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SwaSan Revenge: A smile that has stolen my heart – Episode 11

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link of all parts…
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Previous part
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SwaSan Revenge: A smile that has stolen my heart

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Recap: sanskar realises his luv for swara… ragini n dp slaps sanskar… swara uncounsious

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Itz night n swara is still uncouncious… everyone was tensed sply arjun… doctors words were roming his mind..
That she may slip into coma or even die..

Sanskar keeps on trying to enter her room bt everytime ragini or anyone else stops him..

“Ragini plz… i request u let me see her once”??sanskar cried

“Dont think sanskar that i will melt by seeing ur crocodile tears… u r nt allowed to meet swara in any condition”? ragini said in strict tone

“Ragini u go n take rest m here”☺ arjun said

“Arjun bt sanskar ?”? Ragini sound worried

“M here na dont worry i wont let him meet her… u go”arjun assures her

Ragini left

“Sanskar what ever u hv done is disgusting … bt still i kno she luvs u.. go n meet her” arjun said

“What!! Thankyou.. thankyou so much.. i can’t repay u??☺?” sanskar got shocked n happy

“Go n dont come untill she wakes up.. i will make sure that no one will entr room by morning” arjun patted his shoulder n left

“I wish swara will fight back.. n she will survive ..sanskar’s luv will give her strength” arjun prays

Sanskar enters the room n saw her lyng on bed with an innocent face.. his eyes were filled with Tears of guilt… guilt of hurting an innocent soul again… guilt of hurting his luv twice.. He sat on bed beside her n hold her hand…

“Swara m sry..? m sry i hv hurted u alot na… u hv loved me selflessly.. bt m selfish.. i can’t see ur innocence i was stupid… swara plz get up na… n talk to me.. i am still confused with ur reaction.. m sry.. just wake up n i will shower my luv on u… i will be with forever… i will never leave u.. u r my princess”??

He kissed her forehead.. n cares her head Slowly he dozze off holding her hand…

**********

@4 am

Swara slowly opens her eyes n saw sanskar sitting besides her… then she recalls sanskar’s betrayal… n tears starts to shed off her eyes..
Hearing her sobs sanskar gets up ..

“Swara finally u hv opened ur eyes… u kno i was scared as hell.. r u fyn now ??” ? Sanskar takes relief..

“Why me sanskar?”? She asked in a choaking voice

Sanskar has no answer … swara tried to get up n he helped her..

“Let me call ragini or arjun”? sanskar avoids her question n tries to escape situation..

He was going bt swara hold his hand

“First answer me… sanskar”? swara again asked

He sat besides her.. n she rest her head on his chest.. Again he got shocked with her gesture.. then he wraps his arms arond her taking her in his warm embrace…

“Swara m sorry.. i hv missunderstood u” he said with lots of guilt..
Then he explains everything…
Sanskar feels his shirt wet.. he makes swara apart n saw tears flowing from her eyes He immediately cups her face n said”m sry baby.. ur chiku is very bad… ur chiku has hurted u alot.. bt i promise i will never repeat my mistake again.. i luv u baby?”

“I luv u too chiku n will always do…”swara said with affection

“Y r u trusting me again ??”? Sanskar asked

“Cz i can see ur luv in ur eyes… u cant hurt me.. my chiku cant hurt me”she said while hiding herself in his chest..

N again sleep peacefully on his chest..

@8am

“I think i shld see swara once.. arjun must be tired now” ragini said to herself

She enters her room got furious over the scenario Swara was sleeping while resting her head on sanskar chest n sanskar has wrapped his arms around her…

“Sanskarr!!!”? Ragini shouts

SwaSan wakes in shock

“Y r u shouting ragu” swara said in sleepy voice

She makes them apart in rage.. she pushed swara slightly on bed

“Raginiiii!!” ?Sanskar shouts

By the tym all members gatherd in the room…

“Get out frm here sanskar… hw dare u to enter her room” ??ragini said in anger

“Sanskar i hv told u nt to come near swara then what r u doing here”? dp said strictly

“M sry dad.. bt i will not leave my swara in any condition”?sanskar said while holding her hand tightly

