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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 50
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Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 50

bhumijaBy bhumijaSeptember 15, 201698 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hey guys first of all I want to thank all of you for your love and support for this story, because of your continuous motivation and praise I managed to complete the journey of writing 50 chapters…. So, This success is not only mine but a big share is yours also….. This chapter is dedicated to all my ardent readers… hope you like it, give me your feedback….. all my silent readers please give me your words, I am eagerly waiting…..

Previous chapter link: http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-ff-entangled-love-chapter-49/
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Chapter 50

9:00 pm, Delhi

After having their dinner outside, Swara and Sanskar were on the way back to hotel……
Swara: nearby if you see any ATM, stop there…. I need to withdraw some cash.
Sanskar: you have your card na, then why cash?
Swara: cards can’t be used everywhere….
Sanskar: I have cash with me, it will be enough for both of us….(he saw she wasn’t happy with his idea) I mean you can borrow from me…….
Swara: (tight smile) thank you so much Mr. Maheshwari for your generosity but if you really want to help me then please stop the car at ATM…
He looked at her with a smirk but she ignored…. After a ride of 10 minutes, he stopped the car
Sanskar: (signaling her) here is your destination madam, go….
Swara moved out of the car and stood in the queue to wait for her turn, there were good number of people in the line, it was obvious it would take time, So Sanskar decided to park his car. He was about to drive around back to park the car when he noticed a man behind Swara, he knew something wasn’t right with his demeanor. Sanskar’s muscles tightened as he noticed what that man was doing, he was deliberately pushing Swara…. at first she thought it to be a mistake but then realizing his intensions, she glared him and tried to keep distance between her and him…. Being a barefaced he didn’t stop. Sanskar furiously stepped out of the car banging the door behind, as he moved closer he saw that man was trying to touch her waist but before he could, the entire place was echoed with loud sound, sound of slap precisely…. Sanskar hit him so hard that it made him fall on the ground. All turned in bewilderment to look at him…. Swara’s eyes widened, she understood that Sanskar has seen everything…. With efforts that shameless man stood up, the corner of his lips was bleeding….
Sanskar: (holding his collar) how dare you…. You b*****d
Sanskar yelled, staring him with blood red eyes…. Frightened with his rage, the man took a knife from his pocket for self protection and tried to hit but Sanskar held it tightly, his hand started bleeding but he was so mad at him didn’t even realize that he has been injured… Swara felt frozen on the ground, couldn’t move or breathe well at all, she wanted to scream, to shout but couldn’t as if all of her energy drained out….. Coming back to her senses and gathering some courage, she rushed up to him…..
“Please leave the knife, your hand is bleeding” She said in shaking voice…. Sanskar looked at her teary and frightened face…… meanwhile few of the men came up to help him, they held that man and slapped him more…. The guard at the ATM who witnessed everything called the police…..
Sanskar looked at Swara, who was shivering with the changed scenario. “Swara, go and sit in the car” he said but she remained unmoved
“Swara Go….” This time he said in stern tone….
She quietly moved to the car and stepped in… but her eyes were fixed on him, she didn’t want him to disappear from her sight, not even for a second….. after about half an hour, Sanskar came back settling everything with Police and thanking others who helped him…. She looked at him with teary eyes but to her surprise he didn’t looked at her, instead he started driving, totally ignoring her….. he was still angry and it was visible on his face……
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Night, Radisson hotel room

