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Fan Fiction Swaragini

my family-11

AstraBy AstraAugust 14, 2016Updated:August 14, 201645 Comments5 Mins Read
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Previous part: Episode 10

Recap: family came to know Ragini is that letter girl. They gets anger on her..!

Part 11:

Ragini holds Laksh’s hand. He turns back. She is looking passionately at him.

Ragini: thank you Laksh….

Laksh smiles… Good night..

And leaves. He goes into his room. Sanskar comes near him.

Sanskar: how is Ragini feeling….?

Laksh: I gave her tablet. She will feel better by morning.

Sanskar: can I ask you something…

Laksh: yup…

Sanskar: are you not angry with her…? Actually, she has done wrong…

Laksh: mistake is there from our side too. You know that she is that letter girl, and you didn’t try to stop. And me, even though, I know…. I was also silent…

Sanskar amazes… What..? You know all that..?

Laksh: yes… I didn’t say to anyone. And, why I will have anger on her…? After all, I have loved her so much….

Sanskar smiles….

Next morning,

Ragini wakes up and feels good. But she is scared to face the family. She comes out of her room. Laksh is not wake up yet.

Sujatha and Sumi are doing some works in kitchen. Ragini goes near them to help.

Sujatha: you need not do anything. Go away….

Ragini hurts.

Sumi: sujatha, there is no need to talk to her. Let her do whatever she want.

Ragini in teary eyes… “Maa, I’m sorry. I agree that i have done mistake. Now, please excuse me…”

Sumi: sujatha, I’m going away… Call me when she leaves.

Then Ragini only goes away.

Then she goes near dadi who is arranging everything near puja.

Ragini: dadi, I will bring flowers for you….

Dadi grabs basket from her hands.

Dadi: don’t do puja mandir apavitr by entering here. You liar…!

Ragini deeply gets hurt with her words.

Sanskar looks at her sadly. He is about to talk with her, then Ram comes.

Ram: chalo, let’s go to farm….

Sanskar: just a second papa. I will talk with Ragini…

Shekar: it’s getting late sanskar. Let’s go. There is no need to talk….

Shekar takes away Sanskar.

Ragini feels sad again. Then she hears dadaji’s voice.

Dadaji: Parvati..(dadi). Bring me the newspaper.

Then Ragini takes newspaper and goes near him.

Ragini: dadaji, paper….

He gets up furiously and goes away. Ragini looks on with teary eyes.

While, this much happening, Laksh is sleeping peacefully. He doesn’t know all this was happening. He suddenly remembers Ragini and wakes up.

Ragini sat near the well and she was crying silently. Suddenly she feels a warm hand holding her hand. It’s Laksh.

Laksh: wow, your fever came down. But, your eyes are crying…..

Ragini: nobody are talking with me Laksh. You have excused me, why can’t they all do that… I think no one likes me….

Laksh sits beside her and he puts hand on her hand.

Laksh: no Ragini, they all love you. They have right to get anger on you… Don’t you agree..?

Ragini nods her head.

Dadi sees they are talking closely.

Dadi: see that shameless girl, she has trapped Laksh, who is supposed to be Swara’s.

Sujatha and Sumi looks at them.

Ragini: no one will excuse me that easily Laksh. But, if I do a thing surely, they will be happy.

Laksh: what is it….?

Ragini: I will make you and Swara together. Then they will excuse me….

Laksh shocks with her words. Just then Swara comes listening to it.

Swara: there is no need of it Ragini. However I don’t like him. Or he don’t like me. So, don’t try to do anything. Moreover, he is already in love with you. I can’t accept a person who loves another girl.

Ragini: but Swara, family has decided your alliance first….! If you won’t agree for this, I will not get other way to get close to our family…

Swara shouts: stop it Ragini….

Ragini shocks.

Laksh: Swara, why are you yelling at her. She has done everything for you. Yes…! She did mistake. But….

Swara: Laksh!! Here, sisters are talking. Don’t come in between us…!!

Laksh becomes silent.

Swara: how selfish are you Ragini. Firstly, you started trapping Laksh having crush on him and you just kept me as a reason…! Now, I don’t like to marry him… You want to force me…??

Ragini: that’s not true Swara. I have done that really for you. I don’t have any crush on Laksh. I don’t love him…

Laksh: Ragini, you need not fear for anyone. Yes..! You have wrote letters just acting. But the truth is you have loved me…! You have loved me…but you don’t know that…

Ragini shouts: stop it Laksh…! I didn’t love you…! I don’t love you… I… Don’t…. Love you….

Laksh shocks with her words.

Laksh: but Ragini…!

Ragini joins hands to him.

Ragini: please, go away from my life Laksh. You are nothing for me…!

Says Ragini crying. Laksh starts going away from there silently. Ragini looks at him in tears.

Sujatha, Sumi and Dadi comes there with her shouts..

Sujatha: kya hei chori? Why are you shouting like that…?

