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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan-Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 15…
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Swasan-Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 15…

FROZEN CHOCOBy FROZEN CHOCOOctober 4, 201695 Comments10 Mins Read
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Link to previous Chap: Chapter 14

Chapter 15:

Since 2 hours swara is twisting and turning in bed… She is trying to sleep but her new fond love not at all allowing her to do so… whenever she closes her eyes, Sanskar face only comes in front of her… her mind and heart bloomed with happiness…. it’s a kinda feeling none can feel it except her… she sits with jerk…

Swa: Omg, I’m in love… (She jumps in bed with happiness) swara you’re in loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee… can u believe this..? You’re in love with ur handsome… gosh, what should I do now…? arre did u ever watch movie, you should propose him… but how could I..? Did he feel like the same way I felt…? Whether I should confess my love first or wait for him… (She gets tensed and starts to bite her nails) uff swara leave all this now, feel this moment…

She hugs her knees and says sanskar… his names is enough to make her blush… ‘What might be he is doing now…’ She thinks… ‘What will be he do, he must be slept by hugging that stupid pillow, ugh… she pouts sadly… Just few days then I’ll be in ur place, she chuckles at her thought…. her face turns beet root red… She takes her mobile and kisses his photo… swa: I’m so happieeeee… she spreads her hand… Then play some peppy song and start to dance like crazy by singing…

“Itna maza kyun aa raha hai…. Tu ne hawaa mein bhaang milaaya…

(She jumps from bed, shoves her hands in air…)

Duguna nashaa kyun ho rahaa hai… Aankhon se meethaa tu ne khilaayaa…
(Shakes her head and starts to run all over her room)

O teri malmal ki kurtee gulaabi ho gayi… Manchali chaal kaise…”

She runs until hit someone… sanskar is standing there by holding hands near his chest… her heart starts to beat faster than ever…Swa: nawaaaaaabbbbiiiii… he glares her and stops songs… Sans: ho gayi… she bites her lower lip and bow down…

Sans: you’re unbelievable swara, look at time… by hearing ur sound I gt afraid something happened to you but here you’re doing performance… swa: hmm, I’m happy so I dancing… Sans: it’s not the time to express ur happiness… u r disturbing my sleep… swa:(to herself) u too disturbed my sleep did I complaint..?(to sanky) If you’re disturbed then keep some cotton in ur ears… both starts their nok-jhoks… swara murmurs ‘boring idiot’… Sans: I heard… swa: I said so… she turns away… (to herself) how could you fall in love with this idiot ugh… he smiles…

Sans: so you’re happy… she nods cutely… sanskar smirks looking at water bottle… sans: then why you’re celebrating your happiness alone… Before she could understand… he splashes water on her and laughs… sans: you called me boring idiot na… swara make face… swa: ofcourse you’re… she pulls water bottle from his hands and threws water on him and laughs… He throws pillow on her…. both starts to do pillow fight and then continues songs and dance together by applying and spraying her talcum powder, face cream, lotions and her perfumes on each other face…

At song end both falls on bed either side… they’re panting heavily and laughing… they both look alike ghost… Sans: its been so many days we did all this… swa: ha ha ha… yeah its been many days… Sans: hmm, all of sudden my kitten is happy, any special…?

swa: wo… um…I… haan we need reasons to be sad not for being happy… I danced bz I’m happy but you… Sans: I’m also happy bz my kitten is happy… he turns towards her … her heart skips… sans: Happiness in the air… both smiles… he gt mesmerised with her smile… he leans towards her, swara closed her eyes… soon reality hits him… he realised what he was upto do… he immediately stands from there, swara held his hand… Sans: it’s late, sleep… good night… he carresed her hair and leaves… swara looks at the way he left: sanskar I love you…
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Swara is preparing breakfast… sanskar was surprised to see her in the kitchen… as she is in free hair it’s disturbing her too much… he moves towards her… she smiles sensing his presence… slowly he move her hair from her neck… she starts to shiver with his touch… he back hugs her and place his face against her back of her neck… plate falls from her hand with his act… he kisses her nape, she freezes there… He turns her toward him and closes his eyes and leans to her lips… swa: sa…sans…sanskar ji… Sans: jiiiiiiiii….?

