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Home»Fan Fiction»Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART- 10 )
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Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART- 10 )

yashasviBy yashasviJune 27, 201618 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey hiiiiiiiiiii I am soooo happy thxxxx to all who commented n maanvi, lama, tammana, baby n lover where r u gyzzzzzz, were waiting fr ur comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but unfortunately……..plz comment. Luv u all who r reading it n ya dnt forget to comment……………………….
Recap- red faint fell on rt’s face, leela n twinkle r laughing…………!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rt- ( shocked )- who is this… ahh
Tw – papa it’s u only
and started laughing leela was also lughing a bit. Then rt glared at both , both of them stopped laughing n became serious n then rt started to laugh, tw n leela were relieved n started laughing……………
after sometime……..
leela- twinkle puttar now tell me y on whom were u shn y did u took such a long time to open the door…………
tw- maa…….woh …….woh…………
rt- beta wt woh………………..
tw- maa papa, woh actually I slipped n was shouting on myself only….
Rt- wt…!!!!!!!
Leela- tw u r really imposible…..
Rt- indeed, never seen anyone like her.
Tw- papa, how can u see, after all I’m twinkle Taneja, only one piece….
Rt laughs a bit- ya… now sleep okk , we r also going.
N they left, sid comes out n started laugh like mad……….
Tw- ohh babaji is sid has gone mad, no no babaji , plzzz make him normal, my bff n would b fiancé cnt go mad…. Ohhh hoooo now wt to do…hhhh yes let me call dii…
Sid- ohh rajdhani express, calm down yrrr, I knw being with u can make any one mad, but I’m fine, actually I was seeing everything bt couldn’t laugh as aunty- uncle were there, thatswhy when they went I came out n…….
Tw- ohhh I knw
Sid- acha tw tell me if u consider me as ur bff then tell me, think that u r telling ur bff abt ur fiancé
Tw- sid, u r really a true bff, thxxx fr understanding me, actually sid u suddenly proposed me, n I, matlab I never felt fr u anything except bff , bt when u proposed maa , papa , dii, everyone! Was happy n u r my bff also then wt do I want…….
Sid- ohhh hooo tw , wt was the need to say yes, acha now listen I’ll talk to uncle n try to postpone this marriage fr 10 days, bçoz isse zyada who manne walle nhi he, n till the time u decide whether u wanna marry me or not , n if u’ll say that u dnt wanna marry on marriage day also , then it is ok…..
Tw- sid luv u yrrrr bff, thankew sooo much…!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sid- luv u too, acha no need of thanking now sleep kal college bhi jana he , itne dinno se toh chinki ki shaadi ka bahana tha , bt tomorrow , we have to go….
Tw- ya , gn…n sid left n then tw also sleeps…..
(This luv u was friendship wala )

Next day
In college
Khushi (tw frd) – hey let’s play truth n dare
Pari (tw frd) – ya ya let’s play…………….
Veer ( kunj frd ) – ok so I’ll spin the bottle…..
Rohan(kunj frd ) – he kunj ur turn dear , choose…..truth or dare…….
Kunj – Kunj Luthra is daring so I’ll choose dare
Niti (tw frd)– so kunj ur dare is the which will come from there , u have to propose her………….
Khushi – hey r u afraid n girlzz laughed……
Kuj – afraid that too kunj never , so dare accepted………….
Veer – now lets see, who’s the lucky girl…………
Just then tw comes…..
Pari- ohhh noo, ab hoga siyappa……….!!!!
Kunj- noo mam , hey waheguru u only got this girl.ohh noo… but kunj u have to do it…………!!!!!!!!!!
Kunj goes towards tw n kneels down…………
Kunj- hey miss Amritsar kabhi socha nhi tha ki yeh kahuga , par jabse tumhe dekha h kuch kuch hta h, tumhare iss hassen chehere ko dekhte hi dil me ghanti bajti he , tumhari iss ghayal kar dene waali muskurahat ko dekhta hun toh dil kuch kho sa jata h , tumhari in katilana adao ko dekh kr man me ladoo footne lgte hein ms. Twinkle Taneja, ha twinkle , ha I luv u………… I luv u………….!!!!!
( hey miss Amritsar never thought that will say this , but u knw from the time I saw u something happened , after seeing ur this beautiful face bells rang in my heart , after seeing ur smile that can injure many people my brain just forgets everything , after seeing ur this sizzling personality ladoos burst in my heart mss. Twinkle Taneja , yes twinkle , yes I luv u , I luv u……….!!!!!!!!!!!!! )
Twinkle was just hell shocked………….
Tw – yes kunj yes, I luv u too……luv u……….and hugs him , both hug passionately………….
Kaise kahun ishq mein tere
Kitna hoon betaab main
Aankhon se aankhe mila ke
Chura loon tere khwaab main (x2)
Mere saaye hain saath mein
Yaara jis jagah tum ho
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho..
Wajah tum ho.. (x2)
O…

