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Home»Fan Fiction»I know I am blind… but we finally met during the rainfall….episode 2
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I know I am blind… but we finally met during the rainfall….episode 2

Nusz KhanBy Nusz KhanJune 17, 2016Updated:June 17, 2016119 Comments15 Mins Read
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I know I am blind… but we finally met during the rainfall…. (Episode 2)
Guys every episode has a title so I will always add all the links if you missed any episodes… 10-12 shots… If you want I will make it longer… I think you guys know me…. But hi guys I am any guesses….… This is my second one shot ever … I already have written a Fan-Fiction calllledddddddddddddddd Destiny vs. Love.) And I am still writing it… I hope you guys can read it and tell me if you liked it or not… But anyways this is my second one shot with a few episodes… Please don’t hate on me… I am not from Asia I am from England so please do bear with me!!!! If I do anything wrong… Anyways let’s start!!! (I am Nusz aha)

Link for episode 1:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-belong-hiding-guess-wrote-episode-1/

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During the night (Around 12am)
Ragini’s room….
Ragini’s Point of View
“The dark side never showed me anything… After coming home from the big heavy rain shower…. I feel something so different”
Ragini touched her wet hair… She then closed her eyes and remember that moment in the rain….
“Flashback”
“I am thinking…. He was so close to me…. But when I felt his face…. I feel something different about him…”
When he was walking away after saving her… She sees him with a stick….
“What’s so different about him?? I feel like I know him so well….”
Sanam Re plays….
O ho…

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
“The misty night with all the beautiful flowers around… The dark night felt like something different… A mint flavor of love… But why does everything go away so quickly”
He walked and walked…. She realizes… the way he was touching the door of his car….
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
“The wind was blowing so hard… You can hear the voices… But who was he… I want to see his face…. But then he turns away and leaves….”
O ho…
Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
“He left without saying anything… He didn’t even look directly in my eye… The guy was wearing glasses… He was in pain and I knew that”
She started shaking because of the rain… Then a Taxi Cab comes and asks her to get on… She thinks for a moment where the cab came from… because she never called anyone…. The cab man tells her that this place is not safe and you should go home…
“Misty lights… but I felt safe in his arms… but why did he hold me so tightly…. Why does he look like something big is going to happen…”

Ragini thought for a moment under the delightful rain… she realized that the guy might be blind… and couldn’t see… but had some feelings that he is hiding from other and doesn’t want to express it…. She goes inside the cab and it drives away very quickly….
“Flashback Ends”
Ragini was sitting on her bed…. Swiping her night light on and off…. She was still thinking about that guy she met… Ragini really wanted to see him again….
“I want to see what guy is hiding and what’s he going through…”
She then turned off her light… and the room was fully dark… Ragini looks through the window and sees the rain…. She smiles a little bit… Then Ragini pulls her blanket and lies down on the bed… She slowly closes her eye…
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A dark room….
A guy was holding a stick and started walking through the place…. And then he bumps into something and tripped on the floor… His glasses fell off and he was lying down on the ground… With a sad face… tears fell off from his eyes…
Guy’s Point Of View

“What a life I have… I lost my whole family because they think I am not responsible… but they don’t know how much I am suffering through life… Only person who understood me was my Ma…”
Tears fell from his eyes… He was in so much pain… The guy wanted to cry so much but he couldn’t make himself… he felt like a thousand things going through his head…
“Why god… I can’t see anything because yes I know I am blind but we finally met in the rainfall”
He realized what he said… This guy loved a girl years back… who betrayed him… She liked his brother… and only used him for his money but then she changed and said sorry I can’t be with you… he felt like crying… They have been together for almost two years… and she would always treat him so badly in front of people…. One day he got into a car accident because of his family disowning him and the girl breaking his heart really badly… His mother knew her son would never do anything wrong so she left the family to be with him… Later on she finds out her son has lost the vision of seeing and she becomes shattered… The mother promises never to go back to the house until they find out the truth themselves… She took care of her son has much as she can…? The guy starts looking around the floor for his stick and glasses… He finds the stick but not the glasses and goes near the bedside and sits on the ground…
“Today I have never felt this much pain… I don’t even know if someone is passing by me… But how did I know that girl was about to get hit by a car… What relationship do I have with her…? I know it’s not the same girl I loved… It’s someone else… But who is she?? How do I know her… Why did I only save her when everyone is dying every day?
He then tries to remember the moment he shared with the other girl… But then remembers the incident of tonight under the rain while Sanam re continues…
O ho…
Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai

Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai
“Why does everything feel so dark around me…? I promised myself I will never fall in love again… That’s my promise and I don’t care if people don’t understand me…. But that girl I felt so different around her… I know I can’t see her but I just know I am right”
A voice echoed…. “Hello”
The guy was confused….
“Who’s there?”
“I am here to help you” (Echo)

“But help me with what”
“I know that you were hurt in the past but why don’t you give another chance” (Echo)
“I don’t believe in love… look what happened to me… I lost my vision of seeing”
“But you still can feel the person… just give it a chance” (Echo)
“Please leave me alone… I don’t want to talk about it”
“I promise you will fall in love again” (Echo)
“LEAVE ME ALONE GOD SAKE”
He let out a scream and his mom rushed into his room…. The lady then runs towards him and the guy hugs her tightly
“Ma I am done with life… I’ve lost everything”
The lady then replied back
“I promise everything will be fine soon” (Lady)
He tried his best to stop crying but it got even worse…
“Ma I lost the girl I really loved who left me for my brother… My family thinks I am on the problem in their lives… Who do you think would fall in love with a blind guy like me??”
She saw tears falling from eyes and felt really bad
“You’re someone and just because you blind doesn’t mean a girl won’t love you…” (Lady)
He then got confused…
“What do you mean Ma?? You think everything is alright now”
She then showed him something….

“I know you can’t see… but that girl who will fall in love with you… She will be someone who doesn’t care who you’re… that’s my promise” (Lady)
He then took his stick and got up and went near the window
“I was someone Ma… but now I am nobody…”
She then said something….
“You’re Sanskar Maneshwari and the son of Sujata’s”
He then remembers the moments of his past….
“Ma I want to be left alone”
Sujata then replies “If you say so Sanskar” (She leaves seeing Sanskar remembering his good memories when he wasn’t blind)
Sanskar then slides down the wall and cries in pain….
“GOD PLEASE?? WHAT DID I EVER DO?”
He then starts crying and remembering the flashback of his accident…Slowly he closes his eyes and tries sleeping….
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Ragini’s House
Ragini wakes up early in the morning…. She goes near her closet and picks an outfit to wear because she was going to the temple….
Ragini: Today is a big day for me… I am going to the mental health for Blind/Death people… I really hope I can cure them with my love and care…
Ragini then leaves the room and goes to the living room where her Dadi is still mad about the wedding thing…
Ragini: Dadi you still mad at me about yesterday night?
Dadi: I am mad because you were in the rain and didn’t take an umbrella
Ragini: But I am fine Dadi

Janki: You were coughing yesterday (Janki comes carrying a bowl of soup for Ragini)
Ragini: What is this Ma?
Janki: You’re going to have soup before leaving the house
Ragini: But Ma I need to go to the Temple first and I will be late for my first meeting
Dadi: Well this is your fault, but you have to eat is before leaving
Ragini: That’s not fair (She folds her arms in anger)
Dadi: It’s fair enough; Also Janki let me know if she drank the soup
Ragini: Wow Dadi you’re so overprotected and where are you going?
Dadi: I am going to meet someone for the house holding?
Ragini: House Holding?
Janki looks at Dadi and says no…
Janki: She means if there are any new houses opened
Ragini: We don’t need a new house…
Janki: She’s helping her friend find a new house…
Ragini: Wait what friend?
Dadi: Stop asking so many questions and drink your soup… I will ask Janki through the phone if you finished your soup…
Ragini: Oh great…
Janki: Now here take your soup…
Ragini quickly takes the soup and leaves the place but before she does…
Ragini: Bye Ma… you’re the best and thanks for the lunchbox (She kisses her on the cheeks and leaves)
Janki smiles while Ragini leaves the house…
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Sanskar’s house

