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Home»Fan Fiction»SwaSan Revenge :a smile that has stolen my heart (Last part)
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SwaSan Revenge :a smile that has stolen my heart (Last part)

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link of all parts…
Here

Previous part
Here

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SwaSan Revenge: A smile that has stolen my heart

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Recap: swasan shoot each other

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Here arjun was standing with a smile on his face n calls someone “work is done”
Then he rush down the cliff.. Two people were standing there facing their back to him he ask

“swara sanskar r u guyz fyn ??”

SwaSan nodded

Yes both of them are alive ??

” yes n thanku so much arjun u helped me alot?” swara thanked him

“com’on princess anything for you n vese bhi u were doing nothing wrong?” he said

Now u must be thinking kya hua?

**FLASHBACK **

Sanskar on call
*on call*

“guru bhai.. News is confirmed.. That police officer nandini is a part of that terrorist group ”

“what!! ?“

” yes n she wants to kill u..last month u killed her gang member She knows ur true identity.. Be careful ”

“ok dont worry she will be dead tmrw.. U kno guru never shows mercy” he said with a smirk

*call ends*

@swara’s room

She got call frm arjun

“swara Sanskar’s lyf is in danger ”

“what!!! ?”

” yes do u remember about that officer Nandini.. Our doubt was correct she is a terrorist.. N karan her right hand has been given task to kill sanskar last month sanskar has killed her gAng menmber.. They came to know that he is guru.. I m gonna inform seniors bt we hv no proofs.. I dont kno yr.. I can kill karan bt what abt nandini”

” no.. I will kill him.. But u need ur help ”

“m with u… I will help you. They are threat for our nation”

” done then… I will handover his dead body to u tmrw ”

*call ends *

After call swara goes to sanskar n told him everything

” baby don’t worry… I will kill that nandini n karan… Nthng will happen to me” sanskar assures her

“sanskar tell me one thing… Do u want to live a normal lyf… Only sanskar no guru” swara asked

“ya swara… Bt itz impossible ” he sound hopeless

” i hv a plan ” she said with a smirk

Next day arjun covrnce nandini that anothr office will kill him… N she just need to check that ..then swara kills karan first.. Swara dress herself in uniform she looks lyk nandini… Then swasan shoot each other… N arjun click some pics n make sm ppl saw that as eyewithnesses.. Then arjun calls nandini that swara has killed sanskar…

***FLASHBACK ENDS ***

” now that terrorist nandini… Itz her turn” swara said

“ya she will be here at any point of tym.. ” arjun said

” n then I will shoot her.. N arjun will portray it as an encounter… In which a police officer nandini has died in order to kill a gangster guru” swara said

Soon nandini came n swara shoots her…

Then arjun calls his officials that nandini n guru are dead now…

Finally swara has taken sanskar out from the dark streets… Now only sanskar… No guru.. Not only sanskar but his whole gang is thankful to swara… For ending the complexity of their lives

*****

@MM

Swara was sitting in her room when dp knocks the door

“may I come in beta?” dp ask

“dad u don’t need to ask for permission? “swara said

“hmm.. So tell me now.. When u want to marry sanskar”? dp said

“dad.. Plz nahi.. Jab zindagi he nhi rhegi .. To shadi ka kya fyda ?? “swara said with teary eyes

“but beta sanskar has told me Yesterday that u guyz hv met doctor n he said that you hv survival chances.. Then y don’t u marry him” dp said

” dad.. Vo.. I.. I mean.???. “she fumbles

” beta what u hv hided tell me?” dp ask

“vo… Dad… I.. I ask doctor to lie… I hv no survival chances… ?????” she said with guilt

” What ???”!!! Sanskar standing at door said

Both dp n swara got shocked to see him

“sanskar listen… Vo nthng… I can explain ??” swara said

She goes towards him n hold his hand… He jerks her hand in anger
” u lied to me..??. Stay away from me… ??? ” sanskar said with broken heart?

He goes downstairs n swara follows him…

” sanskar plz stop.. I can explain u.. I don’t want to hurt u.. ??? Plz my intentions were not wrong ??” she said while cring

He stops n hold her shoulder tightly n shouts” what!!! ? Ur intentions were not wrong… ? Haan.. U.. U cheated me swara… U lied to me… Do u kno what it means?????… Seeing ur lyf..? Ur luv dieing is not so easy swara…?? U hv really hurted to me…? U should not give false hopes… Accepting reality would be better.. But breaking hopes is worst”He said while crying..

“m sorry sanskar…? I kno my way was wrong bt my intentions were not wrong… ??I kno u can’t take that news.. M sry… M… Sry????” she fall on her knees n cries.

