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Home»Fan Fiction»SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 21 (SWASAN GUILT , RAGLAK SPECIAL)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 21 (SWASAN GUILT , RAGLAK SPECIAL)

pathanBy pathanSeptember 11, 2016116 Comments10 Mins Read
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happy ganesh chaturthi to all my readers, i forgot to tell yesterday
hi guys i think all are amazed to see me this much early but i got time so wrote next part
guys i got to know that people really wanted to take story in next level, i am also thinking to take story in next level but i was thinking to take after 3 to 4

episode but i think people will loose there interest from story and many not like this track so i an thinking to take that track within 1 to 2 episode and i will wrap

up that part in 1 to 2 episode, that part is before swasan marriage, so i am thinking in this way to take this track little faster and do swasan marriage by seeing

viewers reaction. i will take that part little faster

link of episode 19 of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-19-irfan-pathan/
link of episode 20 SWASAN HOT ROMANCE PART of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-20-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
LINK OF all episode of whole article of this story is – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+unwanted+relation+with+my+husband+freind+
and link of whole article with new name – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+fixing+broken+relation+is+it+pure+or+impure
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REAL LOVE STORY OF RAGLAK WILL START AFTER SWASAN MARRIAGE ONLY
EPISODE STARTS WITH swasan were looking each other, there was intense eye lock between them
sanky sees tears from swara eyes which were oozing out again today,
again guilt took place inside her, swara knows this whole mistake of her only, she only did this mess again, swara don’t say anything, so she tries to go out of sanky

grip but sanky holds her tightly
sanky- whisper please don’t go swara………..
——
RAGLAK PART
IN PARTY
ragini was standing at one place, lucky comes towards her
lucky- ragini why you are standing here
ragini- i am not interested in all these parties
lucky- oh its ok
ragini- your work is done
lucky- i don’t know but i think today it may be completed let us see what happen next
ragini- but what you did
lucky- gives her smile, you will get to know soon
ragini- oh its ok
lucky- do you know ragini
ragini moves her gaze towards him as he must be telling some serious matter and nods
lucky- i completed my one work yesterday and i think one more work today it may be completed if it is completed than i will be free from all mess
ragini confused what work and which mess
lucky smiles and smirk at her yesterday i made swara sign on divorce paper
ragini shocked what
lucky sees him and gives her winning smile, yes ragini i gave her divorce, now my one work is completed and one more work i think today it will be completed
ragini in serious tone which work you are talking about
lucky – you will get to know soon
ragini- ok
lucky- so i want to give you treat of my winning
ragini- what treat
lucky- let us go i will take you to my favorite place
ragini- which favorite place
lucky- let us go na
ragini just goes behind lucky,
lucky stops his car infron of ice-cream parlour, lucky signals ragini to see towards parlour,
ragini confused ice-cream parlour
lucky happily yes let us go,
he moves out of car happily
ragini got confused by thinking that lucky like person going towards ice-cream parlour that is also a road side type
lucky turns while going, ragini what are you doing here please come yar
ragini- yes i am coming.
ragini confusingly goes behind him murmering that why he likes this place
lucky can see her confused face and ask what happened ragini
ragini- vo vo… i am asking why you came here for eating ice-cream
just than shopkeeper replies mama he daily comes to this place from his childhood
ragini again got another shock, she sees lucky doubtfully
lucky gives her assuring smile and says don’t think much, first eat this ice-cream than i will clear your every doubts
ragini nods and gives fake smile to him
shopkeeper gives two ice-cream to raglak
lucky while taking ice-cream ragini it is special ice-cream of this corner,
RAGINI while eating wow its yummy
lucky- i know it is famous one of this place
both raglak eats it while ragini was about to go towards car, please stop ragin lucky says
ragini turns towards him, what happened
lucky- come with me there is garden
ragini again goes behind him
there was silence between them
lucky while looking beauty of garden, how this garden is ragini
ragini- its good
lucky- i know you will like it, and this is one of the place where i used to come here when i was living my happy days of life
ragini confused what
lucky- why that ice-cream parlour is important to me
ragini- yes tell
lucky- it is because in my childhood till 3 years before i used to come here daily
ragini- oh
lucky- i was very happy at those time of my life i and swara we both used to come here to eat ice-cream here and sometimes uttara also comes with us in childhood
ragini- you swara and uttara
lucky- yes ragini when i was small in my childhood from that time i used to come there
ragini- you really had good relation with swara than why you are taking revenge from her
lucky- you know reason
ragini- but i did’nt satisfied with your reason lucky
lucky narrowed his eyes and ask what
ragini- because i don’t think that is perfect reason for this revenge
lucky sees ragini, just gives her faint smile, ragini everything has its strong reason but its not correct time to tell you everything because i can’t tell anything

