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Home»Fan Fiction»Two Hearts (twinj OS by Bhavika)
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Two Hearts (twinj OS by Bhavika)

administratorBy administratorMay 17, 201626 Comments3 Mins Read
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A Love Story Between
Two Friends..
[Have you Ever Been in LOVE with
your Best friend? If yes, then this is Something
you’ll get to Understand]
nOW THE STORY GOEs
There was a boy and a Girl,
Who were very close, intimate and best friends for years
,
They could Talk for hours on the
Phone and text each other for
days.
Whenever they were together,
not a single sad thought could
cross their minds,
everything was alright and their friendship was awesome. But One
Day, the boy did not answer any of the girl’s call
or send a to any of her text throughout the day.
The Girl was very worried that
something was wrong.
At night, she couldn’t even lie down not to talk of Sleep, she
was sitting in her room crying,
and it was then she realized
how much He means to her.

The next Morning, the girl was woken by a Phonecall….
It was the Boy.
Boy: Hey..,
Girl: Im so glad that you Called
Me kunj, What happened to you
yesterday?
kunj: I was Busy twinkle
[Twinkle Understood that
Something was Wrong but could
not Ask]
[silence]
Kunj : You know; We should Stop
talking..!
Twinkle: What?.., But Why??!!
kunj:I am Sorry, Bye..!
[He Disconnected the call, and she
felt as If Somebody
had Slammed the door on Her
face]
Everything else Flashed in Her
Mind,
Tears
was running all over Her..
She couldn’t understand
anything that happened..
She started Feeling Lonely,
Dejected, and broken..
That was the answer to
everything! His words were
pouncing on her..
Her heart wanted to jump out!
He was the One..!”Why..??”
She Screamed at the top of her
Voice;
Then she made up her mind to
make a last try to get him back..!
[She called Him Up]
twinkle: hi…
Kunj:Why are you calling Me?
Twinkle: I need to tell you
Something..
Kunj:Go Ahead.
twinkle: I Just Wanted You to know
one thing before we stopped
talking!
Kunj: Tell me..!
Twinkle: Are you All right?
[She broke off..!
She tried but may be he doesn’t
really Care about Her,
She Thought!
She wasn’t His friend in the first
Place…
Tears were slowly running down her cheeks Worst
of all, she left the House with a Note..!
[5 hours later]
The phone rang in kunj’s room,
It was the Twinkle’s Mum,
she told him that the twinkle was lying in the hospital,
she got hit by a Car.
He immediately put down the phone and rushed to the hospital
where she was.
She opened her eyes at the sound of the kunj’s voice
..,
He took her Hand..

Kunj:Im so Sorry Its all my fault..!
But, I promise when you get better I’ll
make It up to you..
Twinkle: I wont get Better..
Kunj:No..! No Don’t say that..
twinkle: just tell me one thing Why
did you do it?
Kunj told her that He had a heart
problem and
he did not want her to be
worried;
and there was a risk that he could
have Died..!
Kunj:I did that because I…..I…..I
Love you..
Twinkle : I LOVE YOU TOO..
And after that her heart stopped
Beating…
She Died..!
Kunj died 10 minutes laterfrom a
Heart Attack..
He could not live with the
thought that she died because of him..

mORAL OF THE STORy
If You Love Someone, don’t hold back your
feelings because Love is the one of the major reasons for which we
live..!
Love is Beautiful..

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26 Comments

  1. Ria on May 17, 2016 6:00 pm

    God! That was sooo intense. It was superb.

  2. Amii on May 17, 2016 6:07 pm

    Nice.. ?

  3. Sadaf Khan on May 17, 2016 6:10 pm

    It is too good…. Loved it….

  4. Harna on May 17, 2016 6:14 pm

    This is real touching story too but quite short..nice..hope hear from you soon…

  5. jasmin on May 17, 2016 6:17 pm

    Bhavika….bhavika…bhavika….wat to tell u yaar…
    how can u manage to write so well…
    loved it to the moon and stars….

  6. Sayeeda on May 17, 2016 6:27 pm

    Bhavika it was very cute and heart touching story ….loved ur one shot and good moral.

  7. Shatakshi on May 17, 2016 6:46 pm

    Bhavika literally u r making me cry…keep it up…now ur style of compliment
    A
    W
    E
    A
    S
    O
    M
    E
    Keep going??

  8. Ritzi on May 17, 2016 6:51 pm

    awww bhavika… srsly m speechless…. nd ya i wanna jst tell 1 thing to ny ff readers tht my ff will get pisted aftr 11 pm today… so pls do read it nd sorry bahvika to talk abt my ff in yr os

  9. Anushka on May 17, 2016 7:03 pm

    Hey dear bhavika, I have read this story online. See sissy I don’t want to humiliate u. But still ur original work is original. I think u have just changed the names.
    See here is the link u can check this story there. http://www.tearsflow.com/2015/01/if-you-love-someone-then-dont-hold-back.html?m=1
    Don’t take me wrong dear becoz I treat u like my small sissy so its my duty to correct u. Hope u understand would not repeat this mistake again.

    • Anu on May 18, 2016 12:54 pm

      Yes Anushka…. U r correct. This os is copied.

  10. Aastha on May 17, 2016 7:04 pm

    and what if the other prsn always make u feel alone then?
    Then we have to hold our feeling and we should forget that prsn.
    Sry if my comment hurted u bt story was awesome.

  11. Shreya on May 17, 2016 7:04 pm

    Beautiful ….u just made me cry bhavika……………………………………I want 2 say something but I am unable to find words dear.

  12. Krystal on May 17, 2016 7:19 pm

    It’s awwsum yaar

  13. chandra on May 17, 2016 7:33 pm

    awasome

  14. Lama on May 17, 2016 7:41 pm

    Woooow yaar……Awesome os……loved it to the moon and back

  15. panchi on May 17, 2016 7:48 pm

    wooooowwwww …… awesome and …… so emotional and heart touching one ……. pls wrt some more os ……

  16. Mitali on May 17, 2016 7:54 pm

    Your mind is fabulous really I loved this very very much. Thanks for this beautiful piece of writing.

  17. twinjfan-(tamanna) on May 17, 2016 8:30 pm

    awesome…awesome…bhavika…its really emotional….

  18. zikra on May 17, 2016 8:47 pm

    It vry emotional n amazing loved it so much it ws intense and osmm u made me cry…..

  19. Hely on May 17, 2016 10:29 pm

    Evn diz one z a swasan OS like d other one

  20. Aliza on May 17, 2016 11:20 pm

    Wowww…. amazing… very emotional…

  21. Afa on May 17, 2016 11:57 pm

    bhavika sisi….your the best dea..love you lot…..epic was awesome..and I am your silent reader….today I thought to comment you…your doing a great job…I love your ff a lot…keep smiling…lots of love from your sis Afa

  22. dreamer on May 17, 2016 11:59 pm

    Liked the concept..good one

  23. Afa on May 18, 2016 12:03 am

    bhavika…sorry by mistake I wrote that silent reader…

  24. Sam on May 18, 2016 7:37 pm

    Awesome

  25. fiona on May 19, 2016 7:18 pm

    cheater
    story line was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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