“Firstly m nt ur dad … n secondly she is nt ur swara”? dp revert in anger

“Bas kijiye aap log… m sanskar ki he hoon… srf or srf uski.. i agree he has done mistake bt itz normal… everyone commits mistake..he too does.. why r u making this an issue” swara supports sanskar

Sanskar was Overwhelmed seeing her luv n support

“Swara u r nt well it doesnt mean that if u demand anything we will give u that” ?sumi roars

“He is not a thing mom.. he is my sanskar” swara said clamly

“Swara enough!!” ?Ragini said

In the mean tym arjun comes n smhow handel the situation bt sanskar have to leave swara this tym..

******

@lunch

Everyone was sitting on dining table.. sanskar was about to sit adjecent to swara bt swara ragini sat there

“Mom plz pass that rice na” sanskar tries to talk

“Ramesh(servent) pass this bowl to chhote malik”? ap ignors

“Kaka give that bowl to me?” swara said to ramesh n passes the bowl to sanskar

“Laksh what happen to mr. Basu’s project” dp enquired

“Dad that project is handeled by bhai”laksh said

“Dad deal has been finalised … n draft of final contract will get ready by tmrw” sanskar agin tries to talk

“Laksh then ask the head of the project n tell me” dp completly ignores him

Sanskar was very upset with the cold behaviour of his family…

Whole day no one talks with sanskar n also doesnt make swasan meet

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NEXT DAY

@evening

“Ramesh plz prepare tea for us… we r tired” ?ap orded

“Here is the tea ?for u aunty” ragini came with tea n bright smile

“Thanku beta.. i need it badly” ap tanks her

Ragini serves tea to everone except sanskar

“Ragini my tea???” Sanskar asked

“Ramesh prepare tea to this man” ragini orders ramesh

“No.. no thanx kaka i dont want to hv tea” sanskar sounds low

“Wait sanskar” swara said firmly

She left her cup n went towards him.. he held his hand tightly…

“I dont kno whats problem with u all.. bt y r u behaving so coldly with my sanskar..” swara said

“Swara leave his hand.. he is no one.. to u.. nor to us” ?ragini said..

“Exactly swara . Ragini is correct we dont hv any relation with this man” sumi supports ragini

“He is my everything” ?swara roared

“Prove this that he is ur everything…!!!” Rags said

Then what she does was unexpected… no one could ever imagine that she would take such a bold step…

She turns towards him strech herself up n brushed her lips with his

Everyone hell shocked as if their eyes will fell on ground. Their mouths were wide open touching to ground…

“Omg!!! Atlast someone has courage to kiss bhai… wow !!”???? Laksh jumps in exitement

“Now do u want any more proofs “? swara frowned

“Hmm… sanskar hw it feels.. when u got kissed by a girl ???? ” dp teases

“What !!! Dad??”??? Sanskar asked in shock

“What u think we were angry on u… no beta we hv forgiven you in morning only”??? ap smiled

“What !! Hw !!??”?? SwaSan together

“All thanx to me princess??” arjun said with a smile touching his ears

“Hw ??” ?SwaSan were confused

***FLASHBACK***

“Uncle aunty i agree what sanskar has done was wrong.. bt iyz also true that swara recovers only cz of him” arjun tries to convence them

“Hw can u justify attempt to murder”rags frowned

” m nt justifyng anything rags… m just saying that he luvs his family n swara alot thats y he cant harm them” arjun supports sanskar

“Luv.. he has faked his Luv for swara” rags argue

“Tell me one thing when u enter her room yesterday.. cant u see her sleeping peacefully on his chest !?? Hv u ever seen her so carefree so happy with anyone else?,”arjun enquired..

Atlast everyone agrees to forgive him..

“Hey bt plz dont tell bhai that u all hv forgiven him” laksh said with a naughty smile???

“Y laksh?” ?Ap asked

” i want to see upto what extent swara “bhabhi”? can go for bhai” laksh said

“I too agree with lucky” ragini too smiles naughtyly?

