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Home»Fan Fiction»Yeh dooriyan (prologue)
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Yeh dooriyan (prologue)

administratorBy administratorMay 15, 201647 Comments3 Mins Read
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Yeh dooriyan

Character introduction
Introduction

Prologue

A dark stormy night… Tried to Separates two selfless lovers.. Will they get separated… Or destiny has itz own plan…

Swra:(cryng badly) sanskar sir plz.. chale jao… i can’t marry you.. plz..

San:(cryng)tell me that u dont luv me… then i promise i will go frm here… forever..

Swra: (avoids eye contact) i can’t say that to you sir plz…

Sanskar: (held her shoulders tightly.. N ask with chocked voice) why not damn it.. why… u want me to go away then just say for once…that u dont luv me

Swra: (breaks down) i can’t cz mai aapse jhooth nahi bol sakti…

Sanskar: u luv me … i luv u then why r u behaving lyk this..

Swra:(composes) sir you are getting married within a few weeks so please stay away… you should spend tym with ur fiance..

Sanskar: i dont want to marry her … i luv u swara… i want u to become swara sanskar maheshwari…(cries)

Swra: its not possible in this lyf sir..

Sanskar:(heart broken) yeh dooriyan tumne banai hai swara… U will solely be responsible for destroying 3 lives…

*********

Swara came back home… As soon as she entered her colony… She saw ppl gathered outside her home… Some starts gossiping seeing her..

“look hw shameless she is”

“huh… What could u expect from such low class girl”

“haan bina baap ki beti hai… Ma ne zada freedom de rakhi thi.. Now see the result ”

She ignored their rubbish comments… She reached her home n saw ppl forcefully throwing things out.. N sumi was pleading them

Swra: (worried)ma

She goes towards her..

Sumi: (cries) beta we are homeless now..

Swra: (shocked) what!!

Sumi: ya they hv thrown us out.. They were bad mouthing about u.. But don’t worry.. I trust u.. I know my daughter can’t do anything wrong… Don’t worry we will find a way out..

” ya sure.. Ur daughter may hv many lovers na” a person comments

“kyaa kar sakte hai… Itz not her fault.. Itz her upbringing ” another comment

Swara: (fumes in anger) enough!!! I don’t know what the hell is ur problem but.. Don’t you dare to utter a word about my upbringing.. My upbringing is much better than urs.. What ur mum taught u.. To forcefully evacuate a home that too in mid night..

Prsn :enough of ur nonsense The girl who doesn’t know hw to speak is now shouting…

Prsn 2:(tauntingly) itz magic of luv

Swra: (determined) don’t force me to insult u.. Lets go ma

Both left

*******

Sanskar: ( nerves) ma i want my marriage to be prepond..

Ap: ( shocked n happy) really !! But suddenly.. Oh godd!! m so happy

Sanskar: i cant wait to marry her(hurted)

Ap: achha beta look hwz this for my bahu (shows him some gifts)

Sanskar: (lyfless body) choose what u lyk..

Ap: (doubtfully) beta you are happy with this marriage na?

Sanskar: (fake smile) i m so happy ma…

******

When swara n sanskar both luvs each other then why swara want him to go away?
When sanskar luvs swara why he is marrying other girl?
Why he prepond his marriage? Y ppl are commenting on swara??

So now tell me.. Hwz that !!

Guyz there was a mistake in intro… Actully autocorrect ne apna dimag chla lia tha ???
Thnku anu for telling that ??

Laksh is laksh maheshwRi… Not gadodia…

Saumya seth as Swati gadodia
Harshad chopra as shlok gadodia

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47 Comments

  1. Haai(sree) on May 15, 2016 4:40 pm

    Superb meherdi

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:38 pm

      Thanks

  2. renu on May 15, 2016 4:51 pm

    Excited for this ff dear…

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:38 pm

      Thnku dear

  3. anu on May 15, 2016 4:51 pm

    nice

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:39 pm

      Thanks

  4. Dharsha on May 15, 2016 5:12 pm

    In a word….it’s perfect ??