Sanskar was in washroom, cleaning his wound…Inside the room, Swara was sitting on the couch, quietly…her body was numb, still in the shock…. She turned as she heard him coming out of the washroom…. After the unfortunate encounter, Sanskar didn’t utter a single word. His face was blank and emotionless as he usually does to hide his inside uproar…. Swara came up to him with a first aid box. Taking out an antiseptic ointment she held his hand but he jerked her hand away….
“Pleasee….” She pleaded and held his hand again, this time he didn’t resist…. Quietly she applied ointment and then bandaged his wound, the cut was deep…. imagining the pain he must be going through tears sprang in her eyes. Noticing her teary eyes, he couldn’t control….. the anger and pain he bottled up for so long, just exploded….
Sanskar: (harsh tone) this is all you girls know, shedding tears…. Why don’t you be little strong to take a stand for own self…. Because of this ignorant and coward behavior of you all, these derelict and barefaced b*****ds dare to do such cheap things…. Why is so that you have to look up to others for help
She stared at him with wide eyes, stunned over his outburst…. She knew he was at the peak of his anger and it will be difficult to calm him down. So, she has to be very careful with her words….
Swara: (low voice) I was prepared to deal with him….
Sanskar: yeah, I have seen how you were dealing, shrinking in yourself with his every step closer to you
Swara: Do you think I was enjoying all this? If we don’t react vehemently it doesn’t mean we are coward or ignorant. It’s just that we don’t want to create a mess… do you have any idea what a girl feels when she has to face such humiliation….. Whether punished or unpunished, such crimes always a mental trauma for a girl….
Sanskar: So, it’s better to be mum ha than to raise your voice?
Swara: (annoyed) I didn’t say that….
Sanskar: (yelled) you yourself don’t know Swara what to say and what to do…. Do you have any idea what that man was up to? All you bothered about was your god damn cash withdrawal. If you had behaved little sensible and paid a heed to my words then you wouldn’t have to face that but how could you take my help, it will hurt your so called pride which is actually nothing but your ego…..
Swara silently listening to all his accusations, she did not retaliate nor she interjected instead stood there unmoved, only her eyes were in motion, shedding tears continuously…. Giving a displeased stare to her he strode out of the room angrily….
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Night, hotel reception

Sanskar was sitting on the couch placed at the reception area, all alone…. entangled in his thoughts…

