Hey people!!
It is sumo again..
I love writing n ur positve comments really boosts me up…Let me tell u one thing I love writing n dis is d story I wrote a year back..
But will share wid u wid d leads name being SHRAVAN n SUMAN
Dis story is close to my heart n I hope u ll love it too…
Character sketch
Suman Tiwary : a girl full of colors who loves every little thing of her lyf..
She is intelligent n funny yet shy..
Shravan Malhotra: a rich but not dat spoilt brat
He loves his family … N is a heartthrob of his college
Ohh sorry I forgot to tell u I will take d story from shravan n sumans college lyf…
Coming back ,
Aditya khurrana: shravans best friend
Vidhi sharma : sumans bestie
Nia n jea : frnds of sumo
N no dey r’nt sisters..
Rest of d characters will be revealed wid tym…
Story..
Location :In d train ,,
Suman n her mom dad r travelling to Delhi ..
Suman’s POV
so, Delhi tomorrow .. I just wish everything goes well..
M really afraid..
New people , new place no mom n dad..
I hope mujhe koi asa mile wid whom I can share things..
Location: Delhi
A guy is running thru d corridor of law college Delhi ,
Panting .., he said “sirr.. Mayhh.. May I come in!?
Professor: ahh shravan ,, again late
Shravan : no sir ,, just on tym..
The bell rings ..
He smiles..
The professor let’s him in..
Shravan winks at adi n sits beside him…
Adi: dude ,, tu kb sudrega..
Shravan : never..
Precap suman sees shravan n immediately gets attracted to him lyk all the other gals …
So tell me if u lyk it!? Less comments r really discouraging..
Plz appreciate it if u feel lyk… Don’t read silently…
Criticism is also invited..
Lots of love❤
22 Comments
Superb ,awesome intro I loved it .
thanks shiza 😉
superb .. Nice intro.. Is this real story ? ..keep it up..
not really but I enjoy writing n wrote dis story a year back.. ❤
Superb intro….
Nice beginning.
Continue soon..
Waiting for the first part……..
thaks meera … glad u liked it
nice start
so sumo n shravan dosen’t know another still n story will go with their friendship start I’m waiting to see that n their first meet update next part soon
yea… n m sure u ll lyk it… 😛
I have always loved your ff’s.. And this one is amazing as well….
dats sweet.. well I hope it keeps u hooked up.. ❤
nice story…. i liked it….aapne iss se phle bhi ek FF likha tha?? wo bhi mujhe pasnd aaya tha….plsss iss baar ye story puri krna…mid me mt chhoda….plssss it’s a humble request
yaa .. dis tym pkka pura krungi… I m glad u commented thankz…:)
It’s very nice
Nice ff sumo…. but pls make it longer
surely samudra.. keep reading.. thankz
thanks dhara..
Nice intro!! love it!! <3
plzzz make the story longer it's a humble request!!
keep loving… I ll post soon.. ❤
u r too sweet yr Ankita … I ll post really soon…;-)
oops wrong side.. 😀
hiiii sumo….new story ka agla part kb upload kroge aap….I’m waiting….. plssss jaldi se krna…
u r too sweet yr Ankita … I ll post
really soon…;-)