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:39 pm

      Aw tysm

  5. kaynat khan on May 15, 2016 5:35 pm

    awesome starting

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 6:41 pm

      Thnku

  6. sharlene on May 15, 2016 5:40 pm

    good

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 6:41 pm

      Thnku

  7. bisha on May 15, 2016 5:47 pm

    OMG! So much suspense!! Baap re baap!! But fantastic prologue. Man to kar raha hai ki unlogon ka muh tod du!! Swara ko ghar se nikalega!! Anyways Hatke prologue.

    Keep writing. All The Best for bfia entrance. Hope you clear it with ease. LOve ya Loads♥♥♥ TC

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 6:43 pm

      Mera b mann yahi kar raha tha.. Ke kaan ke neeche lgau khichake…

      Hope so… I wish clear ho jaye..
      N m waiting for faith ??

      Luv u loads ???

  8. Jiya on May 15, 2016 6:12 pm

    Awsm meher cant wait for nxt part..!

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:39 pm

      Thnku so much dear

  9. Neha on May 15, 2016 6:36 pm

    Ah sab interesting lag raha h yaar tum itna confuse kar rahi ho na…. Seriously I’m loosing my patience now…. Ur ff concept are amazing

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:40 pm

      Confuse kr ri hoon main.. . Hawww ??

  10. L Khan on May 15, 2016 6:43 pm

    Can’t wait first next it’s fab

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:40 pm

      Thnku

  11. mou on May 15, 2016 7:13 pm

    interesting. plz continue

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:41 pm

      Thnku so much

  12. Rachana on May 15, 2016 7:40 pm

    Awesome I just couldn’t stop my fingers from typing in appreciation to your works I am new here and bless my luck I happened to c ur ff intro and got to know from comments abt ur previous works I must say u have unique talent with words pls continue…..

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:42 pm

      Aww tysm dear.. . N welcome to telly updates????

  13. Mona Swasanholic Varunholic on May 15, 2016 7:56 pm

    Interesting starting di waiting waiting for next……..

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:42 pm

      Thnku dear

  14. Meghs on May 15, 2016 8:11 pm

    Interesting … Update prt soon..

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:44 pm

      Thnku

  15. kumu. on May 15, 2016 8:23 pm

    gr8 start..:)

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 8:45 pm

      Thnku

  16. Soujanya kundu on May 15, 2016 8:55 pm

    Excited

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 9:44 pm

      Thnku

  17. stoneheart on May 15, 2016 9:34 pm

    meher ji.. unusual plot … ! interesting ..

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 10:18 pm

      Thnku jii

  18. Jenisha on May 15, 2016 10:20 pm

    Di it’s mindblowing……but do something and stop this marriage…..and plz don’t make swara feel humiliated….

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 10:44 pm

      Wait dear… Marriage m tym hai ?

  19. shan on May 15, 2016 10:40 pm

    awesome meher……

    • Meher on May 15, 2016 11:37 pm

      Thnku ?

  20. Shagun on May 15, 2016 11:34 pm

    Awesome

    • Meher on May 16, 2016 12:17 am

      Thnku

  21. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 15, 2016 11:42 pm

    Fabulous…..???????

    • Meher on May 16, 2016 12:17 am

      Tysm babes

  22. Kavya on May 16, 2016 2:23 am

    I guess I’ve read this prologue long back. Did u post this be4 also? Anyways leave all tht it was amazing nd full on suspense but I love it meher?????

    • Meher on May 16, 2016 9:26 am

      Yup I had posted it somewhere in March…. But now.. Thodi alteration k sath fir se kia hai ?????

    • Kavya on May 17, 2016 10:43 am

      Lol???

  23. Nita on May 16, 2016 11:37 am

    its awesome Meher….. cant just wait to read the whole story….

    • Meher on May 16, 2016 1:43 pm

      Thnku.. I was missing u badly… Baby..

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