****FLASHBACK ENDS****

“thanku chipk(stops in btwn) arjun… Thnku arjun ” sanky thanked him

“Ha to bhai tell me na hw it feels when a girl kisses u” ?laksh winked

“Are its nt for the first tym we kissed..”?? sanskar said in happiness …n realises what he said

“Then hw many tym u hv kissed”????arjun teases

He was about to say three bt seeing swara’s crimson face he stopped…

“Tell us sanskar hw many tyms u guyz hv kissed.. or let me change the que hw many tyms u hv kissed my bahu”? ap joins hand in teasing

“Kya ma.. kuch bhi.. i hv lots of work m going”☺☺ sanskar escapes the situation

“Aree itti jaldi nhi mere bhai”arjun held his hand

“Tell me when u guyz want to get engaged”dp ask

Sanskar was about to say smthng bt swara says “no… not now… i want tym”

Everyone was shocked with her sudden change of behaviour.. but arjun knows the reason… he said”achha aunty now i shld leave… swara come n drop me to car”

She simply went with him

*******

“What r u tryng to do swara!!”? Arjun said in anger

“Dont act..as if u dont kno anything”??swara revert

“Swara he is ur cure… he is cure to ur addiction trust me”arjun sounds hopeful

“N what if i die immediately after our engagement or marriage??” Swara said

Before she could say further arjun raises his hand to slap her bt stops…

“Dont you dare to say anything lyk this… m warning u?? y r u always be so negative”he said

“reality will nt change.. tell me will he be able to compose himself?? NO !!? i hv committed one mistake by luving him n second mistake by accepting that… after me he will get shattered.. i dont want to see him breaking… so i will go away frm him after making everything fyn in his lyf?” swara sounds low

Someone was seeing all this scenario n was hell shocked to listen this?

To be continued…

Precap: surprise ??

Note:- that someone was not sanskar

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82 Comments

  1. ridhima on April 30, 2016 10:45 am

    Loved it as always
    w8ing. For nxt part

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:46 pm

      Thank you dear…
      M glad that you like it ?

  2. sumeeta on April 30, 2016 10:51 am

    nice

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:47 pm

      Thanks ?

  3. Sueño on April 30, 2016 10:52 am

    Yaayy…….. Superb…….. Lovd it??
    Wn vl sanky knw d truth……. Jus waiting to see…….. Hahahah!!!!! Already kissed, God it ws jus awe??

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:48 pm

      Thank you ??
      In nxt episode ?

  4. Haai(sree) on April 30, 2016 10:53 am

    Superb meherdi!!!
    Im having 1 doubt!!!sanskar hd alredy given one tablet of swara to kavitha,to check wats tat!!!did he didnt gt d report of t!!!!

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:49 pm

      Thnku Lil sissy
      Wait for nxt episode ur doubt will be cleared ??

  5. prami on April 30, 2016 10:55 am

    Hey.. I’m one of the silent reader but yor ff is awesome I can’t held myself 2 comment…. U r 1 of my favorite writer….. It was awesome episode…..

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:50 pm

      Thank you so much dear…
      It’s my achievement that I made a silent reader comment…
      Keep reading ???

  6. shan on April 30, 2016 10:56 am

    awesome…..loved it…..

    • meher on April 30, 2016 1:52 pm

      Thanks
      Keep reading

  7. Crystal on April 30, 2016 11:02 am

    Loved it… I hope it’s Sanskar who would have listened all this … And I hope with Sanskar’s love , nothing happens to swara

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:00 pm

      Thanku dear…
      nopes that wasn’t any family member or kavita…
      Keep reading to know more?

  8. Rida on April 30, 2016 11:09 am

    OMG! MEHER then who was he ?let me guess…laksh or ragini, i think so it was mind blowing post.plz update nxt part soon love u dear

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:01 pm

      Thanku dear…
      Let’s see about ur guess in nxt episode..
      ??

  9. anu on April 30, 2016 11:13 am

    nice… first when reading i thought its sanskar but you said its nt he.. so may be ragini, laksh or dp… dont know but eagerly waiting for next epiode…

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:02 pm

      Thank you dear…
      Let’s see who was that… ??

