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Home»Star Plus»Dehleez»Fantasy thriller (Ipknd,vishkanya, ishq ka rang safed,ek duje ke vaaste and dehleez) epi-1
Dehleez Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction Ishq Ka Rang Safed Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon Ek Jashn Vishkanya

Fantasy thriller (Ipknd,vishkanya, ishq ka rang safed,ek duje ke vaaste and dehleez) epi-1

NarendranBy NarendranMay 22, 2016Updated:June 11, 201639 Comments3 Mins Read
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Here is my new ff.. So let us start ..

Kalpana: Queen of vishkanya dynasty.. She always thinks of capturing places and killing king.

Hercules:King of vishkanya dynasty but he was prisoned by her wife kalpana becoz of her black magic.

Apu: daughter of kalpana.. She is vishkanya and she loves flowers alot but if she touches all will dry so she sees all from far..

Arnav:He is son of kalpana… He was fathers son.. He always supports father and gets beating from kalpana and guards..

Adarsh: He is friend of arnav. He is advicer of kalpana also

Shravan: He always has big smile in his face. He is horse soldiers head..

Suman:She is wife of shravan..

Rang dynasty…

Viplav:King of this dynasty and loves her wife dhaani alot.

Dhaani: Wife of viplav..

Swadheentha:Queen of rang dynasty.

Khushi:Daughter if viplav and dhaani..

Malay:He is son of viplav and dhaani..

So let us start.. If u imagine them in King queen like u will laugh.. But let us start now..

The episode starts with Swadheentha orders all people to give their money to her.. People cries and tells her to show some mercy towards them.. Swadheentha laughs evilly and asks mercy? Me? Swadheentha comes near that man and touches his face.. She opens her nail and stabs on his throat and tells all people to give money and leave or u will be also dead like him.. All gives it and leaves.. Dhaani comes there and asks swadheentha what she wants? She tells dhaani to take her dupatta and walk behind her…

Viplav sits on King chair and waits.. Swadheentha comes there wearing greedom. Dhaani also comes there walking behind her.. Viplav gets teary eyes.. He tells in mind.. I am sorry..dhaani..

Malay and khushi comes there and takes dupatta from dhaani hand and tells swadheentha that her mom won’t do any work.. She tells then ok . she orders guards to take khushi and malay to cell.. Swadheentha smiles.. Dhaani tells no problem I will take it pls leave them.. Dhaani falls on her leg.. Her mangalsutra also falls down.. Swadheentha sees this and takes it and throws away and tells u r husband is not u rs or not mine.. So don’t be senti and leaves to chair.. Swadheentha tells all ministers that we need more money.. She tells them also to collect it.. Jeweler comes there.. His hand shakes.. She comes there and stops it and takes necklace and tells it is nice.. He becomes normal. She asks for bangle? He gives it.. She tells soo bad and kills him with nail.. Swadheentha orders guards to take this body away from here..

Precap:Intro of vishkanya dynasty..

Guys I think many will not like it.. If u like comment or ignore it.. And next epi will be tmr or next Sunday.. Till that bye..

1. what u think the reason behind swadheentha as queen and dhaani as servant? Viplav and dhaani has sons then why this problem?

If u have any idea pls share it. I will tell about this question answer in 3rd epi.. So bye guys take care..

Credit to: Narendran

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    39 Comments

    1. Kathy on May 22, 2016 10:11 am

      Unexpected story line naren Hercules as kalapana husband… I laught a lot…. … Very different from all ur stories… Luv this new idea… Keep writing…

    2. Kathy on May 22, 2016 10:13 am

      Sorry naren I thought a lot .. But coudnt answer ur question… So confusing … May b coz it’s just a start… Excited for the next episode …

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 11:22 am

        Hey thnx u are the one who encourage me alot..