He opened his eyes with jerk… he looks around, he is in his room only… sans: Thank God, it’s just a dream… he sighs… ‘We get a dream, what we think, his mind says…’ ‘no..no… I never think my kiddo like that.. I gt this dream bz of night incident, he replies himself…’ he goes washroom and splashes some water by cursing himself for the dream….

His eye got stuck into wall clock when he wipes his face… It’s 5.30 in the morning… Everyone says early morning dreams bcm true, he thought… ‘No it won’t happen… he tells himself…’ ‘Did really early morning dreams will bcm true… he asked himself….’ urgh…sanskar it’s just a dream, he shrugs his thought and tries to sleep but sleeps are far away from his eyes….

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Swasan are seat for breakfast… kaki is busy in household works… without taking breakfast, swara steals his glances … sanskar feels her gaze, he looks at her … bz of his sudden look she gt hiccups and stares him like a kitten that caught while stealing milk… Sanskar feels urges to kiss her those eyes… at a very minute he let down his thought by blaming his dreams…

Swara (stammers): wo… I… umm… actually… he simply passes water and continues his breakfast… to avoid her awkward situation swara starts to talk…

Swa: handsome… sans: hmm… swa: you know neighbour aunties, kaki and mostly everyone used to call their husband using ji… sans: oh… swa: waise.. how it sounds, when I call u using ji… ‘sanskar ji…’ she giggles… sanskar choked food remembering his dream… swa: arre what happen… sanskar nods nothing… now swara passes water to him…

Swa: its sounds good but I won’t… Don’t think ll call u sanskar ji… not even in ur dreams, mind it… he spews water from his mouth and starts to cough badly… swara get concern and pats his back… he takeoff her hand and stands… Sanskar: wo swara today I have to leave early, you carry on ok… he leaves while swara looks him confused…

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Sanskar car stops in mid road… he hits his steering with frustration…Bike goers stops near him… arj: hello boss… sans: hey bro, u… arj:yep… (after that encounter they both met so many times accidently) karthi and Raj also with him… he intro them… arj: here at this time.. sans: hmm, my car is repair… arj: it’s difficult to get mechanic in this area… do onething u park ur car here, will drop you at home…

Sans: it’s ok bro, I think u guys are going somewhere … arj: come-on boss, we’re just gonna to hang out tonight, nothing much… sanskar thinks… karthi: dude dont think much… nowadays it’s not safe for boys being alone at this time… Raj (by biting his lips): Ugh, moreover u looking hot… karthi runs his finger over sanskar… Sanskar gives them weird look and moves back…

Sans: arjun r u sure they are, I mean bz of them nothing will happen to my… my virginity… arj: ha ha ha… boss, dnt wry thy are just teasing you… U can trust me… karthi: we too trust u babe… they kissed arjun cheeks… arj: eeeee…yuck, (he wipes his cheek) stay away from me… sanskar rolled his eyes… sans: now I understood why it’s not safe for boys… 4 chuckles…

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Arjun drops sanskar at his home… arj: ok bye boss… sans: wru all gng, come inside… arj: some other day… sans: no way… arj: but ur wife… sans: dnt wry about her, she is just a carbon copy of ur pagal I mean ammu… Arjun smiles…

He welcomes them inside… Sans calls: kiddo… karthi: kiddo..? Sans: wo, my wife… arj: I think u love ur wife so much… sanskar just smiles… after seeing sanskar swara happily jumps and encircled his neck and kissed his cheek…

Sanskar is standing infront of them, so her view is not clear to them but her action… kar: woah, I wish I should get wife like her…arjun glares him… sanskar lil annoyed… swa: today u r late… you knw how much I felt bored… he knws swara starts her chatter she won’t stop, so he stops her…

Sans: lemme intro my wife swara… Sanskar moves, trio stands shock… swa(happily): aju, karthi, raj… what a surprise..? Sans: do u knw them…? swa: haan… she nods… arj: Ammu… hearing arjun sanskar turns to arjun … Sans: Ammu..?