Sanskar’s POV

Why I behaved like this with her, I know it’s not her fault. This was an accident. But doesn’t she realize her every pain, aches me equally. How guilty I feel when I failed to protect her. But still I shouldn’t have yelled at her, she was already upset and I added more to it. Instead of comforting her I shouted. Is this the way I am going to protect my love? No… she needs me, I should be there with her…. she must be feeling lonely….
He stood with a jerk and rushed to the room. Surprisingly inside the room, the lights were off. The faint moon light from the glass window making the surrounding visible…. He saw her sleeping on the corner of the bed…. at first he thought to wake her up and talk but then he decided not to disturb her sleep. Without making any noise he laid down on another corner…. Their backs were towards each other, he closed his eyes in an attempt to get some sleep but as he did all the images of recent happenings flashed. Being restless he quickly opened his eyes. It was then he heard her sobbing….
“Swara!!” he called softly turning to her side. Getting no response from her, he moved closer. Keeping his hand on her shoulder he made her face him… her face was wet with tears, the plight displeased him. Guilt took over and he immediately engulfed her in his arms, close to his chest.
She broke down, hiding herself in his arms….
“Swara shhh, I am sorry dear…..” he said as he tightened his grip around her bringing her closer… his hand rubbing her back to calm down her…. after almost 10 minutes her sobbing faded
“Swara, are you ok?” he asked softly
“hmmm” she nodded
They were in each other’s arms, lying close to one another in the middle of bed…. she wasn’t oblivious of their closeness but right now she needed it badly….
Sanskar: you scared me Swara, why you were crying like this?
Swara: (innocently) then why you yelled at me?
Sanskar: (guilty) I am sorry, I was angry and blinded with that I blurted out everything
Swara: It wasn’t my fault, I…
Sanskar: (interjected) I know, you don’t need to give any justification…. Swara I wasn’t angry at you, I was angry with myself, it’s my responsibility to protect you from every evil but I failed…. I can’t tolerate when anyone misbehaves with a girl or a woman and when it’s about you it irks me most because you are special, very special to me…..
He said with intense love in his eyes, she could feel the genuineness of his words….
Sanskar: Swara I just want you to be little stronger so you can wisely deal with all these things, it’s not possible for me to be with you every time, to protect you, to stand for you…. I am concerned what will you do in such situation when I will not be around?
Swara: I would have definitely retaliated if he troubled me more, I had no intension to tolerate that
He softly caressed her cheek with his wounded hand, the touch of bandage on her skin reminded her of his wound…. Touching his hand gently she asked with concerned “is it paining?”
He nodded in a no with a smile but she knew the cut was deep and must be hurting him…. Much to his bewilderment she kissed his injured palm softly…. Her touch ignited the suppressed feeling inside him, tucking her hairs behind, he kissed her forehead and then pecked her cheek softly…. She knew it was madness but she wanted to feel his touch, his arms around her…. moving a little closer, he pecked softly on her neck which brought shivers to her body…. Their closeness kindled the fire, the desire inside them for more and more…. Caressing her bare waist with his one hand, he leaned closer to her lips. She realized it was going to wrong direction and will only lead them to the point from where retreat will be impossible….
“No, please…” she whispered softly, turning her face…. Her pleading words broke his trance, guilt took over as realization struck him…. He looked at her uncomfortable face…
“I am sorry….” He said removing his hand from her waist…. She didn’t dare to look at him. To make her feel comfortable he kissed her forehead again…..
“don’t worry, unless you won’t allow, I will not touch you” he said patting her cheek….
Picking the blanket he covered both of them and held her again in his arms, close to himself….
“Do you trust me Swara?” he questioned her….
“Why you are asking this?” she asked with puzzled voice
“Just answer me, yes or no” he said anxiously
“Yes” she replied
“Then will you stay like this with me tonight, I promise it won’t happen again, I know my limits” his voice was full of request, eyes were fixed on her, anxiously waiting for her reply…. No matter how hard she denied but the truth was that she blindly trusts him and deeply in love with him….
“good night” she said with a smile and then adjusted the blanket over his chest to cover him properly…. Her gesture brought a small smile to his face, with a big sigh of relief he protectively encircled her more in his arms….
“Good night dear” he whispered, kissing her hairs
They slept peacefully in each other’s embrace, away from all the worries and fears….their love made them forget all the pain they had a while ago….
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Precap: Swara and Sanskar back to Bhopal, Swara’s changed behavior…..

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    98 Comments

    1. anu on September 15, 2016 9:40 pm

      awesome

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:51 pm

        thanks dear…..

    2. Haripriyacivil on September 15, 2016 9:47 pm

      Its awesome di loved it

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:51 pm

        thanks dear…..

    3. Jinny on September 15, 2016 9:48 pm

      Superb fear,
      U just surprise me with your amazing updates,
      Well update soon

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:51 pm

        thanks Jenny….

    4. Jinny on September 15, 2016 9:48 pm

      Superb dear,
      U just surprise me with your amazing updates,
      Well update soon

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 3:41 pm

        i will try to update soon…..

    5. AnuAnn on September 15, 2016 9:49 pm

      Loved it dear

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:52 pm

        thanks……

    6. rabia on September 15, 2016 9:59 pm

      Awesome ???

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:52 pm

        thanks dear…..

    7. Aayu on September 15, 2016 10:01 pm

      Wow yr ..ye to super se uper wala part tha & thanx for posting 2 parts…

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:53 pm

        thanks Aayu…..

    8. lucky sravzzz on September 15, 2016 10:03 pm

      What an amatory episode…..each n every line said was so touching…….u know what ur story has become like tenacious act for me n believe me I m addicted to it….so nice of u to post 2 chapters n waiting for more…..all the best☺☺☺☺

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:53 pm

        thanks dear……. tysm for your praise

    9. Deeksha gupta on September 15, 2016 10:04 pm

      Superb , awesome part …I’m just out of words …just best of luck to u …n also congratulations for completing golden jubilee …u deserve it dear …?????

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:56 pm

        thanks Deeksha…..n congo to u too dear….

    10. Madhu on September 15, 2016 10:10 pm

      Wow dr im soo happy….feeling like crying??????????

