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Home»Fan Fiction»I will complete my brother’s love story (3 shots)(manmarziyan)
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I will complete my brother’s love story (3 shots)(manmarziyan)

administratorBy administratorMay 17, 201624 Comments2 Mins Read
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“What tell me is this true…..”..Neil asked arjun..
Arjun replied..”yes”..and totally break down…
“Radhika …is in love again..no I can’t believe this”…Sam spoked..in a complaining tone…
“With ..whom”..Neil asked curiously…
“My ..twin brother..a complete …in disciplined.. guy..Aryan mehra…” arjun spoked sobbing completely..
“What..now how come this twin brother appear in the movie”…Neil asked irritated.
Arjun told them he was separated from his brother..when he was a kid…
………………………………………………………………………
Neil Sam and arjun head towards the beach…..
They saw aryaan and radhika together….

Neil got fainted and after a min he spoked up…
“..he is just like u….arjun…xerox copy…..”
Sam giggled..”hmm chashni with 2 arjun’s…not bad ..but trust Aryan is more hot “.
Neil and arjun glared…Sam..and Neil pulled Sam and hide it behind him..
Aryaan who was a local thug..with handkerchief tied on his head…and spoked….a different.. accent…was a tourist guide..and newly found friend of radhika..
Radhika was happily talking to him and teasing..
Neil spoked..”seems like chashni was in love with ur face only…”…
Arjun frowned listening to him….
After few min ..a paani puri competition was going on between radhika and aryaan
Radhika won ….and hugged aryaan
Aryaan….who was amused seeing radhika. …smiled…

Aryaan:- “..heroine…paani puri ‘s money..”
Radhika smiled at his broken English …give a peck on his cheeks..and give him the money… and left.
He put a hand on the back of his head and rubbed it…he smiled.
The trio eyes popped out.. seeing this….
……………………………………………………………………..
Arjun headed towards aryaan and stand in front of him….
Arjun warned…..:- “stay away from her …she is your brother”s wife..”
Aryaan smiled..”meet with a brother…no hii .no hello..no jhappi…straight angry bird..”
Aryaan spoked again…”iam …purre..1min older to you ..call me aryaan bhaiya..”and he smiled and hugged him again..
Arjun detach him from aryaan ..and spoke..”we were never family ..just stay away from my radhika…”

Aryaan again hugged arjun …keep his palm on the back of his head and rubbed it…and spoked in a correct English..”but u were always my little brother aru..who steals chocolate from my trousers….”
………………………………………………………………………

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24 Comments

  1. Gauri on May 17, 2016 9:26 pm

    Awesome Sammy….one jhappi from me ๐Ÿ™‚

    • sammy on May 17, 2016 9:35 pm

      Thanks gauri di ..and jhappi accepted:-)

  2. Supriya on May 17, 2016 9:50 pm

    Sammy a flying kiss to u……m on the moon after reading this… Tell me wen u will update next one…darling I really loved it plz tell me wen z the next one…..keep rocking…

    • sammy on May 17, 2016 10:18 pm

      Thanks supriya ..will update tommorrow

  3. Hima on May 17, 2016 9:55 pm

    Very nice sammy..ur ff s are always unique and interesting..

    • sammy on May 17, 2016 10:21 pm

      Thanks hima..iam glad you are enjoying my ffs:-) .love u

  4. Brin on May 17, 2016 10:08 pm

    Awesome episode. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • sammy on May 17, 2016 10:20 pm

      Thanks brin ..love u:-)

  5. suga on May 17, 2016 10:09 pm

    Yipeeeeeeeeeee another one ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ oh pls don’t say last n all ๐Ÿ™ I love to read all ur ff darling ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ loved it ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    • sammy on May 17, 2016 10:20 pm

      Suga dear it is of only 3 shots….love u a lot for commenting:-)

  6. lavanya on May 17, 2016 10:47 pm

    mind blowing….I’m in love with it….please do continue…can’t wait for the next episode

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 10:11 am

      Thanks lavanya ..will update soon:-)

  7. Emz fasa on May 18, 2016 8:30 am

    Awesome sammy ๐Ÿ™‚ i love this aryan very much

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 3:17 pm

      Thanks FASA…haha aryaan tapoori:-)

  8. subha on May 18, 2016 11:07 am

    interesting please continue …eagerly waiting next one.tc

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 3:16 pm

      Thanks subha ..will update soon:-)

  9. Gianna on May 18, 2016 11:20 am

    Omg Sammy where do u come up with these stories from? Amazing one just like every ff of urs. Loved it

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 3:15 pm

      Thanks Gianna..lol me crazy writer….love u a lot tc:-)

  10. Rosie on May 18, 2016 5:09 pm

    Sammy can I borrow ur mind plzzzzz….i mean u possess such a brilliant brain yet didn’t wrote before…why…why??? Supriya n u both r awesome who wrote later??

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 5:30 pm

      Thanks Rosie di…lost story is updated pls check out that too….Rosie di u write ..1000. times better .love u a lot:-)

    • Rosie on May 18, 2016 7:28 pm

      I just wrote what is random stuff…but u have both brain n talent…trust me n I only say truth…

  11. โค?Natasha?โค on May 18, 2016 9:32 pm

    Its awesome sammy………. sry dear i was not able to comment for the previous epi’s of ur ff’s..sry again buddy….but i read all the epi’s…..

    • sammy on May 18, 2016 11:32 pm

      Thanks Natasha..its OK dear love u a lot:-)

  12. Roma on May 20, 2016 11:10 pm

    Awesome, awesome, awesomeeeeee sammyyyy…muaaaaahhhhhh, lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss my sweeeeeetheart. …you’re really box of pandora. …loved this story n tapoori aryan twin bro of arjun….lol….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your alllllllllll stories. …God bless you my sweeeeeetheart. …love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

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