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Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 21 by ROSH
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Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 21 by ROSH

Roshini125By Roshini125September 19, 201616 Comments3 Mins Read
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Chapter 21:
Twinkle smiled at kunj as he touched her tail. Kunj was feeling new. He took back his hand in awkardness.
K:sry..
T:thats fine
K:I am really shocked to see u…like… I never saw u, not me any 1 of this world won’t be able to see u, I know that.but…me…Oh. ..god I am really lucky to meet u.
Kunj was soo excited that he was just speaking n twinkle was just hmmmmming at his babyNess.
After a while kunj came to know that he was talking without break..
He saw twinkle looking at him with a smile.
K:ohh.sry I am talking too much,in excitement I am doing so…u know.
Twinkle just gave a smile.
K:are u fine? Since longtime u r just smiling at me not at all talking.
T:no…I am just….like u look nice while talking.
Kunj heart beat had a rhythm listening to her voice n her words fr him.
He sat beside her n was completly examining her as she is a mermaid. He continued with lots of questions. Twinkle with patience answered him.

K:so wr do u live? Obviously I know in water bt we have address of our homes u knw…so like dat.
T:its a secret kunj I can’t tell u, it may harm my species.
K:oh…ya I am a human right. What ever may change but the distance btwn us as a different species won’t get erased na.. !!

There was a silence fr few fraction of seconds.
Kunj thought y he told those words as what matters to him if she is not his species. Am I having feelings fr her??
Twinkle sensed some feelings fr her in kunj she was happy fr that but didn’t showed she just gave a bright smile fr him.

K:so….hmmm…thankq fr saving me.
T:thats ok.
K:but I need a help frm u again?
T:like what??
K:I need to go back to my place only u can help me
T:OK I will make u reach ur place give me sme time.

She searched fr nemo.kunj observed that
K:heyyyyy u also knw magic like u will make a boat here itself
T:ohh…no no.i am searching fr my frnd
K:oh u also have frnd, call her na, is she beautiful? (With flirty style)
T:(smiled)ya very much.
K:then call naa.
T:nemo….wr ru?

As nemo heard her she came out near twinj as twinkle started laughing at kunj s sad face as he saw nemo instead of othr mermaid.

K:ohh…ya…smewt this fish is beautiful
T:she is nemo
K:ohh hi nemo
Nemo jumped up in air n waved it’s tail, twinkle signed smething to nemo so she left.
K:bt ur frnd is nt beautiful as u!!!
Kunj said n twinkle was on cloud nine to hear that frm the most handsome guy that to whom she love to the atmost.
T:thankqq
She said taking her curls behind her ears.
Kunj saw her n had a bright smile.

He then went n started making a plank out of wood in island even twinkle n nemo helped him. Finally kunj made it n he sat on it n rowed it as twinkle n nemo followed him.

Precap:twinj confrontation ie proposal

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Hope u all liking it bt the thing is I am nt getting proper response is it nice or nt I am unable to understand if u r nt liking plz let me knw I will stop it.

Love
Roshini rockstar

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    16 Comments

    1. Purnima.agrawal30 on September 19, 2016 11:12 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute epi….loved it…..

    2. Chiku on September 19, 2016 11:16 pm

      Awesome blossom. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Roshni rockstar u r a rockstar man. Who said its boring its just amazing ❤️❤️❤️?????????
      Loved it. Jaldi se next updload karna.
      Loved ut and love u❤️❤️

    3. shiny on September 19, 2016 11:20 pm

      Superrrrrr

    4. Supriya18d on September 19, 2016 11:32 pm

      Awsm yaar…post next epi soon

    5. Sidhanshi on September 20, 2016 12:04 am

      Awesome episode…

    6. SidVee on September 20, 2016 12:12 am

      Amazing epi.. liking? I’m loving this ff.. do cont soon ?

    7. Sameera on September 20, 2016 12:28 am

      Awesome rosh loving it day by day ????

    8. Ayu on September 20, 2016 12:34 am

      Aww! How sweet! They both are soo cute!! Loved it?

    9. Angita on September 20, 2016 8:56 am

      Awesome

    10. sujina on September 20, 2016 10:25 am

      roshu dear…its so lovely…
      its gr8 2 c kunj talking widout break….coz tw only spks like tht nah….
      n eager 4 their confrontation…
      love u ♡♡♡

    11. SidMin on September 20, 2016 12:38 pm

      Loved it can’t wait for the next please post soon 🙂 Their confession 🙂

    12. Ramya on September 20, 2016 6:45 pm

      Hii roshini
      Amazing dear
      Loved it

    13. Sana(sanu) on September 20, 2016 8:19 pm

      Wow..loved it…..

    14. baby on September 20, 2016 9:27 pm

      ohhh god roshini di amazing fabulous i m sry i know i m vry late
      luvvd it di……….

    15. Ayeshakhanum11 on September 20, 2016 10:22 pm

      it is amazing

    16. Romaisha on September 21, 2016 6:08 am

      Hey yar awesome episode!!

      I tell you.. Im really loving your story… Very different and cute so dont think of ending! ✌
      Love you!

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