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Home»Fan Fiction»YEH HAI AASHIQUI (RAGLAK) EPISODE 1
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YEH HAI AASHIQUI (RAGLAK) EPISODE 1

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Hey guys u r stupid friend riya is back with the first episode of my new story hope u guys will like it so let’s enjoy-

The episode starts in raining background ,it was raining heavily ,a guy was standing alone in the raining area ,he was fully drenched in rain and was crying hard ,he said to himself

GUY-why u do this ? why u break my heart ??
then he shout loudly with all his strength

GUY- whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ?????

the song play in BG

MILNE HAI MUJHSE AAYI
PHIR JAANE KYUN TANHAAI
KIS MOD PE HAI LAYI AASHIQUI
O KHUD SE HAI YA KHUDA SE
ISS PAL MERI LADAAI
KIS MOD PE HAI LAAYI AASHIQUI OO……………(he was crying very very hard )
(then start driving fastly and madly ,he was still crying )

AASHIQUI BAAZI HAIN TAASH KI
TOOT TE BANTE VISHWAS KI
(he was remembering how he first saw her ,how they came close and lastly how she break his heart )
Then suddenly he stops the car with sudden jerk ,

GUY- no u can’t do this !! u have to answer me yah u have to !!!

FLASHBACK SHOWN ………………..

in the same area he was waiting 4 her ,he was similing deeply,a red rose he has on his hand

GUY- now today i will tell u about my feeling yah surely i will tell u that how much i love u,how much !!!,u became my life ,my breathe,my everything,my life starts from u and end at u,I LUV U ,I LUV U my dear !!!!!!!

then he shout loudly- I LUV UUUUUUUUUUUU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

then he notice a girl coming towards him ,a deep simile came on his face,he ran towards her and hug her with closed eyes.But the girl was like lifeless,she didn’t hug him back only a tear skipped from her face where the guy was continously murmuring

GUY- ragini where was u haan ??(yup dude the girl was our heroine none other than MISS RAGINI DAYAL ),i was waiting 4 u ,u know today i want to say something to u !!

then he sat on his knees and hold her hand –

GUY- ragini I..I LUV U ,I LUV U so much ,i know u very well know this but today i want to express all my feeling towards u ,u know when i first saw u i lost my breathe ,my heart start racing that moment aahh !! i can’t describe in words they r very special to me ,ragini u came in my life as a ray of hope ,u taught me how to live ? how to trust ? ragini u only taught me how to love !!!,ragini i…ii can’t imagine my life without u ,u r my life ragu, u r my life now !!

AB BAS KHUDA SE YAHI DUWAA HAI KI MERI ZINDIGAI MEIN WO PAL KHABHI PAIDA HI NA HOON JISME MUJHE TU NA DIKHE
KAASH WO DIN KHABHI AAYE NA JIS DIN MEIN TERA CHEHRA NA DEKHUN

MERI HAR SAANS MEIN TU HAIN
MERI HAR DHARKAN MEIN TU HAIN
HAR JAGAH SIRF TU HI TU HAIN

for those who don’t hindi-
(i wish to god that moment never come in my life in which u will not present ,i wish that day never come in my life in which u r face is not visible to me ,my love only u r present in my breathe ,only u r present in every beat of my heart only u r present everywhere)

the guy was still on his knees but ragini was not uttering a single word

GUY- ragini why r u not saying anything ? i am waiting 4 u ,i know that u also love me but my love i want to hear those three magiacl words from u r mouth plz can u ??

then after much insist she finally spoke-

RAGINI- laksh !!! (yup he was none other than our hero MR LAKSH KAPOOR{ hey excuse me that doesn’t mean that he is my brother }
– I DON’T LOVE U !!!!

then a thunder strom crack on the sky and it starts raining ,4 laksh his floor escape from his foot ,he was feeling like someone snatch his breathe but somehow he manage

LAKSH- ragu i know u have a bad habbit of cracking jokes but not today haan see there is raining heavily now common fastly tell me those three words i am litrally dying 4 listening common my knees r paining !!!

then ragini took a deep breathe and shout with all her stength

RAGINI- I..I HATE U !!
I HATE U !!! did u get that ?? i don’t luv u and never ever be able to luv u anymore,just go away !!!,i don’t want to see u r face !!!

