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Storm of the Bruised Hearts – Chapter 2 (EDKV) [by Ariana]

ArianaBy ArianaOctober 9, 201622 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hiii…Sry for a late update. Ik I said 6th/7th but now it’s 9th. I was sad/busy/broken/mad nd all nuts. 1st read the chap then read my extra bakwas
WARNING: Nooooo way close to a nice chapter. All crapy nd chessy. U can help urself out by not reading it nd save few precious minutues of ur life.

CHAPTER 2- Regrets of Blindness

The phone kept vibrating with sudden flashes until those long fingers came across for a lazy clutch. As the screen unlocked, the display light penetrated through his face allowing him to clear the blur vision. Slowly he crawled to the washroom letting his face fall over the cold water stored side by the basin.

“Didn’t I warn u not to do this? Letting ur skull down below 120(degrees) while ur body is fragile or unawaken allows the blood to circulate at a quicker rate to ur frontal brain lobe scattering the nervous signals and causing the optical wires to loosen connection. U don’t wanna be blind, or do u?” The soft melodic scolding echoed pass his ear drums as a small smile let out of his cheek muscles while he pushed himself up from the position.
“Not going blind till I find u.” He must be looking around to look for her presence, right? Nope, he knew it was his only illusion: Finding Sumo everywhere with her honeyed charmy voice repelling around. What made him come back to reality was the absence of the sweet fragrance. He gathered the white towel and walked to the glassed shower cabin.

XXX

Like a regular morning both brothers bided byes and left for their respective work. The house remained all dark except for the table lamp which still rayed lights falling over the red journal labeled “Sumo” with golden ink.
*Imagine a zoomed in into the journal coz we r going to fly through time…….Flashbacks*

XXX

Bang Bang
“Open the damn door” Shravan shouted for the twelfth time trying to break through the mahogany wood.
“Okay I must admit u are no better than Pushkar. Ur thoughts r cheesy like his, bhaiya!” The sweet voice taunted from the other side of the door.
“No. 1 it’s Shravan for u, not bhaiya so stop calling me that. No. 2, I have no interest in knowing what’s going inside. I need to pee! And u r occupying the washroom for the last 30 mins!!! 30 mins have 1800 seconds and it’ll take me hardly 20 seconds to get my business done. Open the door I seriously can’t control.” He yelled on his regular cold tone.
“U just can’t order a girl like that. Against the Law of Canada. I can case a file and u will be fined $450 with a week of jail for violation of act 327 and 1009. And I studied u can control ur unitary bladder for an hour. Just don’t exhale for a min. This will let ur diaphragm go high under pressure of ur lungs giving more space to ur stomach and oesophagus so…”

“Shut up! Don’t teach me ur stupid biology lessons. Trying to prove u r smart? Well I knw Canadaian Laws better than u so don’t apply them on me. Now if u don’t open the door I’ll…I’ll…”
“U’ll what??? U don’t even have the guts to talk to a girl how can u physically harass me? Not working bhai….”
“SHRAVAN!!! Just SHRAVAN. And what makes u feel I’ll harass an ugly duck like u? Listen Sumo, for the last time I’m politely saying to come out soon. I knw u r done with ur shower long ago, u just wanna tease me. Better open the door.” He spoke in the kindest voice which could make out of him. He was at the line of his patience and a single word against his wish will make him turn into that angry star which none wills to watch.
“Not happening Shravan…oops Bhaiya!” A sound of clear giggle echoed out of the tiled walls.

And it was enough… This girl was no less than a disaster. She is calling him bhaiya even after his denial and also teasing him. TEASING SHRAVAN MALHOTRA! He regretted on his decision, on his slightly growing feelings, on those sweet words he said to her ‘once.’ She was worse than other girls. Every girl has a clear filter and shows their stupidity openly but she…First fooled him to stay on his house with an innocent and responsible attire and now overruling! How could he be so blind at her simple look and allow her in? It wasn’t even a week she stepped in, that now the third room is all pink and cottony. The house smells chocolate dipped strawberry. No one, like not even the dumbest person on Earth would admit to the fact that two grown up university guys lived there. The kitchen was all colourful, the house all clean. Of course he hated that. And most of all, her biological mouth with starts blabbering random “Did u knw” facts about human body any moment. Anger fumed through his whole body not only at her work, but at Pushkar, it was him who offered Sumo the house and mostly at himself for falling in her trap.