  10. ruhi on April 30, 2016 11:20 am

    Love it

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:02 pm

      Thnku

  11. Kittu on April 30, 2016 11:25 am

    Meher dear ur jus awesum..eagrly waiting fr nxt update asap

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:03 pm

      Thanku dear
      M happy that you lyk this ?

  12. Nidhi on April 30, 2016 11:26 am

    Awesome. Really loved it. Waiting for next ep post asap

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:03 pm

      Thank you….
      Keep reading ???

  13. Rosey on April 30, 2016 11:26 am

    Wow what a Swara I loved it

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thnku… N I too luv that swara
      ??

  14. Afra on April 30, 2016 11:49 am

    Nice..

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thanks…

  15. Dhara on April 30, 2016 11:50 am

    Superb

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:04 pm

      Thanks alot

  16. Priya on April 30, 2016 11:59 am

    It is really awesome loved the part

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:05 pm

      Thanku priya…
      M glad that you like it ??

  17. stoneheart on April 30, 2016 12:08 pm

    meher ji… I love u ..!! only u can get this naughty and u used the swasan scene of the episode so beautifully…
    In love wid ur ff…

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:06 pm

      Thanku so much jii.. U always encourage me….
      Naughty who? m innocent… ??
      Keep reading ??

  18. sumeeta on April 30, 2016 12:18 pm

    superb?

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:07 pm

      Thank you ??

  19. Dharsha on April 30, 2016 12:26 pm

    Yaar it was damn perfect…..?
    Just loved it a lot….?
    Swasan rocked as usual?
    Hope swara gets well soon….will pray to God ? no no will pray to u coz u only write the story??

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:08 pm

      Thanku so much dear for reading ??

      Lol let’s see hw story mounds cz I don’t kno what will happen happen in end???

  20. sneha on April 30, 2016 1:07 pm

    It was damm awsom meher..
    I really lovd it…hope that u dont separate our swasan… 🙂

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:09 pm

      Thanku sneha. ??
      Let’s hope ?
      Keep reading ??

  21. aanya on April 30, 2016 1:11 pm

    Superb

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:09 pm

      Thank you

  22. Aditi Singh on April 30, 2016 1:14 pm

    Who was that give the next part soon

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:10 pm

      Suspense dear ???
      Wait for nxt part to kno ??

  23. Serena on April 30, 2016 1:29 pm

    M silent reader but today u make me comment ur ff is really like a morning tea for me. It always make me refresh.plz post next part soon.

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:11 pm

      Thanku so much dear for reading.. .

      M glad that u lyk my ff

      Today m so happy that I made my silent readers cmnt too ??

      Keep reading

    • Serena on April 30, 2016 2:48 pm

      Thanks to u dear u always make me smile with ur writing.just in love with ur ff.

    • meher on April 30, 2016 3:04 pm

      Awww it is so sweet of you…. I never thought that u lyk my writinga that much…. Luv u loads.. ???

  24. Shalmali Kamble on April 30, 2016 1:48 pm

    Wow sissy.. Amazing.. It was damn perfect.. I just loved today’s epi.. eagerly waiting fr surprise! 🙂

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:12 pm

      Thanku sissy… N where were u… N ishq wala love??? M still waiting…

      Btw hwz ur exams?

  25. ani on April 30, 2016 2:27 pm

    just amazing yrrr…….. no words to say

    upload next episode soon yrr…..

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:47 pm

      Thanku so much dear….
      Keep reading ??

  26. Sahi on April 30, 2016 2:41 pm

    awesome 🙂

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:48 pm

      Thankuuuu???

  27. Eva on April 30, 2016 2:44 pm

    Meher…this was another mind blowing episode…..maybe that person was Ragini or Laksh….perfect swasan story!!!! 😀 😀

    • meher on April 30, 2016 2:49 pm

      Aww tysm Eva dear ??

      Keep reading ??

    • Eva on April 30, 2016 3:12 pm

      So…your real name is Mugdha?

    • meher on April 30, 2016 4:43 pm

      Yup dear ???

  28. nabila on April 30, 2016 3:47 pm

    wow..awesome..

    • meher on April 30, 2016 4:43 pm

      Thnku so much

  29. tanu on April 30, 2016 3:58 pm

    haha lovely ..??

