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Home»Fan Fiction»my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 4~pavani
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my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 4~pavani

pavaniBy pavaniJune 23, 201655 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hiiii darlings thank u very much for ur love nd support

Morning
Laksh:good morning swara (with a cup of coffee)
Swara:why u doo all these laksh .I already told u iam not interested in u nd iam ready to give divorce u can move onn
Laksh:I know u will not love mee but I doo thse as I love u nd my love has no expectations
Swara:but I have a guilt killing me daily that iam spoiling ur life
Laksh:then start lovingmee(with a naughty smile)
Swara was shocked nd got from the bed nd left from there
Laksh:(in mind):I know u can’t forget him but plzz once try to give me one chance nd see then u will understand how much I love u .

Scene shifts
Marriage day
All were busy with preparations rag was sad as she should leave her parents nd Sanky was sad as he dont love her
Marriage completed sucessfully .rag cried a lot during her bedaiii

Night :
Rag was sitting on the bed .she was very much tensed as she saw him but never talked to him
Rag pov
“I saw him many times he is silent nd never talked to mee .I saw many boys who tried to flirt with me atleast they used to give a smile but hee…. he is different .he never saw me like that .that is thing I liked in him the most .I don’t know he was like that with all or with mee only .iam very exited to know about him .usually my friends used to talk with their hus before marriage only but I always want to know about him after marriage only .it will bee more exiting to know about him now .wt he was thinking about mee..did he likes mee??”
Her toughts were disturbed by a door sound nd saw Sanky came in nd was closing the door
She bend her head in shy
Sanky came near bed nd sat on other side of bed
Sanky:I think we should know each other properly before we make our marriage a complete one
Rag immediately removed her pallu
Rag(in an exitement):same pinch I too want that only like it happens in many serials I like it .
Sanky was shocked
Rag came to senses
Rag:iam sorry voo
Sanky smiled at her chaildish ness
Rag:ur smile is very cute .always smile like that only
Sanky gave a sweet smile
Rag:ok now tell me about ur self
Sanky gave a confusing look
Rag:offoo we should know each other properly naa then only we can take our relation a step a head
Sanky:iam very tiered now we can talk tomorrow good night nd he slept on one side of bed
Rag felt bad nd she was about to call her dad
Rag to her self “wt r u doing wt will he think if I call at this time .but what should I doo iam not sleepy ”
Sanky(in a low voice):listen to music in my eyepod near the cupboard you will get sleep
Rag:u didn’t slept
Sanky(in low voice):u r murmering in my ears then how can I sleep
Rag:oops sorry

Next day
swara:laksh I want to go to temple
Laksh:ok I will drop u
Swara:ok then get ready I will be in five min
Laksh:ok
Swara was getting ready .laksh came to take his file then only swara was about to fill her hairline .laksh was mesmerized to see her nd he went near her nd hold her hand .swara jerked his hand
Swara:wt r u doing laksh
Laksh came to senses
Laksh:voo iam sorry
Swara:I tought u r not like every man but u r also the same.u people only want our body not our heart chee .(she left from there angrily)
Laksh hitted his hand to the mirror nd mirror is broken nd blood is flowing from his hand

Scene shifts
Ragsan were still sleeping
Suji knocked the door as today it was mooh dikayi for rag
Sanky woke up nd opened the door
Suji:tell bahuito get ready fast .elders will come to see her nd she left
Sanky was about to say something she left
Sanky turned to rag
Sanky(in mind):ohh noo I don’t know her name also what will I call her now .ok I will wake her by moving He we near her nd shaked her
Rag:noo dad I don’t help u this time u go alone
Sanky(in mind):help???
Sanky:where ??
Rag:i told u naa if mamaa came to know that u r flirting with pummy aunty nd iam helping u she will kill mee
Sanky started laughing by listening to her
She was disturbed by his laugh
She woke up by rubbing her eyes nd saw sanky nd was shocked
Rag:voo iam sorry nd she ran to bathroom nd closed the door due to embracement
Sanky:mummy told u to get ready fast he shook his head nd left from there

Epi ends screen freezes with
Smiling face of Sanky,embarrassing face of rag,angry face of swara nd painful face of laksh
I know its small but wt to doo it is second one today

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    Fun loving .like to communicate with people will be happy with wt I get .

    55 Comments

    1. j on June 23, 2016 10:03 pm

      superb Akka loved ragsan scenes

      • pavani on June 23, 2016 10:24 pm

        Tnk u j darling

    2. Sindhura on June 23, 2016 10:07 pm

      Rag will change him definetly

      • pavani on June 23, 2016 10:25 pm

        Y not she is rag she can do anything

      • pavani on June 23, 2016 10:26 pm

        Y not she is rag she can do anything tnk u sindu darling

    3. lovely on June 23, 2016 10:10 pm

      pavani akka more ragsan scenes please, episode is awesome

      • pavani on June 23, 2016 10:27 pm

        Ok lovely darling I will try for it

    4. ammy on June 23, 2016 10:13 pm

      So funny.ragini is so cute

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:01 am

        Tnk u amny darling

    5. Astha on June 23, 2016 10:15 pm

      akka superb epi akka i liked it very much. lak is so caring. so sweet. i too felt that san is soooocute when he smiles. keep smiling akka. waiting for nxt epi.

