Hello guys……many of u guess right….n many of u r confused …don’t worry
Fb begins….
Shomi calls swara n ask her to meet her in cafe. ……
Swara:- y u call me here…..??
Shomi:- swara…..ragini is in danger…someone kidnapped her n ask shekhar to come with 100 cr rupees…..
Swara’- oh….u came to meet me for ragini….huh
…ridiculous….I will help u bcz she saved mW once…now its my turn….but I have a condition.
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Shomi:- what??
Swara:- I wanna know the reason….?? The reason for leaving me…
Shomi:- no….I can’t tell u…
Swara:- ohk…then saved rags on ur own
Shomi:- ohk fine……when I was pregnant….I came to know about rags mum n shekhar…..he leave me….I decided to live for u…but my destiny didn’t allow mW……one day shekhar calls me…n told me that he loose rags mom…..n ragini is also having a hole in her heart……since birth…..he asked me to accept ragini……
Swara:- y u leave me….??
Shomi:- bcz it was shekhar’s conditio that ieither I have to choose u or ragini….
Swara:- condition…but y???
Shomi:- bcz he thaugt that if u will live with me then I will discriminate BTW u n rags
Swara:- what rubbish…..???
Shomi:- beta…plz help us…
Swara:hmm…
Then swara n shomi follows shekhar n that man n reached the place …
Fb ends..
Swara cries n sanskar supports her……
Swara:- rags saved me…so leave her……we will go back…to India…..
Sanskar:- as u say jaan….
Sanskar orders his man to leave ragini……
Shekhar came to swasan…but swara ignores him
Shekhar:- sanskar plzz forgive me…….agar tum mjhe maaf krdo to shayad meru beti b…
Swara:- sanskar let’s go……
Sanskar :-swara…
Swara ignores n leave
In the hotel room
Sanskar:- swara…forgive them….
Swara:- u r saying this……?
Sanskar:- yes….swaru…..they r ur parents …
Swara:- no….I will never forgive them….never…..we r leaving for India tomorrow….
Sanskar:- but
Swara was busy in packing n she was roaming here n there n suddenly she slips…but sanskar hold her…. They have an eyelock….
Sanskar lifts her n lay he rdown on bed…..
Sanskar:- swara …I will not force u ….I m with u on ur every decision…..
Swara colses her eyes n say ty sanskar….
Precap:- guys give some ideas for upcoming story…..I m unable to think anything…..give ur suggestions plzzzzz……so that I can update soon..plz guys….
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U can now show raglak love story and swasan child ….and I have no idea … I myself thinking about my ff …. and epi was nice …
Which ff u write dear???
nice
Thanks
nice
Ty dharani
I don’t think Swara should forgive shekar and sumi how can he differentiate between her children just because raging has a hole in her heart what is swara’s fault in it it’s not justice with swara
Thankyou rosey…..
Nice one…
Ty vidhi
Ragini got cured . Raglak not jhok . Shemish regret. swara happiness. Ap against shemish
Thanks dear
it would be nice to know why Shekhar killed Sanskar’s Family and also Swasan child and Raglak romance…
Awsm ….
She should not forgive them. U can show some past….
awesome..
Swara should not forgive…sumi reason for leaving swara is injustify to the core..no mother would fo this…ragini has atleast father…but wat abt swara..
You can show shemish reach india with rag…swasan scenes…Ap hatred towards shemish….
How can sans forgive them…shekar was murderer na..tat too his dad and sister…
You can show raglak scenes.. Swasan bonding with his neice…
Anyways sumi leaving swara is unforgivable…
This is my pov..
Ragini knw truth abt swara nd try to unit her family. Raglak lov story. Sanskar’s care for swara nd help to raginiw saglaksan join hands to unit their family. Raglak nok jok
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nice…swara shouldn’t forgive them easily. U can tell y shekhar killed sanskar’s father and shek-shomi-rag moving to India and asking for forgiveness. Plz add swasan cute scenes
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its a request don’t want swara to forgive shemish till end of ur ff don’t let swara forgive them….let them spend their life alone…..eating is having hole so shekar asked shomi to tc of ragini but shomi shouldn’t have accepted that condition…..its very ridiculous…..she is not at all a mother…..just to get a good name in the world she left her own daughter….such a selfish woman…. pls don’t make swara forgive them….
