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Home»Fan Fiction»U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 8)
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U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 8)

administratorBy administratorJune 3, 201614 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi risa here! I am back. I am first gonna thank the people who relentlessly suppoerted me in my war against ur hater. Ur hater i am really very sorry if think i write crap. Taking ur suggestion i will surely improve my writing n prove to u to what extent i can reach. I thank all my readers n supporters for encouraging me always. Twinj fans, if u wanna comment then comment but use decent language n comment. N my speech is over n i present to u the episode……

In the car
Twiraj felt awkward. Twinkle went for the first time in a guy except raman mamu’s car. N yuvi felt weird as he only took one lady n thats his mom in his car.
Twinkle: hey yuvi, do u have party songs. The loud rock n pop types!
Yuvi: cheeeeee!
Twinkle: cheeee , what cheeee? I luv loud rock n pop songs. u no honey singh n badshah compose rap. I luv that too.
Yuvi: oh god! No wonder ur so…. so not calm.
Twinkle: what do u mean?
Yuvi: u r loud like a home theater system.
Twinkle: what did u say? Home theatre n me? U hear those songs too right?
Yuvi: cheeeeee! Me n hear those type of songs. Not at all! I prefer calm n soft soothing music. Music thay chills the heart. U no like romantic songs. Well whom am i speaking to anyway. A person who has no idea of certain english words….
This hurt twinkle. She felt relly bad at that comment. She is a girl n she does hear romantic songs n she continues to learn new words daily.
Twinkle: yuvi u no what i am dumb and an idiot….
Yuvi: first time u said something right!
Twinkle frowned. She knew he would reply this way.
Yuvi:…..but not so dumb…
Twinkle: (excitedly) i am not dumb!
Yuvi: ya i think so?
Twinkle started celebrating. She jumped up n down.
Twinkle to herself: i am not dumb! I am not dumb! Yahoo!

At the road to enter neighbourhood
Yuvi stopped the car.
Twinkle: what happened now? No music, no entertainment n now no petrol seriously?
Yuvi: who told no petrol? I stopped the car so we dont get caught. U no our moms right.
Twinkle realized about their moms enmity now.
Twinkle: wait a minute…. our moms hate each other….. n our fake bf-gf thing… oh no! What if they get to no about us?
Yuvi:no wonder ur dumb n cant stay out of trouble. Dumbo! Thats y i stopped the car here so no one notices.
Twinkle: ya ya. I no. I was just seeing if u no.
Yuvi just smirked.
Twinkle went out the rest of way walking while yuvi reversed his car n went from a different route.

At taneja house
Twinkle came in. Leela was waiting for her with pinni. ( raman’s wife n twinkles mami)
Leela: welcome home beta!
Twinkle: thanks maa.
N she goes her way to her room to freshen up.

At living room
Twinkle comes back n sits in livingroom along with pinni n leela.
Leela: twinkle how was first day.
Twinkle recalled everything. From separate classes to her deal with yuvi to become his pet dog.
Twinkle: it was ok.
Pinni: oh twinkle i am not getting what u saying. Could u elaborate a little.
( she has funny was of speaking.)
Twinkle: what to say? Nothing great happened…
N she went to her room.

At room
Twinkle was reading comics n was laughing loudly. Suddenly she heard message beep.
Twinkle to herself: who could have messaged me? Maybe chinki?
Twinkle checked it. It was yuvi.
It read: come to my home. Asap!
Twinkle to herself: home? Dont tell me he already built a dog house for me? If he has then i am not listening until he fits n ac there…. wait twinkle have u gone nuts. U n a dog house. No i need to refuse him.
Twinkle went out of her house saying to leela that she is going to meet chinki.

At luthra house gate
Twinkle: no one is there n gate is locked.
Twinkle waited n a hand pulled her.
Twinkle turned round.
It was leela.
Leela: what r u doing here? At luthra gate? Twinkle answer me,
Twinkle was shocked n left speechless.

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Plz comment guys ur comment make mea lot happy. 🙂 plz plz comment.
Bye.

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14 Comments

  1. Rashi on June 3, 2016 5:43 pm

    Omg leela ki entry ….wrong timing…. An twiraj toh Gaye almost ….until there’s any miracle…..luved the ff….

  2. priya on June 3, 2016 6:04 pm

    risa i lyk ur ff./pls stop dog track and start friendship

  3. yagya on June 3, 2016 6:31 pm

    luved ur style of writing and twiraj moments

  4. Iksha on June 3, 2016 7:39 pm

    I am sorry if sound u rude,kindly end the dog track as soon as possible,it is nt that good(to me). I am a silent reader till now.but i feel that other than dog track every thing is fine to me..

  5. iksha on June 3, 2016 7:44 pm

    I am sorry if i sound rude to u. I am a silent reader till now and i admire twiraj pair. kindly end the dog track,except this everything is fine in ur ff.and i liked it too except the dog track.I hope my words doesn’t hurt u.

  6. Maanvi on June 3, 2016 7:58 pm

    Nice but pls stop dragging and show their friendship

  7. Maanvi on June 3, 2016 8:29 pm

    Nice but pls start their friendship atleast in the upcoming parts

  8. Mallu on June 3, 2016 8:58 pm

    Twiraj ka first syappa

  9. Mallu on June 3, 2016 9:00 pm

    Hey risa let them share some personal moments so that they go deeeeeeeep into their love

  10. sam on June 4, 2016 12:25 am

    awesome wonder what will happen now

  11. Sayeeda on June 4, 2016 12:48 pm

    Good yrr ….but felt bad for twinkle…. Leela’s entry at wrong time….let’s see how twinkle will handle the situation….awesome yrr.

  12. risa on June 4, 2016 3:36 pm

    Episode 9 posted. Thanks for ur comment everyone. N about that dog thing. It will be solved in episode 10 my 2nd epic episode. Be sure to comment on episode 9.

  13. yashasvi ( yashu ) on June 4, 2016 4:54 pm

    wowwww this andd the last one was superb sorry i didn’t comment as kal mere bhai ka bday tha…. si u can understand i hope….

    • risa on June 11, 2016 6:22 pm

      I can understand. Thanks for comment.

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