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Home»Fan Fiction»I love u u are my life (Part 1)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

I love u u are my life (Part 1)

administratorBy administratorApril 17, 201628 Comments3 Mins Read
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This is my ff not first as i write story of two broken heart hope u like this ff

Its bright morning and happiness all around a flat is shown as we move in flat a room is shown and in room a girl is sitting near window her hairs are playing with air and she is playing guitar a very good tune coming from it as it will suprress all pain suddenly some one open the door and slowly come inside and slowly go towards that girl
girl: dad i know its u
yeah he is shekar dad of that girl
shekar: thats not fair sona you always identify me
yes the girl is sona our swara
swara: dad i am blind from eyes but i can sense you as i love u dad
shekar: no shona you are not blind i am your eyes na beta
and sits near her and hold swara hand
swara: but dad its my punishment bcz of me mom
and she is about to complete but shekar put his hand on her mouth
shekar: sona its not your fault how many times i tell u
swara: now dad please dont cry na i will not tell like this i cant see tear in your eyes
shekar : only on one condition
swara: ok
shekar: then come lets go out u will fell fresh
swara: ok
swara put her guitar and stand up
swara: dad my stick
shekar: i am here for my sona hold my hand
shekar hold swara hand
swara:love u dad

and they go out and go in a restaurent and eat then they go out as they are crossing road swara is about to fall due to leg twist and shekar hold her but from another side a car is coming full fast shekar make swara stand and turn and shocked to see car coming which is just near them shekar push swara a side and swara falls on side of road and car hit shekar and shekar fell on road in pool of blood and swara hear the sound and shout dad
swara crying: dad why are you not giving answer dad please say something
their people gather
swara start searching for her dad on road
swara: dad please some one help please and with her hand searching her dad and crying
swara: please dont you all have humanity please help me
but no one come suddenly a boy come and hold swara hand and make her stand
boy: come i will take youe dad to hospital
swara: thank u so much
boy: that you will tell me later
and take shekar in arms
boy: hey you hold my hand
and make her hold his hand and take near car and put shakher on back seat and make swara sit back and swara take shekar head on her lap and boy drove car towards hospital
so guys tell whome i choose opposite to swara sanskar or lakash please give your suggestion i will apply it on basis of more votes as i have decided the story but confuse whome to take opposite to swara

continue

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28 Comments

  1. meena on April 17, 2016 11:55 pm

    Sanky plz

  2. Rosey on April 18, 2016 12:13 am

    Sanskaar plz

  3. Rosey on April 18, 2016 12:14 am

    Plz make it swasan plzzzzzzz

  4. Mishti on April 18, 2016 12:24 am

    Swasan please!

  5. deepti on April 18, 2016 12:27 am

    Plzzzzz plz sanskar only
    N nice start…

  6. Bresh on April 18, 2016 12:35 am

    Sanskar obviously

  7. Sparkle on April 18, 2016 12:38 am

    Laksh pls

  8. kanika on April 18, 2016 12:39 am

    Make it swasan plzz

  9. Abdul hafiz on April 18, 2016 1:12 am

    Nice and laksh.

  10. Crazygirl on April 18, 2016 1:16 am

    Laksh please

  11. Asmita on April 18, 2016 1:21 am

    Plz choose Sanskar yaar. And make it swasan ff plz.

  12. Aanya on April 18, 2016 1:24 am

    Sanskar

  13. ruhi on April 18, 2016 1:25 am

    Sanky

  14. mou on April 18, 2016 1:56 am

    sanky plz

  15. Mishi on April 18, 2016 2:39 am

    Is she blind……awwwwww that is so saaaaaad……but it was soooo good

  16. chery on April 18, 2016 6:31 am

    nice obviouslyyy sanskar our cute couple

  17. masthi on April 18, 2016 6:43 am

    laksh

  18. shan on April 18, 2016 7:28 am

    sanky

  19. Apurva Desai on April 18, 2016 7:53 am

    swasan

  20. fransi on April 18, 2016 8:03 am

    Sanskar

  21. jjjjjj on April 18, 2016 9:47 am

    swasan

  22. kriya on April 18, 2016 1:12 pm

    laksh

  23. Anu Ann on April 18, 2016 3:31 pm

    Sanskar

  24. pia on April 18, 2016 7:29 pm

    laksh pleaseee

  25. angel on April 18, 2016 7:29 pm

    laksh laksh and laksh

  26. angel on April 18, 2016 7:29 pm

    laksh only

  27. gopi on April 18, 2016 7:30 pm

    laksh..

  28. aditi on April 18, 2016 10:13 pm

    laksh

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