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DevAkshi: My Love Life – A Simple Love Story (Two Shots – Part 2)

RiaBy RiaOctober 31, 201622 Comments4 Mins Read
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DevAkshi: My Love Life – A Simple Love Story (Two Shots)
Shot 2

We walked out of the station with our hands entwined with each other’s. I drew back my hand and started rubbing my palms to warm them because of the low temperature in Delhi. “What’s the temperature?”, I asked. “1°”, she replied handing me the gloves. “You’re mad to not wear your gloves in this cold weather”, she added. “Actually, there’s no need to take care of myself when you’re there”, I replied wearing the gloves. “Do you know you sound so cheesy at the moment?”, she asked me and I nodded my innocently making her giggle.

We were walking when she asked, “Coffee?” “Sure. Where are we going?”, I asked. “Cafe”, she replied sarcastically as I gave her a ‘you-are-hopeless’ look and she laughed. “Cafe Coffee Day?”, she asked. “Ofcourse”, I replied.

We entered inside and settled down on a table next to the window. It was pretty warm inside. I removed my jacket and settled down on the chair while Sona sat opposite to me. She was wearing jeans and brown overcoat along with a scarf draped around her neck. She removed her scarf and said, “It’s so good now. Well, what do you want to have?” “Cappuccino”, I replied as she said, “Same.” I called the waiter and placed the order as I saw Sona was looking outside when I turned around to face her. “So?”, I asked. “So..?”, she questioned me back shrugging her shoulders. I slid my leg on hers as she turned crimson red. “What are you doing?”, she asked pulling her leg back. I forwarded my leg and said, “Since my Sona doesn’t have anything to talk so, I’m romancing with her.” She blushed more and moving her leg back said, “Don’t do that.” I called the waiter and asked him to replace the order with one cappuccino instead of two. Sona raised her hand when I caught hold of her hand while the waiter went away.

“Why did you change the order? I wanted to have one as well”, she said innocently. “Even I wanted to have one”, I replied squeezing her palm. “Leave my hand”, she complained being annoyed and tried pulling her hand back. I held on to her hand tighter and said, “We’ll share. Anyways, it’s said that when you share food items with your better half, love increases.” She blushed harder and pulling her hand back said, “Shut up.”

The waiter served us our coffee and both of us shared it. “I’m paying”, said Sona placing her card on the table. “No way”, I replied taking out my wallet but, before I could take out the cash she made the payment. I looked at her annoyed while she said, “Okay, now I’ve a huge list of things for shopping. You’re the one paying because I already paid for this coffee.”

I patted my forehead and said, “Okay, let’s leave.” We got out from the cafe and I was about to go in the direction of the mall when she held on to my wrist and said, “Not now.” “Why?”, I asked. “Because.. I told maa that I’m going to my friend’s house”, she replied playing with her fingers. I let out a soft laugh and said, “But, that isn’t fair. I want to spend some time with you. I’m here after such a long time. I want to relish your touch, I want to kiss..” She placed her hand on my mouth and with her eyes signalled me to shut up. “Why?”, I asked. “Nothing before marriage now”, she replied. I frowned and later, said, “Ms. Bose, just think about it. You’ll have to give everything with interest then.” She punched me and said, “Bye!”

She was about to leave when I held on to her wrist. She turned around to look at me as I spread out my arms. She hugged me tightly as I lifted her up a bit. “Dev!!”, she exclaimed as I twirled her around. “I love you!”, I said while she replied, “I love you more!” We smiled at each other and touched her foreheads.

*****

Hello, everyone! Thank you for all your comments and support. I tried replying to all your comments and I’m extremely sorry if I missed out on anyone.

Well, this part wasn’t actually planned but, just because some of you expected another part due to the sudden end or didn’t like the end so, I wrote this.

Anyways, how was this? I hope this time the end was up to all your expectations. Do drop your views below as I’d be eagerly waiting to know them. Suggestions and criticisms are always welcome but, no abusive language.