( both breaks the hug n started to dance )

Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya naam dein
(Iss pyar ko hum kya naam dein)
Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya naam dein
Kab se adhuri hai ik daastaan
Aaja usey aaj anjaam dein
Tumhe bhuloon kaise main
Meri pehli khata tum ho
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho..
Wajah tum ho.. (x2)

( Kunj turns twinkle n moves his hand from her should to her hand n then crossed his fingers with her n lifts her n swings )
Kya jaane tu mere iraade
Le jaunga saansein chura ke
(Saansein chura ke)
Kya jaane tu mere iraade
Le jaunga saansein chura ke
Dil keh raha hai gunehgaar ban ja
Bada chain hai inn gunaahon se aage
Main gumshuda si raat hoon
Meri khushnuma subah tum ho
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho..
Wajah tum ho.. (x2)
Wajah tum ho.. (x4)

( n he keeps twinkle down, n turns her , now both of them r face to face, tw blushes n is about to go but kunj holds her from her waist n pulls her towards him, tw’s one hand is on his chest n one on shoulder , both r very close, both closes there eyes )
Precap- both r about to kiss , just then………..SUPRIZE…………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey guyzz plzz tell me howz it.!!!!!!! I tried to add some romantic scene , but I knw im not good in it……….!!!!!!! N ya isse zyada romantic abhi bana bhi nhi skti bçoz we have tw’s fiancée!!!!!!!!!! And they r not bf-gf also, so cnt give more romantic scenes, but dnt wrry will surely do something to giv u romantic scenes, n guyz who read it plz comment dear, plzzz silent readers plzzz plzzz

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    18 Comments

    1. Maanvi on June 28, 2016 1:02 am

      Amazing

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 8:17 am

        thxxxx maanvi

    2. Fan on June 28, 2016 6:33 am

      Nice epi..

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 8:18 am

        thxxx fan

    3. lover on June 28, 2016 1:34 pm

      nice episode dear.

    4. lover on June 28, 2016 1:37 pm

      and for not. commenting.

      • lover on June 28, 2016 1:38 pm

        I am sorry.

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 1:50 pm

        thxxxxxxxx n no need of sorry dear

    5. dreamer...arundhati on June 28, 2016 2:36 pm

      Yashu lovely epi
      It was mind blowing

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 2:50 pm

        thxxx arundhati………

    6. Sayeeda on June 28, 2016 3:40 pm

      Amazing ..loved it …..tooooo gooodddd……
      Can’t wait for next one…

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 4:46 pm

        thxxxxx sayeeda!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    7. sana (aamu) on June 28, 2016 4:25 pm

      good yashavi…..keep going on
      lved it

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 4:47 pm

        thxxxxx sana…!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    8. zayb_zikra on June 28, 2016 6:16 pm

      Osmmmmmmmm loved it

      • yashasvi on June 28, 2016 7:32 pm

        thxxxxxxxxxxxx zayb zikra

    9. baby on June 29, 2016 1:16 pm

      hey yashashvi dear 1st of all yr osm amazing episode issne toh usse truth dare mein propose kra tha bt voh toh asli mein ho gyi yr amazing d way of proposing hr osm jst luvd it 2ndly yr tahnks so mch fr remembring me bt i cmntd on dt bt i ws late as usual n 2day also i m late 2 cmnt so u may nt c dis cmnt b if u c dn definately tell me n yr u r amazing srsly osm yr kya episode tha

      • yashasvi on June 29, 2016 2:42 pm

        thankeww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thankew!!!!!!!!sooo much baby bt i think nxt epi me sabko jhatka lgne wala h

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