“i don’t want any sry??… Swara” he said n left

Whereas swara keeps on crying.. Dp sumi ap n all tries to calm her down but all in vain..

Laksh tries to call him bt he was not picking up..

Here sanskar was driving in full speed… N tears of helplessness were sheding from his eyes…

“I can’t save my swara… ? I can’t… She is dieing..?? Every moment.. Death is coming near her?? n.. I sanskar maheshwari is unable to do anything…? I hv never felt this much helpless.. .???? ”
He cried his heart out…
He was lost in his own thoughts… Then a truck collided with his car..

He got seriously injured.. Luckily arjun was passing by the accident spot n he took him hospital…

@MM

Swara was restless.. She was standing infront of lord krishna’s idol.. N was praying for Sanskar’s well being… Soon everything turns black..
As soon as that truck hit Sanskar’s car n he fell unconcious…Here in mm her body touched the floor

Ragini shouts”swaraaaaa??”
She immediately took her in lap… Here laksh came n told them about Sanskar’s accident…
All were hell shocked… They dont kno whats happenning… Lucky picks swara up in his arms n all head to hospital…
@hospital

Dp ap sumi n RagLak were waiting in hospital corridor… Swasan were in adjacent rooms..

Doctor cam from sanskar’s ward n declare him dead.. While swara is still struggling for lyf

@swara’s ward

She was lyng unconcious on bed.. Someone held her hand n she slowly opens her eyes n said in a weak voice”sanskar m sry?”

“shhh dont be sry princess… M with u.. N will always be… Swara tell me onething do u want to come with me??” sanskar’s spirit ask

“i want to be with u everywhere”swara replied

“then hold my hand n lets go.. Away… Away from this world… In a world where death n life are just words… Where no one can seperate us… Where can can be together till end of tym… Do u want to come!” spirit ask

“i willcome with u anywhere… Ijust want to be with u”swara replied

“then hold my hand n lets go” sanskar’s spirit forwarded his hand n swara’s spirit hold his hand.. N starts to leave her body

{ Aasmaan ke pare ek jahaan hai kahin
Jhooth sach ka wahan qayeda hi nahin
Roshni mein wahan ki alag noor hai
Saaye jismon se aage jahaan jaate hain

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyaar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain

Seene se tum mere aake lag jaao na
Darte ho kyun zara paas toh aao na

Dhunn meri dhadkano ki suno..

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain

Oo.. jaate hain
Chal jaate hain
Jaate hain… jaate hain…

Koi subah wahan raat se na mile
Ud ke wahan chalo aao tum hum chale

Pankh laaya hoon main ud chalo…

Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain }

After a while doctor came n declare swara dead too

Whole world turn upside-down… In one day.. Just few hours changed everything.. The family has lost.. The two members of the family…

They completes the funeral. of swasan n came back home..

@MM

“babu? plz hv this.. Plz?” Rags tries to feed babu

But he was not eating anything… Laksh came with swara n Sanskar’s photo.. He put that on table.. Babu? ran towards that photo.. N starts to cry.. Laksh pick him up in his arms.. He jump off this arms n land on Table… He starts to lick their photo… Seeing his actions ragini too broke down… Laksh hugs her n consoles her “ragu we hv to be strong… ??” he said with much difficulty…

Ragini composes herself n serves food to everyone.. No one wants to eat.. But laksh n ragini takes the charge n make everyone eat… But still one member is not eating anything.. Babu.. He is not even touching the milk.. Laksh thought smthng n plays a video it was Swara’s video..

@video
” babu… ?? my baby.. Ese tang ni krte chalo… Hv ur food.. Jldi jldi ”

Seeing that video babu ?starts to eat…

” laksh ye??? ” ragini ask with teary eyes

” ragini vo once.. SwaSan had been to party n babu wasn’t eating anything so.. I ask swara to send her video” laksh told her.

Everyone was crying listening to Swara’s voice..

