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Memories (manmarziyan) Part 1

administratorBy administratorApril 25, 201626 Comments2 Mins Read
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Memories

Hey guys,I am nishi.I am usually a silent reader.This is my first attempt to write an os.Hope you will like it.
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“No,no not like that.put those curtains like that..no no not like that,offo okay okay I am coming to show you how to do it”,Radhika said.
Yes,our very own radhika.
ding dong…… ding dong…….
“Coming”…….radhu ran towards the door and was breathing heavily.As soon as she opened the door….
“SURPRISEEEE”nesam shouted.
Yup,it was neil and sam.well,they were married now.
“O chasni,I missed you sooo much,”saying this,neil hugged Radhu tightly.”me too,”radhu said.
“Arre,you forgot me?mai bhi to hoon,”sam said this showing a fake anger.
“Awwww”saying this,both hugged her.Then the trio shared a hug.”well,what’s the surprise you wanna show us?”
“later”,radhika gave a mysterious smile.
few hours later….
Well,it was evening by then.All the guests have arrived.they were gosssiping,as usual.
“excuse me,ladies and gentlemen,good evening.you all might be wandering what is this party for.Well,aaj arjun sir……oops arjun ka janamadin hai. Arjun,my husband.
“But how can you keep a birthday party for arjun’s birthday,”one said.
“And that too after his death,”another one throwed this question at radhika.
Radhika was standing there with a shocking expression.A droplet of tear was glowing on the edge of her eyes like a pearl.

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Well,guyz tell me i should continue or not.if I get much response from you,I will continue.please support me.

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26 Comments

  1. suga on April 25, 2016 3:42 pm

    i loved the way u started its really awesome:) ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ arjun dead????????? ohhhhhhhh no no no :O :O oh pls tell me arjun is not dead :O

  2. deeva on April 25, 2016 3:42 pm

    Hey its nice…. Plz continue…….. arjun is dead…. no he will come back right…. Plz update soon

  3. maya on April 25, 2016 3:46 pm

    very nice .pls continue

  4. Gauri on April 25, 2016 3:55 pm

    what a start…Arjun dead…? he should be coming back….pls post the next one soon ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Emz fasa on April 25, 2016 3:55 pm

    Pls continue yaar it was awesome start ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Twinju(bhavika) on April 25, 2016 3:55 pm

    Hi nishi u remembered me twinju did u read my ff”dilon ki dastan”?and ya when u asked for how to write ?ff i thought that u would be wrting on twinj? (its my favorite)โคโคactually i had watched ?manmarziya ealrier but then left it but i know the story i will surely read your ff and will always commentโœ‰โœ‰ ….this episode was awesome do cont..plzzz????

  7. Gayathri on April 25, 2016 3:57 pm

    Wat arjun dead hw???? Nishi its gud pls do continue don’t stop in mid dr I’ll get disappointed…tc

  8. shreya rajput on April 25, 2016 4:08 pm

    Ur digging up interest in u honey …….. loved it ……..keep rocking ……..:-):-):-):-)

  9. Rg on April 25, 2016 4:11 pm

    Oh plz don’t tell me tat arjun is dead… U started off well.

  10. mishti on April 25, 2016 4:17 pm

    plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue….. wanna see how arjun comes back in radhika’s life….

  11. susi on April 25, 2016 4:30 pm

    Hi nishu…it was amazing…pls continue dear…

  12. usha on April 25, 2016 4:46 pm

    lovely episode.

  13. Ameena on April 25, 2016 4:50 pm

    This is truly awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ Please continue ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. Brin on April 25, 2016 5:24 pm

    Arjun dead??? Please continue. ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Hope on April 25, 2016 5:40 pm

    PS. I LOVE YOU ?

  16. M on April 25, 2016 6:16 pm

    Hey…it’s good…but please dnt bring him back like a daily soap…

    • Roshni on April 25, 2016 11:43 pm

      Hahaha but he needs to come diii… He is boss… ๐Ÿ˜€ :p

  17. Dev on April 25, 2016 6:45 pm

    Hey superb start yaar nishi go on …….

  18. Z@ra on April 25, 2016 7:33 pm

    birthday boy isn’t in this world… hmm quite interesting… eager to read hidden suspense in this ff…. go ahead dear.

  19. suvi on April 25, 2016 8:23 pm

    Damn interesting. Pls continue ?

  20. Eyn on April 25, 2016 9:22 pm

    Hey yaar pls continiue its really great

  21. tanayly on April 25, 2016 9:56 pm

    Good attempt . pls continue. I guess there is some twist to it….. Plz do continu. I love the way how you write..

  22. aastha on April 25, 2016 11:10 pm

    is arjun dead ????? y ???? oh plzz dont ……………anyway nice start………..plzzzz update soon…..

  23. Roshni on April 25, 2016 11:43 pm

    I am hoping for something very exciting… Nishi continue…..

  24. niki on April 26, 2016 5:19 am

    Hey guys wats d procedure to write an ff..actually I too wanna start a one but I don’t know what I have to do for it

  25. Roma on April 27, 2016 8:27 am

    Oh nishi, what a shocking start…plz bring arjun back….can’t see him dead….plzzzz continue dear. …love you loads

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