      • Kathy on May 22, 2016 9:21 pm

        My pleasure naren… Ur a fabulous writer …

      • soumya sinha on May 23, 2016 1:06 am

        didnt understand this story and so swadheenta doesnt suit being evil

      • soumya sinha on May 23, 2016 1:08 am

        swadheenta does not suit being evil she is just fab wen she s nyc someone should be evil to her another person shud come in and then these 3 actresses become friends n one by one meet the lover boy

    3. Sana on May 22, 2016 11:33 am

      Wow its amazing thought all in royal style I liked it very much waiting for next episode pls update soon

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 11:52 am

        Sure.. I will try my best to update next epi today itself..

    4. Minakhi on May 22, 2016 12:22 pm

      Woow Very nice keep it up.All the very best ?

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 5:05 pm

        Thnx minakhi for the comment..

    5. Fatarajo (KRPKAB , EDKV n Dehleez fan) on May 22, 2016 1:03 pm

      Wow fantasy reminded me of game of thrones and also a to a little extent Bajirao Mastani 😛

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 5:04 pm

        Thnx Akka…

    6. Rufina on May 22, 2016 1:06 pm

      totally different story bro….yeah..its bit difficult to imagine them as king n queen…but totally enjoyed the epi…keep writing…

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 5:05 pm

        Thnx rufina for the comment…

    7. Deepika ( zaya fan ) on May 22, 2016 1:49 pm

      I want to give u one suggestion … plz don’t combine so many couples … I m confused … It will be great if there is one or two couple
      Sorry if I have hurt u …but it’s my pov

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 3:57 pm

        Ok.. But this is couple of shows.. So if u want tell me I will remove 1couple not more than that..

      • Deepika ( zaya fan ) on May 22, 2016 5:15 pm

        No it will spoil ur plot … I’ll manage ?

    8. Nancy on May 22, 2016 5:07 pm

      Totally diff story bhai ver nice unique.

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 9:12 pm

        Thnx Nancy..

    9. Mona Swasanholic Varunholic on May 22, 2016 5:16 pm

      How many ff’s you are writing !!!! I don’t know how you are managing all this… In that case you are really great…

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 9:12 pm

        7 ff.. Only….

    10. Siddhi on May 22, 2016 5:19 pm

      It’s fantastic and I have updated a ff on vishkanya it’s name is untouchable love pls read and comment.

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 9:12 pm

        Sure.. I have already commented also…

    11. Viplav on May 22, 2016 7:04 pm

      hey naren different one…….but i don’t understand ur concept of rang dynasty…..
      viplav king ok……dhaani his wife is also ok…..then why swadheentha the queen?? dhaani is the queen na?? plz describe and clear it

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 7:28 pm

        Hey I have asked question to u?? It will be revealed in 3rd epi.. So be patient?

      • Viplav on May 22, 2016 7:30 pm

        ok will wait till 3rd epi

    12. arpita on May 22, 2016 8:55 pm

      Naren,like u my dad will also take my phone as I m not concentrating on my studies now a days????By the way nice ff. I liked it.

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 9:00 pm

        Thnx arpita….

    13. shai on May 22, 2016 9:21 pm

      nice story….u kept my two favourite couples…arshi and apulay…love you a lot fior this 🙂

    14. shai on May 22, 2016 9:23 pm

      my condition is also the same like you naren…the modem is not working,dad is busy with laptop,and overload of studies…so commenting less these days 🙁

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 9:44 pm

        It is ok shai?

    15. Anisha on May 22, 2016 9:41 pm

      This is so damn different! But seems interesting! But if Vip is King then Dhaani is supposed to be queen! How is Swadheenta queen?

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 10:06 pm

        Thnx anisha.. In 3rd epi u will know.

    16. Areeb on May 22, 2016 9:50 pm

      Interesting! Really want to know the reason behind Viplav’s helplessness! ?

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 22, 2016 10:06 pm

        Thnx areeb for the comment…

    17. Abhi on May 23, 2016 8:50 pm

      It was really awesome…Keep writing….its really different..swadhu in a rude form.that is cool…???????

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 24, 2016 4:26 pm

        Thnx abhi????

    18. anuprerna on May 23, 2016 11:28 pm

      Swadeentha will change after seeing Adarsh

      • Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 24, 2016 4:26 pm

        Wait and read.. Be patient.. There is FB is third epi..

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