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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan: His presence.. chapter 1 ( part 1)
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Manmarziyan: His presence.. chapter 1 ( part 1)

administratorBy administratorMay 26, 201626 Comments3 Mins Read
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My vision though was limited to a small sized window the view from it was exotic.the clouds passing by and the pleasant sky would have calmed anyone but not me… not now . my mind was preoccupied with many things. My heart was beating soo fast,vasodilation.adrenaline rush !! two reasons why this is happening to me…one , I hate landings..the sound of the plane and the sudden change of pressure makes me nauseous…I can feel my stomach churning right now but today it was not the only reason for my state…today I am going to meet HIM after two years…all the moments spent with him came back to me with a blow filling my eyes with tears .a smile appeared on my face. even after what happened I couldn’t hate him. I just couldn’t .the weather outside changed drastically the white fluffy clouds were replaced by dark angry ones. A storm.

our pilot had problem  managing the plane .it was shaking like some one were throttling it.I held my seat like my life was depended on it .the nature outside was depicting exactly what was happening in my mind .my inner turmoil.how ironical!! I was questioning myself if it was a right decision to meet him . my heart immediately brushed that thought aside. I wanted answers and I wouldn’t lose this opportunity.just then I heard the air hostess instructed us to wear our seat belts .I sighed I came this far , there was no turning back now.
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This is the thirteenth time I changed , even this dinn look right. Mind you if you thing it’s not looking good Anything looks great on me  it’s just not looking right .the brown shirt I was wearing was dominating .why am I so confused ?? I sighed it was all because of her …why did this girl affect me so much..even though I knew the answer I was not ready to accept it, not after what she did two years back..never. frustrated I hit the table beside me breaking it .my knuckles were hurt but the pain was nothing compared to what she gave me.I hate her staying here..staying with me umm..my heart has other ideas though.

I still remember aditya calling me and asking me to let her stay with me.I couldn’t say no to him..he is like my brother but I didn’t expect her to agree , not after what happened. what she did two years before was also unexpected said my mind. Soo true I will not make that mistake again ..I promise myself.I look into my wardrobe and I find a light pink sweatshirt.ahh how she hates that color! Smiling I wore it, set my hair and started to the airport
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Thank you soo much for all your comments ! I’m on the top of the world reading the .thanks you once again for your support peeps.

Its more of nesam but ardhika will also be present.
So this is the first part of the first chapter? Do tell me how it is…

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26 Comments

  1. Brin on May 26, 2016 5:28 am

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:34 pm

      Thank you so much Brin

  2. Roma on May 26, 2016 9:04 am

    Awesome, wowwww sahithi…very lovely update…I loved it to the core. ….The way you’re narrating it’s really superbbbb. ….two years back what happened???…I’m curious to know it…keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:44 pm

      Thank you soo much Roma!! Haha you have to wait darlzz…you don’t know how happy I am reading your comments .bear hugs!! Tc

  3. aastha on May 26, 2016 9:51 am

    its nyc……….esp the narration………….plzzzzz update sooooooooooon….

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:45 pm

      Thank you aastha! Glad you loved the narration.I’ll post the next one soon

  4. Gauri on May 26, 2016 10:01 am

    Awesome 🙂

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:46 pm

      Thanks dii?

  5. ammu on May 26, 2016 10:11 am

    Its really nice.eagerly want to know the past .please update asap.

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:47 pm

      Thank you so much ammu! Will try to post the next one soon

  6. Gianna on May 26, 2016 11:48 am

    Nice update very interesting

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:47 pm

      Thank you Gianna!

  7. Rosie on May 26, 2016 12:33 pm

    Amazing dear ?

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:48 pm

      Thank you Rosie

  8. Sweetie on May 26, 2016 12:55 pm

    It’s an awesome update Sahithi.. Loved it.. Waiting for the next update.. 😀 Stay blessed 🙂

    • sahithi on May 26, 2016 2:49 pm

      Thank you Sweetie!!

  9. subha on May 26, 2016 5:37 pm

    awesome…..

    • sahithi on May 27, 2016 9:11 am

      Thank you subha

  10. Devi on May 26, 2016 6:16 pm

    Hey nice storyline…waitimg fr more updates…

    • sahithi on May 27, 2016 9:11 am

      Thank you Devi more on the way?

  11. priya on May 26, 2016 8:39 pm

    hey it’s so nice

    • sahithi on May 27, 2016 9:12 am

      Thank you Priya!

  12. susi on May 27, 2016 12:59 pm

    Wow soo nice dear….

    • sahithi on May 28, 2016 9:09 pm

      Thank you Susi

  13. Ritu on May 27, 2016 4:58 pm

    superb dr..post nxt one soon..

    • sahithi on May 28, 2016 7:55 am

      Thank you Ritu.Will post next one soon

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