So many questions starts to run in their mind… more than them sanskar is shocked … Sans (mind): how she knows him… why he is calling her as ammu… Did she is his pagal…? if suppose she is..? How she knws him..? shit… whenever he met arjun he encouraged him by saying he love his ammu… he is displeased with it… he was totally engulfed in his own thought…

Karthi starts to laugh… karth: nice joke sir, we knw very well she didn’t married yet…. Raj: haan… she is our f4nd and classmate … Reality strikes swara, her frnds doesn’t knw abt her marriage… she gt afraid now how thy ll react how she gonna to answer them, did thy gt angry…? Did they will think her a s lier..? She knew mistake was her… What she’ll do if suppose they stops talking with her..? she holds sanskar hand… now only arjun and sanskar realises from wr they heard this common name…

Friends is the only one whom we can be live as being ourself… one who knows all our flaws and strengths… but she hide herself as married… they not even knw her real identity that she is someone Mrs… if our frnd hide or lie us how it feels…? If suppose that frnd is close to our heart… he is totally hurt… he feels dejected…. arjun looks her with so many questions… it’s clearly shown how much he hurt, it’s pain in his eyes…. swara lower her gaze with guilt…

arj(without moving his gaze from swara): he is not joking… Raj(surprisingly): what..? It means u knw it before… swara: No he didn’t… swa: wo… arj… he stops her by showing his palm… arj: more than u we are surprised… nice to meet you Mrs Maheshwari… he said with mocking and stern tone…

He doesnt ask her anything… insted of that he maintain silents… Sometimes silence is the biggest punishment ever when it comes from our dear one… he not even bother to ask her anything… Did she is not important to him..? Or Did she do any crime by hiding her marriage truth..? Tears brimmed in her eyes…

Sanskar knows bz of him only she hides about her marriage … he only wants to clear their misunderstanding… its true he dont like swara as being his ammu but now she is standing with tear filled eyes which he hates most…

Sans: arjun actually… arj (cuts him): boss I think we getting late bye…he plastered a fake smile… without giving any chance to explain … he leaves with karthi and Raj silently…

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Guys I know it’s boring and not upto urs expectation… I’m sorry… 🙁 🙁 will post next epi after navaratiri…

Thank you all… 🙂 🙂

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    95 Comments

    1. Soujanya on October 4, 2016 9:16 am

      Awesome….

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 8:39 pm

        Thank you.. 🙂 🙂

    2. xavia on October 4, 2016 9:23 am

      Hey dear…its osmmmmm…….n hw dare uh tell dat its boring…..my hrt skipped a beat while reading encounter part……plz dun hrt swara……

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 8:45 pm

        Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂 I won’t hurt her… but if sanky did anything I’m not responsible.. 😉 😉 he he he… 😀 😀

    3. anu on October 4, 2016 9:31 am

      awesome. update soon

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 8:45 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    4. tamanna on October 4, 2016 9:35 am

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 8:46 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    5. mica on October 4, 2016 9:37 am

      Nive!!!!!! are you sure they have huge different ages ???? since i can’t see the differences when they having fun with pillow fight.. omg, those kiddos….
      ohohoho.. Sanskar’s dream..poor arjun….
      luv it Nive! ty.. update soon please

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 8:55 pm

        I’m also wondering the same, if they are behave like this then Wat abt their kids… oh noo. .. he he he… Thank you dr. . 🙂 🙂

    6. Sana on October 4, 2016 9:44 am

      Superb..

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:02 pm

        Thanks dr … 🙂 🙂

    7. ria..!! on October 4, 2016 9:47 am

      NYC to c u..

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:05 pm

        Thanks dr … 🙂 🙂

    8. Simin on October 4, 2016 9:51 am

      Its amazing finally they know she is married
      Hope so everything gets cleared soon

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:12 pm

        yep.. thank you… 🙂 🙂

    9. sammykapoor on October 4, 2016 9:57 am

      after long time see u…missed ur ff dear….nice epi …..try to give next part soon dear

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:13 pm

        Thanks dr.. 🙂 🙂 will update after navaratiri dr. .. 🙂 🙂

    10. rabia on October 4, 2016 10:09 am

      awesome and plz don’t make arj the villian of the story 😉

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:16 pm

        Thank you Rabia… 🙂 🙂 don’t you want villain..?