Sujata: Sanskar you’re going to the mental Health for Deaf/Blind place
Sanskar: Ma please leave me alone (starts walking with his stick)
Sujata: Sanskar listen to me…
Sanskar: Don’t ruin my mood again….
Sujata: Stop acting like a kid…
Sanskar: I am kid… happy I am one…
Sujata: Why are you acting like this?
Sanskar: I think you should know by now…
Sujata: What’s your problem?? Can’t you see the pain that your mother is going through…?
Sanskar: Can’t you I can’t be a man who would go to the store and buy things for his mother… or do any kind of job…
Sujata: Sanskar please listen to me…

Sanskar: Ma, I’ve no future…. I am a blind man…
Sujata: But please for my sake… let’s go to that place… At least something can change in your life…
Sanskar: No Ma please I don’t want to go…
Sujata: Not even for your Ma?
Sanskar really loves his Ma and wants to see again… So he finally agrees…
Sujata: Thank you so much Sanskar… I promise everything will be fine now….
Sanskar (In mind): I am sorry Ma but I will never get my eye sight back…. But I will do what you want because I couldn’t give you anything other than pain…. Because of a girl I loved so much…
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At the Temple
Ragini sees the Temple from far and runs towards it… She takes her sandals off and runs up the stairs… She then rings the bell of the temple… Ragini starts praying…
Ragini: Ma today is a big day for me… Where I am going to go treat people… I really want to bring happiness around them… I just hope you can fulfill my promise…
Ragini hears the bells ringing and the wind is blowing so hard all of a sudden… She turns around and sees a guy which looked like that guy who saved her… She runs down the temple stairs and wears her sandals and runs after him…
Saajna plays from the movie (I me Aur Hum)

“The wind was blowing so hard”
“But a love story was about to start between a blind man and a sweet girl…”
“Saajna.. Saajna… Ek tujhko hi bas dekh kar Bhooli mujhko hi meri nazar Tujhko shayad nahi hai khabar Tujhko jeete hain hum kis kadar”
She walked towards him but it turned out to be another guy… Then she whispered something…
“Why did I leave the temple just because of that guy I met yesterday…? Is it because of the rain moment…?”

Then Ragini starts running faster because the wind was getting stronger… Then Sanskar is in his car with his mother… remembering the moments of his past… Ragini feels nervous entering the Blind/Deaf Health Care…
“Jude jo tere khawab se Toh toote hum neend se Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna Tu haathon mein toh hai mere Hai kyun nahi laqeeron mein Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna”
Ragini then starts entering the Health Care and the wind blows even harder… The car stops and Sujata takes Sanskar out…
“Tere bina kabhi raatein na ho meri Tere kareeb ho, mere yeh din sabhi (x2)”
Ragini then says something….
“Why do I feel like the guy is here… but he I didn’t even see his face… and why would he come here… He looked like a rich guy who would get help anything time…”
“Jude jo tere khawab se Toh toote hum neend se Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna Tu haathon mein toh hai mere Hai kyun nahi laqeeron meinYeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna”
Sanskar enters the health care with his mother… and Ragini’s hair starts blowing… She then turns around and sees nobody there…
“Tu saath hai agar Tanha kyu hai safar Itna toh bata mujheKyu hai mujhse bekhabar (x2)”
Sanskar goes into the room where the blind people are… He sits on the chair and Ragini was talking to the boss who told her to teach them today…
“Jude jo tere khawab se Toh toote hum neend se Yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Saajna”
Ragini was really happy for her job she enters the room and sees all the people… But Sanskar was turned around the other way…
“Tu Haathon mein tho hai mere”
She then starts talking to the people and introducing herself… Ragini feels happy while Sanskar feels depressed…
“Hai kyun nahi laqeeron mein yeh kaisa tera ishq hai Sajana”
The episode ends with the music and Ragini and Sanskar’s faces…
Moral- “Remember not everything happens so quickly… so take things very lightly and one day you will be smiling too”