SwaSan’s death affected dp most… One side he lost his son n other side his daughter… Each n every moment his heart cries…

Time is the best healing medecine… But time too cant help the family to cope with the situation…
Itz been a month since they died… N whole mm is now dull without any joy.. No happiness… Just a bungalow to live… It is not home anymore… A home which is once filled with laughter n positivity… Is now filled with heart wrenching cries… Ragini n laksh becomes more responsible after swasan’s death… Ragini is taking care of home… Where as laksh is handling the business all on his own…
One day ragini was searching something in Swara’s room.. Then she found her diary… N a letter slips frm that

“to my dear sanskar”

Was written on it.. Ragini took that letter n read that in front of whole family..

swara’s letter

Dear sanskar…
If u r reading this then itz obvious that m no more…
I kno u must be very angry with me… n u shld be afterall i ditched u.. but sanskar what to do.. i was helpless m dieing from inside… my illness my addiction is eating me.. it makes me hollow… n a hollow heart cant spread happiness… m Sry u tried alot to save me.. but it was me who makes your every attempt idle.. ur luv was true for me… n i think no one can love me more than u do… but sanskar i can’t live without those pills.. 7yrs… i was taking them for 7yrs.. i hv ruined myself… doctor has clearly said to me that i can die any moment.. so i decide not to fight… not to fight with my addiction… i lied to u i never left those pills.. i manage to hv them.. cz i ..i can breathe without air but can’t without those pills… n i hv no regret in dieing now as i hv done my duty… i hv caught papa’s murders… i hv found u… i make u belive in luv… i taught u hw to live… Now I want freedom… freedom from this addiction… freedom from this pain… freedom from this world… u hv fullfilled all my wishes.. i hv no regret in dieng… n ya kavita loves u.. i kno u hvnt notice this bt she loves u alot… i take her gaurantee that u will be happy With her… she is perfect.. n ya kavita m giving him to u only for this birth… he will be mine in all coming births.. sry chiku.. ur baby can’t be with u in this birth.. but i promise i will be with u in our next birth… n ya dont forget what i taught u… always be happy… n spread love… n now u need not to be guru anymore… guru is dead.. now u r only sanskar maheshwari.. the business tycoon… jiske peeche ladkian pagal hai… but ur this pagal is leaving u… again m sry..and mom dad… Ragu.. Lucky n ma(ap) m sry u must be very angry na.. But what to do.. Smthngs are destined to happen… never loose hope i will be with u… in form of raindrops… in form of chilled breeze… in form of sunrays… u can listen my voice in chriping of birds… u can see my angrynes in thundering… u can see my love in clouds… i will be with u in ur heart whenever u need me just close ur eyes n ask me anything… i will solve ur every problem… one last wish… kahoge kitta bolti hai bt this is for the last tym… do u rember what u said when u proposed me “u want to fill my lyf with luv the way u filled the corridor.. I don’t need to step on bare floor..” so sanskar i want to complete my last journey in two arms not on four shoulders… i want to finish the journey of this lyf as ur bride.. in ur arms… you will do this for me na..i luv u..

Ur baby… ur swara..

**letter ends**

Everyone got shattered listening to her last letter.. Seeing her luv for sanskar

Here another luv story remains incomplete… Swara’s last wish remain incomplete…

“deeper the luv lesser the possibility of being together ”

Swara has never expected that sanskar would die… She wrote her last letter to him.. It reflects her trust on him… She believes that he is capable of handling everything… But destiny has itz own way… Destiny unites them… Not on earth but on heven…

Luv is pious.. Swara’s determination changed sanskar… And Sanskar’s determination to be with her in every condition.. He succeeded to be with swara not only on earth but also in a world beyond limitations… A world beyond lyf n death..

THE END

Ahh hwz that emotional? Sad? I kno u guyz won’t lyk the ending… But what to do guyz… Something remains incomplete…
Some stories remains incomplete

M so sry guyz for giving it a sad ending…. It was difficult for me too.. To write such ending.. Sply that part of babu…

As u kno I ask for comments only on last part… So here it is plz Comment n tell me hw may of u hv read this

Tell me do h want epilogue? I will write that only if u want
(it would be happy one bt with a common concept… Rebirth )

m signing off for 5 days… I hv my exams… Phew!!

See u soon ?

Luv u all???

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152 Comments

  1. Jenisha on May 8, 2016 11:29 am

    Awesomely ended….but a sad one….plz come with new ff soon …bye till then take care Meher…….

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thanku so much dear.. N sure I will come back ??

  2. soujanya on May 8, 2016 11:31 am

    I got tears…awesomee

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thnku n sry for tears

  3. momo on May 8, 2016 11:34 am

    this awesome
    ………………….I had become emotional. ……….

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thanku.. ?

  4. Nita on May 8, 2016 11:34 am

    wow Meher…. it was awesome… there were tears in my eyes…. i have never cried reading so many emotional stories…. though i could feel the emotions but tears… never…. today i dont know when that first drop came n then it continued….. so emotional…. specially after reading Swara’s letter n the last part…. howmuch i wanted a happy ending but this was so beautiful……. no words…..

    n ya for epilouge i think u can show swasan happy in heaven…. n they r seeing their family happy…… n family’s happiness can be brought back by RagLak marriage or children….