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:01 am

        Tnk u sanku darling

    6. Akshata on June 23, 2016 10:18 pm

      awww!! ragini is so cute, love ragsan scenes.

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:02 am

        Tnk u akshata darling

    7. Maha on June 23, 2016 10:19 pm

      Nice one. I like naughty rag

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:02 am

        Ha ha ha I too like naughty rag tnk u maha darling

    8. Aneri on June 23, 2016 10:20 pm

      Are u from Karnataka. ..episode is good

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:03 am

        Noo my mother toung is telugu

    9. lata on June 23, 2016 10:21 pm

      A treat today.actually if u could post one more.greedy me??but couldn’t help.ya ragini will make him love by her sweet innocent acts.as she is making me?

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:05 am

        Ha ha ha thats soo sweet of u tnk u latha darling

    10. Crazygirl on June 23, 2016 10:21 pm

      Superb

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:05 am

        Tnk u crazy darling

    11. Rasha on June 23, 2016 10:21 pm

      pavani this was really loving ff yar.. ur doing good sense in this coz it’s the real practical life which we r leading.. but rag wow how cool, naughty & sweet.. laksh he is so awesome..

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:06 am

        Tnk u rasha darling I too want to show some reality

    12. sherin on June 23, 2016 10:21 pm

      wow very nice diii….awesome

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:07 am

        Tnk I sherin darling

    13. Sanam on June 23, 2016 10:23 pm

      Thnkzz for ragsan… Update nxt part soon.. Waitng for dat

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:08 am

        Ya I will try to update it soonsoon tnk u sanam darling

    14. khusubu on June 23, 2016 10:27 pm

      nice

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:08 am

        Tnk u khusubu darling

    15. viviyen.mary on June 23, 2016 10:35 pm

      Nice

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:09 am

        Tnk u mary darling

    16. keerthu on June 23, 2016 10:36 pm

      Its awesome Akka

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:09 am

        Tnk u keerthu darling

    17. Pammy on June 23, 2016 10:43 pm

      Awesome……….luvd ragsan:-* ragini z too cut:-*e

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:10 am

        Tnk u pammy darling

    18. azure on June 23, 2016 11:07 pm

      this was really cute. loved ragsan in this

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:12 am

        Tnk u azure darling after two days nice to see u

    19. little princess on June 23, 2016 11:23 pm

      Oh my dear sis..u have done a great job…this episode is awesome n awesome…. Loved it to the core…ragsan scenes were really funny as well as loving especially abt pummy aunty…i just loved laksh alot…his character is really good…the way he love n care for swara is so nice..as u know i am swasan fan but still i love laksh n ragini in ur ff as their characters are so special…keep on writing this ff…i am eagerly waiting for next episode… Update next part asap…i am really excited..make it a long one…try to write more than 1 episode a day if u can…its bcoz now i am too much excited to know further..thanks for such wonderful ff…love u sissyyyy…

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:13 am

        Oh really soo sweet of u as a swasan fan u r liking it iam glad to listen to it nd love u too darling

    20. megha123 on June 23, 2016 11:24 pm

      Awsm akka can’t describe how much I’m giggling reading ur ff. Loved ragsan very much akka❤❤

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:13 am

        Tnk u megha darling

    21. Nami on June 23, 2016 11:42 pm

      Awww. Ragsan r soo cute. Pavani Di u r an awesome writter.

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:14 am

        Tnk u nami darling

    22. Amna on June 24, 2016 12:13 am

      Raglak are more adorable in this one. I m loving them. ??

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:15 am

        Tnk u amna darling

    23. Yashal on June 24, 2016 12:56 am

      Ragsan are so cute ??

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 6:16 am

        Tnk u yashu darling

    24. Lila on June 24, 2016 8:23 am

      Lovely ep

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:50 am

        Tnk u lila darling

    25. SPP on June 24, 2016 9:21 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Laksh is so caring and Ragsan scenes were too adorable
      Eagerly waiting for the next one……….

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:50 am

        Tnk u spp darling

      • SPP on June 24, 2016 9:59 am

        U r welcome

    26. S priya on June 24, 2016 12:19 pm

      Loved ragini

    27. piya on June 24, 2016 2:48 pm

      awesome

    28. Priya15 on June 24, 2016 4:29 pm

      amazing di….ragini is lovely…

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