Dadi: people who has done mistake don’t have right to shout…!

Ragini shouts again, “why are you killing me with your words like this..? Kill me at once, instead of this….!”

Sumi: why we have to kill you? Go to hell if you want….!!!

Ragini shocks with her words.

Swara: maa, don’t say like that….

Dadi then takes away everybody.

Ragini remains alone over there….!!!

Precap: Ragini looks at a current wire….. Raglak first kiss…..

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    45 Comments

    1. varsha on August 14, 2016 3:30 pm

      OMG! rags gone mad?? she luvs lucky n why she’s hidin. Raglak r cute evn if dey r friends till nw. Luv d way lucky cares fr hr.

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:24 pm

        She is doing for Swara… But she will open up… Thanku varsha…..??

    2. Dhivya on August 14, 2016 3:51 pm

      waiting for raglak kiss

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:24 pm

        Haha..??

    3. Fairy on August 14, 2016 4:11 pm

      Oh god bechara laksh…plz rags realise ur feelng towards him soon..waitng dat family wl forgive her ..n omg precap isssss sooo shockng n interestng …waitng for it eagerlyyyyy..plz post soon..u know na i loved readng ur ff…n plz try to post a long one astra ..keep rockng dear 😉 😉

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:25 pm

        Thnq fairy…?? I will try dear…??

    4. Sreevijayan on August 14, 2016 4:19 pm

      Astraaa…awesome awesome…pls update a longer part na… feeling really bad for ragini…..

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:25 pm

        Thanku so much dear??

    5. rafeee on August 14, 2016 4:35 pm

      nice

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:26 pm

        Thnq?

    6. Dipti on August 14, 2016 4:51 pm

      Nice story line I luv laksh character in this ff very much update next part fast

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:29 pm

        Thnq dear??

    7. lisa on August 14, 2016 5:05 pm

      aweee poor ragini she’s pyara bacha

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:30 pm

        Yes yar…☺️?

    8. Savi singh on August 14, 2016 5:08 pm

      Awww.. My poor lucky.. He loves alot ragini… Bt she is not understanding… Excited for next part… Plz be regular

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:31 pm

        Thnq dear..? sure yar

    9. Sindhura on August 14, 2016 5:21 pm

      Its too much off dadi and swara why cant she understand

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:44 pm

        Hmm….. Yes…

    10. Anjali on August 14, 2016 5:22 pm

      Omg what is going on ????????. Feeling bad for ragini . Superb ep ????

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:34 pm

        Thank you dear??

    11. Akshata on August 14, 2016 5:23 pm

      you made me cry, i cant see her sad. i can understand their pov and rude behavior but sumi’s words were really harsh. precap is damn interesting.

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:29 pm

        Of course dear…, it is very sad…? but, for next twist… It’s compulsory…. Don’t be sad yar, they will excuse her…???? thanku dear….

    12. saranya on August 14, 2016 5:34 pm

      awesome nd precap seems so interesting..???

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 5:35 pm

        Thnq Saranya….??

    13. Keerthi on August 14, 2016 5:54 pm

      Wow amazing yaar,

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:40 pm

        Thnq keerthi?

    14. so_ni on August 14, 2016 6:14 pm

      Awesome update

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:40 pm

        Thnq dear?

    15. megha123 on August 14, 2016 6:21 pm

      Feeling sad for ragu ……….hope the family forgives her soon …

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:42 pm

        Yes dear…she will be forgiven..?

    16. nikky on August 14, 2016 6:50 pm

      this not right ragini has done all this innocence and waiting for next part soon

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:43 pm

        Thnq Nikky…I will update soon

    17. nitu on August 14, 2016 7:03 pm

      RagLak kiss or is it a mouth to mouth breath??? Hahaa

      Family is being so rude with my ragu.. m not likingthem..

      Poor LAKSH…:(

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:44 pm

        Haha…??
        I’m also sad for them.. Don’t wry, everything will set…

    18. Ammu on August 14, 2016 8:00 pm

      Superb dear and waiting for precap. Plz update ASAP

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:44 pm

        Thank you ammu…??

    19. lovely on August 14, 2016 8:19 pm

      Amazing, but feeling bad for ragu

      • Astra on August 14, 2016 9:45 pm

        Thnq lovely…

    20. Ragz_teju on August 14, 2016 9:54 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on August 15, 2016 6:39 am

        Thnq dear?

    21. hemalattha on August 14, 2016 10:37 pm

      awesome and Interesting

      • Astra on August 15, 2016 7:02 am

        Thnq dear?

    22. Fats on August 15, 2016 1:56 am

      Great update. Awww poor Ragini, all the taunts she is receiving is very sad. The family are being so harsh on her ?. And aww poor Laksh too. My cuties RagLak are suffering so much. I hope things get better soon. Can’t wait to read more. Especially the kiss in the next episode, it sounds so DREAMY ?❤️?

      • Astra on August 15, 2016 7:02 am

        Thnq fats…??

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