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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan …..Hold my Hand till the last breath …. (Episode 1)
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Manmarziyan …..Hold my Hand till the last breath …. (Episode 1)

BhabyaBy BhabyaJune 14, 201630 Comments4 Mins Read
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ME: A guy wearing specs was lost in a novel by hennery jog n he was engraving his fav c haracter n author’s name by a compass . It was his favourite hobby. He was none other than Arjun.
NOW GUYS AT SOME POINTS I WILL COME BUT NOW ARJUN WILL TELL HIS STORY TO U….
Hennery jog Ah! What a writer I love his book and I love books. I can spend my days reading books. I don’t need people around me pass my days. Books are my best friends I can spend my days reading books as they give me better understanding of peoples. Suddenly I felt a tap on my shoulder I found its dad I was ashamed of my deed. I mumbled sorry dad. He spoke softly don’t worry nobody comes to this area except the boys n girls when… he stopped midway seeing I was blushing. He said let it be So lets go to home I have to go to factory also. I nodded positively and we left the library. After college I spend my days reading books here. Its is one of my favourite spot. If books were girls I would have easily dated them.Yay I know how boring I am let it be. Now coming to Auto haunting. I shouted 4 an auto , Dad reluctantly asked are u sure 4 ur decision . I sighed then continued yes dad u know na it’s a once in a lifetime opportunity. Dad said I can understand but ur mom can’t. By the way …. Just then an auto halted infront of us n we jumped into it. So dad continued ur mom has made Doi mach n aaloo postho . I said she can’t bribe me by making my favorite food. We reached home.

(Scene at or dining room)
ME: like every melodramatic mom arjun’s mom nandani was also one of the type. She loved his son more than his life. She looks so young that she sometimes look like Arjun’s sister.
Now coming to track:
The room was filled with the voice of Bengali serials . Mom ‘s eye filled with tears looking angrily at me n asking can’t u stay. U may get lost in that foreign land. I sighed it was not easy to convince mom but I said ma U know it will help me to make a career. Mom’s answer was ready she said u can make a great career here in Delhi itself . I said I’m going to change n said to serve food in my plate. Mom also understood that it was not easy to convince me ofcourse I m his son afterall a lil stubborn… hehe…
I came changing into half black pants n a loose shirt a newspaper spread over the bed had our food served on it . I sat facing mom n baba sat facing both of us laughing as if he was looking a comedy series. Mom was so angry that she did not fed me a bite from her hand. I know its hard for a mom to accept the fact that his child has to stay away from them for sometime. After dinner we went to respective rooms . I could not sleep for two hours as I was chatting with my gf (of course my books). How time passed I didn’t knew n slipped into sleep.
Me: All the best Arjun convince ur mom soon.

HI GUYS DIDN’T KNEW U WILL GIVE SUCH SUPPORT . I WAS OVERWHLEMED BY UR COMMENTS N PLEASE DEAR SILENT READERS DO COMMENT WITH LOVE URS BHABYA. Nxt epi will be on Friday. Hope to meet soon.

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Bhabya

    I AM A STORYTELLER.I LOVE TO DISCOVER ABOUT PEOPLE AND THEIR STORIES. EVERYONE HAS A STORY TO TELL,SOME SHARE AND OTHERS CONFINED IT IN THEIR HEART WITH ITS MEMORIES.

    30 Comments

    1. Jessie on June 14, 2016 9:10 pm

      Superb start.. loved it bhabya.. waiting 4 ur nxt update

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:26 pm

        Thank u. Thank for the encouragement

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:27 pm

        Thank u di feeling lucky that u liked it

    2. Gauri on June 14, 2016 9:10 pm

      Bhabya 🙂 darling this was amazing …waiting for the next one I love the narration 🙂 stay blessed

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:30 pm

        Gauri di thanks a ton for reading. By the wayy sis was asking me about how much ur story is finished?

      • Gauri on June 15, 2016 8:54 am

        If ur asking about mmz i have posted it …

    3. Sweetie on June 14, 2016 9:21 pm

      Well Bhabu..That was an awesome episode.. 🙂 Keep smiling dear.. 🙂

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:31 pm

        Thank u sweetie u r sweet like ur name

    4. Brin on June 14, 2016 9:22 pm

      Awesome episode, brillently well done. 🙂

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:34 pm

        Thank brin feeling overwhelmed by ur comments

    5. Aastha on June 14, 2016 9:33 pm

      nyc…………..plzzzzzzz update soooooooon………….I particularly liked the title……………

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:36 pm

        Thank u aastha for liking the title n thanx for commenting

    6. Meghna shanti on June 14, 2016 9:34 pm

      Nice update dear

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:41 pm

        Thank meghna

    7. suga on June 14, 2016 9:50 pm

      Its really superbbbbbbbb 🙂 arjun n his gf s awesome 🙂

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:44 pm

        Thanx suga dear for commenting

    8. Roma on June 14, 2016 9:50 pm

      Awesome, wowwww bhabu…loved the episode. ..so lovely narration. ..arjun’s gf…books…lol….nandini sad for arjun leaving…..loved it to the core. …keep it up honeyyy. ..will wait for the next episode, love you loads….muaaaaahhhhhh. … 🙂 ….

      • Bhabya on June 14, 2016 10:49 pm

        Thank u So so so much Roma for liking it dis much. Thank for the valuable support it means a lot.

    9. Rosie on June 14, 2016 10:49 pm

      Its really nice…superb….very different kind of Arjun…waiting to read a different story in a new angle…bahut bhala…

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:03 pm

        Thank u rosie di

    10. priya on June 15, 2016 3:50 am

      bhabya you did a great work ………… it was really awesome ………….. eagerly waiting for radhika’s entry ……….. love you ……………tc

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:04 pm

        thanx for commenting but u have to wait for few epi please

    11. Sathya on June 15, 2016 8:21 am

      Its too cool bhabya dear… MMS creates so many good writers… Its really fabulous dear.. Keep continue… All d very best. ?????

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:05 pm

        thanx sathya di… love u bear tight hugs

    12. Sv on June 15, 2016 9:05 am

      Its nice bhabya dear. When will radhika been seen and how will Arjun convince his mom ?? Update soon dear.

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:04 pm

        sure sv di love u

    13. Ritu on June 15, 2016 10:01 am

      amazing start dr..waiting for nxt..post soon..love u..tc

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:05 pm

        thanx ritu for the comment

    14. subha on June 15, 2016 10:31 am

      awesome episode….eagerly waiting next one…..tc

      • Bhabya on June 15, 2016 3:10 pm

        thanx subha

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