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Feelings (Episode 4)

administratorBy administratorApril 25, 201646 Comments6 Mins Read
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Episode 4
The episode start with aradhika broke hug and arjun stare radhika lovingly radhika get up to go realizing arjun’s intense stare but Arjun held her hand and said
Arjun:where now
Radhika:umm I…I was just
Arjun get up and came in front of radhika and said
Arjun:my gosh radhi u r stammering
Radhika:no I’m not
Arjun pull radhika closer there was only an inch gap between them radhika’s heart start beating fast she was afraid that arjun might hear it and tried to go but its too late now arjun pull her closer again but this time her back was touching his front his hands were warp around her waist and he whisper
Arjun:no use to go now I can hear u heart beat babe
Radhika:I…I wasn’t
Arjun:u know u r behaving just like u were behaving when we met for the first time in college so shy so quite
Radhika:Ar…Arjun
Arjun:radhi u r the best thing that ever happened to me saying this Arjun turn Radhika and place a soft kiss on her forehead radhika closed her eyes and arjun kiss her eyes radhika open her eyes and both stare each other lovingly then Arjun kiss on her cheeks and then stare her lips radhika couldn’t bear his intense stare and closed her eyes again arjun first kiss on the corner of her lips and radhika hold arjun’s shirt tightly Arjun was about to kiss her but sudden someone knock on door and arjun got irritate and radhika smile arjun looked at radhika and said
Arjun:don’t think u r saved babe I’ll take my kiss saying this arjun gone to open door when he opened the door hotel’s manager was standing there arjun ask what happened and he said
Manager:Sir the party is starting in 10 min u ask me to inform u
Arjun:yeah thanks we r coming
Manager left and Arjun came inside radhika was arranging clothes for party arjun hug her from behind and said
Arjun:radhi get ready for party I’m going I’ll back in 30 min ok
Radhika turn and said
Radhika:but where
Arjun:have some important work babe I’ll come in 39 min
Radhika:promise
Arjun:promise saying this arjun kiss on her forehead and left radhika smile and gone to get ready

After 30 min
Arjun came back and as he saw radhika he got froze in his place he couldn’t believe his eyes radhika was wearing White One-shoulder Applique Art Silk A-line Evening Dress and she was looking so beautiful that he thought an angel has fallen from heaven right in front of him radhika turn and saw arjun standing at door and said
Radhika:hey u came look I’m ready now u also go and get ready
Arjun came in his sense and came toward radhika closing the door behind he stand in front of radhika and said
Arjun:r u planing to kill me
Radhika doesn’t understand what he meant and said
Radhika:I didn’t did anything and why I’ll do anything like this
Arjun:then why r u looking so beautiful babe saying this he came close and both stare each other lovingly radhika lower her eyes to hide her blush but arjun lift her face by holding her chin and said
Arjun:don’t do this babe it make me mad for u even more
Radhika blush even more and said
Radhika:please arjun go get ready saying this radhika push arjun in washroom and sat on bed arjun came after 15 min fully ready and both came out of room and enter in hall everyone in hall was staring them then everyone came and took arjun with them and radhika was sitting on corner sofa but then suddenly light went off and a spotlight fall on radhika and another on arjun radhika looked at arjun confused and arjun came toward radhika and said
Arjun:would this beautiful girl like to dance with me
Radhika give her hand in his smilingly and both came in center arjun’s right hand was on radhika’s waist and left was joint with her right and her left was on his shoulder then arjun indicate the DJ to play the song which he told and said to radhika
Arjun:I Hope This Song Will Told U What I Have In My Heart For U
Radhika smile and song start (this song is from movie “Azhar”)

Tere dar pe aake tham gaye
Naina namaazi bann gaye
Ek dooje mein yun dhal ke
Aashiqana aayat ban gaye Main aur Tum

Both were totally lost in each other

Kaisi dil lagaai kar gaye
Rooh ki rubaai bann gaye
Khaali khaali dono thhe jo
Thoda sa dono bhar gaye Main aur Tum

Both were remembering there lovely moments which they spend together

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Lage na yeh dhoop zaroori
Lage na yeh chaanv zaroori
Milte hain ishq zameen par
Ab do hi naam zaroori Main aur Tum

Their love for each other was very much visible in their eyes

Apna khuda bhi hoga
Apna hi Rab le lenge
Khud ki bana ke duniya
Ye zindagi jee lenge Main aur Tum

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Arjun spin radhika and hug get from behind

Ek tum, ek main, teeja maangu kya khuda se
Dil doon, jaan doon, kya doon itna bata de
Tera mera rishta hai saanson se bhi naazuk

Tum sa, hum sa, koi duja na hoga na hua re
Do dil sa ik seene mein hai jaise Main aur Tum
Ab dono hum ik jeene mein hain jaise Main aur Tum

Jaan se zyada chaha tumko piya re
Harpal, hardum, humdum tumko jiya re

Their eyes were closed

Aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Song end but both were still lost in each other

Next Episode:SURPRISE ?
————
Hey frds h r u all?
Here is the 4 episode how’s it tell me I know its short but will try to write long actually I’m little busy so i write hurriedly in the time I get hope u all will understand and will support me and love me and thanks to all the frds who comment on my both ff I’ll reply back soon so enjoy this till then bye tc and love u all a lot ?????????

