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Home»Fan Fiction»Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 14)
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Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 14)

RiaBy RiaSeptember 20, 201636 Comments5 Mins Read
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Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 14)

Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. They really made my day. I’m glad you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.

Well, here is the link for the previous segment:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-13-ria/

This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice would be reintroduced again. I wrote this one on your demands. Anyways, hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.

Are you all excited to read what’s in stock? Let’s start then.
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I entered the room and found Twinkle and di talking. “Can I come in?”, I asked. Di and Twinkle looked at me as Twinkle rolled her eyes while di said, “Ofocurse Mr. Sarna.” I narrowed my gaze at di as we both burst out laughing. “Come, sit here”, di said. I went and sat beside di as Twinkle said, “I’ll go bring coffee for the two of you.” She got up and was about to go when di said, “Twinkle, you sit. I’ll bring it.” “No, it’s okay”, replied Twinkle but, di walked out of the room ignoring her. “Di”, she called out and was about to go when I held her wrist.

She turned around and said, “Leave my hand.” I nodded my head in a no and walked closer to her. She tried freeing her hand but, I tightened my grip and pulled her towards me. I softly held her hand behind her back and said, “You didn’t answer my question.” “I said no”, she replied trying to free her hand. “But, your eyes say something different”, I said and pulled her closer to me. “K..Kunj”, she called out. “Do you love me?”, I asked. “No, I don’t”, she replied looking straight into my eyes. “Does it not affect you when I come closer to you?”, I asked after she lied. “No”, she replied as I pulled her even more closer making her front touch mine. “Not even now?”, I asked. “K..Kunj”, she said. “Does it not matter to you when I’m close to you?”, I repeated myself. She pushed me away and said, “Kunj, just be in your limits. I’ve already had enough of you and I’m not going to take it anymore.”

I walked towards her while she moved back. “Kunj”, she said as her back touched the wall. “Kunj, see”, she said pointing her finger at me as I moved towards her and placed my finger on her lips. “Twinkle, please give me a chance”, I said. She pushed away my hand and said, “Don’t tell me that you want me to be here with you.” I lowered down my gaze and said, “What I did was wrong but, can’t I get another chance?” “Apply for the divorce. I’ll go before di and bhai’s wedding”, she replied pushing me away. “Twinkle, please”, I muttered but, she walked out of the room. I clenched my fist and hit it against the wall. “Kunj Sarna, you’re wrong. How could you do that to her?”, I said to myself and after sometime walked away to our room.

I was in the washroom washing my face when someone knocked the door. I quickly swiped the water from my face and opened the door. I saw Twinkle standing at the doorstep. “Your coffee”, she said. I turned around and said, “Can you please keep it on the table there?” She placed the cup on the table and was about to go when someone said, “Oh Twinkle, you’re here. Actually, I wanted to talk to the two of you.” It was maa’s voice. I turned around and asked in a choked voice, “What happened?” “Actually.. what happened Kunj? Why are your eyes so red? Did you cry?”, maa asked. I smiled and said, “Nothing. Something went into my eyes and I was constantly rubbing my eyes so, it just became red I guess.” I looked at Twinkle who was staring at me with me a surprised face. “What did you want to tell?”, I added. “Ya, I’m going to talk to Leela ji tomorrow. We’ll decide Mahi’s wedding soon”, maa said. “Maa, why so soon?”, I asked. “It’s not early at all. In fact, it’s pretty late. Anyways, I need to go downstairs. I’ll talk to both of you later”, maa said and walked out of the room.

“Did you cry?”, asked Twinkle. A faint smile covered my face as I replied, “I applied for the divorce.” She looked at me with a shocked face as I walked out of the room.

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Happy Birthday Rashi! Hope you’ve a great day and an amazing year ahead. You’re one of the first few friends I made from TU. Do stay in contact forever. Love you lots!?
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Did you all like it? Let me know through your comments. But, please I request you all to comment as that’s my support system and without your support I can’t continue this fan fic. Criticism is always welcome but, please no ill language.
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In case if someone missed out on this article, I request all of you to go through it and let me know your views. Here is the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-comeback-authors-note/

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    36 Comments

    1. Shatakshi on September 20, 2016 8:30 pm

      Oyyee hoeee baby doll
      U rocked it
      Seriously I was braced up throughout
      Loved it to the core
      Love u load???

    2. Anam_sidhant on September 20, 2016 8:39 pm

      Hyyy ria! I dont have words for uh❤ i mean how can uh write so well i m in love with ur ff its superrr amazing?? now I’m feeling bad for kunj? I hope u ll unite them soon? loved it to the core? please post next one asap?

    3. Sameera on September 20, 2016 8:41 pm

      Awesome???

    4. Maggi on September 20, 2016 8:42 pm

      It was awsm…..luvd the last part a loads….
      Feeling very sad for kunj….it was indeed a gr8 shock…but the way u bought out his emotions were mind blowing

    5. tara on September 20, 2016 9:04 pm

      the last part…. ufff cant express..
      it was so touchy.. i mean.. i could feel his emotions man.. wonderful episode ria..one of ur best..i must say…
      kunj is sooo cute…loved it completely..
      loads of love..
      take care..