before completing my second work
ragini- its ok i understand but please think before doing all these things
lucky- yes i know it
ragini- by the way your sujata mom of ram uncle, where is she
lucky- i don’t know about her where she went
ragini confused i did not understand lucky
lucky- sujata mom left ram uncle
ragini- what
lucky- yes
ragini- but why
lucky- because of her boyfreind and money
ragini- i didn’t understand
lucky- sujata mom father married sujata mom forcefully to ram uncle, she never wanted to marry him but she had to do marry because of all these bussiness, sujata mom

was not happy by her marriage but still she was living with ram uncle for society sake,and gave birth to three children but when ram uncle came on footpath,she could

not live like this life, she always took help of her boyfreind to get money, both used to meet daily because sujata mom could not forget her love, she thought that she

can forget him but she could not forget him, so there life was going like this only ram uncle and sujata mom had hitted argument everytime because sujata mom could not

take care of children properly and she was very confused in her life, first she was not able to take care of there children properly, other side she was not able to

give time to her boyfreind and her husband, she was too confused in the mess created in her life, she also was not able to live in poor life, she was very

uncomfertable at this place, her life was fully messed, her boyfreind always told her to leave ram, she was not able to give that love to ram uncle also, so in her

children, her husband, her boyfreind and in proverty she was not able to understand what to do, her life was fully messed by all this things, so she decided to suicite

and she killed herself and by falling in river,
ragini- i am sorry lucky for asking about this i can understand your black past
lucky- its ok
ragini thinks lucky you don’t know real truth of all these incidense, you only knows what everyone told you but you don’t know reality lucky, it is just half truth but

real truth is different which i can’t tell you now lucky
but she tells lucky i can understand everything but whenever you take next step please think twice
lucky-i know ragini please don’t take tention
ragini- yes its ok
lucky- ya sure
ragini- now it has became too dark, we should leave from here
lucky- yes i also think so
both raglak goes and lucky drops ragini to her house and moves towards his house
ragini in her house thinks oh god ragini there is too much mess in all there life, i have to think to go for next step because no one knows my real idenstity…….
while lucky in his house thinks now its time to proceed on last stage of my work……..
———-
swasan side
swara did not cared about his words swara again tries to go out but sanky was adamed to not to leave her
swara cries please leave me sanky
sanky while holding her tightly no
swara stoped protesting she sees into his eyes and shouts please leave me
again swara was about to go sanky holds her and whisper till when you will run swara
swara gets shocked by his statement she sees him in full of shock
sanky understand she wants to hear his point of view, so he slowly sleep beside her and takes baedsheet and wrapes both of them in one badsheet only, both were still

nude, now swara tries to sit but sanky again takes her in his arms, swara head was on sanky arms, she was inside his arms both were looking each other very closely
swara breaks eye contact, ask what you want to say
sanky makes his grip on her more tightly, i am just saying till when you will run from reality swara…………………
episode ends on shocked face of swara

PRECAP- swasan emotional conversation, story takes leap,
_________________________________________________-

i know you all are too much confused about character but don’t take tention now revealation time is started of this ff, after wraping up this part in 2 episodes, your

each and every confusion is cleared because it is high time to reveal all suspenses in this story and i already decided that after swasan marriage everything will be

revealed in this story
GUYS I FORGOT TO GIVE YOU BEST WISHES FROM YOUR EXAMS BECAUSE I GOT TO KNOW MANY PEOPLE EXAM IS STARTED, SP STUDY WELL AND HARD
ENJOY TODAY SUNDAY BECAUSE I THINK TODAY ALL WILL BE FREE
ONE MORE THING GUYS MANY ASKING ABOUT ME AND BHABHI, SO SHE IS STUDYING IN SCHOOL ONLY AND SHE IS 2 YEAR YOUNGER THAN ME AND WE BOTH ARE BEST FREIND FROM CHILDHOOD

ONLY AND ABOUT OUR ENGANGEMENT AND ALL I WILL TELL YOU NEXT TIME BECAUSE TODAY I AM LITTLE HURRY SO SORRY FOR THAT

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    116 Comments

    1. pooja26 on September 11, 2016 10:38 am

      swasan forever……. ๐Ÿ˜‰
      loved it !!!!!!!

      awsm
      superb
      amazing……. chappy…..

      post asap…….. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      ya enjoying ur day with little bros & sis ……. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:09 am

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and yes I am enjoying with friends and both little monster
        Big thanks for liking my story part
        How you are enjoying your today

      • pooja26 on September 11, 2016 11:37 am

        aree nothing much yr…. ;( ;(
        ghar mai baithi huin……..
        boring weekend h yeh…..
        no parties ……
        no hookah……;)
        nothing……..

