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when I fall in love (ragsan and swasan) episode 1

administratorBy administratorMay 13, 201613 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hiii darlings pavani here with a new ff.yaa it is ragsan nd swasan ff.and I want to clear one thing in my ff rag will bee main soo don’t bash mee if I show more about rag .and u know I wont give any intro so going to epi

A boy is shown sleeping peacefully.a lady wearing saree comes there (her face is not shown)

Lady:tanish!!!!
.
Boy:mamma plzzz let me sleep for few more min .

Lady:noo way if I excused u for one day u will continue this every day

Tanish:common mammaa did u see any where a 6years boy waking up this early nd going to jooging

Lady:noo thats y now a days all are becomig lazy soo I don’t want u to bee lazyy

Tanish:u know what dadu have did a wrong thing

Lady:what

Tanishgot up from his bed nd stood before her

Tanish:insted of keeping ur name as ragini he should have kept ur name ass hitler

(Yes lady is ragini)
Rag:u…
Tanish ran from there nd hided behind an old person

Tanish:see naa daduu mamma is trying to beat mee

Nd face of the man is shown he is dp

Rag:bade pappaa plzz this time u don’t come in btwn he became very naughty now a days

Dp:ohoo common rag he is just a chaild

Rag:chaild.. u don’t know about him thats y u r telling like that

Dp:what he done

Rag:due to him his principle calls mee every day to complaint about him

Dp:princepal is jelous of him that his son is not smarter than my tani
(They both gave a hifi)

Rag:he is not jelous but he is angry on him because tani is flirting with a girl in his class and was caught redhanded by principal

Dp:really soo what why is hee taking it that much personally

Rag:because the girl is his daughter

Dp:gave an angry look to tani

Tanish:sorry daddu nd sorry mammaa

Dp:isn’t she beautiful.

Rag gave a what expression

Tani:noo daduu she is the s*xy girl in our class

Dp:then y r u saying sorry no need to say sorry

Rag:disgusting u two rrrr drowing mee crazyy nd she left from there
Dp nd tani gave hifii

Dp:now we should convence her

Rags room
Tani by holding his ears iam sorry mammaa fmammaaday I will not talk to pranithapranithaal dugher)

Rag started laughing
Rag:u know how to cool mee
She hugged him nd gave a peek on his cheek

Dp sees them lovingly
Episode ends
Screen freezes with smiling faces of rag ,tanish nd dp

Hwzz it if u like it plzz respond .Urs darling pavani
Tanish is my sons name I . Will imagine him
U can imagine any one

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13 Comments

  1. lovely on May 13, 2016 4:23 am

    nice

  2. rakhi on May 13, 2016 5:45 am

    Nyc

  3. kriya on May 13, 2016 8:33 am

    Awsm yr continue…….n tanish is nice name…..

  4. Sarika Shah on May 13, 2016 9:06 am

    awesome di… 🙂

  5. priya on May 13, 2016 9:49 am

    Wow di amazing tanish sweet name… I l imagine him too di……ragsan and swasan ????? Rag as main lead even I want that too di

  6. anu on May 13, 2016 10:02 am

    nice

  7. taiana on May 13, 2016 10:12 am

    Good start… i hav read all ur ff but sry i nevr commted… frm now onwards i will cmt regularly… Nd i also want lik in ur othr in this ff also ragini should be the main lead…

  8. Lahari on May 13, 2016 10:33 am

    Ragsan,swasan?

  9. S Priya on May 13, 2016 10:49 am

    nice dr….waiting to c whose son s tanish…..

  10. Dhara on May 13, 2016 11:53 am

    Nice

  11. ammy on May 13, 2016 3:49 pm

    Tanish is nice name.hw old is he?nice epi dr & thanks for another ragsan ff

  12. Abdul hafiz on May 13, 2016 5:26 pm

    Interesting.

  13. fira on May 13, 2016 7:37 pm

    Good starting….super epi…tanish is very nice name …..pls make it ragsan……

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