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his one mistake changed my whole life…..4 shots

administratorBy administratorJune 26, 201624 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi frds im ur varu…. I writing a ff called who am I?swasan…. but u know yesterday I started to read a novel its midblowing…. While reading that I too cried… ithought to tell u d story….. I really exited to see ur reaction…. Its two shots and also lil bit lenthy as I have to complete it in 4 shot…only 4…. i ll not torture u all more …. 1st shot is lil boring pls bear…
So here we go…

We hear the shouting pain of a girl in side the icu… outside dp is surrounding here and there in tention..final a smile appeard in his face when he heard d baby crying sound… he rush to enterance and a nurse(age 50) came and handover baby and said..
Nurse- congradualation dp ji… ap ji give birth to a baby boy… look he is so cute…(nurse is dps mothers frd)
Dp- how is ap..?
Nurse- she is fine.. we will shift her to general ward soon…
Dp-(acting as angry… come to ward) u won…it’s a boy….i told u I want a girl exactly like u but…
Ap- look I won…. I told u naa I will get boy just lyk u
(don’t get conused here they were romantic couple lyk others)
Dp- but I ll try again again and again until I get my success (he winks at her) (ap blushes)

After 11 years… its sanky bday…
Dp and ap were happy….
They were celebrating happily when ap falls… all were shocked dp lifts her to hospital…. Doctor checks her and said she is pregnant…
Dp and ap were shocked… after sanky… they pryed god to give them daughter too… but no use…then ater few year they are left the hope… but hearing this they were so happy
And sanky too… he s so exited from the newa

Ater 1year… ap deliver a beautiful girl… they named her as ragini… now sanky is 12 years..
He treat her as princes… he gives every thing before her wish… they were happy family…

At d age of 23 he married to kumud…. Kumud is very understanding girl… she mingle with sanky family soon…becoz of her nature he fall for her madly… at d age 24 he become a father of cute baby boy… named him as saras….sanky gives equal attention both his family and business….
Afte 3 years… now ragini is 15 doing her sslc she completed her exam and waiting for result and also so much pamperd by family….she connected kumud and saras very much…
They usually go for varnasi every year in particular month….but then ragini got high fever… so they thought to cancel it… but due parvathi(grandma of sanky)
Parvathi-no dp beta… its ritual… don’t break d chain…(some how she conviced them..)

Sanky decide to stay with ragini to take care of her rest member leave for Varanasi….
Sanky took good take of her as a father not lyk bro….

After few days they got d news that all of their family met with accident all were died…
This made ragsan broken ….. ragini used to cry day and night……
Sanskar was become more silent… he used to stay at home and contineouly wathing his family pic….
Sanky- y god..? y? r u jelous of my happiness…? Y u snatch my parents… my wife… and my s..a..r..a..s..a? wt they did to u? they were coming to u for good future of our family? Not to die…? I HATE U GOD… U R SO CRUEL…. NO U R NOT EVEN EXIST…

After few days… he some how composed… and think to leave for ragini….
He now treated ragini as his daughter… he involved fully in business..
His revolves arroubd ragini….ragini who is used to be naughty girl… now become silent matured…

He joins ragini in a reputed clg of kolkatth… for her pu…
When her admission is going on she sat outside… in a bench…
Sanky talking to principle as ragini is joining late…

Then our heroine entry…”SWARA”
Ragini is looking at blakly at sky… its noticed by swara…
Swara coming near to her..-hi I m swara… may I know u sweet name…?(she is in her uniform she is also studing in 1st year pu)
Ragini-.. huh…? Hi.. im ragini…
Swara- u looking so dull… wt happened…?
Ragini- im missing my mom….(tear escaped from her as well as sankys as he is hearing this from behind)
Swara- ohh… u r leaving in a hostel…? Y u come leving her…
Ragini- I dint leaved … she only leaved…(swara understands her mom is no more)
She took her tiffin box and gave it to her….
Swara- take it …
Ragini- takes and eat that…)(she smiles while eating that…) its tastes lyk my moms dish… thank u swara… I m really feeling good now…can I eat ur tiffin fully…(with innocent smile)
Swara- sure… if u lyk it … then from tomorrow I bring a box for u too from tomorrow …
Ragini- tq… will u be my frd..?
Swara- we r alredy frds… nahi hai kya…?
Swargini laughs together….