Best regards,
Ria

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    22 Comments

    1. Aaru on October 31, 2016 9:38 pm

      It was jst too cute n romantic

      • Ria on October 31, 2016 11:17 pm

        Hey Aaru di,
        Thank you so much!?

    2. AnShIta on October 31, 2016 10:03 pm

      Hey Ria di!
      Loved this part! It was sooo nice to see both Dev and Sonakshi together, without any interruption???
      It was splendid and I loved the way you described each and every word! It was fantastic!
      Hoping for more OSs from your side!
      Loads and tons of love to you!??????

      • Ria on October 31, 2016 11:32 pm

        Hey Anshi,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this. Well, romantic sessions without interruptions are really good but, are they really possible? I mean we never get to see a romantic scene of our on-screen couple without any interruptions.?? Just kidding.?

        By the way, you liked the way I write and described things means a lot and I couldn’t have asked for anymore.

        Loads of love.❤

      • AnShIta on November 1, 2016 1:15 pm

        Oh yes! It seems Neely impossible for our on-screen to have a good time together at home! Looks like they’ll always have to be outdoors to spend some time together!??

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 2:05 pm

        Wonder what’s going on in your mind. Naughty kiddo! Well, I guess I’ll be back soon with another one shot but, won’t be promising as I’m not yet sure of the plot. I just have something in mind but, will surely try. Or, may be I’ll start uploading the few shots I was telling you about.

        Loads of love.❤

      • AnShIta on November 1, 2016 6:07 pm

        Hehehehe???? I sure am really naughty di!!
        Besides, I’m sure I’ll love every article of yours! And of course, I’ll support you in all cases! Eagerly waiting for ’em!
        One more thing: Do upload the next part of your ff soon!

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 11:20 pm

        Hey Anshi,
        I’ll surely try to post more of OS’s from my side but, not promising you.

        Well, I’m working upon the next update of the ff. Hope I complete it soon and you all get to read it at the earliest.?

    3. Farhat on October 31, 2016 10:38 pm

      U don’t leave words for me to give my opinion or to comment on your shots…

      • Ria on October 31, 2016 11:33 pm

        Hey Farhat,
        Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me.

        Loads of love.❤

    4. Maleeha on October 31, 2016 10:49 pm

      Superb…..lovely……romantic…….and of course……it was fab…..?????❤??????❤?❤???????❤……..loved it….. That end was also good but this was best……?????❤?…….

      • Ria on October 31, 2016 11:35 pm

        Hey Maleeha,
        Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked the so-called end (?) as well as the actual one.

        Loads of love.❤

    5. Princess on October 31, 2016 10:59 pm

      Awesome episode dear

      • Ria on October 31, 2016 11:36 pm

        Hey, thank you so much dear!?

    6. Nikki on November 1, 2016 12:02 am

      I think it was the CUTEEEEEEEEEE cutest romantic love????………
      I luv it?????…

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 2:09 pm

        Hey Niki,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked it.?

    7. Manya on November 1, 2016 11:39 am

      Loved it!!!!❤️❤️❣???❣????????
      Love love?

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 2:09 pm

        Hey Ayushi,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked it.

        Loads of love.❤

    8. Niki645 on November 1, 2016 2:18 pm

      Awesome!!!!!!
      I loved it sooo much!!!

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 2:51 pm

        Hey Niki,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked it.?

        Loads of love.❤

    9. rockzzzzzz on November 1, 2016 5:47 pm

      Loved dev….i wish he was like this in the real serial also….anyways i loved it and sorry for commenting late

      • Ria on November 1, 2016 11:18 pm

        Hey Rockzzzzzz,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this. Well, even I wish for the same but, surely romance isn’t the only thing we can expect in the shows, right?

        Anyways, it’s alright. Don’t be sorry. I do understand that you must’ve been keeping busy elsewhere.

        Loads of love.❤

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