Awsum..loved it..dnt make Swara Forgive Shomi n Shekhar soo Easily..n show some swasan romance n their Emotional bond..n continue soon
Awesome. She shouldn’t forgive them.show some swaragini moments n where is laksh.bring him back n show some cute nok jok scenes of swasan n love story of raglak.will be waiting for next part.post asap
They are not parents bt selfish people… shekhar first cheated shomi n wen raginiz mum died he asked her to accpt ragini n leave swara… n how can a mother leave her daughter… her reason is not justify… i dun want swara to forgive dem in this ff… dey shud suffer so much… even ragini shud leave dem coz of dere deeds
Show some swasan moments… Emotional talk b/w swara n sanskar like swara sharing him her sufferings n all…sanskar to get touched by her….sanskar trying hard to make her feel like a princess n never letting any sorrows come her way…then sanskar n his mom’s utmost care for swara…swara’s home arrest..i mean they should not allow her to do anything… Sanskar’s chota chota romance…let ragini know the truth and trying to make her parents understand how wrong were they….shekhar n mishti @ guilt n grief…ragini n her parents Coming back to india…shemish asking forgiveness from swara n sanskar… But both should not forgive him…plz never make swara forgive them… What they did with her is something that cant be justified by anything…. She should ignore them…sanskar’s mom’s n swara’s bond of mother n daughter should make shomi sad as well as a guilt for leaving his daughter…swaragini bonding….raglak silly fights leading to frndshp then to love…past mysteries behind the murder of sanskar’s father n sis…swara n lucky team up to irritate sanskar with their funny stuffs…. And sanskar’s fake anger n swara’s mission sanskar ko manao…sanskar’s preplanning to welcome their champ…and a different shade of sanskar that surprises everyone n swara overwhelmed with his love n care…dont bash me for this stupid stuffs…write something good that comes in ur mind…i am sure that u will give the best …waiting for next chappy.. Update asap
The reason sumi left swara is unjustified and pointless.
Leaving swara jus because shekar thinks sumi will difference btw them is totally injustice to swara.
Neverthless u can follow up further track by showing:
*Mystery of DP & Uttara’s death
*Shekar’s repentance
* Swara’s pregnancy, sanky’s care and swara’s mood swings.
* Ragini’s treatment and Laksh’s care and their nokjhoks.
U can even show sanky’s transformation from goon to good human being.
Awsm..
Show like..
Ragini gets cured all due to swara..(she helps without giving credit to herself or u can say by hiding herself.. which means ragini doesn’t know swara..)
Swasan scenes..as in sanskar caring for swara, swara’s modd swings..
Swara ignoring shemish which makes them realize their mistake..or we can say crime!
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awsm dear
Swara should not forgive them.if shekar love ragini mom then y he married sumi?how can Sumi leave swara when shekar told ragini mom died,ragini heart hole this matter how can a mother leave her own daughter.if swara have heart hole then shekar will leave ragini for swara.no na. How can sumi leave swara.which mom will leave like sumi.if sumi will leave swara then ragini have father and mother then wat about swara who are in swara side to support live so no swara could not forgive them.swara had abortion because reason of shekar daughter
Ah this time plz don’t upload swara abortion scene.
Awesome…
Awesome u can make raglak love story n kavita entry in sanskar life as her ex girlfriend or make sahil entry
Hey it’s nice…. But please don’t make swara to forgive shemish….you can write ragini to know the truth and raglak story….. Sanskar shouldn’t forgive shekhar and sanskar parents past….make ap to not accept shemish….. Swasan romance….
Shemish regrets….
Waiting for your next episode…. Update soon
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Thanks all
swara should save ragini anyhow….then shekhar n shomi will be more guilty bt swara should not forgive them…..
Superb dear….Want some Swasan scenes…Waiting for next one
Guys be ready for more suspense