      We came long 50 epi journey together…..??????

      In this journey we met soo many people who loves this journey ????and also who hate this……??????????????????????

      But those who hate this ride we all faced them together like a family……?????

      In future u will meetwho thinks like positive and also negative…..
      ??????
      But dr u must ignore those haters u must take it as a positive…….??????

      In futuer u shouldnt breakdown becoz of them…….??????

      And want to say love u and ur ff alot??????????

      Soo my dr i am very happy to say i really enjoyed while reading this ff every minutes……??????
      This is one of my favourite ff…i love this ff soo much…..???????
      Soo want to wish u fr best…..????good luck my dr……???

      (IF I HURT U BECOZE OF MY COMMENT PLZ FORGIVE ME DR????)

      Part was amazing dr…..?????.just superb…..feeling really happy fr swaras trust towards sanky…..?????
      And precap was amazing…?????..wait fr see swaras change behavior…….???????

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:03 pm

        thanks Madu…… tysm for your constant support and love for me….. i am blessed to have a ardent reader like you…..

    11. tamanna on September 15, 2016 10:16 pm

      Wow… Awesome…. It was like just cherry on the cake…swasan moments were superb…
      Really amazing….
      Congrats dear for half century…. Hope soon you will cross century….

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:56 pm

        thanks Tamanna…..

    12. Purvi on September 15, 2016 10:19 pm

      Happy wala Golden jubilee episode……. Awesome as usual dear…….. Continue soon……..

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:57 pm

        thanks Purvi…..

    13. Vaikha on September 15, 2016 10:20 pm

      Congratulations bhumijaaa??… Yayyyy.. half century dear.. Cheers for ur ff.. Awesome chappy dear?.. As usual u nailed it dear.. Loved it?.. Way to go..

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:57 pm

        thanks dear…..

    14. ishita on September 15, 2016 10:21 pm

      woaah di
      congos for half century ….now desperately waiting for another half….i know u can make it!
      love u di for sankys pov even i agree girls shud not tolerate such things at all
      this night is not only bliss for them but treat for us too
      dont know swaras behave has changed for good or bad?
      thanks for pondering my earlier requests

      it was a imaginary treat bliss to read ….

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:58 pm

        thanks Ishita………

    15. daisy on September 15, 2016 10:30 pm

      the episode was just amazing….best update till now

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:58 pm

        thanks Daisy….

    16. Ruhi on September 15, 2016 10:30 pm

      Amazing

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:59 pm

        thanks ruhi…..

    17. Soujanya on September 15, 2016 10:32 pm

      Awesome

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 10:59 pm

        thanks Soujanya….

    18. Tweetypankaj on September 15, 2016 10:33 pm

      Wow awesome dear. Thank u for the back to back updates. The ff which which like the most in tu is ur ff.love ur ff bhumija. Keep it up

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:00 pm

        thanks dear…..it means a lot to me….

    19. rupa on September 15, 2016 10:39 pm

      Omg i m dead now its fab bestest epi ever

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:00 pm

        thanks rupa……

    20. rupa on September 15, 2016 10:39 pm

      Congrats for half century

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:01 pm

        thanks dear and congratulation to u too…..

    21. Thilo on September 15, 2016 10:41 pm

      Congrats… Successfully Reached 50… Yahoooooo… N fantabulous part… Waiting for next..

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:32 pm

        thanks dear…..

    22. priyanka on September 15, 2016 10:44 pm

      Awsme as usual….Congo…fr half century.

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:32 pm

        thanks Priyanka…..

    23. ani on September 15, 2016 10:45 pm

      Awesome dear u r amazing plz update soon dear

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:33 pm

        thanks Ani…..

    24. Goldie on September 15, 2016 10:56 pm

      Yay, 50 episodes. And two in a day. Loved it. Keep going dear. Love you.

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:33 pm

        thanks Dear….

