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Fan Fiction Swaragini

Pain Trust & Love episode 5

administratorBy administratorAugust 2, 201623 Comments5 Mins Read
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Guys dnt think dat m going to make ragini d villain of d ff…actly lyk in serial c did all dese cz of Laksh’s love here also same c is gud at heart bt as u all knw to hide one lie mny lies has to be tld so same will happen wid ragini…bt here dadi’s character is bit diffrnt u all will get to knw…so now no more bak bak..lets move to d story…

At baadi
All were just watching swara noone was able to tell nething..
Swara went towrds d mandap n at d corner a can was kept which had oil in it…c took dat n put all of dem on d suitcase n den went n bought matchbox..
Swara: Soo ur daughter is dead fr uhh ryt??
Sanskar: No swara dnt tell lyk dat..
Swara: Dnt worry sanskar nothing will happen to me u go n wait fr me outside m coming
Sanskar: No m nt goimg newer i will stay here till u come wid me n dats final okay…seeing him swara just smiled a bit n den turned towrds sumi n sekhar..
Swara: So u tld na ur daughter is dead so chalo lets do her ”Antim sanskaar”okay..saying dis c lighted d matchstick n threw on d suitcase n it strtd to burn…all were shocked to see dis..
Swara: Soo nw i hv completed half of ur work..d rest i guss u cn do by urslf i mean do one thing collect dese ash n do d ”asthi bisharjan” okay!!
From today ur daughter is dead fr uhh n i hv no relation wid u all..i hv no family..sry sry i hv a family n dats only My Sanskar…is dat clear(sanskar felt vry happy listening dis especially wen swara tld my sanskar)
Sanskar lets go from here m feeling suffocated within dese strange people…saying dis c held sanskar’s hand n went outside of d baadi wid a heavy heart n tears continuously flowing from her eyes..n sar down inside car…swara n sanskar left in one car followed by sahil kavi n rahul in othr car

At baadi…
Aftr swara left sumi sat down wid a thud seeing d way swara tlked wid her n was shocked to see wat swara did…she strtd crying vigorously…ragini was going to her bt ap stopped her
Ap: Lets go now Ragini beta c needs some tym to accept d truth.. Swara did not do nething gud… We will come n meet her tomorrow okay.. Laksh…chalo sab n dey all left..
Dadi: Ramu (servant)clean all d mess nthing shld be present okay n first clean dis(pointing towards d burnt suitcase)
Sekhar: Mishti dnt cry lets go inside evrything will be fine wid tym..dnt wry..ur too mch tired come now take rest…n sumi juzz nodded n went inside…c was still unable to believe dat swara actly did all dose things aftr all dmc was a mother..

Swasan side..
Der was complete silence..bt tears wer continuously flowing frm swara’s eyes..sanskar ckdnt take it nemore so he broke d silence finally
Sanskar : (softly)Swara…shonaa….plzz look at me …plzz speak something ur silence is killing me n if u will cry lyk dis continuously n nt speak nething den it will affect ur health..plzz princess speak something plzz atleast fr me…
Swara: (suddenly) Stop d car Sanskar
Suddenly sanskar applied d brakes n d car stopped wid a jerk…before sanskar cld speak somrthing swara strtd walking towrds d nearby park wer dey hv stopped…c went n sat down on a bench n stared blankly at d skyn tears were continuously flowing frm her eyes..sanskar came n sat beside her n put his hand on her n turned her towrds him n made her look towrds himn spoke
Sanskar: Swara i knw tody wat all happened has hurt u a lot n somewhere m also responsible fr all dis bt plzz tlk something n dnt remain silent…
He was speaking so softly dat swara cldnt control her emotions nemore n suddenly hugged sanskar tightly n started crying vigorously…sanskar was surprised by her act bt he den reciprocated d hug n even held her more tightly he cld feel her all pain…c was crying so hardly dat her whole body was shaking n her hands strtd trembling cz of which her grip frm sanskar was loosenimg bt sanskar held her tightly close to his heart…swara was cry since half an hour so sanskar was tensed he softly n lovingly called her n made her look at him n asked her to speak something n aftr a long time swara strtd to speak
Swara: (sobbing)sans..kar..y dis ..happ..ened wid ..m..me??waa..at..was my mi..s..stake??
D one who claimed to love me n went against his family to mm..marry me..didnt wait fr me or listen me once…lea..leave him…my own sis..sister who was my soulmate..my rag..ragini…c played sch a dirty ga..game wid mm…me..lea…leave her…my mother who al..alwys trus…trusted blindly on me tld dat he…her sho..shonaa is de..dead fr her…hw cld..she tell lyk dat??m i soo baa..aad..bad sanskar??y dey didnt lis..listen to me onc..once??y sanskar y??..saying dis c agn strtd crying…