    11. maryum on October 4, 2016 10:16 am

      Awesome dear it too good and not at all boring

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:16 pm

        Thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

    12. Shagun on October 4, 2016 10:21 am

      Awesomeeeee
      Wah maza aa gaya

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:27 pm

        Thank you.. 🙂 🙂

    13. Heltej on October 4, 2016 10:38 am

      Superb… ? dont make arjun as villian… I love this story so much! ?

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:51 pm

        Thank you.. ☺☺

    14. Febi on October 4, 2016 10:56 am

      Wow…..Awesome…..update soon please

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:51 pm

        Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

    15. rabia0032 on October 4, 2016 11:07 am

      Amazing

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:52 pm

        Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

    16. Afra96 on October 4, 2016 11:09 am

      Nice

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 9:53 pm

        Thank you afra… ☺☺

    17. SHAN on October 4, 2016 11:14 am

      No dr its not at all boring…. Loved it…. I think arjun is going to be cupid between swasan…..

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:08 pm

        he he he… will see in nxt epi… thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

    18. Navi on October 4, 2016 11:34 am

      Awww as i expected trio met coincidentendlly.. wah wah swara found her feeling and her dance superbnd swasan moments semma… aprm baalam pitchukari semma song. Nive missed u so much. Epudi iruka?? Enala private msg send panna mudiyala and cnt see notifications also. Aprm anu unaku kandipa msg panirukanum. Her dad is discharged frm hospital. Ipa konjam nala irukangalam. She is too good. Anu kuda msg anupunadhu enala paka mudiyala.. last dont say ur chaptrs are boring.. when i hear that my face is like ur dp. Neenga navaratri celebrate panuveengala nive?

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:19 pm

        ha ha ha… thala I want to see ur face right now… na enoda face eh ipo apdi vachi pathean… he he he… dp change panna try panna but change agala… 🙁 🙁 unakku andha song pidikkuma…? Indha epi type panradhuku munnadi andha song kettan adha add pannean…
        Thank God anu is fine… I advised u but I was worried for her… uk mrg wardrobe munnadi ninutu anu pathi nenachitu irundhean… un kita ketkalanu nenachean but nee eh reply pannitea.. now I’m happy… na pvt msg check panni pakkurean…

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:28 pm

        Navaratiri enga vetlaya noo… actually na frnds veetuku povean adha… apdi eh oc la kannadi seepu bangles gifts vanguradhula busy eh iruppean?? unga vetla celebrate pannuvingala…?? n yeah wr is ur ff…?

        I’m fyn… Thank u so much Dr. .. 🙂 🙂

    19. hemanshi on October 4, 2016 11:43 am

      Hey it’s nice

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:33 pm

        Thank you… ☺☺

    20. pari on October 4, 2016 11:53 am

      Amazing plz yr post daily

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:35 pm

        it’s lil difficult to post daily… I’m really sorry dr. .. 🙁 🙁 Thank u… ☺☺

    21. s on October 4, 2016 12:45 pm

      nice..

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:35 pm

        Thanks dr… ☺☺

    22. chanu on October 4, 2016 12:55 pm

      awwww nice epi.
      :-*
      lv it 2 da core.

      dnt dare 2 cl dis ff boring. its 1 f my fav fav fav ff.

      he he swara looks sooooo cute. nt nly swara im also soo hpy bz f her realisation.
      their hpy dance is awsome. nw my sanky also bcm a kiddo. thier pillow fight awwww so sweet.
      and sankys dream. 😮 😮 when will he realise his lv 2wrd his kiddo???? eagalary waiting 4 it.

      a biggggggg hug 4m me 2 u nive.
      bz u write dis ff. :-* :-* thank u

      arjs reaction is nice. evry bst frnd wld do dat. bt hope they will patch up soon and i hope arj will bcm qupid 4 swasans lv stry. i lv 2 see sankys jelousy and possesiveness. 😉 😛

      sry 4 typos dr.
      plz uplode nxt part asap.
      keep writing
      be happy always
      lv ya
      😀 😀 😀

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:47 pm

        Thank you chanu… ☺☺ he will realise his love asap dnt wry… 😀 😀
        very big hug to you dr..??? Sorry..??? before asking sorry read this chappie again u can see so many typos and all…

