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Home»Fan Fiction»U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 23)
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U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 23)

risaBy risaJune 19, 201618 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi, im back! And also i felt bad at number of comments…… 🙁 i wanted to tell something before i begin…. so yesterday i sat next to my friend who was reading my ff(she dint knew i write ffs). I asked her if she would commemt… she said that she was nervous to comment n give her veiws and upon that was lazy to give any further ideas…. i felt so bad 🙁 🙁 ….plz comment guys…..i feel happy to answer them… if there r 40 comment then i will answer each of them until they become 80! So plz comment….i wanna know ur veiws…..n now with the episode…..

At a street
Yuvi continuously ran at high spees. Twinkle kept following him. He reached a nearby hospital n entered in. Twinkle too entered but was shocked. Yuvi went to a particular room in a hurry. Twinkle peeped in. It was anita! Yuvi sat beside her.
Yuvi: mom! Mom!
Anita got up.
Anita: yuvi? Y r u here?
Yuvi: i got a call from the hospital authorities…..
Anita: u can go back now….
Yuvi: i wont go back….y dont u take care of urself… u didnt take ur medicine on time n fainted…. whats this carelessness mom?
Anita: oh so u care about me? Y this care, huh? U dont love ur mom….if u did u wouldnt cheat me n be engaged in a relationship with leela’s daughter…
Yuvi: mom its my decision to choose the one i love….it doesnt mean i dont love u mom…i do love u more than myself….
Anita: if u do….then leave twinkle n go home with ur mom….
Yuvi was shocked. Twinkle was shocked.
Anita: u have one weeks time…..answer as soon as possible…

At taneja house
Leela was broken. She sat on the sofa thinking of twinkle.
Leela: my daughter chose him….but he is anita’s son….but my daughter also cant be wrong..no…
Such confusion struck her time to time.

Outside hospital
Yuvi sat on a bench. Twinkle came there too n sat beside him.
Twinkle: u can leave me…. ur mom is important for u….
Yuvi didnt answer. Twinkle got worried.
Twinkle got up. Yuvi turned around to see what happened. She signed him to stand. Yuvi stood as ordered. Twinkle gave him a tight slap. Yuvi was shocked. The people round them shocked.
Twinkle: someone help me! This guys is trying to get cosy with me!
Women came forward with chapal.
Women: get lost!!! Otherwise ur beautiful face and our chappal!!!!
The ladies came forward. Yuvi got scared.
Yuvi: twinkle what did u do now? What if they really put one on my face….
Twinkle: let them put….u r ignoring ur gf then stubborn bf like u should be beaten up n thought a lesson.
Yuvi: sorry sorry my janglii billi will never ignore u ok….
Twinkle smiles.
Twinkle: soory to disturb u all! It was just a prank!
The ladies got angry n left. Other people cleared. Yuvi took sigh of relief. Twinkle laughed. Yuvi gets angry. Twinkle runs. He chases her.

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Episode 24 to be out soon. Plz comment.

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    18 Comments

    1. Laddoo on June 19, 2016 4:17 pm

      Risa risa risa…..y to fear Ishani is here….well, Ishani is my real name. Risa, dnt get disheartened yaar. We all love u nd ur ff, ok? Tc…

      • risa on June 19, 2016 5:19 pm

        Tq laddoo….. love u n ur os was just fab… 🙂

    2. Laddoo on June 19, 2016 4:18 pm

      Risa we all love ur ff….dnt wry just keep writing….love u….take care..

      • risa on June 19, 2016 5:20 pm

        Thank u for always supporting me laddoo. 🙂 🙂 🙂

    3. Maanvi on June 19, 2016 4:29 pm

      Risa don’t feel bad we are here to comment for u and don’t ask people for comments they will give them to u on their own u can’t force them !!!
      Sorry if u feel bad??

      • risa on June 19, 2016 5:21 pm

        How can i feel bad? Thanks for advice 🙂 i will now only request not force. N the person reading this comment….. if u like my ff then do comment…not forcing… 🙂

    4. Sparkle on June 19, 2016 4:39 pm

      Awesome. Who will yuvraj choose now. Continue soon. And dont be upset because of less comments. Just be confident about your story. It is so good.

      • risa on June 19, 2016 5:25 pm

        Who will yuvi choose….. haha wont reveal so easily 😉 ya n thanks for ur comment sparkle…. 🙂

    5. Zain on June 19, 2016 4:47 pm

      Awesome yaar me a silent reader. … bt nw onwards I’ll comment.. don’t b upset. …

      • risa on June 19, 2016 7:45 pm

        Thanks…. plz comment always k….thanks for comment again 🙂

    6. sana on June 19, 2016 4:55 pm

      nyc risa ..plzzzzzzzzzz dnt get disapointd 4rm coments ..btw update was awesme

      • risa on June 19, 2016 7:29 pm

        Thanks sana. Not dissappointed at all. 🙂

    7. Sayeeda on June 19, 2016 5:15 pm

      Yrr Risa this is not done… plzzz dear don’t get upset with the no of comments infact u should feel happy that their r many ppl who r waiting for ur ff eagerly …one is I among them; Till yesterday I was also heartbroken seeing less no of comments on my ff but many of them made me realize that their r many silent one’s reading it out.. so relax dear …don’t take tension ..
      Episode was amazing …waiting for next one…. love u ..

      • risa on June 19, 2016 7:30 pm

        Thanks sayeeda. Ur ff rocks yaar…. next epi….gonna blow u up! =)

    8. ? on June 19, 2016 6:46 pm

      awesome risk. ????

      • risa on June 19, 2016 7:46 pm

        Thanks. Lol. I again dont no ur name.

    9. Manny on June 19, 2016 10:15 pm

      Nice episode, and dun be disheartened dear ,we will be always there to comment ur FF. I’m sure other people will comment soon. 😀

    10. rashiverma2199 on June 19, 2016 11:47 pm

      Awesome Risa….good work…..

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