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:15 pm

        Oh it’s OK I can understand but enjoy with your family people that will be too good and amazing experience and your Bhopal has many places to visit like lake view and many more amazing museum which are really too good
        Bhopal is fully nice place you can visit everywhere and that db mall is also Amazing and it’s pub also

      • pooja26 on September 11, 2016 3:32 pm

        haha ๐Ÿ˜‰
        true ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 5:50 pm

        Oh Cool
        Enjoy

    2. sindhura on September 11, 2016 10:42 am

      short update.i thnk bcz of i only read swasan part thatz why i felt short..
      but swqsan scenes was awesome

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:15 am

        Thanks for liking swasan part
        One more thing you know very well that I am too busy than also giving episode very fast so it will be short update only
        But in next episode you will get long update of swasan thanks for commenting

    3. Mahjabeen on September 11, 2016 10:42 am

      Awesome awesome awesome rlly loved it…nd wats raginis real identity?m relly confuse abt it…nd rlly its so sweet, so good to knw dat u nd bhabhi were best friends n nw u both wil b life partners..congrats bro..waitng fr ur nxt part…

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:57 am

        Ya you are correct sister that we both are good friends so we will not have much problem in future and really thanks for liking my story and everything will be revealed soon and how is your Sunday planning

    4. Sreevijayan on September 11, 2016 10:56 am

      Nice update dr

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:17 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    5. ndsg on September 11, 2016 11:28 am

      Swasan forever …?????

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:31 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    6. Soujanya on September 11, 2016 11:42 am

      Awesome….

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:34 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    7. Ashnoor on September 11, 2016 11:58 am

      “HAPPY GANESH CHATURTHI” to u to bro . Awesome episode ……and swasan and raglak scenes are cute . njy your Sunday . And what’s ragni ‘ s real identity waiting for the suspense to be out .

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:52 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and everything will be revealed soon

    8. Nuramy on September 11, 2016 12:14 pm

      Very nice.I like swasan can’t wait to their marriage.

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 1:50 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    9. mou(swasan lover) on September 11, 2016 12:16 pm

      swasan part r too gd.I hate lucky to core of my heart.ek ladki ke sath aisa kaisa kar sakte hai……………….

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 2:04 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my episode

    10. Jj on September 11, 2016 12:16 pm

      Hi,it is really a nice chapter, I like swasan scene very much. What is lucky plan. How dare he cheat swara and got sign from divorce paper,I think lucky know about swasan relations. But ur plan will be backfire,because swasan are together their after stupid laksh he very unlucky man. Ragini is correct without now the full truth he want to take the revenge stupid and backbone less man,without brain god created this type of stupid man, but don’t worry swara god close one gate,really open the next one. So lucky will get out ur life,and sanky will enter with ur life is full of love so don’t worry. I will wait for next long swasan emotion talk. I want to see ur full talent, because emotional scene wrote is very difficult to give the proper words ,ooat of all writer may be fail for heart touching scene. So be careful. “Happy eid Mubarak”

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 2:47 pm

        Thanks for giving such big comment on my ff
        Oh god you gave me big challenge of writing emotional part but I will accept this challenge and I will try to write good part of emotions scene
        I am not good writer but I will surely try to write best emotional scene and you will tell whether I could reach up-to your expectations or not
        Oh god you hate lucky the most I can understand ur feeling but everything is not revealed till now, it will take time for revelation
        Yes from now swasan will be together and thanks for giving such amazing comment everytime and what is your real name

    11. Anjali30 on September 11, 2016 12:18 pm

      Everyone has been telling me a lot about ur work, so I sat down and decided to read this….
      I Srsly liked it a lot!!!

      You know how to deliver emotions and I enjoyed the plot a lot!!!???

      I am a swasan fan in general.. but I like Raglak too…. and love the characters of all the 4…..
      Waiting for the next!!!!

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 5:14 pm

        Thanks for taking your precious time to read my story and commenting here
        I am very happy to see your comment
        Here I don’t read any ff but I heard your name from many people that anjali is top writer of swaragini page I don’t know name of ff but I know that you are top writer
        And for like me writer it is really blessing that like you good writer is liking my story it really means a lot to me
        Keep smiling always

      • Anjali30 on September 11, 2016 9:08 pm

        Aww.. That’s really sweet of you to say….

        I am no top writer and all…. But I have been here a long time…
        I have heard a lot about u nowadays.. and i also read the article you wrote…
        My sentiments exactly!!!!

        I’ll def read ur story.. But sorry if I can’t comment in each chappie…

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 9:50 pm

        Oh god thanks for reading my article and I am really happy that you also have some point of view
        But I know that you are very good writer

        I never thought people will praise me this much about my story

        It’s OK I can understand about comment for me most important thing is that you are reading my story and about comment you can give anytime it’s your wish

    12. sanya on September 11, 2016 12:55 pm

      Amazing. .