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46 Comments

  1. swara on April 25, 2016 11:21 am

    very nice

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:27 am

      thanks ?

  2. Gayathri on April 25, 2016 11:31 am

    U brought smile on my face its really gud….

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:27 am

      thanks a lot ?

  3. Dev on April 25, 2016 11:36 am

    Nic angel

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:27 am

      thank u ?

  4. Krity on April 25, 2016 12:02 pm

    Hey this was awesome..bt dear y u r nt posting humdard plez do tell me till then luv u god bless u…<3

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:29 am

      thanks a lot dear and I’m sorry but I’m not that Angel I don’t write any ff named “humdard” and love u too ??

  5. Gianna on April 25, 2016 12:10 pm

    Very nice episode Angel and the song is superb

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:29 am

      thanks a lot ?

  6. subha on April 25, 2016 12:10 pm

    LOVELY EPISODE……

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:30 am

      thanks a lot ?

  7. ryths on April 25, 2016 12:15 pm

    Gud episode…waiting for nxt update

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:30 am

      thanks dear ?

  8. shreya rajput on April 25, 2016 12:21 pm

    It was angelic ………loved honey ……..stay blessing………….:-):-):-):-)

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:30 am

      thanks a lot ?????

  9. aastha on April 25, 2016 12:25 pm

    loved it……….what’s the surprise you are planning ??????????? …………can you tell me more about yourself ???????????

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:32 am

      thanks a lot dear and that you’ll know in next episode ?

      Yeah dear u can ask what u want to know about me ?

    • aastha on April 26, 2016 12:42 pm

      ok….soo in which class are you studying ???????? in which state do u live in ????? plzzz answer…………

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 6:08 pm

      I just completed 8th this year that to by going tuition actually some personal issues that’s why didn’t continued study but I’ll continue at home and I’m living in Jeddah Saudi Arabia but I’m from Pakistan ?

    • aastha on April 26, 2016 11:24 pm

      ok….thanks for sharing……….u are much younger than me……..but you have a great talent dear……..dont you use to write ff on swaragini too ?????? ……

    • Angel on April 27, 2016 7:53 am

      thanks a lot dear and no I haven’t write any ff on swaragini yet ?

    • aastha on April 27, 2016 12:44 pm

      thanks for the reply……..soo do you have any siblings ??? we r u gonna treat us with ur surprise ????????

    • Angel on April 27, 2016 6:37 pm

      ur welcome dear ?

      Yeah I have 5 siblings 4 sisters and one brother if I’m included we r total six siblings and I’m on last number younger from everyone ?

      Soon dear actually telly updates is not accepting submissions of articles because of some maintenance of site so when they’ll start accepting I’ll post ASAP ?

    • aastha on April 27, 2016 10:45 pm

      6 children and you the youngest of all………..I like it……….so are you a pampered kid???? …….eagerly waiting for the next part…………

    • Angel on April 28, 2016 3:19 am

      yeah dear exactly and soon ?

    • aastha on April 28, 2016 12:17 pm

      umm is angel ur orginal name ??

    • Angel on April 28, 2016 12:31 pm

      no dear its just for this site ?

  10. Love on April 25, 2016 12:25 pm

    Angle ….. now u are planing to kill us…. πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
    Really great episode πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:33 am

      Hahaha no nothing like that and thanks a lot love ?? love u ???

  11. suga on April 25, 2016 12:33 pm

    loved aradhika moments πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ its really niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:33 am

      thanks a lot ?

  12. Rg on April 25, 2016 1:21 pm

    Hi it’s beautiful.

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:34 am

      hello thanks ?

  13. susi on April 25, 2016 1:35 pm

    Wow angel …..its really romantic one…keep it up..what surprise…..update next one soon…love u loads..tc dear…

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:35 am

      thanks a lot dear and that you’ll know in next episode only u too tc dear love u too ?????

  14. Gauri on April 25, 2016 3:56 pm

    Awesome angel

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:36 am

      thanks ?

  15. Brin on April 25, 2016 5:00 pm

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next episode. πŸ™‚

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:36 am

      thanks a lot ?

  16. Sam on April 25, 2016 9:04 pm

    Awesome episode loved it next one ASAP pls

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:37 am

      Thanks a lot ?

  17. priya on April 25, 2016 10:43 pm

    fantastic as always……………..

    • Angel on April 26, 2016 7:37 am

      thanks a lot ?

  18. Roma on April 26, 2016 11:22 pm

    Awesome, wowwww angel it’s veryyyyyyy beautiful update. …ardhika rocked the floor. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads.

    • Angel on April 27, 2016 7:52 am

      thanks a lot ? love u too ?

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