    • Nita on May 8, 2016 11:36 am

      or if u wanna go with rebirth concept, then maybe they can be born as raglak children maybe.
      just a suggestion. its upto u to decide…

    • Anu roy on May 8, 2016 12:10 pm

      Yar if tey both r rag laks children ten they’ll b siblings..

    • Nita on May 8, 2016 12:33 pm

      ya i know that…

    • Nita on May 8, 2016 12:37 pm

      they can b together as siblings na….
      or if u want their love story only then as RagLak child n Arjun’s child

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:07 pm

      M sry to make u cry… I never thought that it would become do much emotional….

      N ya a happy epiogue… ?

      N they will not be bro sis ?????

  5. Prithi on May 8, 2016 11:36 am

    I have tears in my eyes reading the ending…. I am generally not that emotional but this made me cry… While giving commint also I am crying…. Loved it meher.. Just loved it..

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:08 pm

      Thank you dear.. .

      M really sorry to make u cry ?

  6. Eva on May 8, 2016 11:37 am

    Meher!!!!!!!!!!!Kya kiya yar?Mar diya…I’m crying now….it was sooo emotional…and very heart touching……swasan’s true love…..kahi na kahi toh jakar mili…..thats what makes me happy….

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:09 pm

      Sorry Eva dear to kill them…

      Yup now they are together n no one can separate them ??

  7. Rosey on May 8, 2016 11:39 am

    Yar itna emotional but amazing the

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:09 pm

      Thank you so much dear ??

  8. Serena on May 8, 2016 11:40 am

    ?????????????????????????????? m literally crying why u make them dead I can’t see this.??? but really loved their lovestory . u r right some love stories remain incomplete. But never thought of this ending at least u should fulfill swara’s last wish. But I’ll miss u a lot Di. Come back soon.☺☺

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:17 pm

      So sry dear…

      The most beautiful luv stories remains incomplete… It nothing infront of them..

      Don’t worry I will full fill Swara’s last wish in epilogue ???

  9. mou on May 8, 2016 11:41 am

    soo emotional.. awesome yr

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:18 pm

      Tahnkuu??

  10. Vamwolfan on May 8, 2016 11:41 am

    Adhuri kahani

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:18 pm

      Not actually ??

  11. Haai(sree) on May 8, 2016 11:42 am

    I literally cried meherdi on reading d death news!!!!bt i happy as they will be united n heaven????!!!!its a awesome ff!!!wishes for u to come with new nd fantastic ff!!!waiting for kuch iss tarah 2!!!!!

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:22 pm

      Thanku so much dear…

      M glad that you like it

      N sure?? m nt going anywhere

  12. Saranya on May 8, 2016 11:43 am

    It was just awesome & emotional.. Come up with a new story soon.. i was a silent reader of ur ff but had to comment nw

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:33 pm

      Thanku dear for reading this…

      N surely I will come back ??

  13. lol on May 8, 2016 11:43 am

    hey u made me cry a lot !!! it so touching !! so emotional I love the ff ?

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:50 pm

      Thanks..
      N sry to make u cry..
      Keep smiling ?

  14. sweety on May 8, 2016 11:43 am

    Yeah plz write an epilogue n giv happy ending…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:53 pm

      Sure dear I will… ??

  15. Vinita on May 8, 2016 11:44 am

    It is so beautiful………. Some stories are destined to have a tragic ending……………
    Swara’s pov through the letter I’d beautifully expressed.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:54 pm

      Thanku dear ??

      Yup somethings remains incomplete… ?

  16. Shagun on May 8, 2016 11:46 am

    something very touchy and amazing

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:54 pm

      Thnx shagun

      M glad that you like it ??

  17. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 8, 2016 11:46 am

    Its emotional……..pls start a new ff…..pls…..

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 2:55 pm

      Thanku n sure natasha ??

  18. ruhi on May 8, 2016 11:51 am

    Wow it’s truly amazing part……….u made me cry yr.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:00 pm

      Thnku ruhi ?
      Sry to make u cry ?? keep smiling

  19. anu on May 8, 2016 11:51 am

    awesome.. this time i was wrong that i thought kavita or arjun behind this but nt expected as nandini.. its good .. sad ending but ya some stories are incomplete.. awesome ff and want epilouge of this ff.. please give…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:14 pm

      Thnku anu..

      N ya I will give itz epilogue..

      ????

  20. jane on May 8, 2016 11:51 am

    Iam crying now

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:15 pm

      Don’t cry dear ?