    6. Payal .... on September 20, 2016 9:08 pm

      Hey ria
      epic was awesome pls post next asap

    7. Monica on September 20, 2016 9:16 pm

      I loved it. The last part, shit that was so touchy! I feel so bad for kunj. Loved it throughout. Write soon x Love ya idiot ?

    8. Laddoo on September 20, 2016 9:29 pm

      Ria di
      Geo!
      No long comments.
      Super shocked!
      Horrified in a sense.
      TU was real fast this tym, no?
      Anyways, hope to see a reconciliation soon.
      Love you?

    9. rashiverma2199 on September 20, 2016 9:33 pm

      Awww…..
      Thank u so much ria….
      Luv u loads…..
      I liked the episode to moon and back…..awesome amazing….. Fantastic …..superb…..
      Thanks for u lovely wishes….????

      • baby on September 20, 2016 9:52 pm

        happy birthday to u may god bless u………… 😀 l have a blast……party hard……..

      • Chruti1306 on September 20, 2016 10:51 pm

        Happy birthday rashi??❤️❤️❤️???????

      • Chruti1306 on September 20, 2016 10:51 pm

        Chiku here

      • Meeta on September 20, 2016 10:55 pm

        Happiest Birthday.
        Enjoy.
        Party hard.

      • rashiverma2199 on September 23, 2016 1:23 pm

        Thanks baby, chiku and meeta for ur wishes….

    10. baby on September 20, 2016 9:51 pm

      amazing ria fabulus luvd it 2 d core
      d sdn change oh god post nxt soon
      cnt w8 emotional n cute epsidoe……
      love u………. 😀

    11. Sidhanshi on September 20, 2016 9:53 pm

      Beautiful epi… Loved it ria…

    12. SidMin on September 20, 2016 9:56 pm

      Loved it 🙂 The episode was awesome Post soon 🙂 can’t wait 🙂 Hope you won’t make me wait 🙂

    13. Sushmitha on September 20, 2016 10:09 pm

      Nice episode but I feel so bad for kunj omg he was crying I Hope twinkle understand kunj and twinj unite

    14. modeste on September 20, 2016 10:31 pm

      wow just awesome

    15. Chruti1306 on September 20, 2016 10:51 pm

      Awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️???????
      Loved it.
      Post next soon

      • Chruti1306 on September 20, 2016 10:51 pm

        Chehak here

    16. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 20, 2016 11:01 pm

      awesome amazing emotional epi….bechara kunj…..bt twinkle bhi sahi h…

    17. SidVee on September 20, 2016 11:15 pm

      Amazing epi.. loved twinj’s scene.. felt bad for kunj but he deserved it.. do cont soon ?

    18. TwinjSidMin on September 20, 2016 11:15 pm

      Hey ria awesome amazing fantastic fabulous superb episode…for the first time felt bad for kunj…you portrayed kunj’s emotions so well…as always damn damn excited for next episode…try to post next soon…can’t wait more…after every episode my curiosity and love to read your ff is increasing more and more…

      Love you ??

    19. kruti on September 20, 2016 11:37 pm

      Amazing epi ria…..nd d last part was damn touchy
      Loved it
      Post d nxt one asap

      Love u?

    20. dreamer...arundhati on September 20, 2016 11:48 pm

      Ria superb 1 darlo
      Rashi happy bday

    21. Sara28 on September 21, 2016 2:17 am

      Awww I feel bad for kinj. U portray his emotions so well its amazing. Maybe now twinkle will understand kunjs worth and might come together during yuhis wedding. The
      Epi was fantabulous!

    22. Ramya on September 21, 2016 5:44 am

      Hi ria
      Awesome episode dear
      Pls asap
      N happy birthday rashi

    23. Ayeshakhanum11 on September 21, 2016 7:47 am

      it was amazing dear as always u r divine

    24. Angita on September 21, 2016 11:05 am

      Wowwww
      Ria diiiiii
      You rocked rocked rocked it
      Awesome
      Amazing
      Fantabulous

    25. Sana(sanu) on September 21, 2016 12:48 pm

      Awesome

    26. foreverfanoftwinj on September 21, 2016 1:54 pm

      Hi bq le comment kr dia
      Dosti mat todna
      Haath mein glass ghus gaya hai so zyada nhi likh sakti
      But phir bhi ur ff is amazing
      Lafz nhi hai bayan krne ko
      Ati-utaam gud

    27. Sayeeda on September 21, 2016 7:58 pm

      Hey Ria sorry for the late comment yrrrrr…….but seriously yrrr I loved the episode a lot …..
      The way Twinkle hid her pain from Kunj is amazing …
      Kunj’s pain is portrayed so well yrr …I’m really feeling bad for him… hope Twinj get back together….

      Anyways; it’s really a fab episode… loved it to the core ….

      love you???

    28. S.Z.F.Z on September 21, 2016 8:03 pm

      So sorry Ria for being late!
      This part was rocking as always‼
      Keep rocking this Fan Fiction like this only 🙂
      Good going and reach heights 🙂
      Stay blessed!
      Take care xx

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      Love u loads dear!

      -Zuha

    29. Romaisha on September 23, 2016 4:40 am

      Omg dii!
      God so sorry couldn’t comment earlier but u no my reason 🙂
      The segment was simply amazing! Like i said i love emotional episodes so this one was just too good!
      Feeling sorry for Kunj though :3…
      Love you! ??

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