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 4:26 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    13. zoya on September 11, 2016 1:18 pm

      Seriously it was awesome but confusing too u r really a very good writer and u show emotions very well…..waiting for the next

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 4:28 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    14. xavia on September 11, 2016 1:26 pm

      Hiiii bahi …hwz uh…EID MUBARAK in advance…..cmng back to chapoy it wz osmm…bt too much suspense oh gosh..plz reveal dm soon….

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 5:09 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and eid Mubarak to you also

    15. Kakali on September 11, 2016 1:41 pm

      Is it short??? nooo i don’t think sooo… I know u have a busy schedule though u give us chappy… that’s really enough for me…
      Day before yesterday u gave us ur chappy… n again today..this is not done… now from where should i collect words to describe about todays chappy…????

      coming back to chappy i will say just one word “”BEAUTIFUL””…!!!!
      i like this Laksh thoda thoda ((only like not love))..that too for Ragini…coz he is soo calm with Ragini…

      about SWASAN scenes… it was less but had a great impact on mine…. M just thinking what is Sanskar going to say?? after that what will be Swara’s reaction?? i just hope that everything will be perfect…((coz i know it will,, just eagerly waiting for that)) Thnx Irfan for d chappy..

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 7:56 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment kakali and everything will be fine between swasan just wait and watch and thanks for giving such big comment of analysis it really means a lot to me

        Oh god kakali really I don’t know that you are this much liking my story keep liking it always and stay blessed
        Keep smiling

    16. nikky on September 11, 2016 1:56 pm

      nice give raglak romance

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 5:46 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I will give raglak romance later

    17. Angel-16 on September 11, 2016 1:58 pm

      omg! what a pleasant surprise Bhai…. you post it really soon….. thanks for this chappy…. n its really very nice…. hope everything will be revealed soon…. eagerly waiting for swasan’s marriage…. n yaa once you told that your ff will come to an end after swasan’s marriage…. is it true….??? plz don’t end it so soon…. plzzzzzzzzzzz….. by the way how are you….???

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 6:26 pm

        No I will not end ff soon it will take time to end just keep supporting me and thanks for liking my story and for ur beautiful comment
        Keep smiling always and happy eid and how is preparation going on

      • Angel-16 on September 11, 2016 7:18 pm

        thanks for clearing my doubt Bhai…. n haan Eid Mubarak to you too…. n mashallah eid preparations are going very well….

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 9:30 pm

        OK cool

    18. maryum on September 11, 2016 2:02 pm

      Awesome

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 6:13 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    19. Ankita on September 11, 2016 2:47 pm

      What was special about rahlak in this episode it’s just normal one

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 9:25 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and you will get to know everything soon

    20. Rekha on September 11, 2016 3:17 pm

      Nice..

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 9:27 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    21. tamanna on September 11, 2016 3:24 pm

      Awesome….

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 9:28 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and after long time I got your amazing comment

      • tamanna on September 11, 2016 11:24 pm

        I am really sorry… Actually I was busy so didn’t comment…..

        Today I read all the chappy that I missed…..and all of those were amazing….

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 12:06 am

        I can understand ur problem aapi and thanks for reading whole part and liking story and keep supporting my like this and aapi sorry I couldn’t reply your message today but surely I will reply to you tomorrow because today i was little busy on all this things

    22. AnuAnn on September 11, 2016 4:34 pm

      Suprb bro.

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 10:03 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    23. Jj on September 11, 2016 5:36 pm

      Hi,my real name is Jaya and studying 1yr bsc.computer science. Has I will see how you write emotional part,and I am surely comment that part,ha I am challenging u because romance part it very easy to write, but the emotional part I not a cup of coffee it is very difficult but I am eagerly wait ur see the emotional side of writing, because ur good writer, OK I am waiting.

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 10:25 pm

        Oh very nice name you have but you told that romance is easy but really for me writing romance was very tough because I have to think and relate the romance part with day to day life activities this is most most toughest job to do because it takes too much long time to think that which will relate with romance part

        One more thing it is also very tough to write romance also because we have to think how much extent to take that reader may not feel vulgar because I don’t use vulgar word and I have to explain everything in different ways so romance is very difficult part for me

        I think emotional part I gave on this story many times of swara and raglak and sanky also in previous episodes I gave emotional part of you see

        But surely I will accept your challenge of writing emotional part

        So in next episode your work is to analyze Mr and give your feedback whether I could reach up-to your expectations or not

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and praising me

    24. Anjali on September 11, 2016 5:47 pm

      Hey bro sorry for late reply but what to do now I woke up. And I read your ff. It was awesome and fabulous Really. Love raglak. I’m a big fan of raglak . And please reply this because tomorrow I can’t as I will go home your jiju give me permissions. And did Mubarak in advance to you. Later I will talk to you I think someone has come.