    • meher on April 30, 2016 4:43 pm

      Thnku dear…

  30. karthu on April 30, 2016 5:12 pm

    Wow …awesome

    • meher on April 30, 2016 5:43 pm

      Thankyouu for readingg ????

  31. Romaisa on April 30, 2016 6:47 pm

    Hellow meher i’m a silent Reader but Youre ff made me Write a Comment it’s faboulos i Love Youre ff a lot and i loved Kuch is Tarrah a lot too i don’t Know if i will Write on every Episode but i will read all Parts plz try to post next Episode too today plz come with Kuch is Tarrah Season 2 Plz Never End i Love it a lot❤️?

    • meher on April 30, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thnku so much dear… ?
      U read daily itz enough for me… Thanku for so much luv dear.. . I can fulfill ur one wish only that is I will come back with much iss tarah 2 bt I hv to end this ff n that too soon… So sry dear my heartily apology ???????

  32. Shalmali Kamble on April 30, 2016 7:26 pm

    Yaa.. Actually written exams are over & that was great. 🙂 But now practical exam is on 3rd may sissy.. so lil bzy. & yes I had written nxt part of Ishq wala love bt dnt hv tym to post dear.. May be I’ll post it tmrw. 🙂

    • meher on April 30, 2016 7:57 pm

      Congo yr u r free now!!!
      Mere to exams start hr ni hue abi ???

  33. Shalmali Kamble on April 30, 2016 7:33 pm

    & yaa.. btw nice name sissy.. Mugdha! 🙂 I thought ur name is really Meher! 🙂

    • meher on April 30, 2016 7:59 pm

      I choose name meher cz my real name is difficult… If ppr got my name in first go itz a victory for me… ????

  34. Anjali on April 30, 2016 8:48 pm

    MEher… Mugdha!!

    Kick me… I mean srsly kick me…

    I would have missed ur ff again… I always seem to miss urs and u mine 😛 😛 lol…

    Another fantastic epi… Beautifully written… JUST LOVED IT!!!
    And now ….

    CAN’T WAIT TO KNOW WHO WAS THAT SOMEONE!!!! 😮 😮

    • meher on April 30, 2016 9:35 pm

      Don’t worry I won’t kick u instead I will hug u dear ??

      U won’t believe I hv 4 ff’s episode open in mt browser bt dint get tym to read that… Uff exam season?????

      Hv patience ??

    • Anjali on April 30, 2016 10:56 pm

      Aww….

      *HUGS*

      Samee.. .I had time today bcos it is saturday varna I’ll be shuffling between studies and this.. 😛 😛

      Patience…Yhi toh problem h…

    • meher on May 1, 2016 12:07 am

      Iol I spent nearly my whole day in reading novels… That too when I hv exams frm nxt Monday ??

  35. priya tripathi on April 30, 2016 10:29 pm

    Awesome cant wait for the episode

    • meher on April 30, 2016 10:47 pm

      Thnku dear…

  36. Nita on April 30, 2016 11:27 pm

    Meher it was just awesome….. n sorry for the late reply…. actually the whole day i was waiting to read this but something or the other kept coming up, n i was out whole day…. secondly i dont have net in phone only wifi so….
    n all the best dear for exams…. hope u r prepared….

    • meher on May 1, 2016 12:09 am

      I too hv only wifi that’s the reason I don’t lyk to go anywhere ??

      Thanks for wishes n today only I realized that I hv exams from nxt Monday ????

  37. Romaisa on May 1, 2016 7:13 pm

    It’s okay you Know i live in switzerland and you live in India we have not the Same Timings but i always wait for Youre new Episode because each Episode gives me happiness i’m really addicted to Youre ff whenever i’m Upset of sad i Read Youre Episodes and it makes mr happy loveeeee soooo much i’m a Muslim and i don’t Know How Old you are should i Call you meher or meher di??

  38. Romaisa on May 1, 2016 7:14 pm

    Love you so much**❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?

  39. Romaisa on May 1, 2016 7:17 pm

    It’s okay you don’t Need to say sorry it’s enough for me that you will come back with Kuch is Tarrah Season 2 and good Luck for Youre exams❤️❤️

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