Than bell rings… swara- oops im getting late ragini… meet u tomorrow by the way which class u r?
Ragini- 1st year pu…. Commerce ….hey u r box…?
Swara- me too 1st year… I ll meet u tomorrow u give it to tomorrow… bye(she runs)
Ragini- bye… (waving her)
Sanskar feels happy… after so many days ragini talked to normally and happy see her smiling….

Now lets introduce swara.. SWARA BOSE… she is poor girl… she only having her mother shomi… father died when she is 5…they living in a rented house… she is studing very difficultly….she got seat seeing her marks… she is scholar ship student…shomi do as clerk in office…. Her salary is spend full on paying rent… and house maintenance….in remaining salary she is studing her daughter..
Swar- is ambitious girl as well as confidnt … she never bow her head infront of any one … she just want to complete her degree and leave a peacefull life….

Recap- swaragini friend ship….lakshs entry…. Swasan face off….

I know it lil bit boring now but trust me…. Its just and indrudution part… there is more stored for next…
What u think? Wt ll b the pair?
Raglak .. or swalak…
Or swasan… if swasan then how..? they nearly having 12 year difference of age…
Think and reply…. Lets see who ll say the correct future…

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24 Comments

  1. divya shankar on June 27, 2016 12:12 am

    hey nan friend ne 14years diff iro uncle na marriage agidale but our sanskar ina cute baby thara idane avange swara pair agbarda..did u c last week 67 man 27 girl na marriage agoke register office ge ogidaga sikakond irodu nice story danny ge yavathu kusum pair not kumud mostly kumud opas barbodu anisuthe but i dont knw simpy gueessing pls update next part soon full fever dr..

    • Varu on June 27, 2016 9:06 am

      Yeah… true our hero is so cute and hot… anyone can fall for him….
      Pls…take care dear…. I know it’s rainy season we can’t control our self… more to play… take medicines in time…ok

  2. cutiie on June 27, 2016 12:13 am

    Make it raglak swasan

  3. kinnera on June 27, 2016 12:14 am

    it’s really awesome can’t wait 4 the next one

  4. Divyanshri on June 27, 2016 12:21 am

    unique story…. cN u tell me the name of that novel???? please

    • Varu on June 27, 2016 9:09 am

      Tq… Divyanshri … novel is actually Kannada named “HARSHVAHINI” written by Sayisute…

  5. Malar on June 27, 2016 12:31 am

    nice start

  6. Maryam on June 27, 2016 12:35 am

    Ver nice..totally loved it…n plz pair swasan…n ya update soon

  7. Petra on June 27, 2016 12:37 am

    Maybe swara had to drop 3 or 4 years and had to work because of the poor financial conditions

    • Varu on June 27, 2016 9:26 am

      Nice guess…

  8. meena on June 27, 2016 12:48 am

    Awsome swasan nd raglak

  9. Priya on June 27, 2016 1:00 am

    Nice

  10. mou on June 27, 2016 3:29 am

    awesome. plz make it swasan n raglak.

  11. mou on June 27, 2016 3:36 am

    pair 100% swasan hai.bcz story is all about sanky,swara n ragini

  12. SHAN on June 27, 2016 7:13 am

    Awesome… Its unique…..

  13. Soujanya on June 27, 2016 7:39 am

    Awesome

  14. tamanna on June 27, 2016 8:16 am

    Nice….eagerly waiting for next one…..plz update next episode soon….

  15. s on June 27, 2016 12:37 pm

    nyc

  16. tani on June 27, 2016 1:16 pm

    nice story

  17. alia on June 27, 2016 3:09 pm

    Nice but there is lot of age difference btw swasan

  18. Afra on June 27, 2016 3:25 pm

    Nice

  19. Rosey on June 27, 2016 3:50 pm

    It was great

  20. vyshu on June 27, 2016 7:00 pm

    nice…hope swasan.

  21. Fan Of SwaSan on June 27, 2016 7:11 pm

    very nyc…and unique….update next…soon..

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