“If you guys want me to make this Fan-Fiction longer let me know”

Recap: Ragini is introducing herself to the people… She gets along with everyone accept Sanskar… Ragini see Sanskar sad and tries to cheer him up… But he drops a glass in anger… She asks him why you are so angry at everyone… He says “Do you know the meaning of love and how a girl broke my heart”… The song Izjaat plays while Sanskar is holding her hand and Ragini staring at him…
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Okay guys I am planning to end my Fan-Fiction Sanskar: will you marry me? Ragini: Yes I will… because I don’t think that is very interesting but for enjoy this few shots episodes… of Ragsan… Also please do comment it will be thankful… Anyways enjoy this short story for now!!!… Next one will be super long aha…
Other Fan-Fictions by me (is below)
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Here’s the links (Other Fan-Fiction by me)
Destiny vs love (Based on Thapki Pyaar Ki, Qubool Hai and Jamai Raja)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+Thahaan

A one shot on Ragsan (Based on Swaragini)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-ragini-will-soul-mate-ragini-always-willmere-haath-mein-os/
Sanskar: Will you marry me, Ragini: Yes Sanskar I will (Based on Swaragini) (I will be ending this soon)

http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Sanskar%3A+Ragini+will+you+marry+me%3F%3F+Ragini%3A+Yes+Sanskar+I+will+%28%28%3A

Qubool Hai love like Beintehha (Based on Beintehha and Qubool Hai)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=qubool+hai+Beintehha

The dark side that everyone sees but not the light side (Based on The Vampire Dairies with shorts stories of Ragsan, Thahaan and Asya at the ending for a treat)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dark-side-everyone-sees-not-light-side-tvd-intro/

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(By the way, if you’re reading this ff, please do comment your ideas and how is the story going for you. Also love you all aha x)
Btw I’ll post the next episode when I have time after Ramadan, Thank you so much for enjoying this, please do comment and silent readers I need to know if you want me to make this Fan-Fiction longer or not!! Till then enjoy Episode 2!! (Also there might be some grammar errors because I didn’t read over my work aha)

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    119 Comments

    1. Sanam Sania on June 17, 2016 12:23 pm

      Wow Nusz… this is so different and rlly gud… i lve it so mch… I cant believe it because blind lve i so diffeent.. you rock

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:11 pm

        Thank you so much Sanam Hun, you’re very sweet aha.

        ~Nusz

    2. Sanam Sania on June 17, 2016 12:23 pm

      Post nxt one asap 🙂

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:11 pm

        I will soon Hun!! Keeping smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    3. Akshata on June 17, 2016 12:29 pm

      beautiful story.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:12 pm

        Thank you so much Akshata Hun.

        ~Nusz

    4. Nahiiiii on June 17, 2016 12:30 pm

      Hey Sissy!!! I loved this hehe it was so cute!!! You’re a doll love you hehhe

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:12 pm

        Thank you so much Nahii Hun, love you too my sissy.

        ~Nusz

    5. Nahiiiii on June 17, 2016 12:31 pm

      Also Ramadan Iftar at my house 😀

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:13 pm

        Oh my god today was a blast, your mom cooks so well, love you Hun Muahhh.

        ~Nusz

    6. sujata on June 17, 2016 12:35 pm

      Nice Nusz 🙂 Your stories always make me happy and this is my favorite one right now! keep smiling bright girl

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:13 pm

        Thank you so much Sujata Hun, and I am happy you always enjoy my Fan-Fictions, you’re such a doll!!! always keeping smiling!!

        ~Nusz

    7. Sonya on June 17, 2016 12:43 pm

      Superb update dear
      Ragini start feeling something for sanskaar ?
      Will sanskaar become her friend ??
      Sanskaar fast is really sad
      Poor him suffered a lot
      Who’s the girl who betrayed him ???