    25. Jency robert on September 15, 2016 10:59 pm

      Wow dear….lov uuu soooo much…tis chappy is really spl to all d readers
      …????????????u knw hw much happiee when i read tiz update ….. a bone crushing hug to uuu dr……???????????? i think its a pleasant gft frm u to ur readers….

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:34 pm

        thanks dear…..

    26. SHAN on September 15, 2016 11:13 pm

      Awesome….. Loved it a lot…. Sanskar is very protective towards swara….. Superb dr

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:35 pm

        thanks dear…..

    27. mica on September 15, 2016 11:20 pm

      awwww,, they are so sweet, congrat for 50 episode..

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:35 pm

        thanks Mica…..

    28. Jammie on September 15, 2016 11:24 pm

      Hey first of all Happy Golden Jubilee dear.. thanks for giving 2 updates today.. this FF has reached its 50th part but I have never ever felt any of the part boring.. it’s indeed superb FF.. please continue your fabulous job.. this part was awesome.. swasan moments were sooo sweet.. just loved it.

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:36 pm

        thanks dear and your praise means a lot….

    29. Vidhi on September 15, 2016 11:27 pm

      Congratulations n celebrations for completion of 50 episode????? n coming to episode it was fantastic mind-blowing amazing superb…. No words r left… Seriously di I just loved it…. Update soon… Lots n lots of love from me ????????????????

      • bhumija on September 15, 2016 11:42 pm

        thanks dear vidhi……

    30. Thamizh magan on September 15, 2016 11:30 pm

      soo sweet

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:11 am

        thanks dear…..

    31. Vidhi on September 15, 2016 11:30 pm

      Di chapter was amazing seriously I just loved it the way u portrayed each n every feeling wow I must say u r an amazing writer n this is I suppose 30th time I m saying that ur ff is my favorite n an addiction to me????????update soon n inform plz…

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:25 am

        thanks Vidhi….. love you dear

    32. swastika on September 15, 2016 11:31 pm

      Congratulations for 50 amazing lovely chapters which made us crazy…..u r such a gifted writer darling….I really feel short of words for u…. I really got very attached to this ff…. Thanks to u…for such portrayal…and the way u presented is splendid indeed…no doubt in that….thanks for giving such lovely ff on my most fav couple Swasan….. I insist u to write more on them plz…. We would love to read more and more such wonderful works from u…..
      Coming to this chapter…as usual its brilliant… Swasan understanding was too good…. Swara trusts sanky so much….loved the last part especially……keeping writing… We love ur work…..thanks for giving this ff…love u dear… 🙂

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:33 am

        thanks Swastika…… tysm for you trust in me, luv u too dear

    33. kumu on September 15, 2016 11:37 pm

      awsm..loved it..congrats for half century..continue soon..tc..

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:16 am

        thanks Kumu…..

    34. Mariyamul Aysha on September 15, 2016 11:48 pm

      I’m just speechless…episode is Awesome ??

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:19 am

        thanks dear……

    35. Ankita on September 15, 2016 11:52 pm

      Loved the way you write….today i thought that if i dont write a feedback then its not going to motivate you…i always waits for your fan fiction which is far better then usual daily episodes…you can be a future writer…blogger or author to a famous novel…seriously you can write the fiction novels….think about it…your writting have magic that you can discover it as your career if you are interested then only?…lots of love and all the best for your career…?

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:31 am

        thank you so much Ankita for your appreciation……

    36. Pramudi on September 15, 2016 11:56 pm

      Wow bhumija… What to say yaar.. Your updates r always superb. ?
      Congratulations for the 50th part dear. It’s your half century. Frankly speaking this is one of my favourite ff in here.. Love this to the core. Hope this complete another 50.. ?
      Thanks for the treat which u gave by updating two parts in today.. Love u a lot. ??

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:31 am

        thanks Pramudi for your constant support…..