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:23 pm

        First of all eid Mubarak to you also on advance
        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my today’s part
        I don’t know that you are this much big raglak fan and I know you are totally confused with my story but don’t take tension it will take little time to come out of all revelation and suspenses but you will really enjoy it
        So I got to know how you fall down from stairs so it is fully your mistake only and jiju did correct to scold you because it is really carelessness
        But oh god you were really this much excited when jiju comes even if you are allowed to meet him, really you are too romantic in all this things and jiju also he is very good and caring person and he did correct to scold you and your parents also did good work to support him so that next time you will not be this much careless about your health, by the way from next time don’t become this much eager to meet jiju, suppress your feeling so that you don’t get accident next time
        And you told that we boys are same but we are really same and good also that we care about person and jiju is correct and I support him. Most importantly thing please do take care of yourself not for you but for jiju, because jiju cares a lot of yours

        One more thing so you admitted in jiju hospital It is really good and amazing experience where jiju is in front of you full time it’s good but don’t take this experience next time

        Think if by chance some deffect in your body may happened or may be your mind become little bit disturbed so it will affect your whole life so take care of yourself and don’t do this thing next time so that jiju feels bad of himself that because of him your condition is bad and this question may really arises if I would not had come at this time so you wouldn’t had gone with such accident so automatically it is affecting jiju and he will also not able to work properly and will surely affect his work because of tension that your condition is not good and also somewhere a guilt that because of him you got accident
        I know it is not because of him you got accident and he also don’t have single fault also but it’s human mind and all human finds there own mistake that they think that they are responsible for this mess

        I don’t know much about jiju but I just told common point of thinking of person
        Sorry if I hurt you from my comment but you have to take care of yourself it is must

        And yes don’t take this name again of death and all its not good
        And I am happy that you will be freed tomorrow from hospital
        Keep smiling always and stay blessed
        Take care of yourself as well as jiju

      • Anjali on September 11, 2016 11:40 pm

        Yes you are right in fact you are absolutely correct. But it’s a small wound still tomorrow I will apology to him and your imagination is seriously I think bhabhi is very lucky to have you. I will show him this reply but I didn’t do it intentionally. You don’t know me if someone is hurt because of me I will said sorry that too in front of our family Nd all people.I didn’t get hurt in fact you show me the correct way. I am really happy to have you .

        Best of luck for your challenge . I will take care of your jiju and me also. Everyone don’t get true love I have seen it. They always fight in fact they kill their lover. I am always afraid of it. I trust him but still I’m afraid . What about you. How was your day

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:28 pm

        Thanks for supporting me anjali in my emotional part challenge
        Take care and sorry for this much big reply and take care of yourself
        And be happy always and keep loving jiju like this

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 12:00 am

        Oh god I am not that much good but I am little mature boy only this and thanks for complementing me for this thing and really I know you are also not at fault it is fault of destiny because we don’t know anything can happen with us but always there is small reason and we just think about that reason if this thing I would not had did nothing would had happened but reality is that we are not fault but destiny always gives reason of all bad thing happened in our life but we think it’s our fault and I know you are really very good person and no need to ask sorry for him in front of everyone because it is not your mistake it is mistake of destiny
        If by chance we think that the work which we did because of it we get injured so does we really knew before that we will be injured but answer is no we don’t know anything but one thing you must note every bad thing happens only by giving reason but they are not correct reason

        OK but you can talk to jiju personaly and just comfort him all the matter rather than saying in front of family just confront him when you both are alone

        I enjoyed whole day with friend and my sister’s son and daughter and also made chowmin for everyone of my house and friends because they specialy came to eat my hand cowmin

        Please don’t take tension about love and all if your love is pure then no one can separate you
        One more thing your family is happy with your both relationship so there is no need of worry about this thing of death

        And about my point of view I will tell you tomorrow because now I am going to sleep
        Good night
        Take care
        Sweet Dreams

    25. Jannatul.Nayma09 on September 11, 2016 7:30 pm

      Awesome
      Eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
      Update soon

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:30 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    26. SWARA MALIK on September 11, 2016 8:10 pm

      Hmm i am also thinking to take new step towards u
      n
      m frm NEPAL m 4 yrs old
      n m illiterate (uneducate)
      i dnt knw anything

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 7:26 am

        Why are you kidding yar
        Live life happily
        Take care
        Keep smiling always

      • SWARA MALIK on September 12, 2016 6:05 pm

        I will only be happy if u be wid me only naa
        sry fr kidding i am 14 yrs old study in grade 10

        aap appi marriage date bta dena hme maybe i can replace bride ..hahahaha

    27. pavani on September 11, 2016 8:14 pm

      Hey bro after a long time actually I was also busy these days soo sorry for not replying nd u got engaged????really??omg y that much hurry u r still younger for all these its ok that’s ur wish nd enjoy the new change in life nd about episode it was nice nd I was eager to know about rags past

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:02 am

        Oh yes after long time I saw your beautiful and amazing comment Di
        About rags past it will be revealed soon
        ————–
        Yes I am enganged but reason is there that I will tell in next episode and Di ya in very young age I engaged because she is my good friend so I decided to live remaining life with her only
        How is your health and stay well always

      • pavani on September 12, 2016 2:22 pm

        Yep my health was good .yep I know u r metured u can handle somethings.engagement was ok but marriage?? Do you think ??

