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Home»Fan Fiction»stay away!!! ……Thahaan (Two shot) Part 1
Fan Fiction Thapki Pyaar Ki

stay away!!! ……Thahaan (Two shot) Part 1

administratorBy administratorApril 17, 201653 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi friends. Its been a long time. So, how are u guyzz, I know all thahaan fans are quite disappointed with the current track. Can’t say, May be some of them are enjoying too, our bihaan as angry young man. I don’t know why writers don’t get inspired with beautiful & interesting ff of this page. … … well, leave it.
It is a small two shot or may be three shot(haven’t decided till now) written after the navratri pooja episode. I hope my friends will like it and will give their response too.
Here it goes!!!

Her steps Stumbled and vision got blurred. Her legs felt weak and off course it is her fault she shouldn’t have drunk that wine while claiming it to be some kind of kadha. What else she could do?? He was irritating her so much he knew how much she hates drink as well as the people who drink that too in her room. How dare he!!! But she was no less she made him believe that it was tulsi kadha and how innocent he is!! He believed it. But the most ridiculous thing was that she drunk it foolishly Very well knowing that she can’t take its after effect. Her mind was running with image of his anger boiled face, his frustrated eyes. They way he said “humse door raha karo tum” His anger, his frustration, his pain clearly reflected in his eyes. She was Hurt she doesn’t know why??? Did he really asked her to stay away??? Was she so bad!!!
Her legs moved to and fro. Her hands tried to get hold of something to keep herself steady but failed to do so.

she slipped, and closed her eyes in fear to meet the hard floor.
Suddenly she felt a strong grip on her upper arm. She looked up in haze at the persons face. Struggling hard to focus on the features. She felt her legs going up in air. But when she realized she was already in his arms being carried away to her bedroom. She Was too tired to ask or say something.
She opened her eyes when she felt soft bed under herself. SPLASH!!! She jumped in shock Cold water ran down her cheeks. Soon her vision cleared and she met with a pair of red furious eyes glaring down at her. It was the most beautiful eyes. It was BIHAAN.
Guyzz let me know if I should continue or not. And I would love to hear my friends comments again. I really missed u guyzz.

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53 Comments

  1. ammi on April 17, 2016 7:15 am

    very nice. you should continue this. u r an amazing writer.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:03 am

      Thanks ammi i will continue this.

  2. pooja prabha on April 17, 2016 7:41 am

    Hi……..how are you? iam really happy to read your ff after a long time.Its nice,you should continue it with lots of charming scenes of THAHAAN.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:06 am

      hello Dear. I am good. Thankyou so uch honey i will love to continue this.
      i missed u guyzz so much.

  3. Fatarajo on April 17, 2016 7:51 am

    Finally u r back mineey love ur two shots loved the first part , really u r a very good writer 🙂

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:44 am

      Thanks u so much friend for praising me. your ff is also good. I would say very different.

  4. thahanian on April 17, 2016 7:52 am

    Hi mineey…nice to see u again! Asuseual ur this ff also interesting… Plz continue ur story dr…

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:46 am

      thankyou dear. I love to hear ur comments. It make me feel so special.

  5. ruhi on April 17, 2016 8:16 am

    of course u should continue it
    it is amazing.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 10:54 am

      Yeah ruhi i will

  6. vineey on April 17, 2016 8:21 am

    Pls mineey continue . I was also a silent reader of your previous ff. I just love u and your writings.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 10:55 am

      thankypu so much vineey.

  7. carol on April 17, 2016 8:39 am

    i love it…but it is short too

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 9:18 am

      Thanks carol. I know it is short. But don’t worry i’ll make my my nxt episode longer one.

  8. .vinlora on April 17, 2016 8:55 am

    Hey dear it’s amazing. …much needed for us at this time while in current track there is no sign of starting thahaan love story….one request plz make it long and 2 -3 shots more….and if possible plz try to write about thapki’s love realisation and thahaan confession. ..but plzzzzzzzzz make it long dear…..loved ur writing. .well done. .when ur uploading 2nd shot…eagerly waiting. ..