“Sumo u r sure that the door won’t open soon?” He asked is the most unconcerned tone as her answer was well known.
“Not really.”
“I’m glad u r girl. Makes life a lot easier” He walked away the hall corner with that mischievous smile of revenge….
_____
Sry no precaps this time nd ik the epi was shorter than my usual updates. I’m really sad as the show ended. U all knw tht.  Can’t help but cry. Anyways not gonna even talk abt it coz then I’ll have to rush for another tissue box. I must say the ending of the show was quick but perfect! Their hug melted me.
Pls ignore grammatical mistakes. I was not even in a mood of typing it but I already delayed itt enough nd didn’t wish to pull the date over more. Yah sry for a late + crapy chapter. My mood is turned off sooooo badly that u can even feel by my write up that I’m all grey. Anyways I’ll try to cheer up myself. But pls do share ur thoughts abt the chap. Next chap will b uploaded by 15th.
If u have twitter then pls comment ur username below. Mine is @Aryana1806_

***Note: Pari di (Angle_Pari) won’t b here for this month. She got her exams so pls prey for her.***
To all those who r still giving their exams, best of luck! To ones who has given already party hard nd yah do share ur result with me.
Love u all
Huggies nd kissies
-Aru

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Ariana

    15 yEar$ olD Cr@cKpOT. wAy to0 rEal!sTic t0 LivE iN Dre@Ms bUt FanTa$Y l0vEr. IntRoVerTEd $ociAliZer. bo0kWaRM buT oUT oF ShaKe$Pe@REzoNeD l!teRacY.

    22 Comments

    1. sona on October 9, 2016 8:10 am

      Oh..
      Is puri mahina nahi jaayegi vo…
      Much…
      Miss u angel..???
      Come back soon..????
      And all the best..???????????????
      Ariana..
      We can understand…
      Well..
      Episode was nice…
      But next part on15th..its too long dear..but still we will wait.???

      • Ariana on October 9, 2016 11:27 am

        ik I’m missing Pari too….I’ll convey ur wishes to her….
        and thanks dear for understanding my situation. I love u soooooooo much. I wish Sony would have been as understanding as u and just for fan’s sake, they would let EDKV continue.
        I’ll try to post soon b4 15 but by 15 it’ll b up
        take care

    2. WeirdSister on October 9, 2016 8:32 am

      Hey Ariana….
      Y do u keep underestimating urself huh?
      Plz don’t do that…plz..for me…!
      U write so well…
      That I m always left in awe after reading ur chps…
      I m not buttering..coz I don’t say this to everyone…!
      This was short….I wanted to read more ..
      I just read ur ff after waking up…perfect morning…!!
      Anyway try to post soon…before 15 if possible….!
      Love u loads…
      Eagerly waiting. ..
      Take care.
      ??????

      • Ariana on October 9, 2016 11:32 am

        sorry if my words against me made u disappointed but I’m feeling so low now. I feel like crying. I wish I could take time out and let the Niagara fall out of my eyes but school leaves no time to even sob peacefully. This life!!! :'(
        Uk ur words make me feel sooooo much better now. U simply light up my dark room
        Thanks sooooooooooooooooooooooo much
        I’ll try to post b4 15th but no promises.
        till then..take care honey

    3. Anushika on October 9, 2016 9:02 am

      Loved this episode to the core…. There is a girl on wattpad named Anisha,who is continuing the story from the ending …Am also waiting for her updates as they will slightly cover up the need….Loved how Sumo called Shravan Bhaiya despite he telling her not to…
      Waiting for the next update…
      I am not on Twitter or any other social media except G-mail….

      Lots of Love
      Anu

      • Ariana on October 9, 2016 11:35 am

        Oh thanks for ur info!!! I would love to read the continuation of EDKV…Give Anisha a huge thanks from me too nd can u pls send me the link of her ff soon?
        I’m glad u liked the epi. thanks dear. I’ll try to post nxt one soon
        It’s okay if u don’t have a social networking acc. We can talk here 🙂
        take care

    4. sanjyoti on October 9, 2016 9:30 am

      It is awsm waiting fr next asap

      • Ariana on October 9, 2016 11:35 am

        thanks dear. Will post nxt part soon

    5. Zainab on October 9, 2016 3:09 pm

      This was too cute. I loved it soooo much. Post the next one soon please. Couldn’t do a longer comment, busy rn. So I am sorry for that. And please cheer up now. Take care. Love you ?