(laksh was numb ,his heart start bleeding in pain ,he was hell shock then ragini ran away from there ,she was also crying hard there was raining heavily ,laksh fell on floor lifeless and was crying loudly )

FLASHBACK END ……………..

laksh was crying in the car
LAKSH- why did u do this ??why u killed me ??what was my mistake haan ??no, u have to answer me and my questions !!

with this he drove his car rushly

(screen shift towards ragini who has entered her room ,there were big posters around and that were of her and laksh ,she madly ran towards them and start tearing all the posters)
song start playing in BG –

O- MILNE HAI MUJHSE HAI AAYI
PHIR JAANE KYUN TANHAAI
KIS MOD PE HAI LAAYI AASHIQUI(she was crying hard and now she madly start throwing all the object present around her

AASHIQUI BAAZI HAIN TAASH KI
TOOT TE BANTE VISHWAS KI OOO…………

she took a hockey stick on her hand and start beating her and laksh photo frame she was badly beating it ,throwing all the anger ,frustation on it
suddenly her room’s door open with a bang ,she turn herself towards the entrance and was shock to see the person there ,the person was none other than laksh ,he was fuming in anger ,his eyes were red and full of tears ,ragini drop hockey stick from her hand )
camera is on laksh-

JAANE KYUN MEIN SOCTA HOON
KHALI SA MEIN EK RASTA HOON
TUNE MUJHE KAHIN KHO DIYA HAIN
YAA MAIN KAHIN KHUD LAAPATA HOON

(laksh enter the room with rage and hold ragini’s wrist tightly and pinned her against the wall ,both were looking in each other eyes ,laksh’s eyes were red in anger with tears while ragini’s eyes were full of guilt she was also crying )

AA DHOOND LE TU PHIR MUJHE KASAMEIN BHI DOON TO KYA TUJHE
AASHIQUI BAAZI HAI TAASH KI TOOT TE BANTE VISHWAS KI……………..(laksh was holding her shoulder tightly and she hissed in pain )

LAKSH- What happen ?? feeling pain ??and what about my pain that u r giving me here it is paining
(he hold ragini’s hand and place it on his chest over his heart )

LAKSH (crying )- it is paining so much here but who cares ??
(shout with anger )- who cares ??? first u taught me how to love and when i am madly in love with u then ………..(he pull her towrds himself in anger and ragini again hissed in pain )
– then u brake my heart in thousands pieces !!! why ??
(he left her with a jerk and she collide with the wall behind her )

LAKSH (break the wine bottle on the floor )- why ???? why ??? why ??? why did u do this ??

(ragini was about to say something but again laksh pinned her against the wall )

LAKSH (crying )- can’t u see love in my eyes ,and how i became mad 4 u?? I..I can’t imagine my life without u !!! did u get that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RAGINI(slowly)- Laksh calm down !! listen me once …………….

(before ragini could say anything laksh put his lips on her and start kissing her passionately ,he was kissing her hardly in anger ,it was like a thirsty person who is eager to drink a single drop of water,at first ragini was in a shock but then afterward she also reciprocate with him ,they were lost in each other ,there were kissing ,kissing and kissing,then after a long interval laksh broke the kiss ,both were breathing heavily but still they were crying ,then without waisting a single second laksh start kissing on her neck ,he was kissing her hard making her moaning

LAKSH(holding her with on hand and still kissing on her neck )- now i will not listen u ,today anyhow i will make u mine only mine !!!

(ragini also don’t want to stop this but suddenly something flashes on her mind and with all her strength she pushes him hardly as a result he fell on floor )

RAGINI(shout)-leave me !!!!!!!!!!!!! that’s why i hate u , u r such a despo ,i said u na that i hate u then why r u forcing me to do this ,just go away go away from this room and from my life JUST GO WAY !!!!!!!!!!!!!

(he laksh was fuming in anger ,he took a flower vase and broke it on floor with lot’s of noice )

LAKSH(shout )- fine i am going MISS RAGINI DAYAL and yah one day u will repent 4 this ,i know i will not able to forget u untill my last breathe !!!!! u r giving me pain then u will also get pain in back remember this ……….

(with this laksh left the room by slamming the door hard )
ragini fell on floor ,she was crying hard then suddenly her head start spinning and she fell on floor unconsiously

screen moves towards a hospital were doctors were taking ragini inside the icu ,she was laying on strecher and was breathing heavily ,she was continouly taking only one name

RAGINI- L..a..k..s…h !!!!! (there she hurriedly admitted in icu ,the doctors were very tensed she was not responding to any treatment ,she was continously taking one name and that is of laksh ,she was breathing heavily )

screen moves towards laksh who was standing near the edge of cliff with raising his arms

LAKSH-this was the place when i first saw her ,from this place my AASHIQUI begins and now from this place my AASHIQUE will end !!! (then he closed his eyes and start remembering all his moment with her in FLASHBACK ) episode end on laksh ‘s closed eyes

AASHIQUI SIRF PANE KA NAAN NAHI
YE TOH KHUD KO KISSI MEIN SMANE KA NAAM HAIN

AASHIQUI MEIN PYAAR MILE YA NA MILE
MAGAR PYAAR KA DARD AUR EHSAAS ZARUR MILTA HAIN

AASHIQUE SIRF EK LAFZ NAHI
YE TOH ISHWER KA WO NAYAB TOFAH HAIN
JISSE INSAN CHAH KAR BHI APNE DIL SE NAHI NIKAL PATA

YEH USS AASHIQUE KI KAHANI
YEH HAI AASHIQUE

PRECAP- ”THE AASHIQUI BEGINS “

so guys how was it ?? don’t forget to comment and yah stay healthy and keep similing bye see u //////////////////////

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56 Comments

  1. rakhi on April 29, 2016 12:44 pm

    Superb

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:19 pm

      thanx rakhi ,thanx a lot sis

  2. poonam on April 29, 2016 12:47 pm

    superb……….but why ragini is behaving strange when she too loves laksh what’s stopping her update next part soon

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:16 pm

      thanx poonam but it’s a mystery dear u have to wait sis

  3. Dhara on April 29, 2016 12:48 pm

    Oh ragini really hurted laksh badly

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:17 pm

      ya dhara but it’s a mystry behind her this act

  4. Halima on April 29, 2016 12:49 pm

    Awesome….I can’t wait for the next part….butterflies in my stomach….