  21. jenny on May 8, 2016 11:54 am

    While reading and writing my tears are stopping.it is too emotional. You are truly amazing writer.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:16 pm

      Thnx alot… For appreciating my writings ???

  22. mystery on May 8, 2016 11:57 am

    it was the most best end i have ever read….and yeah true love stories are those which are incomplete….the story which gets an end is never a lovestory……..remember?? ISHQ SACCHA WAHI JISKO MILTI NAHIN MANZILEIN……… awesome towesome jani love u sooooooooooo much

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:17 pm

      Thnx so much

      M glad that you like it

      Keep reading ?????

  23. Dharsha on May 8, 2016 11:59 am

    ??????I will comment afterwards about this………

    ALL THE VERY BEST FOR UR EXAMS

    Miss u di…..❤

    • Dharsha on May 8, 2016 12:51 pm

      Now am okay………the part u made them together in heaven was just fab….???seriously something remains special with a sad note but it’s inevitable…..???
      U once again proved that SwaSan are together forever anywhere and everywhere …. ???
      Love u loads for giving us this wonderful ff and I would be happy if there is an epilogue….anyways Best of luck for ur exams once again ??? Laugh alwayzzz is a thing I learnt from u???
      Miss u…..???

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:20 pm

      Thnx for ur wishes… ?

      Yup laughing is best way for removing negativity.. ..

      Keep laughing ????

      N wait what’s ur age… If u r 14-15 then itz kk.. Or else y r u calling me di.. M just sweet 18 ???

    • Dharsha on May 8, 2016 3:34 pm

      Ya …. am just 15 but no worries if u don’t like I will call with ur name coZ u r just sweet 18???

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:44 pm

      I won’t that mind either afterall m sweet 18 ????

  24. B on May 8, 2016 11:59 am

    Itz a great story…. Especially the end of story is a great impact on me. I don’t know whether its a happy ending or sad… But its the only way to unite Swasan. A very big thanks for this ff…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:24 pm

      Tahnkuu so much for reading ???

      M glad that you like it???

  25. Sravs on May 8, 2016 12:04 pm

    Omg!!! It was awesome dear.. Very emotional.. Literally crying during the lines…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:20 pm

      Thnku so much…

      M glad that you like it ??

  26. Ria on May 8, 2016 12:06 pm

    A sad ending…… But it’s a fact that all the love stories will not have a happy ending…… Well done…..

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:21 pm

      Thnx alot ria?

  27. Silent reader on May 8, 2016 12:13 pm

    I’m speechless with the ending, and I loved it, I never comment for any ff but ur one was really awesome. And would like if you start the rebirth concept.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:25 pm

      Thnku so much for commenting…
      It means a lot to me… ??

  28. aditi syam on May 8, 2016 12:19 pm

    Awesome yaar no words to say i was really crying reading this such emotional and also sad that it ended

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:26 pm

      Thanku so much dear…

      N don’t cry ?

  29. Myra on May 8, 2016 12:20 pm

    U made me cry yaar 🙁

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:27 pm

      Sry to make u cry?

      Don’t cry keep smiling ??

  30. Afra on May 8, 2016 12:46 pm

    It was emotional dear..
    All the best for your exams.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:27 pm

      Thnx afraid for reading…

      N thnx for ur wishes ?

  31. Mitti on May 8, 2016 12:47 pm

    Ahh tears r not stopping. ..what to do!!!…I was sobbing reading the dog’s part. .I felt more bad for him… 🙁 🙁
    It’s awesome dear. ..even though a sad ending but it ended with the glory of love..Two souls unconditional love for each other…..They always lived for each other overlooking the circumstances they were in….All these 7 years swara was alive coz somewhere in her heart she was waiting for her chiku! !!!…n awesome love story dear. …Their hearts beats for each other n stopped together. …u made them eternal n forever!!!!!
    …..n ya this ff has stolen my heart!!

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:30 pm

      So sry to make u cry…
      I too felt bad while writing that dog’s part…

      She was just waiting for her chiku.. N want to solve the problems in his lyf… N she does that…

      Thnku again… M glad that you like it.. ?

  32. aanya on May 8, 2016 12:47 pm

    I got tears yaar u made me cry superb story but sad ? ending and ya its true that all the love story will not have a happy ending
    Miss u
    Come back soon

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:32 pm

      Sry to make u cry….

      Sure just exam khatam hone do I will be back ????

  33. Kavya on May 8, 2016 12:56 pm

    Meher yaar how can u write such awsum ff’s!!??? I love you nd yojur ff’s ?

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:33 pm

      Thnku so much dear ?

      Luv u loads ??