      • Ariana on October 10, 2016 12:22 am

        thanks soooooo much sweeto for managing time out of ur busy life to read and comment. Means alooootttt.
        u take care too

      • Zainab on October 10, 2016 1:31 am

        Anything for you bro (I’ve this habit of calling everyone bro. Hope you don’t mind ?)
        As I’ve got time now so here’s what I actually felt like commenting after reading your episode.
        It was truly amazing. I loved those biological explanations. That toilet scene was epic xD The way she teased him by saying bhaiya was too good. Your explanations were so on point. The dialogue in the end that “I’m glad you are a girl. Makes life a lot easier” made me more anxious for the next episode. Post soon.

        I should sleep now. It’s too late. Got classes tomorrow. .-. Anyway take care sweetie. Love you ?

      • Ariana on October 12, 2016 7:43 am

        Omg Zainu u actually managed time out of ur busy day to comment again for just praising my work. Oh it melts my heart……
        love u too
        take care nd yah don’t stay up late.

    6. Y.balamirra on October 9, 2016 3:13 pm

      hey ariana , how are you?
      nice part, keep writing
      i am on twitter @mirra_2326
      love ,
      balamirra

      • Ariana on October 10, 2016 12:24 am

        thanks Y.B
        I’ll msg u on twitter.
        love u too

    7. pretty preeti on October 9, 2016 3:20 pm

      Aru cuppy say sorry for saying such a gud writer bad .
      Say sorry.
      Had hai it was amazing and u .
      Mai gussa hoon.
      It was chocolate cupcakes.
      Loved the cashew.
      It was awesome my vuppy.
      I will wait for pari di.
      I have twitter I’d .
      I will message u.
      Love u

      • Ariana on October 10, 2016 1:03 am

        ok baba sry…sorry…SORRY…S.O.R.R.Y
        happy? Maaf karde
        k i’ll give u chocolate cuppies
        i got ur msg on twitter…
        btw u want me to add u to the TU group there? let me knw
        take care cupcake

    8. ufaaq on October 9, 2016 10:22 pm

      Hey aruuuuuuuuu first of all I m very very sorry for being late
      Yar muharram is here naw so there r no signals of net and might will be not till Thursday but slow slow
      awweeessssoooome epi aru
      Very well done
      How could u say its bad?????
      Kan pakro chalo jaldi se pakrooooooo
      It was amazing in fact faboulus fantastic like more than that
      I really liked it sorry I was not able to comment on last epi my exams were there u know
      Sorry for that
      Anjooooooooo miss u yar plzzzzzzz b back
      And pbest of luck
      Love u both
      Take care

      • Ariana on October 10, 2016 1:34 am

        I can understand the muharram situation. Thanks for reading nd commenting. I’ll convey ur msg to Pari di. U take care of urself too. Love u

    9. Fatimagulesarfraz on October 10, 2016 8:37 pm

      Hey Ariana!!!!! First of all … a barra wala Sooooooooooorrrryyyyyyyyy … as m not commenting since many days bt kya karun yar .. m living in hostel .. nd there is no net there .. so can’t find a way to read r comment on ur ff.. bt luckily this time m able to comment in ur ff ..
      Well !!!! The title of this ff is just rockinnggg dear .. nd story is really going well .. u r just too good girl .. ??????????????????????
      Nd a belated congratulations for completing ur first ff ???????✨✨???????????????✨✨???????????
      Stay blessed ..
      Take care ..

      • Ariana on October 11, 2016 12:04 am

        Oh Fatu thanks sooooooooooooooo much for ur wishes nd such a sweet comment. I can understand ur situation. I feel so honored that u managed time and a way out of this business nd tough situation to read my ff. Love u girl.
        Pls take care nd have fun

    10. Angel_pari on October 11, 2016 5:23 pm

      Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

      loved it yar so sorry for short cmnts in bit hurry

      and yeah edkv still cant get over to it 🙁

      but ur ff was so lit that i love reading it thankuuuu…..

      • Ariana on October 12, 2016 7:49 am

        Seriously Pari? U should b studding. Nd I can understand u r in not a bit but alot of hurry. All the best for ur remaining exams. Rock it up. Nd thanks soooooooooooooooooooo much managing a time out and actually reading the chap. Love u sweetheart
        take care
        best of luck

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