      • chanu on October 4, 2016 11:50 pm

        Thank u 4 ur sweet hug dr..
        Yaay yaaaaay sanky ll realise his lv soon!!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Awwwww
        hee hee..
        dnt wry abt typos dr..
        who cares abt typos!! When da ff is awesome??!!!?
        Is badi badi deshon mei eysi chote chote bathe hothi rahathi hain.
        😉 😉 😉 😛 😛
        Byeee
        ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

      • Nive.. on October 5, 2016 7:57 pm

        aww… I’m glad dr… ty and yeah same applied to you.. who will care about typos when they gt beautiful comment from lovely person like you… 🙂 🙂

    23. Arshaanya on October 4, 2016 1:14 pm

      Omg wat a superb chappy…
      Finally swara rlsd her love for sanky yeyyyy ???
      N dan dere fun aaawww i loved it… n dan his dream ?? wen wil it come true ?..
      N d shock in d end was ?.. i thought it will take tym for arjun to knw d truth bt m happy..
      It was jus awesome ?

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear… 🙂 🙂

    24. NDSG on October 4, 2016 1:31 pm

      It’s awsome dear…. Hoep sanky will soon confess his love ????

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:51 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    25. SNY on October 4, 2016 1:58 pm

      Awesome nive….
      Sanky dream semma dr…. ..
      Plz nxt one soon…..
      And semma epiiiiiiii dr..

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:57 pm

        Thanks sny… ☺☺

    26. SwaSanFan.Goldie on October 4, 2016 1:58 pm

      Amzing. ..lfinally Arjum came to knw da Truth..Nw hope Sanskaar dnt MU Swara Arjun n Sacrifice His Like a Mad Guy..Continue soon

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 10:59 pm

        dnt think him lyk tat… he he he … thank you..☺☺

      • SwaSanFan.Goldie on October 5, 2016 1:32 am

        Hehehe..Want Sanskaar too to Realize His Love fr Swara..

    27. vyshu10 on October 4, 2016 2:14 pm

      awesome….swara jumping on sanky is so cute….finaaly, d truth is out. Sanky is also realizing his love…yay

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:08 pm

        Thanks vyshu… ☺☺

    28. Shreeyu on October 4, 2016 2:16 pm

      No no Episode was not at all boring… In fact I enjoyed reading it …. Especially Swara’s dance and Swasan behaving like kids

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:09 pm

        Thank you… ☺☺

    29. SNY on October 4, 2016 2:39 pm

      Awesome nive….
      Sanky dream semma….
      Plz nxt one soon dr……

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:10 pm

        will try to post next epi asap.. 🙂

    30. Ameera on October 4, 2016 2:59 pm

      amazing!!! wonderful and fantatic as usual! awesome yaar!! cant wait for next bt have to wait!! keep smiling 🙂

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:13 pm

        Thank you so much dear… ☺☺ keep smiling.. ?? ameera is this you… ‘incomplete love story author… if not I’m sorry…

      • ameera on October 13, 2016 8:05 pm

        yes i am

    31. hadi on October 4, 2016 3:37 pm

      Aww swara’s dance my heart dancing with her dance sanky’s dream <3 waiting for real romance n most encounter ufff what an encounter of trio now hopping that sanku will realize his feelings soon as now he will be jealous of arj how will swara make everything alright so for that u have to upload so upload next soon

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thank you hadi… will try to post asap.. 🙂 🙂

    32. shiksha on October 4, 2016 4:32 pm

      I’m so happy today.
      The chapter is super.
      U know what? Yesterday I was having so many assignments to complete I did while reading ‘the way are’ one chapter after answering each questions, it really helped me to complete those works.it really relieved my work stress.
      Loved today’s chapter.

      • shiksha on October 4, 2016 9:42 pm

        Opps!

        Loved d kiddos today
        ‘Swaragini…the way you are…’
        N ha ur dp pic suits her cute funny angry face.
        Adorable.
        N ha plz try,to not to make arj negative.

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:25 pm

        ha ha ha… you’re right my dp suits with her angry face…

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:22 pm

        aww… thank you so much dr… ur cmnt gv very big smile n my face… Nowadays u guys are remembering me ‘the way you’re’ I’m feeling glad.. ??