  34. niti on May 8, 2016 12:59 pm

    u made me cry :'( :'(
    a perfect ending

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:34 pm

      Sry to make u cry…
      N thnaku??

  35. Yaz on May 8, 2016 1:02 pm

    Ur ff is realy niz meher…..im waiting for next ff ..

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:34 pm

      Thanku so much…

      M glad that you like it ??

  36. stoneheart on May 8, 2016 1:02 pm

    meher ji.. I mean m just speechless today.. I wont praise you today as what ever I will say will be very less.. brilliantly written … n I just love ur song selections.. take care and come back soon with a blast ..!

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:37 pm

      Thnku so much…
      U always encourage ne to write better n better…
      It really means a lot to me.. ???

  37. hadi on May 8, 2016 1:19 pm

    As expected I expected this ending only from starting fabulous dear I thought that hope so u change the plot in the end to a happy one but it’s ok u r ri8 some story r endless n u show it very well keep it up waiting for ur next ff
    Best ov luck 4 ur exams

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:38 pm

      Thamku so much…

      N ya I too want to give it a sad ending frm the beginning…

      Thnx for reading ???

  38. Rachana on May 8, 2016 1:21 pm

    Such a sad ending yaar please start a new season of this ff as a continuation and in that please unite them

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:39 pm

      Sure I will think for that ??

  39. sueNo on May 8, 2016 1:24 pm

    wow!!!!!!!!!!!! U r soo true dear………… some stories stay incomplete, coz its thr destiny……….. d love thy share so pure.. tht i hope i get such luv in my lyf…….. coz v cant see our lovd dying n v cant see thm suffering fr us…….. so lets die togethr………. i knw im sounding silly……… bt forgetting ur true love n moving on s jus nt so easy………………. it ws definetly an emotional one………….. i jus lovd it…………. wt an end? superb………… hats off………… 🙂
    ya plz do d epilouge fr sure…………….. 🙂

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:42 pm

      Actually I too believe same… I choose to die with my loved one rather than to survive without them…

      N for me that special someone is my mumma.. I don’t give a damn to other luv fir me parent’s luv is only true n pious

      Thnku so much for reading

  40. ani on May 8, 2016 1:30 pm

    very emotional ending yrr……I m crying reading ur story but its just amazing plz come with new ff…………

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:43 pm

      Thanku so much for reading ??

  41. himani on May 8, 2016 1:32 pm

    Plzzzzz a new season plzzzzzz it is so awsome my fav ff plzzzzz plz make a rebirth plzzzz

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:46 pm

      Sure I will think for this?

  42. Sumeeta on May 8, 2016 1:38 pm

    Sad ending?

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:46 pm

      Sry bt what to do ?

  43. taniya on May 8, 2016 1:45 pm

    aswm stry ….

  44. taniya on May 8, 2016 1:46 pm

    aswm stry …. nd vry emtnal stry

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:47 pm

      Thnku so much dear ?

  45. Ishani on May 8, 2016 1:47 pm

    I’m a silent reader of ur ff I will miss this ff plz come with season 2 if u come with season 2 I promise I will comment daily…..

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:49 pm

      Thnku dear…

      For now u can read my upcoming two ffs… ???

  46. shan on May 8, 2016 1:49 pm

    its awesome…..babu part was very emotional…..swaras letter shows how she loves sanky….its fabulous

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:50 pm

      Thnku so much…

      Babu’s part was the most sad part for me

  47. Riya on May 8, 2016 2:05 pm

    Meher u rocked.. I was a silent reader but couldn’t help commenting on ur ff and 2 others today.. God u are an excellent writer inherited in genes.. Loved the way u ended.. Not all stories are complete , some are left incomplete to be completed in a better way.. Can u pls post an epilogue.. Pls pls

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:52 pm

      Thnku so much… M happy that I made my silent reader to comment too..

      Sure I will post an epilogue too

  48. tani on May 8, 2016 2:32 pm

    really loved their lovestory
    . u r right some love stories remain
    incomplete. this ff has stolen my heart!!there were tears in my eyes….
    i have never cried reading so many
    emotional stories…. though i could feel
    the emotions but tears… never…. today i
    dont know when that first drop came n
    then it continued….. so emotional….
    Swara’s pov through the letter I’d
    beautifully expressed.
    You
    are truly amazing writer.
    Yeah plz write an epilogue n
    giv happy ending…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:53 pm

      Thank you… M glad that you like it…

      Thanku… N ya I will give epilogue too ??

  49. Hope on May 8, 2016 2:37 pm

    Why everyone is making me cry today? Mrng Anu made me cry wid fixing broken hearts..and arranged to be his..now u wid dis?? Anyway…wow.. But sad.. Tc..rock ur exams.