    37. vyshu10 on September 15, 2016 11:56 pm

      OMG….awesome awesome awesome. Loved it. “No, please…” whats dis yaar…u took us high in air and left us to fall.
      Btw congrats for 50 eps

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:26 am

        thanks Vyshu…… and be patient dear you will get everything

      • vyshu10 on September 16, 2016 7:59 pm

        Bhumi….my friends told me to convey That they loved the ep so much

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:40 pm

        convey my thanks to them and please ask them to comment if they can……

      • vyshu10 on September 16, 2016 11:22 pm

        sure

    38. Simi on September 16, 2016 12:06 am

      Chapter was fabulous..read the last 2 chapters now..update next soon..
      congratulations on golden jubilee..it was an amazing journey..stay blessed.. 🙂 lots of luv

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:24 am

        thanks Simi….

    39. Dharshini on September 16, 2016 12:39 am

      Congrats for the 50th chappy..
      Wow…What a story my dear..Just loved it…
      Awesome writer you are..

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:23 am

        thanks dear……

    40. Sindhu_Varma on September 16, 2016 6:58 am

      Congrats completing 50 parts I was waiting for this day so that I could comment first I thought to comment when u completed 25 parts but then I opened TU page after three weeks and I am too lazy to comment I have been following this story since part one and I am really sorry for not comeenting but I love this ff ?
      Today’s part is really spl nd I loved it again you have magic in ur hands ??❤️
      Love ur silent reader

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:22 am

        thank you so much dear for commenting…….. keep loving….

    41. nehasuhana on September 16, 2016 8:52 am

      Jaan tysm for an awesome update I was little late but I wish u for hitting the half century dear update soon

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:17 am

        thanks Dear……

    42. Kakali on September 16, 2016 9:07 am

      Ohhhhhhh Bhumija what an episode dear… what a blissful moment SWASAN were sharing…!!!!! loved it to d core… m not being able to express my feelings through words… words r just not enough … it’s so soo sooooo pleasurable to imagine them like this..its beyond the happiness… u made my day..

      A tight thank u hug fro me… take care dear…

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 9:35 am

        thanks dear……

    43. chanu on September 16, 2016 10:54 am

      congo dr 4 ur 50 th epi.
      i wish u 2 write more & more epis. i ll like 2 read ur 500 epi also.
      & its nt we its u & ur story. all da things in dis ff is amezing. we r jst appriciate ur hard wrk. dats it.
      thank u sooo much 4 dedicate dis epi 2 us.
      sry 4 late cmnt dr.

      cmng 2 dis epi it ws awsome. lv it. sanskars anger ws super. he is sooo gd. lv him. 🙂
      and swasans lvly moments, awwww i falling lv with dis epi. 🙂 rly blissful moment.
      hope swara gonna accept her lv infront f him.

      keep writing dr
      be happy always
      lv ya
      god bless you

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 3:27 pm

        thanks dear……tysm for praising me and my work

    44. Arshaanya on September 16, 2016 12:11 pm

      Aaawww wat bful chappy….
      Loved it so much…

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 3:31 pm

        thanks dear…..

    45. Shani on September 16, 2016 1:15 pm

      Bhumija, congratulations for completing fifty episodes.. ‘ ????
      Thank you so much for tremendous story. Journey till now was pure bliss and hope there’s many more to come..
      About this part.. It’s just perfect.. Beautiful.. And so realistic.. You portrayed every girl’s situation in a moment like that.. It’s not that we don’t want to react, but it takes few minutes to think what to do.. Great work. ???
      Swasan scene was beyond my words.. The way you make imaginations in our mind.. Just out of the world.. ???
      Love it and love you.. ??

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 3:32 pm

        thanks dear Shani……. keep encouraging me

    46. Aayu on September 16, 2016 6:22 pm

      Hey when will you post next part…aj post karogi ya nai…..????? Waiting

      • bhumija on September 16, 2016 7:42 pm

        try to lets see….

    47. Mahjabeen on September 16, 2016 10:04 pm

      Umaahhhhh??????…amazing part…loved it so much dear…cant describe…flt so happy to read da part….

      • bhumija on September 17, 2016 9:35 am

        thanks dear…..

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