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Home»Fan Fiction»Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 1)
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Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 1)

administratorBy administratorJune 1, 201645 Comments2 Mins Read
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Arjun was reading the letter that is wife had left him with the divorce paper she wanted me to marry Sam and to be happy with her

Arjun: “No Radhika, now that I know I have feeling for you, I will not let you go. I am coming for you Radhika.”

He was about to leave when Suddenly Sam showed up

Sam: “Hi Arjun, I need to tell you that I am in love……”

Arjun: “Before you say anything I want to tell you the truth about why Radhika married me.”

Sam: ” Oh please, I don’t want to talk about that selfish girl. I want to tell you about my feeling.”

Arjun gets angry.

Arjun:”That selfish girl saved your life or else if you had married me, my sister would have killed you.”

Sam is shocked.

Sam:” I don’t understand, why would
Nandini dee want me dead?”

Arjun:”Because she want to hurt your father for rejecting her.”

Sam get another shock

Sam: “Your saying my father and your sister had an affair.”

Arjun:Yes, it was a one night stand your father was never in love with my sister he wanted to go back to his family.”

Sam controls her tears and it dawn on her

Sam: “You were never in love with me, you wanted revenge for your sister and if it wasn’t for Chasni, I would have been dead, oh my god Nandini was brainwashing me against Chasni and what do I do I believe Nandini over Chasni. How do I face my Chasni.”

Sam starts crying.

Arjun: “Sam it is true that I want revenge for my sister but I never want to kill you. It was yesterday that I found out the truth about Nandini. If it wasn’t for Radhika I would be blamed for murdering you.”

Sam: “What are saying.”

Arjun: “As a child Nandini was brain washing me against Khanna family, Sam Nandini killed your brother.”

Sam gets shocked again…..

To be continue

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45 Comments

  1. Gauri on June 1, 2016 9:39 am

    Awesome Brin πŸ™‚ Nandini killed Jai….wow tats a twist πŸ™‚ waiting for the next one

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 5:55 pm

      Thank you so much Gauri, I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  2. Sv on June 1, 2016 9:43 am

    Brin is that you. Man that was way too shocking. This shows another perspective of our manmarziyan . Write more i wanna read them all. Next part should be much bigger . . Hey thanks for one more ff. Update soon eagerly waiting.

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:03 pm

      Yes it is me Brin, thank you so much, I will try to update it soon. πŸ™‚

  3. Aastha on June 1, 2016 9:53 am

    I’m very happy ? that you started another ff………its really nice……..I too am shocked to know that Nandini killed Jai……….ur story is diff and I like it……..plzzz update soooooon………….

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:07 pm

      Thank you so much, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  4. Rg on June 1, 2016 9:58 am

    Hey Brin ,I love it . Pls continue. And give me a big one nxt time. And Nandini killing Jai was a rude shocker … But a awesome twist. Waiting for more.

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:10 pm

      Thank you so much Rg, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  5. Jessie on June 1, 2016 10:17 am

    It’s interesting.. Brin.. whn is d nxt update.
    Hw Arjuu alone got to know abt Nandini.. and she killed jai..!! Getting curious

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:18 pm

      Thank you so much Jessie. You will find out in the next chapter how Arjun will find out the truth. πŸ™‚

  6. Dhara on June 1, 2016 10:19 am

    one confusion from where this story starts?

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:36 pm

      If you remember when Radhika left a note and a divorce paper. Arjun reads it, go to the door Sam shows up, the scene stops there. That is where I started my own plot. I hope there no confusion now. πŸ™‚

  7. Sathya on June 1, 2016 10:30 am

    Great start Brin… ??wow tat was a twist… nice plot.. i like it dear… all. d best dear ???

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:37 pm

      Than you so much Sathya. πŸ™‚

  8. Emz fasa on June 1, 2016 11:09 am

    Awesome πŸ™‚ and this is called twist my god nandini killed jai

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 6:38 pm

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

  9. Ritu on June 1, 2016 12:08 pm

    awesome dr. I loved the twist..update next soon

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 8:16 pm

      Thank you Ritu I will try to update soon. πŸ™‚

  10. Gianna on June 1, 2016 12:16 pm

    Oh Brin u started writing am so happy to see ur name credited. ? Nice start, I see here Nandini also killed Jai. Waiting for the next and stay blessed ???

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 8:20 pm

      Thank you so much Gianna, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  11. Rosie on June 1, 2016 12:47 pm

    Ooooh my sweet brin dear u wrote a ff…m so glad….now m too much happy….n yes I liked your ff…..marvellous….thanks a ton for writing this ff.. ??

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 8:24 pm

      Thank you so much Rosie πŸ™‚

  12. Supriya on June 1, 2016 1:43 pm

    Brin dear superb plot…. Omg nandu killed jai….that’s disgusting… Geez this woman….want to slap her….eagerly waiting for next one…..stay blessed?

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 10:14 pm

      Thank you Supriya, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  13. natasha on June 1, 2016 4:05 pm

    omg brin strted writing her own ff
    congrats dear
    ff is gud plz continue it try to update it daily plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:22 pm

      Thanks Natasha, I will try to update soon πŸ™‚

  14. M on June 1, 2016 4:07 pm

    o wow…..brin wrote something……m eager to read more and more from one of tge craziest fan of mmz

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:24 pm

      Thanks you Maandey πŸ™‚

  15. subha on June 1, 2016 4:54 pm

    awesome episode………..

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:25 pm

      Thank you Subha πŸ™‚

  16. gayathri on June 1, 2016 5:20 pm

    Hey bring its gud Yarr pls do continue….

  17. gayathri on June 1, 2016 5:45 pm

    God sry Yarr its brin srysry pls sry

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:27 pm

      No need to say sorry, thank you for the comment πŸ™‚

  18. Fatarajo on June 1, 2016 5:59 pm

    OMG brin ur ff is so interesting can’t wait for the next update πŸ™‚

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:30 pm

      Thank you Fatarajo πŸ™‚

  19. susi on June 1, 2016 6:31 pm

    Wow brin….awesome start….eagerly waiting for next epi….. Keep rocking dear……all the best for ur future epi…..tc..

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:31 pm

      Thank you Susi πŸ™‚

  20. Roma on June 1, 2016 8:34 pm

    Awesome, wowwww Brin welcome to mmz ff world as writer…I’m so glad for you….lovely narration n very interesting plot n dialogues. …loved it very much. …all the best sweeeeeetheart. …plzzzz continue dear. ..keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:33 pm

      Thank you Roma πŸ™‚

  21. Sweetie on June 1, 2016 8:53 pm

    Good start Brin..Wow!! What a twist in the last line..Nandini killed Jai..OMG!!
    Stay blessed dear.. πŸ™‚

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:34 pm

      Thank you Sweetie πŸ™‚

  22. priya on June 1, 2016 10:55 pm

    nice ……………

    • Brin on June 1, 2016 11:36 pm

      Thank you Priya πŸ™‚

  23. Gayu on June 1, 2016 11:02 pm

    Brin superb I like the plot please update soon

    • Brin on June 3, 2016 12:18 am

      Thank you so much Gayu πŸ™‚

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