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:54 pm

      Thanks..
      M glad that you like it..

      Surely I will rock that too..

      See You soon ?

    • Anjali on May 8, 2016 4:02 pm

      Lol…. for once, I didn’t make u cry…. ???

    • Anu on May 8, 2016 5:24 pm

      Sorry. But Anjaliii ??
      U made me laugh thank God or else we would have been killed.

      And again I m going to start to read this when this is going to end. Sad x x

      And btw Meher Kuch is Tarah is continuation of season 1 or a fresh plot with fresh Swasan?

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 6:56 pm

      Lol ??

      Fresh plot.. Fresh story… Old swasan ??

  50. Priya tripathi on May 8, 2016 2:56 pm

    Awesome ending yaar realy i was read ur ff always but because of servar prob i couldn’t comment ur last episode full of emotion bye n plz come back with another story

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 3:55 pm

      Thanku dear… Keep encouraging me ??

  51. mehra on May 8, 2016 3:32 pm

    Hli meher,
    I used to read all your ff… I am luv with all of Jr ff.. I hope u will continue writing. I will wait for it
    If any current ff is going pls inform….

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 4:25 pm

      Thnku n I will continue writing…

      I will resume writing frm Friday ?

  52. Jaf on May 8, 2016 3:43 pm

    I want an epilogue Pls!
    I was literally crying at the end! ???
    U made me cry!

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 4:26 pm

      I will give you an epilogue…
      N sry to make u cry

  53. Mona (ash) on May 8, 2016 3:49 pm

    It’s really nice dr. my tears haven’t stopped. I was watching Neerja and I was crying. as soon as I finished I came to tu and ur ff read it and I started to cry completely ????

    I felt that this chapter finished fastly. I mean you summarised everything. think it’s because of your exams and you will not be able to update. But I will really miss this di

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 4:28 pm

      Ya itz all cz of exams.. I thought it to be a 25 episode ff… Bt lol it get finished in 19 episode ??

      Thnku so much for reading ?

  54. Anjali on May 8, 2016 4:10 pm

    Missed the last couple of chapters so went back, read those and came here now….

    I didn’t cry….. in fact I smiled…. I understand the power of death in love….
    And besides incomplete love stories are the ones which are legendary….

    Romeo Juliet
    Bajirao mastani
    Etc…..

    Awesomeee meher!!!! ???

    Can’t wait for kuch iss tarah…. ???

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 4:30 pm

      Exactly… All luv stories hv not happy ending…. Some are beyond end…

      Thnku anji ???

  55. Neha on May 8, 2016 4:35 pm

    Meher I won’t kill you bcoz its not incomplete on or the other way it’s complete their love completed… Yes I really felt bad for babu Now u showed how much he loved swasan really pets are very loving n caring felt bad for dp also…
    N that letter that was worst she believed sanskar would accept her death n handle the situations but little she knew that he left his breath before her…. Ok I want epilogue it’s not happy ending swara’s last wish remained unfulfilled but they are together in heaven…. It’s too emotional yaar now I need something to alter my mind n mood tc love you

    • Neha on May 8, 2016 6:45 pm

      One more Kuch is trah is written by u I didn’t know I read it but ? it’s someone else’s but season 2 u started I’ve to check it… Will check it n read gtg… stay blessed

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:22 pm

      Someone else’s ??

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:04 pm

      Thank god… Actually I was desperate to give it a sad ending… I thought u all will not lyk it… But m happy that u lyk it…

      Yup pets are more attached to their masters… They may not show that but their luv is pure… My rabit use to bite me whenever I play with other rabit.. N now same goes with my dogs… Lol they are jealous of each other ???

      I can tell you a joke… If u want ????

  56. Neha on May 8, 2016 4:36 pm

    I Still have tears in my eyes….but you are right kuchh stories adhuri reh jati hai pr apne aap mein vo puri hai…radha kishan…romeo Juliet…heer ranjha kisi ko apna pyaar nhi mila…pr phir bhi unki love stories puri hai..and same is happened with our swasan…thanks for this beautiful incomplete but still a complete story…luv you and see you soon…DELHI WALI HU AASANI SE NHI ROTI PR AAJ TUMNE RULA DIYA???????

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:25 pm

      Thnku so much….

      Ab ek dilli wali ko dusri dilli wali he rula sakti hai…. M happy that I make u cry… Cz actually itz difficult to make a dilli di Kudi cry.. . ????

