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Home»Fan Fiction»But I can- Ishveer OS
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But I can- Ishveer OS

administratorBy administratorMay 29, 201626 Comments3 Mins Read
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“You know well that i won’t ask you anything for me..all i need is the happiness of my wife..i loved her from my small age…she did sacrifice a lot for me these days..i always want to see that happy smile of hers..that is my only wish” prayed ranveer to god.
“I am not going to pray for me…i know very well that my ranveer will do that….all that i will ask from you is to give him peace of mind and satisfaction of life…he takes good care of my and his family…just please help me to shower love on him through out our life” said ishaani to god.
They came out from the temple and started their car…the car stopped at a grassland on the outskirt of the city and opened its door for its owner to come out. Ranveer and Ishaani came and sat on the grass peacefully for some time, hand in hand. In these days they understood love is like a war easy to begin difficult to stop and impossible to forget.
After minutes of silence, ranveer spoke up “I need your heart sunny”…ishaani glanced at him for a second and replied ” You can have only half of my heart”.
He gave her a not understanding look, she continued ” If at all i know what is love…it is just because of you…and yeah i could give only give half of my heart because i need the rest to think of you and love you”
He smiled at her reply and said “At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet rite…but i can give you my full heart” and stopped there for her to guess why.
She looked at him intensly…he said ” Because every cell of mine is born with your thought and dies with yours only”. Hearing these she had tears of joy, happiness and pride over herself for getting such a husband who is not only her love but also her bestie.
Ishaani leaned towards his chest to feel the heart which beats for her, she felt divine to hear it. But now ranveer was in other thoughts..he said”Ishaani when you feel the heart that beats for you even i have the rights to feel the one which beats for me na” in a naughty tone.”Cheee…you beshram” said ishaani in between her blushing .
Ranveer enjoyed seeing her cheeks turn crimson red.
Love is the strongest of all passions, for it attacks simultaneously the head, the heart and the senses.
THE END

Hi Guys,
I tried to develop this story from my poetry..hope this is not that bad…n i was really flying in the air by reading your comments for i din’t expect those..thank you guys for it!

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26 Comments

  1. Dhruva { A DIE HARD FAN OF SHADHIKA } on May 29, 2016 5:50 pm

    Hey Roha……again a beautiful os…..loved it yaar …..and how are you my new sissy ????

    • Roha on May 29, 2016 8:44 pm

      I m fine di..hope u do well..thanx for d cmnts

  2. Ankita on May 29, 2016 6:02 pm

    Amazing epi!! Loved it *-*

    • Roha on May 29, 2016 8:45 pm

      Thanx Ankita

  3. Radhika on May 29, 2016 6:04 pm

    Was nice and y don’t you write a ff plc try to write a request

    • Roha on May 29, 2016 8:49 pm

      Hey radhu dr…i m really sry my shcool is starting by tis wednesday..n i would ly visit computer on sundays…so i ll try to give u os da…sry again for disappointing…no one in my home know i m writing these

  4. Neelam on May 29, 2016 7:07 pm

    Hi Roha so beautiful os yaar you maked it very beautifully very elegant ?

    • Roha on May 29, 2016 8:50 pm

      Thanks neelam for ur cmnts

  5. Reena on May 29, 2016 7:34 pm

    Hi Roha dear!! Amazing os darling! The poetry was very beautiful! I really loved this os! How are you sisssy??

    • Roha on May 29, 2016 8:51 pm

      Hi di..i m fine…how abt u…thank u soo much dr

    • Reena on May 29, 2016 9:26 pm

      I am good dear.. A little stressed but I can’t wait for my school to end next week!

  6. love ishveer on May 29, 2016 10:00 pm

    It was really amazing and lovely roha. Guyzz i have 1 doubt pls i need youll all 2 help me. in a episode in which ranvir was dressed as a servant did ishveer really consummated their mariage i mean there were no signs they only shared some intimate moments pls some1 clear my doubt it will be really so sweet and kind of youll pls

  7. love ishveer on May 29, 2016 10:13 pm

    It was really really amazing and lovely roha. Guyzz i have 1 doubt pls i want youll all 2 help me pls. In a episode in which ranvir was dressed as a servant did ishveer really consummated their marriage i mean there were no signs they only shared some intimate moments pls some1 clear my doubt pls it will be so sweet nd kind of youll pls

    • Roha on May 30, 2016 9:21 am

      Thank you so much for ur cmnts…and yeah..they really consumated

  8. love ishveer on May 29, 2016 10:14 pm

    Hi It was really really amazing and lovely roha. Guyzz i have 1 doubt pls i want youll all 2 help me pls. In a episode in which ranvir was dressed as a servant did ishveer really consummated their marriage i mean there were no signs they only shared some intimate moments pls some1 clear my doubt pls it will be so sweet nd kind of youll pls

  9. PRINCE on May 30, 2016 1:48 am

    Ur poetry is too good sis

    • Roha on May 30, 2016 9:22 am

      Thanx prince bro

  10. tanvee on May 30, 2016 11:34 am

    Sorry for late comment but u r great poet I should keep some names for u like one shot queen and poet queen u r amazing and can I know ur real name

    • Roha on May 30, 2016 12:53 pm

      Tanvee dr…extremly sry..one of my family member visit this page…so i cant reveal my name..n tanx for those names..i like d word Roha very much..so call by tat name even dr

  11. sana-always loves my Ranvi♥♥♥ on May 30, 2016 12:37 pm

    Raha u again rocked…superb!!!

    • sana-always loves my Ranvi♥♥♥ on May 30, 2016 12:41 pm

      Sorry it was roha not raha.it was typing mistake.I am really sorry…

    • Roha on May 30, 2016 2:41 pm

      Thanx sana..no sry da

  12. radhika on May 30, 2016 3:05 pm

    Nice os Dr I really loved it.

    • Roha on May 30, 2016 3:28 pm

      Thanks radhika

  13. Nandhu on May 31, 2016 8:34 am

    It was luvly dr s….I just luv it <3….

    • Roha on May 31, 2016 8:57 am

      Thanx da

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