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:15 pm

        Thank you so much Sonya!! Ragini doesn’t know it’s him…. But she will soon!!! Sanskar is going through a lot!!! But soon he will aha!!! Yes Sanskar’s past is bad… You will find out who the girl is, thank you so enjoying Hun, keeping smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:16 pm

        Thank you so much for enjoying Hun*
        That’s what I met to say xx,

        ~Nusz

    8. ruby on June 17, 2016 12:47 pm

      Awesome Nusz the promo was so cute “Why do you care” Man I really miss Ragsan so much 🙁 thanks for this awesome ff

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:17 pm

        Thank you so much Ruby and yes she does care!! and Ikr I miss Ragsan too :((( They were so cute together and you’re welcome Hun… Keeping smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    9. Roshni on June 17, 2016 12:58 pm

      Nice nusz you a gud writer

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:18 pm

        Thank you so much Roshni Hun, keeping smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    10. SPP on June 17, 2016 12:59 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
      Loved it a lot dear
      Waiting for the next one…….

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:19 pm

        Thank you so much Spp, I am so happy you enjoyed this!!, I will post the next one Asap!! Take care and keeping smiling like always Hun.

        ~Nusz

    11. nitu1992 on June 17, 2016 1:03 pm

      It’s interesting… brilliant… keep writing.. waiting for next part

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:20 pm

        Thank you so much Nitu Hun, Yes I will keep writing for you guys!! and yes I will post the next one asap!!, Take care and keeping smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    12. Nandani on June 17, 2016 1:07 pm

      Wondeful epi nusz (:

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:20 pm

        Thank you so much Nandani Hun, keeping smiling like Always.

        ~Nusz

    13. kriya on June 17, 2016 1:11 pm

      very gud

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:19 pm

        Thank you so much Kriya, keep smiling like always Hun.

        ~Nusz

    14. mimi on June 17, 2016 1:16 pm

      Wow it was damn gud… I cried reading it

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:21 pm

        Thank you so much Mimi Hun, and sorry for making you cry Hun :((.

        ~Nusz

    15. mimi on June 17, 2016 1:16 pm

      Also keep smiling 😀

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:21 pm

        Keeping smiling too Mimi, you’re such a sweetheart aha.

        ~Nusz

    16. bani on June 17, 2016 1:22 pm

      Wow girl keep writing it’s so awesome!!!! ROCK IT

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:22 pm

        Thank you so much Bani Hun, yes I will keep writing aha and keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    17. virtina on June 17, 2016 1:25 pm

      lovely amazing

      you’re smart

      <333333

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:23 pm

        Thank you so much Virtina Hun, aw I am not smart!! But thanks so much, keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    18. priya on June 17, 2016 1:27 pm

      This is so awesome, how do you write so well??? Nami tu (you’re veery talented) Ragsan so cute and the rain shower, post the next episode soon I like it a lot 🙂

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:29 pm

        Thank you so much Priya Hun!! I have no talent but I am really happy you loved the Ragsan Rain Shower aha!! I will post the next episode Hun!!! Keep smiling Hun ((::::

        ~Nusz

    19. Amna on June 17, 2016 1:29 pm

      A very unique concept . I m eager to know how she gets him out of his depression.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:32 pm

        Thank you so much Amna Hun, You will get to know everything in the upcoming episode and keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    20. Milly on June 17, 2016 1:32 pm

      My girl Nuszzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz this story of Ragsan is hot af

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:33 pm

        Thank you so much Milly Hun, and how is it hot, lol you make me laugh my bestie aha.

        ~Nusz

    21. Milly on June 17, 2016 1:42 pm

      post dvl I have been waiting for that like forever 🙁

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:35 pm

        I will post the episode soon Milly, really busy and also Ramadan is going on too!! But I will try because I started writing episode 22 now aha, Love you Hun.!

        ~Nusz

    22. rina on June 17, 2016 1:43 pm

      Mashallah what a story, you’re very inspiring.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:36 pm

        Thank you so much Rina, and I am not inspiring I was inspired by people!! But that was really sweet of you!! Keep smiling like always Hun.

        ~Nusz

    23. Chhahat on June 17, 2016 1:46 pm

      Awesome. Loved the way u wrote the story. The way u expressed sanskar’s emotions was amazing. Simply loved it

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:38 pm

        Thank you so much Chhahat Hun, I am happy you enjoyed the storyline!! and the way I expressed Sanskar’s feelings towards his life!! Also keeping smiling like always!!