Precap: Swasan bond n a shock for swara…

To be contd…

Keep guessing guyzz wat might be swara’s shock..so dis mch fr tody….now its u all who will tell me shall i continue or stop here??soo waiting fr ur response…bye tc guyzz n sry i cldnt reply to ur comments individually bt m really glad fr dose who commented on my post…thnkxx agn…

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23 Comments

  1. SHAN on August 2, 2016 8:45 am

    Awesome dr….. Dont make ragini positive all of a sudden….. It will affect the charm of ur ff….. In one ff the writer made ragini positive all of a sudden…. It didn’t look good….. So that only i told…. If my words hurt anybody i m sry….. Then this part is superb…. The shock is sanskar might be a big business man…..

  2. Anu Rathore on August 2, 2016 9:05 am

    Nice…nd plzz continue…

  3. drishya on August 2, 2016 9:18 am

    Awesome loved it….continue soon

  4. momo on August 2, 2016 9:36 am

    I am loving ur ff it has its own essence. …

  5. Crazy on August 2, 2016 9:41 am

    I m just in love with ur ff
    Plz upload soonnnnnnnnn
    Can’t wait to read next part
    N yup thanku for double dhamaka episode !!!!

  6. swans on August 2, 2016 9:45 am

    awesome…nice..conutue next soon…waiting

  7. Vaikha on August 2, 2016 9:49 am

    Awesome yaar.. I loved swaras boldness..

  8. swans on August 2, 2016 9:58 am

    try to update next part today …plzzzzzzzz

  9. Bhargavi on August 2, 2016 10:12 am

    Awesome yar, please don’t stop it. Th shock may be Sanskar may be a very big powerful businessman. Just can’t wait to read the next part yar

  10. Afra96 on August 2, 2016 10:14 am

    Nice

  11. Sakthi Gayathri on August 2, 2016 10:29 am

    Show Sanskar has a culprit….it must give some curious to show

  12. anu on August 2, 2016 10:35 am

    awesome yaar.. dont stop it continue with the flow and ha buut for me i want family comes to know about why ragini did this and how much they hurted swara… if u dot want show rags negative its okay.. but all of sudden dont show her positive.. and about suspense may be sanskar is business man which no one knows as u said first episode rarely some members knows as he is business man.. please provide previous links… please…. update next part soon

  13. pbutt894 on August 2, 2016 11:59 am

    Its awsome

  14. Madhu on August 2, 2016 12:20 pm

    May be sanky’s love….
    Anyway dr awesome part…

  15. Madhu on August 2, 2016 12:22 pm

    May be sanky’s stauts..
    Anyway dr awesome part…

  16. Thamizh magan on August 2, 2016 1:01 pm

    awesome

  17. Tanug on August 2, 2016 2:02 pm

    Awsm…… And plz continue this ff…. And shock must be that sanskar is a big business man

  18. Abdul hafiz (Uma) on August 2, 2016 2:18 pm

    Awsm dear. Plz continue. I loved it.And about shock, I have no idea.Keep it up. Waiting for nxt.One more thing, plz make swara stand her own feet.You can take time for it,no problem.

  19. khushiii on August 2, 2016 2:41 pm

    Superb conitinue soon

  20. Soujanya on August 2, 2016 2:54 pm

    awesome

  21. vyshu10 on August 2, 2016 3:48 pm

    awsm

  22. s on August 2, 2016 8:15 pm

    nice

  23. AshwiniMool on August 2, 2016 11:30 pm

    Awesome part ?????????????post next part soon waiting dear

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