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 9:22 am

      thanks vinlora. Actually i am planning to finish it in two more episode. And offcourse dear i’ll make my nxt episode longer one. And may be post till tomorrow morning.

    • .vinlora on April 17, 2016 9:51 am

      Thanks dear…

  9. rafay don kon on April 17, 2016 9:27 am

    Is too short ko too long kr do.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 10:56 am

      haha.… …i will make it toooo long. Don’t worry.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 10:59 am

      And i really like ur name. Its a bit different. I would rather say its cool.

    • rafay don kon on April 17, 2016 11:10 am

      Ary mara name sirf rafay ha.?

  10. true love on April 17, 2016 9:56 am

    Amezing episode. Keep going. And i love ur privious ff just be with me.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 10:57 am

      thanks dear.

  11. Mishu on April 17, 2016 10:25 am

    Plzz continue..:) its amazing..!!

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 11:00 am

      yeah mishu i will

  12. oggy on April 17, 2016 10:48 am

    too good minney….but make it more long n plz plz update daily….can’t wait for next episode

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 11:02 am

      thankyou oggy. But as u know it is two shot. So, i will only update one more episode. Till tomorrow morning.

  13. Vennila on April 17, 2016 12:15 pm

    Very nice yaar.. Continue wid it….

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 1:00 pm

      Thanks vennila

  14. Jacinth on April 17, 2016 1:04 pm

    Hey my friend mineey,,no words to say.. gajaaaab…pls update d nxt part soon..

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 3:56 pm

      Hii jacinth how are u. After a long time right… … ???
      thanks dear i will post it tomorrow.

    • Jacinth on April 17, 2016 4:48 pm

      Yp buddy..I am busy with my second yr xms..bt when I sw ur ff I couldn’t resist my self from commenting..I loved it..wbu??

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 6:38 pm

      i am just as usual FINE. Atually i am very much free right now. So, thought of writing something.

  15. Shruti on April 17, 2016 1:32 pm

    Hi mineey it’s awesome and plzz continue.☺?☺I’ll be waiting for nxt pt.love u so much.

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 3:59 pm

      thanks dear. i’ll surely continue.
      Love u too shruti!!

  16. ashwana on April 17, 2016 3:31 pm

    liked it soooo much mineey..??plz continue ?eagerly waiting for ur nxt update…?

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 4:00 pm

      Thankyou so much ashwana dear.

  17. santhosh on April 17, 2016 4:21 pm

    Welcome back MINEEY………
    Good start. ………waiting for next. …Good luck

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 6:33 pm

      Thankzz santhosh

  18. Simran on April 17, 2016 4:41 pm

    Plz continue

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 6:34 pm

      i will dear.

  19. Tara on April 17, 2016 7:46 pm

    super yaar. Good to see u back. Eagerly waiting for next episode

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:54 pm

      Thanks tara

  20. Ayushri on April 17, 2016 7:56 pm

    Arey Yaar! Puchne wali baat hi nahi hai! DEFINITELY CONTINUE! ❤

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:57 pm

      ha ha!! Phir bhi ayushri puch lena acha hota hai hai u know impression accha aata hai lol.

  21. anu on April 17, 2016 8:07 pm

    love ur work mineey very nice
    so beautiful
    happy to see u again

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 8:59 pm

      hey anu i was waiting for ur comment Why are u soo late I am angry!!! (just kidding yaar)
      thanks dear.

  22. manasa on April 17, 2016 9:05 pm

    super minney continue it and your are a wonderful writer I love it a lot the way you write

    • mineey on April 17, 2016 9:54 pm

      Thankypu manasa

  23. Prtibha on April 17, 2016 9:46 pm

    Hey mineey after a long time u r back with this wonderful ts n please continue yr it’s so interesting than current track n i hope that i will c u again n again with awesome stories of thahan..tc

    • mineey on April 18, 2016 6:00 am

      Thankyou prtibha i am happy that u liked it.

  24. .vinlora on April 18, 2016 3:56 pm

    Hi Mineey plz upload 2nd part…..I m waiting from morning …plz upload yaar soon. …

  25. Parvini on April 19, 2016 6:08 am

    Very good job..

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