But dont worry she will get her love

      • Fairy on November 6, 2016 11:04 am

        ???wen u r d writer,i dnt hve ny fear…i know u”ll surely unite dem sooon yaar??????????

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 11:11 am

        Tq fairy. N haa i want to unite them soon. Becoz i like happy endings. N may be they suffer in between. Par ek kahavath hai na “anth bhala tho sab bhala”. So no prbm but m not sure whether their love stry goes smoothly or they may face hurdles… To know that stay tuned to this ss.

      • Fairy on November 6, 2016 11:23 am

        Yeh !!!dr m already excied for dere further story????take care sweety?

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 1:06 pm

        Tq fairy…

    4. Eba on November 6, 2016 12:06 am

      Awesome dear <3333333ed it sooooooo much 🙂

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:53 am

        Tq eba for commenting.

    5. Sreevijayan on November 6, 2016 12:06 am

      Interesting update dear…

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:54 am

        Tq sreevijayan

    6. Ragz_teju on November 6, 2016 12:41 am

      awwww feeling sad for ragini… it’s amazing Laksh’s cinderella is ragini loved it

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:56 am

        Tq rags_teju for commenting. N haa feeling sad for ragu but no prblm she will get her love. How can i think of keeping others as Cinderella when our ragu is there…

    7. Fats on November 6, 2016 6:24 am

      Fabulous update. Aww poor Ragini, she was so hurt by the phone call. And its so sweet how Ragini’s willing so sacrifice her love for Laksh so he can get happiness with his Cinderella ❤️. Can’t wait to read more ?

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:08 am

        Tq fats for ur inspiring comment. But dont worry she will get her love soon.

    8. lovely on November 6, 2016 6:37 am

      Superb

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:08 am

        Tq lovely

    9. Ashnoor on November 6, 2016 8:08 am

      Fantastic and Cinderella of laksh is our favourite ragini only . Waiting for laksh reaction . When he will come to knew that the girl he was finding is in front of him . He will be double shocked…..triple….ten times shockeddd .
      Pls update fast dii.
      I am addicted to your ff.

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:12 am

        Tq ashnoor for ur wonderful comment. Yeah he will be double shocked by the truth. Are u waiting for his reaction then stay tuned to my ss. N m happy that my ss reached ur heart n u r following it. Tq so much for this… N btw how can i think of other girl when we have our beautiful ragu.

    10. Kiddoo on November 6, 2016 8:36 am

      Awesome di

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:13 am

        Tq kiddoo

    11. Riya on November 6, 2016 8:43 am

      Its amazing….Totally mind blowing…I think Ragini is Laksh’s Cindrella….Anyways I am waiting for the next episode…Update it soon dear…Tale care and stay happy…

      • Riya on November 6, 2016 8:45 am

        Sorry for typing mistake is take care….

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:15 am

        Tq riya for for ur overwhelming support. N tq for comenting. N u r right rags is his Cinderella. N no prblm i understood the wrd. Bye.

    12. saranya on November 6, 2016 9:16 am

      Awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:16 am

        Tq saranya

    13. Asw on November 6, 2016 9:17 am

      Nice

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:16 am

        Tq asw

    14. Sherin on November 6, 2016 9:31 am

      Awesome

    15. A.xx on November 6, 2016 9:46 am

      Great wonder if he’ll find out next episode as she’s going back to her house and they are going to their neighbour’s to find out about Sansku and her…I think Lakshya’s dad knows she saved him as he waved at her and Lakshya didn’t notice and anyways loved it and update soon.xx

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 11:00 am

        Tq A.xx for commenting. N lets see ur guess is crct or not. N I’ll try to update soon.

    16. Sherin on November 6, 2016 10:15 am

      Awesome.

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 10:37 am

        Tq sherin

    17. SPP on November 6, 2016 11:22 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Feeling sad for Ragini
      Now it is confirmed that Ragini is his Cinderella right
      Excited for the next one
      Update soon………………..

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 1:12 pm

        Tq spp. Yeah m also feeling sad for ragini but i think that love is pleasurable only if we gain after so much of struggle right. Even if someone get love so easily its nt so much interesting, I think like that… N how can I think of other girl other than our ragu as laksh’s Cinderella…. Hahaha

      • SPP on November 6, 2016 2:41 pm

        U r right
        U r always welcome dear
        Keep Smiling

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:43 pm

        Tq spp

    18. IQRA222 on November 6, 2016 12:18 pm

      it was awesome
      cant wait for the next part

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 1:08 pm

        Tq IQRA for commenting. Plz wait for next update a little atleast for me.

      • IQRA222 on November 6, 2016 3:37 pm

        off course i will wait

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:45 pm

        Tq IQRA

    19. Samairaseth on November 6, 2016 12:34 pm

      Awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:23 pm

        Tq sam

    20. Ammu on November 6, 2016 12:52 pm

      It’s very interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:24 pm

        Tq ammu. I’ll try to post next part soon.

    21. Vk on November 6, 2016 12:55 pm

      Awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:25 pm

        Tq vk

    22. Malu on November 6, 2016 2:44 pm

      Awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:42 pm

        Tq malu

    23. dharani on November 6, 2016 3:19 pm

      awesome

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:41 pm

        Tq dharani

    24. Malu on November 6, 2016 3:28 pm

      Awesome part

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 3:42 pm

        Tq malu

    25. Arjuna on November 6, 2016 4:45 pm

      Superb

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 4:53 pm

        Tq arjuna

    26. Radhika.. on November 6, 2016 5:36 pm

      Awesome part di i think ragini is only Cinderella of laksh . and sanskar is a doctor and they change their names everything corelate to ragini and sanskar. The chapter is awesome ………..felling sad for ragini but soon she will get happy………and waiting for laksh to find her his reaction and what will he do after finding her. And part is not short at all it is just amazing one loved it . love u di????

      • Radhika.. on November 6, 2016 5:46 pm

        And the most important the way u describe ragini way of thinking about love just love that she thinks firstly for his happiness than his love ??

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:33 pm

        Love u radhu for ur support. N ur guess is right. Ragini is his Cinderella or piya. N __ for saying that I wrote nicely ragini thoughts for laksh

    27. jazzy on November 6, 2016 5:47 pm

      sooo ragini is cindrella only superb

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 6:33 pm

        Tq jazzy. Haa ragini is laksh’s Cinderella..

    28. nikky on November 6, 2016 5:59 pm

      nice amazing next part soon

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 9:21 pm

        Tq nikky

    29. asra on November 6, 2016 6:26 pm

      awesome dear…finally ragini s our laksh cinderalla….superbbb dear….sanky u r really caring bro…tkcr dear….

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 9:23 pm

        Tq asra… For commenting. N yeah ragini is our laksh’s Cinderella. How can I keep other one when our rag is there…. Kyun…

    30. Monu on November 6, 2016 6:54 pm

      Sorry 4 the late comment. Interesting story

      • maha6 on November 6, 2016 9:26 pm

        Tq monu… No prblm for late comment. U have commented that’s enough for me.

    31. tani on November 12, 2016 8:42 am

      Marvelous

      • maha6 on November 12, 2016 1:40 pm

        Tq tani

    32. Joyful Jessica on November 12, 2016 2:39 pm

      Superb… egarly waiting for next part ☺??

      • maha6 on November 13, 2016 1:01 am

        Tq joyful jessica

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