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:15 pm

      thanx halima 4 such a cute comment

  5. S priya on April 29, 2016 12:52 pm

    Plz unite raglak fast…can’t see tem in pain

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:13 pm

      thanx priya but this story is all about pain in love

  6. Emz fasa on April 29, 2016 12:55 pm

    Superb mindblowing amazing 🙂 you are such an amazing writer riya hats off to you

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:13 pm

      thanx dear for such a lovely comment

  7. Sindhu rm on April 29, 2016 12:58 pm

    Nice

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:10 pm

      thanx sindhu

  8. Ayesha on April 29, 2016 1:01 pm

    Wow riya it’s AWESOME

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:10 pm

      thanx dear

  9. rafeeee on April 29, 2016 1:14 pm

    wow superb…

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:18 pm

      thanx rafeeee a lot

  10. Noora on April 29, 2016 1:14 pm

    Superb…especially those last lines

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:18 pm

      thanx sis for praising this stupid creature

  11. Sakura on April 29, 2016 1:18 pm

    Riya u always amaze me wid ur wonderfull writing?!!!plz update next chap asap.i can’t wait for next episode

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:31 pm

      thanx sakura a lot i will try my best to update next episode asap

  12. Priya on April 29, 2016 1:30 pm

    Omg i literally cried seeing laksh pain watever it might be pls make laksh to know the truth fast

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:37 pm

      yah priya same here but story will now go to flashback

  13. ManSi on April 29, 2016 1:34 pm

    Its awesome yaro

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:58 pm

      thanx mansi

  14. divi on April 29, 2016 1:49 pm

    its so nice waiting for next ep

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:52 pm

      thanx dear

  15. Swati on April 29, 2016 1:51 pm

    Awesome

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:57 pm

      thanx swati i was waiting 4 u r comment dear and yah PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA is also comming

  16. divi on April 29, 2016 1:51 pm

    is rangi suffering from any disease will she die

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 1:58 pm

      it’s a mystry dear hope u will understand

  17. Mamu on April 29, 2016 2:20 pm

    Superb riya

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 2:24 pm

      thanx dear

  18. divi on April 29, 2016 3:22 pm

    ok i understand update daily

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:33 pm

      thanx divi a lot

  19. Nikki on April 29, 2016 3:44 pm

    Awesome di…last lines were amazing and the way you present songs in any situation is mindblowing …post next part asap

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:35 pm

      thanx dear a lot and yah i will try my best to upload asap

  20. Ani on April 29, 2016 3:45 pm

    Fabulous episode… Very emotional… Waiting for the nxt part…

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:35 pm

      thanx ani soon it’s epi 2 is comming

  21. taiana on April 29, 2016 4:47 pm

    Awesome riya… i really feld very sad for lucky…

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:37 pm

      yah taiana same here and thanx 4 fabulous comment

  22. Amna on April 29, 2016 5:04 pm

    Awsm awsm awsm though it’s a common topic but u wrote it so beautifully. ??

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:37 pm

      thanx amna a lot u r comment made my day

  23. Abdul hafiz on April 29, 2016 6:03 pm

    Fabulous di♡.Waiting for nxt.

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:49 pm

      thanx dear i was waiting 4 u comment

  24. Ammu on April 29, 2016 6:39 pm

    Very interesting episode dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz update next episode soon

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 6:50 pm

      yah ammu i will update soon and thanx 4 lovely comment dear

  25. kalai on April 29, 2016 8:08 pm

    awww dis s awsm just lyk PTKK
    luved it
    update asap

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 9:42 pm

      thanx a lot dear u r lovely comment

  26. Ramya on April 29, 2016 8:55 pm

    Woah!! It was amazing!!??Am waiting for the mystery to b revealed!?Waiting for the next part?

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 29, 2016 9:41 pm

      thanx ramya i was waiting 4 u r comment

  27. Ruhani on April 29, 2016 11:35 pm

    It’s amazing yr hats off to ur writing skills yr lyk seriously it was wow..! so much pain n passion I’m in love with ur ff dr… Plz update the nxt part soon

    • RIYA KAPOOR on April 30, 2016 3:29 am

      thanx ruhani 4 such a lovely comment

  28. Krystal on April 30, 2016 5:14 am

    awesome

  29. Ana on April 30, 2016 8:29 pm

    OMG loved it update next part soon

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