    33. Rizna on October 4, 2016 4:44 pm

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:25 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    34. Purvi on October 4, 2016 6:56 pm

      Awesome……. Continue soon……

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:27 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    35. rabia0032 on October 4, 2016 7:28 pm

      Awesome love it ? ? ? ?

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:27 pm

        Thank you… 🙂 🙂

    36. chandu on October 4, 2016 8:24 pm

      awesome…!! loved it…!! and it’s not at all boring,…!!! day by day I am becoming mad for this ff…!!

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:28 pm

        Thanks chandu.. 😀 😀

    37. Kakali on October 4, 2016 8:53 pm

      Don’t know from where to start … it’s my 1st time commenting on ur FF dear … i love ut dear …
      Swara’s realization was damn cuuttee !!! pillow fight wass sooo flying flying..at last my poor angel ..uhhhh !!! don’t worry Swara.. Nive is gonna make everything all rit…
      enjoyed it Nive … thnk u…

      • Nive.. on October 4, 2016 11:29 pm

        Ha ha ha… nive will try to make everything fine… Thanks dr for cmntng.. . ☺☺

    38. Navi on October 4, 2016 11:36 pm

      Hahagehe eli semma settai panura. Thn nangalum navartri la celebrate pannamattom. Eli ne kovapadura madhuri face vatcha semma comedy ya iruku. Never try dat my choco

      • Nive.. on October 5, 2016 7:38 pm

        na kovama face vacha sema terror eh iruppean..?? apdiya ella ena patha bayapudu vanga?? and yeah why you stopped don’t dare..?? right now I’m angry with navi… enoda mobi browser um pvt msg sent aga support pannala 🙁 🙁 but notification kattudhu… 🙂 🙂

      • Navi on October 5, 2016 10:18 pm

        Neenga terror ah irupeenga.. semma cimdey machan semma comdey.. poda poda.. and enakum unnoda ahey prblm in browser. Nw mobile data is too low adhu oru karanam irukalam nenaikuren. Nxt kastapattu insiku unaku anu kum private msg vera anupunen..

      • Nive.. on October 6, 2016 12:23 pm

        anu os la reply paru…

      • Navi on October 6, 2016 12:29 pm

        I too hv left my reply dhr go and see in anu os 😉

      • Nive.. on October 15, 2016 11:27 pm

        thala… I posted new ff… wru nw… do check anu os… missing u… 🙁 🙁

    39. mumpi on October 5, 2016 5:06 pm

      vry lovely Swasan part… nd Arjun’s reaction too.. u hv updated it after sooooo looonggg time.. wen will b nxt update?

      • Nive.. on October 5, 2016 7:39 pm

        Thanks dr.. nxt will be after navaratiri.. 🙂 🙂

    40. tani on October 6, 2016 8:28 am

      Fab chappy

      • Nive.. on October 6, 2016 12:15 pm

        Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

    41. Sethooty on October 15, 2016 1:03 pm

      Wow superb loved this chappy dear…..sorry being late…finally swara realised her love….but what about our sanky he is dreaming about this…why this stupid didn’t realised yet.. he also fell in love with her……don’t make arjun negative…. But want some jelosy in Sanskar bz of their bonding …..

    42. Sethooty on October 15, 2016 1:05 pm

      Arjun reaction was expected…you didn’t create any drama…in that scene…swara also reacted in a normal way…like wen we surprised to met our friends in house….lol…

      • Nive.. on October 15, 2016 10:41 pm

        Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂 you’re late na so I gonna to gv punishment to you… nothing much “u should update ur ff..” ?? he he he… nxt epi u’ll gt to knw whether sanky realised his love or not..? as well as about arjun… actually I’m totally confused with arjun and his ammu…
        ha ha ha you’re right we gt surprised wen v met our frnd in house… once I fought with my frnd… I was damn angry with her… she gv unexpected sudden visit to my home… uk what I did after seeing her, I gt excited and hugs her forgetting that I was angry… he he he… my poor memory…

      • Sethooty on October 16, 2016 1:37 pm

        Nice…update next part soon….
        About my Ff am typing….

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