  57. L Khan on May 8, 2016 5:06 pm

    It was really emotional but loved it by heart nd babu part was very very heart touching it deeply touched my heart………nd will let surely gonna miss u
    I know that I’m late to comment but I had to comment so I’m here…..the ending too touched my heart………nd swara’s letter was mindblowing emotional superb I’m less with words in describing the letter how much I liked it
    LOVE U DR ???

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:27 pm

      Thanku so much…

      U never know what ur comments means to me.. It gives motivation to improve….

      M super duper happy that u lyk this

      Luv u loads ??

  58. kumu. on May 8, 2016 5:27 pm

    it was so emotional..bt i loved it..:)all d best 4 ur exm..:)

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:28 pm

      Thnku so much…

      N thnx for ur wishes

  59. Jannat on May 8, 2016 6:12 pm

    Nw hw can i stay..yr…. ur stories n lovely ffs r … rt nw my lyfline… its vacations ….. thnxx for writing n fell r lyf with joy…
    luv u…
    stay blessed

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:28 pm

      Aww thnkuuu dear…. ??

  60. sethooty on May 8, 2016 6:19 pm

    Wow superb yaar…..it was very emotional.. Perfect ending…

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:29 pm

      Thank you so much ????

  61. Shagun on May 8, 2016 7:33 pm

    U made me cry
    Plz update epilogue soon
    Usme to kam se kam swasan completely together honge

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 7:43 pm

      Sry to make u cry shagun…

      Sure I will post that soon?

  62. Romaisa on May 8, 2016 8:35 pm

    Omg im crying it’s so sad and emotional but a very good Episode will miss you come back soon❤️❤️?

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 8:54 pm

      Thnku so much dear

  63. Tvisha on May 8, 2016 9:06 pm

    OMG you made me cry like hell!!!

    it was a sad ending but really fabulous work!!!!

    please upload the epilouge soon 🙁 🙂

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 10:09 pm

      So sry tvisha dear to make u cry ?

      N thnaku so much ??

  64. Jyotii on May 8, 2016 9:48 pm

    Perfect ending! Ur lines are damn truth! Some love stories remain incomplete! 🙁
    This was truly awesome! I have no more words! 🙂

    • Meher on May 8, 2016 10:09 pm

      Thanku so much dear ?

  65. Aditi Singh on May 9, 2016 6:39 am

    meher epilogue is a nice idea…

    • Meher on May 9, 2016 9:02 am

      Yup ?

  66. Shalmali Kamble on May 9, 2016 10:54 am

    Sissy..!! What was that..!! It was unbelievable ending.. I was crying literally.. 🙁 But hats off to ur writing skills sissy.. luv u.. & Eagerly waiting for Kuch iss tarah season 2

    • Meher on May 9, 2016 2:32 pm

      Thnku so much sissy….

      Sry to make u cry….

      ?????

  67. serena on May 9, 2016 12:26 pm

    di when are u posting epilogue u know na ur story is like refreshment dose for me.

    • Meher on May 9, 2016 2:31 pm

      Dear at present m standing outside examination hall… N still checking site ?????

  68. Ayendrila Saha on May 9, 2016 1:10 pm

    It’s a awesome story meher….. .. You know what I love a story which will end with a line ” and they all live together happily for ever after”… .. .. I dont know whether it is called happy ending or not….. U know if you give swara a new life then it would be called magic or super magic like she serial…. I am so much happy that u made sanskar die…. u unite them in heaven…… U r superb….. I am a big fan of yours… .. Love u meher keep writing ?????????????

    • Meher on May 9, 2016 2:35 pm

      Aww thanku so much dear ??

      Yup if I make her live then it would defeated the laws of medical science..

      But smthng if more beautiful when they remain incomplete

  69. shani on May 9, 2016 2:16 pm

    This.is really awesome..well done
    .loved this story soo much
    .and I gonna miss it…keep writing…god bless u..

    • Meher on May 9, 2016 6:51 pm

      Thank you so much…

      Thnx for reading n encouraging me ??

  70. musku on May 10, 2016 1:58 am

    Mugdha I wanted to say that I didn’t find the story to be incomplete ….it’s complete in all respects….they lived their 4 eachother….sanky s life revolved around swara how to make her fight the addiction n swara life revolved around sanky how to bring sanky back leaving guru behind….n as they say we will be together till death so us apart….but their love surpass this level also….even death failed to separate them….I loved the ending….it wud have been a sad ending if one wud have survived….but there souls were united so what if there body cudnt …..well done mukku

    • Meher on May 10, 2016 8:49 am

      Thanku so much… ?

      Yup their luv was beyond lyf… N they are together in the world where no one can separate them…

      ????

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