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“Our Love Was So Strong… But Why Did Everything Break Apart?”( Introduction of Raglak)

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“Our Love Was So Strong… But Why Did Everything Break Apart?”( Introduction of Raglak)
Hey guys Nusz is back aha with another Fan-Fiction of Raglak (From Cad raised in England). This story will be very different than the actual track!! But everything will be based on a love track in my style… I have written many Fan-Fictions and people enjoyed it a lot so I wanted to give a try out for Aara because I am big fan of them xx. I also love Ragsan too and many people already know that xx. But this is a promo/ Introduction… I will be introducing two characters today but the rest in the upcoming promo. I will start this Fan-Fiction in the middle of July until I finish my other two stories. Till then please do enjoy this storyline and no hate comments… Thank you and enjoy my lovely friends aha xx.
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4 years back
A boy named Laksh (22 years old) and a girl named Ragini (20 years old) slowly fell in love with each other… They would always trust and love each other so much… This is how their love story started… (You will get to know their love story in Episode 1 and 2)
Ragini: “Oh god today is going to be an important day for my sister”
She was walking through the streets when she sees a garden…
Ragini: “Wow this place is beautiful” (She runs towards it)
Laksh comes from behind and carries Ragini… He spins her around…
Ragini: “Laksh what are you doing?”
Laksh: “I am showing love towards you”
Ragini: “Yes I can see that, but why were you hiding behind the trees”
Laksh: “I wanted to surprise you”
Ragini: “Can I tell you something?”
Laksh: “Ofc Ragini” (Hugging her tightly from the back)
Ragini: “We have loved each other for almost two years but I don’t know if our families will accept our relationship… After all they went through a lot…”
Laksh: “I won’t let anyone break us apart… That’s my promise to you”
Ragini: “I don’t know Laksh, we both have been going to the same college and been friends since then”
Laksh: “Ragini how many times do I have to tell you? I love you and will only marry you”
Ragini: “I know that silly”

Laksh: “Ragini I don’t want to talk about this anymore”
Ragini: “But Laksh”
Laksh: “I want to tell you something too”
Ragini: “Huh?”
Laksh holds Ragini’s hand and both go near the bench and sit there…
Laksh: “I want to give you something”
Laksh takes out something from his pocket…
Laksh: “I took this from my mom, she told me to give it to the girl I love the most”
Ragini gets emotional
Laksh bends down and proposes Ragini…
Laksh: “Ragini Sharma will you become Ragini Laksh Manheshwari?”
Ragini smiles looking at Laksh and remembers their cute moments they spent together…
Ragini: “Yes I will marry you Laksh”
Laksh smiles and put the ring on Ragini’s finger… She smiles at him…
Laksh: “Now you will always be mine” (He kisses Ragini on the forehead)
Ragini: “I love you Laksh” (She hugs him tightly)
They both hold hands and walk together….

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4 years after
Laksh (26 years old) is shown in his office screaming at people… His girlfriend walks in and tries to calm him down.
Laksh: What is this is nonsense? Didn’t you finish that report I gave you?
Girlfriend (Will be revealed soon): Laksh please calm down
Laksh: I don’t have time to calm down, this project is very important for me and I can do anything to ruin it
Guy: But sir, our Ma’am told us not to do it
Laksh: WHO THE HELL IS THIS MA’AM OF YOURS, I WILL TEACH YOU HER A LESSON
Guy: But sorry

Girlfriend: Laksh listen to me
Laksh gets angry and takes his car to the girl’s company and reaches that place… He opens the door and screams at her while her face is turned around…
Laksh: WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE’RE? WE HAVE WORKING FOR THIS PROJECT FOR AGES… I JUST CAME BACK FROM ENGLAND FOR THIS STUPID PROJECT… I WONDER WHO MADE YOU THE BOSS OF THIS COMPANY.
The girl is wearing a dress that goes down to her knees… It’s blue and has sleeves… Her hair is tied into a bun and then she finally turns around and sees the guy and so does he…
Ragini (24 years old): Welcome to my company Mr. Laksh Maneshwari
Laksh: Ragini?
Ragini: You shouldn’t be talking to someone in that tone of voice
Laksh: Oh so you’re the boss of this company… I should have knew
Ragini: Shocking Na?
Laksh: Wow everything changed…
Ragini and Laksh look at each other but in anger…
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Flashback four years back
Ragini: You’re such a disgusting person
Laksh: I swear to god Ragini I didn’t do this
Ragini: I have been a mistake falling in love with you
Laksh: You do not believe me?
Ragini: I have seen it with my own eyes… What did I ever do to you?
Laksh: You’re misunderstanding me Ragini
Ragini: Don’t call my name with your dirty mouth
Laksh: So you’re saying I am the one who did this
Ragini: You have ruined my life Laksh Maneshwari… I hate you so much
Ragini takes of the Ragini and throws it on Laksh’s face
Laksh: RAGINI
Ragini: DON’T SAY MY NAME
Laksh: Now watch me… when you find the truth out then you will know
Ragini: You lied to me three times
Laksh: Believe what you saw… But I have always loved you
Ragini: But now I hate you
Laksh: Ra…
Ragini: Goodbye Mr. Laksh Maneshwari
Laksh drops on the floor crying while Ragini leaves the place and cries under the rain… Laksh starts breaking things in the house and Ragini burns all the memories she shared with Laksh… Everything changed after that…
Ragini: “Our Love Was So Strong… But Why Did Everything Break Apart?”
Laksh: “Our Love Was So Strong… But Why Did Everything Break Apart?”
Ragini: I hate you Laksh… I hate you so much…
Laksh: Why don’t you believe me Ragini?
4 years later…
Introduction 2 will be shown aha.

