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Ria: Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story?…Raglak…Part 1

Zuha FatimaBy 47 Comments3 Mins Read

Hello friends! Shocked?? Actually I was also not in mood to write but after reading your wonderful comments I was over-whelmed and thought of writing it now!
And maybe I will not be able to write in the upcoming week as Eid is this Tuesday/Wednesday and my aunt with her family is arriving today evening so it maybe hard for me to post!
Now without wasting anymore time let’s get to the story!

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Raglak are shocked upon hearing Ria’s wish…

Ria: Just tell me your love story!
Ragini: You heard it Laksh, your angel’s wish!
Laksh: Ria beta chalo, you are getting late for school!
Ria: No Pa! First I want to know it!
Ragini: Laksh this girl is going out of control, it is all because of your extra love and care! You have pampered her a lot! And at the top her romantic love soaps! Ria! Pack your bag and leave!
Ria: No means no! (And folds her arms)
Laksh: Okay I promise we will tell you our love story now shall we leave?
Ria: Okay! But Promise means…
Laksh: Ria promise!
Ria: That is like my cool father!
Ragini: LAKSH!
Laksh: Ragini please…okay Ria say bye to Ma!
Ria: Bye Ma!
Ragini: BYE!

And Laksh and Ria leave! After few hours Ragini gets a call from Laksh…

Laksh: Hello Rags! How are you!
Ragini: Not at all fine!
Laksh: What do you mean?
Ragini: What was the need to promise Ria! Bachi to bach aap bhi bache ban gaye! (Kid is kid but you also became a kid)
Laksh: Ria was not listening na !
Ragini: Come on Laksh! She is getting spoiled!
Laksh: It is just a wish!
Ragini: Okay fine it is a small wish later she will wish something bigger and will expect it will be fulfilled! Be mature Laksh!
Laksh: She has not ask something big so let it be!
Ragini: Okay fine do whatever you want! It is completely useless to argue with the great Lakh Maheshwari!
Laksh: Ragini okay leave this topic. Did you have your medicines?
Ragini: Yeah I was going to..
Laksh: Ragini how can you be so care less! And be ready today we have to go to the doctor for your check-up. I will be reaching in 20 minutes after winding up my work!
Ragini: No need of that Laksh, I will go with the driver, and don’t forget to pick Ria!
Laksh: How can I forget to pick my princess!
Ragini: Okay I am hanging up ! Bye!
Laksh: Bye and take care!

At night…all are assembled for dinner…

Ragini: Ria did you have your dinner properly?
Ria: Yes Ma! Ma and Pa do you remember your promise?

Ragini glares Laksh!

Laksh (hesitantly) : Yes we do beta!
Ria: So please tell! I want to hear!
Laksh: First move up-stair ! Okay!
Ria: Okay!

Raglak room…Laksh is seen playing guitar while Ria is sitting on the couch and Ragini on the bed…

Ria: Now how much I have to wait?
Ragini: Come here! (stretching her arms, and Ria runs in her embrace)
Ragini: So there was a boy and a girl……

TO BE CONTINUED…

So the update ends here I am sorry for the short and boring update but bear with it and if you find any loop-holes do tell me and yeah no Raglak romance but wait the upcoming story is all Raglak and wait for the next update for some cute Raglak moments!

-Zuha Fatima

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47 Comments

  4. yashasvi on

    hey zuha loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yr so sweet……………luv u………………

    • yashasvi on

      hey zuha just wanted to knw that how come u knw my nick name Yashu , i mean many knw it bt i told them n i never told u
      u guessed it or wt.!!! just curious to knw ..do reply

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Actually my sister’s name is a bit long “Kashfia” so I made her pet name “Kachoo” so likewise I add a “o” or “u” if I find any long name! I hope you didn’t feel hurt!

      -Zuha.

  12. Halima.SuNusHaZuRah on

    Can’t wait for the next episode, seems interesting, keep it up and take care ?

  13. Ruhani on

    Superb dr.. They r so adorable together.. Such a cute family.. Can’t wait to knw abt their love story..

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thanks Ruhani for the lovely comment!
      And Ragya story is coming, but PATIENCE?

      -Zuha

  14. rabia on

    Aaawww it was short but soo cute and I always love laksh caring nature towards his family… I know eid is very near but plz still try to upload if you get some free time??
    Glad that u replied to my comment and happy eid Mubarak in advance???

    • Dafsi on

      And Im not at hurt for mentioning my name Zuha dea I was abit happy (hehehe you know what I mean) and I respect you alot for some reason and yeah felt soooo happy to see you writing a ff 🙂 honestly I was not at hurt so no need to be sorry 🙂 keep rocking may Allah bless you 🙂

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      I am relaxed, that u are not hurt, coz once my teacher said, “Sometimes we hurt any stranger unknowingly, and we don’t get a chance to apologize, and later we regret!”
      Although we are good friends, but still we have never met so I didn’t want to waste the chance for seeking apology so I said sorry, and I can understand why were u happy, even if it was me, then I maybe on cloud 100th and u would have found me, dancing, jumping, laughing, and all the things an insane person do??

      Well thanks dear for your continuous support!

      And thanks for the wishes?
      May Allah bless u 2 and shower His blessings upon u!

      Keep smiling…Keep writing

      Love u ?

      -Zuha.

  19. Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

    Awesome Zuha, I really enjoyed it…

    Can’t wait for the next episode.

    Anyways keep smiling like always

    Nusz xx

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      I am happy u are enjoying it?
      Thanks for commenting?
      U also keep smiling ?
      Love u Nuszzzzzz?

      -Zuha

  20. Affaa on

    Amazing yaar….I can’t wait for next epi superb….good work…Allah bless you….keep writing….