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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

JEALOUS SHRAVAN OS

Angel20By Angel20September 12, 201621 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey everyone! I’m back with an OS again.
And yes all the articles that were posted yesterday, I have read them all and loved it! But as I was out because of Eid, I couldn’t comment! Sorry for that.
A bungalow is shown where a girl is running behind a boy..
Suman: shr wait now I’ll show you..
Shr: you will not be able to catch me..
Suman: ahh…, she acts as if she has fallen down and got hurt.. Shr goes behind and gives her his hand to get up.

Suman: hahaha.. See I told u Na I will catch you!
Shr: achaa.. He runs behind her when Preeti comes
Preeti: will you both please stop it! All the time you both keep fighting!
Shr n suman stop.. And laugh seeing each other and give hi Fi!
Preeti: chalo di we have to get ready for the party Na! Suman asks shr also to get ready..
The three are getting ready, sumo and preeti are together.
Preeti: sumo when will tell him that you love him
Sumo: I don’t know, whether he loves me or not. Maybe he considers me only as his best friend!
Preeti: but you should at least tell him Na!
Sumo: hmm..

Its sumo, shr nd preeti’s reunion party
Some time later they go to the party.. They are enjoying the party.. When a boy enters .. Tall, handsome.. All girls go to him and stares at him.. They all chit chat with him. Sumo is standing with shr and preeti when that boy comes to her..
Boy: hey sumo
Sumo turns and sees him and is surprised to see him..
Sumo: hey Rahul! She hugs him.. Preeti goes to her other friends.
Shr fumes seeing them hug, he goes to the other side and drinks wine..
Sumo and Rahul talk and laugh remembering their past incidents.. They were best friends during school time. An announcement is made that now is the dance time. Rahul offers sumo to dance with him, she agrees.. But thinks where has shr gone? The music is played they dance on the song sau asmaan from baar baar dekho.. Shr is continuously drinking looking at their closeness.
Shr: one more glass!

Waiter: you have already had a lot sir!
Shr: who are you to tell me that! Give me the bottle.. He forcefully takes the bottle and keeps on drinking. Here sumo is enjoying with Rahul but still thinking about Shr. The music stops and Sumo turns to search Shr but Rahul holds her hand
Rahul: where are you going? Let’s dance.. Sumo smiles and a romantic song is played Janam janam from Dilwale.. Rahul pulls her and dances with her and they both were really very close which increased She’s anger.. He breaks the bottle in his hand and blood starts coming from his hand! But he is still not ready to stop, he keeps on drinking from another bottle.
Here,
Sumo and Rahul keep on dancing, Rahul picks up sumo in his arms and spins her.. Sumo feels a bit uncomfortable but still she smiles which fumes shr all the more. He throws the bottle which had turned red because of his blood.
Shr: enough is enough!

He walks towards them..
Sumo was now too very close to Rahul, it almost looked like they were kissing each other.
Shr screams Sumo…
Everyone looks at him, Sumo is shocked to see blood coming out from his hand, his eyes had turned red and tears were coming out from his eyes. Looking Shr in this condition Sumo also had tears in her eyes, she leaves Rahul’s hand and runs towards him.. She holds his hand and asks what is this? How did this happen?
Shr takes his hand back and holds her hand and takes her to the stage..
Shr: Hello everyone.. I want to give you all a good news! I and Sumo are marrying each other in a month.
Sumo and Preeti are shocked at his declaration! Everyone claps for them!
Sumo: what are you saying Shr?
Shr: I love you Sumo.. He kneels down
He holds her hand which was Rex in blood and asks if she will marry him!
Sumo is super happy and nods in yes
Shr stands up and they both hug each other…

The end!
So this was my second OS on Shraman! I hope you all liked it! Please comments..
Criticisms also welcome!
Keep smiling 
Maria

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    21 Comments

    1. Nikita on September 12, 2016 7:21 pm

      Awhh!
      Jealous shravan..
      Loved it..
      It was cute..
      Love ya,
      Nikita 🙂

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:27 am

        Thanks so much!
        Love you

    2. sona on September 12, 2016 7:26 pm

      Wohoo…
      Maria…
      Woowwwww…
      Thanks for thus ff…
      Its so nice..?????

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:27 am

        Thank you so much

    3. ufaaq on September 12, 2016 8:09 pm

      loved it
      ammmazing
      same should b long one
      its ok nice one
      take care
      with love
      ufaq

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:28 am

        Thanks..
        My exams are near so can’t write long. Sorry!

      • ufaaq on September 13, 2016 10:47 am

        its ok no worries
        best of luck sweetu

    4. Fatarajo on September 12, 2016 8:15 pm

      OMG Maria i m so happy u wrote an os for EDKV and it’s amazing i love EDKV so much even my fav show is KRPKAB and EDKV hi 5

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:30 am

        Thank you so much Jo!
        Hi Fi 🙂

    5. Fatimagulesarfraz on September 12, 2016 10:05 pm

      Awesome one ???
      Nd the title is great .. lol JEALOUSE SHRAVAN ??
      love ya ???
      Take care ..

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:30 am

        Thank you so much Fatima!
        Love you!

    6. Prettypreeti on September 12, 2016 10:16 pm

      It was superb
      Maria di u rocked
      Loved it very much
      Keep writing
      Love u

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:31 am

        Thank you so much!
        Love you!

    7. Zainab on September 12, 2016 11:00 pm

      Oh my…. This was amazing.
      Loved it ?

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:31 am

        Thank you Zainab 🙂

    8. Marie on September 13, 2016 12:08 am

      Oooyyyy hoyyyyy jealous shravu…..!!! God that was so amazing I loved it to the core…..!!!!??????❤❤❤????????????great work maria API????
      Post like this always…..
      Love u so muchhhhh muahhhhhhhhh
      Take care

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:32 am

        Thank you so much Maria!!
        Love you too???

    9. Ariana on September 13, 2016 1:54 am

      Ohoho….Shravan jealous to such an extinct !!! Awesome. Maria girl u rock. beautiful os. make more!! I’m greedy so I want more and more. I hope u’ll do this much for me. Btw, r u my di or small sissy? I’m 14 so what should I call u?
      muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh of love n huggies from me
      take care
      nd Eid Mubarak!!

      • Maria on September 13, 2016 10:33 am

        Thank you so much!
        I’m your di! I’m 16?
        Love you
        Thanks dear!

    10. Smile on September 13, 2016 4:07 pm

      Oh my god
      Jealous shr
      Uffffff
      Loved it
      Keep writing
      Loved it

    11. LovelyLady on September 13, 2016 4:45 pm

      hello maria
      do u really think that u will gey criticism over sucj heart touchng story
      if u think so thn u r bewkufff
      budhhuu the story was damn good
      really loved it to d core
      n i really miss u n all other frnds on tu

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