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Main Characters:
Laksh Maneshwari (26 years old)
Ragini Sharma/Kapoor (24 years old)
Additional characters added in Introduction 2
(More characters added later in the second promo)
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Hey guys I am sorry but I won’t start this Fan-Fiction until I end two stories which will be ending really soon. Trust me you will enjoy the second promo!! If you want read the other Fan-Fictions by me xx.
Here’s the links (Other Fan-Fictions by me)
Destiny vs love (Based on Thapki Pyaar Ki, Qubool Hai and Jamai Raja)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+Thahaan
A one shot on Ragsan (Based on Swaragini)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-ragini-will-soul-mate-ragini-always-willmere-haath-mein-os/
Sanskar: Will you marry me, Ragini: Yes Sanskar I will (Based on Swaragini) (I will be ending this soon)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Sanskar%3A+Ragini+will+you+marry+me%3F%3F+Ragini%3A+Yes+Sanskar+I+will+%28%28%3A
Qubool Hai love like Beintehha (Based on Beintehha and Qubool Hai)

Telly Updates – Latest Indian TV Serials Written Episode Updates, News, Reviews, and much more!


Ragsan Fan-Fictions (Different titles for each episode)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-belong-hiding-guess-wrote-episode-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/know-blind-finally-met-rainfall-episode-2/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/will-cure-make-see-eyes-episode-3/
I know I seen you…. But it took me forever to find you…. (Based on Thahaan only a few shots)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/know-seen-took-forever-find-episode-1-10-12-shots/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/know-seen-took-forever-find-episode-2/
“You’re my two foot dinosaur and I am your watermelon” (Based on Aara and additional couples are Thahaan and Asya)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/youre-two-foot-dinosaur-watermelon-introduction-aaracouples/
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(By the way, if you’re reading this ff, please do comment your ideas and how is the story going for you. Also love you all aha x)
Btw I’ll post the next episode maybe Friday July 1st 2016 or Saturday July 2nd 2016. But till then please bear with me if I can’t. Till then bye, bye He-he ((:

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74 Comments

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Rizna Hun xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  2. Viska on

    OMG RAGLAK is the cutest… I wonder what their past is… post it already I can’t wait big fan of Raglak 😀

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Viska for enjoying the introduction of Raglak aha.

      You will get to know some parts in episode 1 aha.

      I will post the first episode soon ha-ha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Nikky for enjoying the intro xx.

      Will post the first episode soon aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Nivedha Hun.

      I am really happy you never saw an intro like this aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Megha aha.

      I am happy you will be reading this Ha-ha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Harina Hun.

      Yes many truths to come out aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  7. yashasvi on

    hey loved it !!!!owsm!will be waiting fr next epi dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just amazing!!!!!!!!!!

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Yashasvi for enjoying the intro aha.

      I will be posting it very soon Ha-Ha.

      But thanks for your comment it mean a lot xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  8. rina on

    I feel like Laksh had an affair with Swara? and my god Ragini changed so much… I really can’t wait for the sec promo…

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Rina for enjoying the Intro.

      You will get your answers in the first episode aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  9. razia on

    I haven’t read something so interesting like this, you’re going to rock it baby :PPP love you

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Razia for enjoying the intro.

      Aw my girl!!! love you too xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Virtina for enjoying the intro.

      Aw your comment made my day love you aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you J for enjoying the intro.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  12. mona146 on

    Laksh: I don’t have time to calm down, this project is very important for me and I can do anything to ruin it…………….( guess u wanted to say I can do anything to save it or stop from ruining it.

    right?

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Nope I meant to say what I wrote Mona.

      Laksh wants to get the project so he can ruin it, you will get to know everything in the upcoming episodes.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  13. Suhani on

    Mashallah, beautiful storyline… I am inspired by your writing… will be waiting for Raglak

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Suhani Hun.

      I am happy you loved the storyline of Raglak.

      Will post it really soon xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Tanu for enjoying the intro.

      Yes it’s sad they broke up but you will find out why xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Piyashree Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Nami for enjoying the intro.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  18. Piyashree on

    Wonderful episode, did you mean he will ruin it after he gets it??
    But please post it soon nusz!!!

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you again Piyashree for enjoying the episode..

      Yes that’s what I meant if you read the message I said to Mona..

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Raglak and yes they have a past.

      I will post it asap.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Lovely.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Tori.

      You will get to know everything in the upcoming episode Hun..

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Gauri!

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Radha Hun..

      You will get to know everything soon and I will post it too.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  24. Anjali on

    Another hit…
    just amazing….
    no words… to express…
    I think… Raglak will sort it out soon….
    love them…
    amazing…
    smiling…
    story..

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you so much Anjali Hun for enjoying this Fan-Fiction it means a lot aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Annie Hun for enjoying the story.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you A.R for enjoying the intro.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Jasmine Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Basha Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Zuzu Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Pari Hun.

      You will get to know everything soon.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Lisa Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Piya Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Anamica Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Ammu Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Ruhani Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  36. Halima.SuNusHaZuRah on

    Awesome Nuchi, wow, RagLak? Can’t wait to read it, it’s awesome like always.
    Keep smiling
    Love you ?

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thank you Bali Hun.

      Love you too aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  37. S.Z.F.Z on

    Impressive Nusszzzz…..It is a different concept and quite enjoyable…Looking forward for next update….Keep writing…Keep smiling!
    And a big hug for Eid!
    Eid Mubarak!
    Regards,
    Zuha.

    • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

      Thanks Zuha, sorry for replying back I was busy aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always

      ~Nusz xx.