        ~Nusz

    24. belina on June 17, 2016 1:52 pm

      Hello Nusz I love Raglak a lot and you know that, but this Ragsan FF made me fall in love with them <333 you're just so amazing!!! XDD

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:39 pm

        Hey Belina, I love Raglak too!!! But I am happy you’re enjoying this Ragsan Fan-Fiction and you fell in love with it?? That’s so sweet!! and you’re amazing too Hun!! Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    25. tori on June 17, 2016 1:55 pm

      The way you said the feelings I can feel it… but the temple scene when the wind was blowing… it was cute and also sajaana I loved this story a lot

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:43 pm

        Thank you so much Tori Hun, and I am happy you can express the feelings that’s really sweet and yes I loved writing the Temple scene when the wind was blowing xx!! I love that song Sanja!! Also keeping smiling like always Hun.

        ~Nusz

    26. Vini on June 17, 2016 1:58 pm

      Nice concept… you nde me hve tears… lve ragsan..

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:45 pm

        Thank you so much Vini, sorry for making you cry Hun :(( and I love Ragsan too. Keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    27. Anjali on June 17, 2016 2:13 pm

      Nice nusz, you a vry good one

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:47 pm

        Thank you so much Anjali Hun!!! Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    28. jenny on June 17, 2016 2:16 pm

      god bless you and your writing 😉 love you girl

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:48 pm

        Thank you so much Jenny Hun, I am happy you loved this storyline!! Love you too my doll Jenny.

        ~Nusz

    29. helly on June 17, 2016 2:17 pm

      nice ragsan but swasan is btter but your story vry god

      • helly on June 17, 2016 2:17 pm

        good*

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:50 pm

        Thank you so much Helly Hun, Yes I love Ragsan, Swasan is not my favorite but they’re okay aha!! Keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    30. lovely on June 17, 2016 2:17 pm

      awesome yar, don’t end your other ff also

      post it regularly dear

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:51 pm

        Thank you so much Lovely Hun, and I will try not to end it because you guys are awesome Aha!! Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    31. sss on June 17, 2016 2:23 pm

      awesome n emotional…well if the story so good that how ca i say end it soon but its ur choise end it or not but i really like the story….waiting fir next part

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:53 pm

        Thank you so much sss, I am really happy you loved the storyline!!! If you don’t want me to end I won’t, really happy you’re loving Ragsan in this Fan-Fiction!! Well I will post the next one asap!! Keep smiling like always!!!

        ~Nusz

    32. cutiie on June 17, 2016 2:26 pm

      This is ragsan ff

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:52 pm

        Yes Cutie this is a Ragsan Fan-Fiction, keep smiling.

        ~Nusz

    33. archi on June 17, 2016 2:28 pm

      awesum story
      update nxt asap

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:54 pm

        Thank you so much Archi Hun!! and yes I will update soon aha. Keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    34. Piya on June 17, 2016 2:33 pm

      Awesome story… nd continue it nd also continue ur other ff will u marry me ragini??

    35. cute girl on June 17, 2016 3:04 pm

      superbbb….mindblowing….

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:55 pm

        Thank you so much Cute girl, I am happy you’re enjoying Ragsan in this Fan-Fiction aha, Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    36. j on June 17, 2016 3:21 pm

      superb update next part soon other ff also

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:56 pm

        Thank you so much J!! I will update soon and maybe I will start writing the other one too, keep smiling like always!!

        ~Nusz

    37. Rithika on June 17, 2016 4:03 pm

      it’s awesome

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:58 pm

        Thank you so much Rithika Hun, keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    38. Halima.SuNusHaZuRah on June 17, 2016 4:27 pm

      Awesome Nuchi… Loved it!! Loved the song Sajnaa and the scenes that were shown… You rocked it,
      Love you?
      Fee Amanallah?