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 7:52 pm

        Di I am just engaged only and nothing more then That
        And about marriage it will happen only after completing my full doctor degree only till then I will live my bachelor life only

        And after this engagement also nothing changed in my life she live her life on her own and me my own we both don’t interfair
        Thanks for asking your doubt Di and if you have more you can ask Di it’s your right
        Take care of my jiju and your baby

      • pavani on September 12, 2016 10:51 pm

        Then it’s nice u can enjoy a lot nd can have some romantic eye locks in every meeting (hey naa) I know altough she is ur best friend till now but the feeling of ur better half is different nd enjoy these days nd understand her completely nd make her to love u as u r (I was saying as u told she was a school girl her mind set will be different ) no doubs iam happy for u nd ur future always bee happy nd congratulations

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 2:38 pm

        Thanks pavani Di for best wishes and yes after our engagement and all she became formal to me so we both are little formal to each other but usually talks when ever we meet
        Keep smiling always Di

    28. CrazygirlS.P on September 11, 2016 8:19 pm

      Wishing you and Bhabhi the best for your upcoming life

      • pathan on September 11, 2016 11:44 pm

        Thanks For ur best wishes my sister and stay blessed
        Keep smiling always
        Take care of yourself

    29. s on September 11, 2016 8:27 pm

      amazng..

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 9:43 am

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

    30. Anjali on September 11, 2016 8:36 pm

      Hey bro I’m back again . First thing you said that everyday you don’t write romance ep I agree with you but I was saying about yesterday and raglak,romance in room swasan romance in I don’t know . Second thing on telly update I am unable to register or login otherwise I could have message you personally . Third thing you really want to know how I fall so listen .

      That day I was alone at home. My parents were attending a wedding but before they went , they informed your jiju so that he would come at my place to spend some times. I was chatting with my friend in Skype. At about 20:30 approximately I saw your jiju coming from the window Nd without losing time I run to meet him. I was running in the stairs that I slip and fall down and then blank. I got hurt in my head and loss some blood thank God I didn’t loss my memory haha……. AND yes your jiju scolded me a lot. I have one question for you are all boys the same. Because now a days everyone even my parents Are in his side. Tomorrow I will go home thank God your jiju give me permission.

      Coming to thing ep. Tell me one thing how many past did laksh has yaar. ?????? What Are swaragini planning.?????? What is the half true??????. What is ragini really identity ?????? Soo many questions at a time. I really love raglak part it was fabulous and awesome .swasan part was superb. I really love your writing skill and imagination . Seriously I am becoming a fan of this ff because I have never ever this type of ff in my life. I really want to know the reality. Really your ff is full of suspense . And sorry for any grammatical mistakes and eid Mubarak to you in advance. I will take care of myself and you also take care.

      I have read that some one is challenging you to write an emotional scene so best of luck because I know how difficult it is but you will succeed. Waiting for next ep. By the way how was your day on Sunday. ????? ND SORRY I will never use this word I have die. Sorry.

    31. Anjali on September 11, 2016 10:01 pm

      AAAAAH SUCH A LONG COMMENTS SORRY BRO. I THINK IT’S YOUR TURN TO REPLY MY QUESTION I WILL WAIT BUT PLEASE REPLY TODAY ITSELF .

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:04 am

        I replied to your comment in above comments

    32. Samaira on September 12, 2016 12:33 am

      As some bhai . or kit ne he Suede didikhao ge . love it . from now I I’ll cmnt regularly.
      ?
      ?

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:08 am

        Hey samaira sorry what you wrote in other language I didn’t understand but I only understood the part you wrote in English that you will comment daily so thanks for reading story and commenting also
        Keep smiling always

      • Samaira on September 12, 2016 2:17 pm

        Bhai I wrote in Hindi . m writing from tab so mistake kka di

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 5:49 pm

        Oh it’s OK but I didnt understand because of it but its OK
        Thanks for commenting

    33. Jyotii on September 12, 2016 12:52 am

      I heard a lot about uh frm my few TU frnds n came here to read it…. Wooww…. Its too good. I like the concept very much… I rarely read ffs here cuz of mu busy schedule. Even I hv taken break in writing.. But reading this gave me an ultimate pleasure… Coming to this chappy…. I luvf swasan in it…… M damn confused about Ragini…. Who is she????
      Anyways I ll try to be regular and read this!!โ˜บ

