bepannah mohabbat ki shuruvat

Hey guys, thnx a ton for your support and i have decided to continue it . . I am damn sorry for late update . So, this is my first episode . Please do comment . Here is the intro link ( in case you forgot the story ?? )
intro
And,
N: Nandini
M: manik
D: Dhruv
A: alya
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The episode starts with a fresh, beautiful morning in Mumbai . A big shopping mall is shown , two girls are shopping. They are our Nandini and alya . Nandini was wearing a pretty churidar and was looking very cute and alya was wearing a blue dress. Alya has a trolley full of clothes while Nandini has a few in her hand . Alya picks a beautiful red dress .
Alya: Nandu, look at this. God!!! Its too goood. Try this na once
Nandini: no ways alya , its so short .
Alya : arre nothing will happen, just try na once. I swear you’ll look hot . ( she winks and smiles mischievously)
Alya pushes Nandini into the trial room. After five minutes, Nandini doesn’t come out . Alya gets impatient and bangs on the door .
Alya: Nandini, come out na plz
Nandini: no , plz plz, noo
Alya: Nandu, if you don’t come out naa, i swear i will break the door .
She bangs the door even louder . Nandini comes out, the red dress suited perfectly. She was looking beautiful. Nandini keeps pulling it down .
Alya : Nandu, if you keep pulling , it won’t get any longer . So please, leave it . You are looking awesome !!;) you should definitely buy It.
Nandini: no ways alu, its too costly yaar, just see its 7,000 . No ways, plz.
Alya : its not so costly, come on I will buy it for you . But then you have to take it.
Nandini: no alu, thnx but I wont and I cant . You know what I mean na ??
Alya: ok,my miss khuddar, buy it yourself later. Ok, now lets go .
They come out . Nandini is driving the scooty and alya is sitting at the back and blabbering . Their scooty hits a big black car . A boy wearing buff coloured jeans and a dark blue top steps out . ( yeah, its manik ! ) .
He comes out of the car with dhruv , alya and Nandini also get down . Manik looks at alya and gets mesmerized .
Dhruv was busy in his phone, he looks up at alya and she also looks back . They have a cute eyelock . Nandini was furious by then, she scowls at manik.
Nandini: oh hello mister, cant you see. What would have happened ?
Manik doesnt pay attention to her and looks at alia.
N: excuse me, I am talking to you !!! Where are you lost ?
Manik comes to his senses. He looks at Nandini from top to toe and her clothes.
M: oh, hello miss behenji, stop. Nothing happened right so stop panicking .
N : what ? How dare you call me behenji? Anything could have happened nah, then ?
M : then what ?
Dhrulya come to their senses .
A : leave it na Nandini, lets go .
M : see your friend , she is so beautiful!
Everyone stares at him . Manik realised what his just said .
M: I mean sensible ! She’s so sensible ! Nothing happened so now go home .
N: how will we go home ? You have damaged our scooty.
Dhruv: ok, ok, we are sorry . We’ll drop you and mend the scooty fine ??
Nandini: yeah, fine. See your friend is so polite !
M: plz can u plz just shut up??
D: ok now lets go.

They get into the car. Manik and Dhruv in front and girls at back . Manik looks at alia through the mirror and alya looks at dhruv. No one spoke for sometime till dhruv broke the silence.
D: so, what are your names girls? I am dhruv , dhruv sharma. And he is manik Malhotra.
N : I am Nandini murty , and she is alya Saxena .
M : alya, nice name.
A : thanks. So, Dhruv where do you live ?
D: I live nearby here . And you ?
A: I live in Saxena mansion .
Nandini was thinking about something .
D: and Nandini? Where do you live ?
N : I have seen him somewhere!!
A : whom ?
N: manik.
M : me ? Where ?
N : in the newspaper . Wait ! Plz dont tell me you are manik Malhotra, son of nyonika and Neeraj Malhotra!!!
M : yes, I am.
A: Nandu, who are they ?? ( alya is weak in gk.)
N : alya, you don’t know them ? They are the Malhotras . God !! The owners of Malhotra industries !!
D: yeah, you are right . He is manik Malhotra the great !!
Manik: shut up Dhruv.
A: ok, so mr. Manik Malhotra we have reached plz stop the car .
M : what so soon ??
N : what do you mean so soon ??
Manik stops the car and they get down . It was Nandini ‘s house small but cute .
A : ok, bye ! Thnx for the ride.
M: our pleasure ! Bye good night.
In car :
D : manik, what happened?? So happy?
M : I like her.
D : who?
M: alya.

Dhruv pretends to be happy but he was sad because he too had started liking her . In Nandini house : navya, Nandini and alya are chatting.
Navya: what ? You guys were with manik Malhotra?! Wow?? So lucky!
A : but navya , I still don’t understand.. Who are these Malhotras ??
N : aree yaar, see this is todays newspaper. They have come in the headlines today.
A : omg , but you know what I liked him better .
Nandini: who ??
A : wo, Dhruv. He’s such a chocolate boy and also too cute.
N : yeah, he is a good boy . But that manik is such a jerk!
navya: oh plz, he is so hot !!
A : yeah, he is not bad for Nandu right navya ?
Nandini : shut up. Alya.
Nandini throws a pillow on her . Alya throws it back but it hits navya. The trio have a cute pillow fight . Screen freezes.

Precap : manik comes to Nandini’s house to give the scooty . They fight and Atta falls on both of them.

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Ok, so here is my first episode. Plz comment guys . It takes a lot of effort to write so plz do. And also tell me how it was . Criticism accepted.??