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 12:59 pm

        Thank you so much Hali or Dalima Hun!! I am happy you loved the song Sajnaa!!! Love you my doll and keep smiling like always but we talk on Skype 24/7 lol.

        ~Nusz

    39. Ana on June 17, 2016 4:32 pm

      awesome please make it ragsan

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:00 pm

        Yes Ana this is a Ragsan Fan-Fiction!!! and thank you so much Ana Hun, keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    40. Joona on June 17, 2016 5:55 pm

      Unique story line.. Really nice…
      I loved it dear…
      Keep writing…

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:01 pm

        Thank you so much Jo!!! I am really happy you enjoyed it, and yes I will keep writing!! Keep smiling Hun aha.

        ~Nusz

    41. Venni on June 17, 2016 7:24 pm

      Superb

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:02 pm

        Thank you so much Venni Hun, keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    42. ammy on June 17, 2016 10:13 pm

      Nice dear.i like sanskar:ragini will you marry me? ragini:yes sanskar i will……ff so much

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:04 pm

        Thank you so much Ammy Hun, aw you love that Fan-Fiction!! I will start writing it again, thanks for your comment it means a lot Hun…. Keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    43. azure on June 17, 2016 11:40 pm

      This was really nice nusz. So is Ragini a doctor or something or a counsellor? Sorry couldn’t make that out. I guess he was in love with Swara.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:07 pm

        Thank you so much Azure Hun!! Well Ragini is trying to become a doctor, but she is training herself aha!! Well you will find out who the girl is soon aha…. Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    44. Sanju on June 17, 2016 11:45 pm

      Aweesomee Bus!!! I reaalllly liked it…poor sanskar??who broke his heart??….superbb episode☺?
      Take care Luvvya??

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:08 pm

        Thanks Hanju, I am really happy you enjoyed this episode!! Yes poor Sanskar!! You will find out who broke his heart soon!!! Love you too Hun Muahhh!! Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    45. Megha on June 18, 2016 12:08 am

      Don’t know why but there wasn’t a comb felt box at the first risk is page, maybe its didn’t load properly ?

      You know the start kind of reminded me of Kitani Mohobbat Hai, girl runoff to catch the train, guy helping her but leaving without showing her face to her ? that was my favourite show ?
      Coming to the risk he, it was fantastic, loved the at you portrayed Sanskar and Ragini’s feelings.
      There meetings were awesome, each one of them. I feel the girl who broke Sanskar’s heart is Swara. Don’t know why but I think it is Swara because Ragini as well needs a closure of her father’s chapter in her life.
      Eagerly waiting for the next episode and for Sujata’s words regarding Sanskar getting a girl who will love him unconditionally no matter what, to turn into reality.
      Update soon.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:11 pm

        Sometimes this website does that lol!!.

        Omggg KMH was my favorite soon!! I love Arohi and Arjun they were so damn cute together!! Like honest to god aha!!! I am really happy that you enjoyed the way I expressed their feelings!!! You will find out everything in the upcoming episodes!! Keep reading and your Fan-Fiction rocks too Hun!!! True love isn’t always around but you will find someone one day aha!!!

        Keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz

    46. sitaram on June 18, 2016 12:45 am

      nice

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:14 pm

        Thank you so much Sitaram, I am really happy you liked it, Keep smiling like always aha…

        ~Nusz

    47. Sunehri on June 18, 2016 8:43 am

      Finally they are letting me comment. . Dus , bus 😛 ok nus … that was really fantastic. . Who broke sanky’s heart ???? Waiting for it 😉 love u bus 😛 dus 😛

      Love u

      Sunehri mehta ( sunuzurahlima besties forever and gabbar’s army 😛 )

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:20 pm

        Thank you so much Buniheri I am really happy you enjoyed it but Balima with Gabbar haha!! talking on Skype 24/7!! also you will know who it it soon!!! Keep smiling like always love you Hun muahhh….