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 2:05 pm

        Thank for your beautiful comment
        I am glad to see that even if in this much busy schedule you took stress to read this ff and I also thanks to those person who liked my story and told you
        Yes every confusion will be cleared soon as story proceed
        Keep smiling always

    34. Jj on September 12, 2016 7:11 am

      Hi,has u wrote already emotional science,but it is different. First u wrote swara part yaa it is not emotional but I can understand her pain in that part,after raglak part yaa that little but emotional for her past but not up to react heart sorry. And next sanky and his father part yaa that also emotional scene l like that ,but friend it all about related to him past life. But this not like that how sanky convenience his full emotions is coming up to his heart,to explain swara how he feels at all ,hope u u understand the differences, what I will told. And thank u like my name. If I hurt u with mycomments i really very sooooooooo sorry please.

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:27 pm

        I am not hurt

        I am happy that you wrote what you thought and about next part seriously telling I also don’t know what I will write I think it will be like that part when sanky comforts swara at the time of there first s*x scene in hospital I think you remembered it so this type of scene it will be there
        I think you got sketch of next episode bu
        One thing is clear that sanky Wil not speak to his heart out in next episode
        But if I say really really I also don’t know what I will write in next episode because I didn’t planed anything in this story about future much

        One more thing the way sanky comforts swara before that type of scene will be there and I think that was emotional one only which was liked by mane people but let’s see what I will write next

    35. Riya on September 12, 2016 9:06 am

      What to say????Awesome episode as usual… And story isn’t boring anymore… I never felt that its boring….Belated Ganesh Chaturthi to you too…And Eid Mubarak to you…. And yesterday I was busy with celebrating “TEACHER’S DAY”…Stay happy….

      • Riya on September 12, 2016 9:12 am

        And I am not getting Ragini’s character properly… What she is up to???What she want to do????What’s her real intention????Who is she????What’s her real identity??? And how she knows Swara????? Enough of my questions…. But what to do totally confused about her character…

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:29 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my story and everything will be revealed soon

    36. Shruti on September 12, 2016 9:22 am

      First of all b lated Ganesh Chaturthi 2 u 22 n also Eid mubarak….D ep was really awsm….N yeah I dont think tht its boring…How can u imagine tht ur ff vll b boring???N about Ragini’s character I don’t think tht its not a proper character…Bcz I think tht der vll b a jhatka which u always gives…. Actually I m vry much bzy vth my studies…Stay happy n blessed..

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:34 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and supporting me and same to you happy eid to you also as well as riya I forgot to say this thing to her and I can understand you must be busy in your work
        And yes you will get jhataka about ragini character so just wait and read story
        Keep smiling always you both

    37. Feriha_Tanu on September 12, 2016 12:58 pm

      Just now came to home from clg after writing the exam …and checked the TU and found ur ff ….
      Hmmmmmmm
      Now I have no words to say ….wait I will think …hmmmm marvellous …
      I think it is also ..less .hmm no words
      It was super se duper se uper wala epi
      Coz my swasan …really bhaiyo u r awesome keeping smiling

      • pathan on September 12, 2016 10:37 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment sister and how was your exam and are all exams over
        Really I never thought you will like this much extent this story
        Your comment really makes me happy and study well keep smiling always
        Take care

    38. Anjali on September 12, 2016 10:31 pm

      What is your point of view and today I did it. I say it wow I am very comfortable. Thank you sooooo much. Yes I am a big fan of raglak and ragsan also.

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 2:25 pm

        Thanks for it
        And I am happy that I could help you
        And eid Mubarak to you
        It mean you are fan of ragini so that’s why like raglak and ragsan
        But I hate ragsan from core of my heart because I really don’t like to change husband and wife
        I know all or 90% raglak fans likes ragsan as pair because sanky is most liked person of swaragini so that’s why ragini fans like ragsan
        Sorry if I hurt you by this fan fandom
        Keep smiling always

    39. mica on September 12, 2016 11:29 pm

      whoohoo, Laksh blinded by his one side story.. waiting swasan wedding ohohooo
      and Pathan.. omg…. the people on your ff are cheaters, the group of cheaters,, ๐Ÿ˜€
      luv it ty

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 1:26 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment mica but can I ask you one question why people on my ff are cheater
        Means by which reason you told that they are cheater I didn’t understand and really really thanks for liking my writing and story
        Stay happy
        Take care
        And please reply to this question

      • mica on September 13, 2016 2:33 pm

        DP cheated Ap by hiding the fact that he was incomplete man
        Ap cheated DP, laksh cheated Swara, Swara cheated Laksh, sujata cheated Ram
        Ragini cheated swara.. see.. group of cheaters.. hehheheh

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 3:54 pm

        Oh yes you are correct but I really wanted to show different cases of extra marital affair in this story but really you only knows 30% truth till now and most important and real truth is remaining in this story which will come slowly slowly just wait for it
        According to your point of view you are really correct

      • mica on September 13, 2016 4:14 pm

        `i know, but somehow, no matter what the reason, extra marital affair kinda cheating to God, rite ?
        it’s OK for me Pathan, it just a story rite ? everything can happen according to the fabulous idea of the writer…it just kinda casual comment from me, no offense..

