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Home»Fan Fiction»Ruhaniyaat (Segment 26)
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Ruhaniyaat (Segment 26)

StoneheartBy StoneheartAugust 24, 201618 Comments3 Mins Read
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Her best friends point of view-
She begins to stir after some time..
I halt the car near an eating joint on the highway..
She gets up and looks around…
Startled as she is about to scream …
I scream before her…
I frantically start explaining things to her to which she just stares at me..
“Wo …woo…kya …hai na..” i start..
“Haan bolo …m all ears..” she says encouraging me to speak.
She seems exited…
Huh…??
“Wo maine tumhe kidnap nai kia hai..!” I say hurriedly..
And she bursts out laughing…
“Omg..! I never knew this hot shot criketer ..with so many records and all will be scared of a girl !!” And she continues laughing..

“Do you know me .?” I ask surprised ..totally ignoring her hot comment…
“Obviously you dumbo..!” She exclaims and hits my arm playfully
I watch her in awe as she explains how she saw my matches and instantly became my fan .
“You really think i din’t know the way to the football field that day..?”
“Huh..?”
“Sachi tumhara kuch nai ho sakta…I have been visiting this college since like forever …and Bhai and Dada have been on the team since ever” she explains..
“Bhai..??”
She had a brother in the football team aur mai kya kya sochra tha…Idiot scolds my inner voice .
“U know Jhonny and John na..? I am their sister” she says proudly..
Oh freak..!
“Ohhh…okay…yea..watever..”
“Acha by the way..is it true that you can alone turn a loosing match to a winning one..? She asks all stary eyed
I blush at her knowledge about me…
“I will be back” i say and rush to call doll..i know only she can help me now..

— phone –
“Hey my tedu wedu ..how is the plan coming up..?? Did you tell her yet ..?”
“Doll she knows me .!”
“What do you mean she knows you..?”
“U know about my game and everything .”
“Well thats good”
“Go tell her you idiot that you love her..I have to go ” she says and hangs up
—

I return back to the car and find her munching on some snacks..
khate hue koi cute kaise lag sakta hain….
This girl will be the death of me…
“By the way ek bath batao captain” she says
“Captain..?? Abi time hai uske liye..” i start to reason but she cuts me off
“I know but mere liye toh tum hi captain ho…acha by the way.. Hum kaha ja rahe hai..?”
“Uh…oh…. wo …” i stutter again…
Uff get a grip..!
“Acha let me help you…Imagine i am not here okay…just speak…close your eyes..” she says with a smile…
I close my eyes and can see her smiling face…oh gosh..
I can fall in love with that pretty face again and again ..
” We are going for a little picnic to my hometown ” i say and jump back in the car while she squeals in happiness..

P.S again this is ted’s point of view and tabh bhi apko doubts hain toh gladly puch sakte hain…stoneheart happy to help..!

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    18 Comments

    1. Samaira on August 24, 2016 11:24 pm

      If u write with 3 person pov.. Will be better.

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 6:24 am

        thanks for commenting

    2. Heltej on August 24, 2016 11:28 pm

      Ted is laksh r8? And actual name of angel?
      Btw awesome chappy

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 6:24 am

        thanks and you can imagine it the way you want

    3. kumu on August 25, 2016 12:44 am

      nice as always..

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 6:25 am

        thanks

    4. chanu on August 25, 2016 1:03 am

      nice epi as always
      keep writing

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 5:30 pm

        thanks

    5. shiksha on August 25, 2016 2:47 am

      Nice..

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 7:14 pm

        thank u

    6. Kakali on August 25, 2016 7:00 am

      Nice.. loved it.?

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 7:15 pm

        thank u

    7. Rekha on August 25, 2016 7:00 am

      Awesome as always…

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 5:31 pm

        thanks

    8. vyshu10 on August 25, 2016 9:03 am

      nice….dex is jhonny right?

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 4:35 pm

        yes

    9. Shagun on August 25, 2016 11:55 am

      Update next ep today plz
      Actually I wanna what happened at the
      Party I mean when swara’s friends came to know that sanskar aka Johnny aka dex is swara ‘s fiance and the live together

      • stoneheart on August 25, 2016 4:34 pm

        curiosity kills the cat

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