        ~Nusz

    48. Meera on June 18, 2016 1:18 pm

      Wonderful Nusz I enjoyed it a lot… post the next one…

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:27 pm

        Thank you so much Meera Hun and I will post it soon aha, keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    49. Emz fasa on June 18, 2016 1:26 pm

      Awesome 🙂 mindblowing plot

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:34 pm

        Thank you so much Emz Hun, really happy you’re enjoying the storyline aha!! Keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    50. arya on June 18, 2016 1:29 pm

      Wow Nusz you’re rocking all your stories… lovely Ragsan so cute… I think girl is swara… is she negative?? anyhow update soon 🙂

      • arya on June 18, 2016 1:29 pm

        also whre is TPK ff?

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 1:42 pm

        Thank you so much Arya!! I am happy you loved Ragsan in this Fan-Fiction!! You will find out who the girl is soon!! and yes I will update the next episode Asap!! Keep smiling like always Hun aha.

        Also I will post TPK episode really soon aha.

        ~Nusz

    51. Fatarajo on June 18, 2016 1:56 pm

      OMG this is so good nusz the precap is mashallah wow so cute yaar luckily I saw this ff I read only some Swaragini FFs I m planning to start one Swaragini ff I even have the story and characters in my mind but I don’t know if Swaragini fans will read my ff as most don’t know me.
      But ur ff is too good. Ragsan scenes were awesome. I love raglak more. But here I love Ragsan too. This is one of my fav Ragsan ff dear keep it up. Love u

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 18, 2016 2:24 pm

        Thank you so much Farin!! Yes you should really write a Fan-Fiction Rasgan or Raglak!! It would be awesome!! You have great writing skills and you know that aha!!! I am really happy you enjoyed this episode love you Hun!! Keep smiling like always aha, love you.

        ~Nusz

    52. Anamica on June 18, 2016 8:09 pm

      Pls continue sanskar:ragini will you marry me….. pls! Pls!!!!!

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 19, 2016 7:47 am

        Thank you anamica, everyone is saying to continue the other fan-fiction so I will!! Thanks for the vote Hun, keep smiling like always aha.

        ~Nusz

    53. S.Z.F.Z on June 20, 2016 8:33 pm

      Hey Nuszz…it was awesome! A different concept! Nice! I am waiting for it!
      Love u dear!
      Zoyee (That is my nickname 😛 )

      _Zuha Fatima

      { I have read ur FF before as well, but due to some internet problems the comment was not posted sorry for being late 🙁 }

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 21, 2016 9:17 am

        Thank you so much Zuha, you’re amazing Hun!! You’re amazing too Hun aha
        Also keep smiling like always and also remember you’re an amazing writer tt aha.
        Love you Hun

        xx~Nusz

    54. ???... on June 21, 2016 3:32 am

      OMG it was soo gud and emotional literally I kinda had tears in my eyes ur was too gud ???

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 21, 2016 9:18 am

        Thank you do much girl!! You rock aha, I read your Ragsan Fan-Fiction called sorry it was really good but you ended it, do you write any other Fan-Fictions?? If you do let me know asap aha.
        Also I am very happy you enjoyed this episode and sorry for making you cry Hun :(( Anyways keep smiling like always aha tt.

        xx~Nusz

      • ???... on June 21, 2016 5:36 pm

        Sorry to dissapointed u dear but I didn’t write sorry and yh I write 2 ff’s which r called the hart needs what it needs and raglak-yeh kaisi kahani u can read them if u want and I hope u like them ?? but u rocked this well done ?

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 23, 2016 2:41 am

        Now I finally found that who wrote sorry and I will surely read your Fan-Fiction, I hope you can send me the links aha.

        Your Fan-Fiction are rocking I heard from many peoples… Love you keep smiling like always.

        ~Nusz xx

    55. Crazygirl on June 23, 2016 11:14 am

      Awesome

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 23, 2016 10:03 pm

        Thanks crazygirl xx

        Keep smiling like always.

        xx~Nusz

    56. truelove on June 26, 2016 4:38 pm

      amazing episode. i tried to comment on episode 1 but don’t know why some problem shows. any way i love ur both episode.

      • Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on June 27, 2016 11:09 am

        Thank you again Sweta!!

        You’re amazing..!!

        Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx..

        ~Nusz xx.

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