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 5:29 pm

        Yes extramarital affair is like cheating only but what to do it happens in every 3rd or 4th house of India so as a writer I should show the real world and nothing else
        Yes it is cheating but the pain which they go through really makes person cheater
        They are also not happy by this things but they have to go through this things in few cases

      • mica on September 13, 2016 5:34 pm

        i know it, but by justified the reason behind the act, we kinda push them to the valley. Sometime being to not understand with their situation will lead them to the rite part instead of being understandable and let the wrong happened..
        aahh whatever the reason.. they are cheater…rite ? ๐Ÿ˜€

      • pathan on September 14, 2016 10:36 am

        It’s OK I understand
        Because you didn’t gone through this stage and you didn’t saw the people who are in prone to this things so you don’t know you are just thinking by taking yourself only
        You are not thinking broadly about other people and we can’t understand there situation till we are not suffered from it and yes overall they are cheater but they have to go through we can take same example with some poor who steals money because they are hungry and here is same condition

        But in this type of extra Marital affair in 85% cases people are wrong but 15% people have to go from this stage like swara
        I think you got my point of view

      • mica on September 14, 2016 1:17 pm

        hmm.. why you take it personally ? i tld you already that i’m comment casually about your character.
        i know what your aim , but even if 15 % of them, should stand in that worst situation, we can’t hide the fact that they DO CHEAT, i talk about their ACTION, i didn’t talk about society judgement or my judgement..
        can i ask you, did swara cheat Laksh or not ?
        Did laksh cheat swara or not ?
        Did Ap cheat DP or not ?
        Did Dp cheat Ap or not ?
        even if the poor steals money for foods, we can’t hide the fact that their action called as STEALING
        i didn’t talk about RIGHT or WRONG, not yet, if i talk about rite or wrong, you then you can judge my point of view….wish you got my point.

      • pathan on September 14, 2016 8:05 pm

        It’s not like that I didn’t take personally I am just telling about those people I was just telling that we can’t think about there condition properly because we never gone through this type of situation and I know your comment is casual but I told you the point of view of those people and yes I am telling that they are cheating but somewhere they have to go through this situation to live there life like poor people if he is not getting money and he don’t have any source of money he have to do stealing for surviving in this world
        So this is same condition of some people and don’t take tension I didn’t feel bad and if you hurt by my point for it big sorry from my side

        I think we should stop this useless discussion because nothing will happen and next episode I will post soon

        Keep smiling always
        Take care
        Bye
        If you have more doubt about this topic you can personally message me on tellyupdates and ask I will surly help you

      • mica on September 14, 2016 8:43 pm

        chill pathan ! you know i love to blabbering, moreover i want to increasing your comment , so just relax, i got your point either : D ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜›

      • mica on September 14, 2016 8:44 pm

        i like the way you count the comment

    40. Jj on September 13, 2016 12:41 am

      Hi,yaa I will sketch the little thinks about next one. Yes I like hospital scene after her first s*x. Why sanky can’t speak her heart out,but I really think he love swara it has no doub about that one. Friend I frankly told u write anything about on swasan scene I really love that one,u have no doubt on its.OK bye goodnight.

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 2:21 pm

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my part
        Really thanks for liking hospital scene part and keep supporting me
        Everything will be revealed soon and keep liking story
        Stay blessed
        Keep smiling always

    41. mahi on September 13, 2016 1:50 pm

      hi pathan i m back and my exams got postponded so i got a leave for 4 days but last 2days i was busy in my studies but now i m free till thursday and coming to the epi .i read all the epis which i missed and this epi it was really awesome what is laksh plan i m very eager to know it . the epi was really awesome.

      • pathan on September 13, 2016 3:47 pm

        After long time you got free but really happy that you commented here after getting free from your exam and really thanks for liking my today part and I am happy that you got time to study well
        So study well and write exam

      • mahi on September 13, 2016 4:00 pm

        thank u and ya happy bakrid to you and u know i started to a ff .

      • pathan on September 14, 2016 10:24 am

        Thank for it and I saw in my email as you sent

    42. hemalattha on September 13, 2016 9:23 pm

      superb i like it

      • pathan on September 14, 2016 10:22 am

        Thanks for ur beautiful comment

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