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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan- Love you forever (Part 5)
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Manmarziyan- Love you forever (Part 5)

GummiebearBy GummiebearApril 17, 201638 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hey guyzz this z supriya once again…..first thx for all ur amazing comments…. I love you all a lot….I know some of you were very unhappy about the short update so here I am only for you lovely people with this long update……. Hope u enjoy it…..

Mehra mansion…..

Arjun was having his breakfast with dm sitting beside him….
Dm…..aru today after so many days you are having breakfast with me…what else this old lady could wish for the day..
He gave her a smile and placed his hand on hers….
Arjun…from today you will have me everyday…
Dm…..what else I can ask from you….time z the greatest gift you can give to anyone…..I wonder why do you call yourself bad…..aru you have few negatives which everyone has but you are not a bad person….plz don’t hide your good heart from people….I hate it when they talk bad about you…..

Arjun….dm, people talk what z true and I don’t care about what opinions they make about me….

Dm…..one day such a person will come from whose mouth you won’t be able to bear a word against you….you will always try to gain that person’s trust…..

Arjun…..dm,I am the Arjun Mehra….I don’t care about what people think for me and you please stop thinking this useless things….

Dm….you know today I was seeing your horoscope…..you are going to meet someone special today…..

Arjun….I don’t believe in this things….
Dm POV…..I wish that someone special z a girl….it z high time you get married…. I wish you meet a real girl today who will change you….I have less time….before I breath my last I want to give you in safe hands…..I wish that girl brings out the best you…I wish you love her more than yourself……god if I have ever done anything good in my life please bring that girl in my aru’s life….

Arjun…..what are you thinking dm?
Dm…..I was thinking about you….
Arjun…..what about me?
Dm…..will tell you someother time…….
Arjun….OK but it makes me happy that you think about me…..
Dm…..I think about you whole day….
Arjun….but now you should think about your health……
Sam entered the house and greeted both of them morning…
Sam…he z right,you should only think about your health now….
Dm….OK I promise I will take care…
Arjun…better…
She left the two alone on the dinning table….
Sam…handsome yesterday after many days you spend your night at your house….sometimes you do surprise me….
Arjun…I am glad you are surprised…. about yesterday I was really tensed to leave her alone even for a second….
Sam….sometimes you don’t behave as a heartless person….I fear you have a heart….can I ask you something?
Arjun….as if I say no then you will not ask….
Sam…not at all I will ask even if you say no…..why you gave that important deal to mittals….I mean they are in loss so how you can trust them……
Arjun…Sammy they have the potential and if I talk about loss then it started when the ceo suffered from the accident six months back…so I wanted to give them a chance….
Sam…..kk
Sam POV…..you say that you don’t have a heart than why don’t you behave like a heartless person every time…..I fear that maybe what dm said z true that maybe you have a heart surrounded by many walls….arjun I don’t care how many girls you sleep with but I do care if you don’t return to me the next day….I fear if some girl acquires a place greater than me….why do I have to get this glimpses of you having a heart…..I don’t want you to go away from me…..
Arjun interrupted her thoughts by stuffing her mouth with toast….
Sam…what z this?I can eat on my own…
Arjun…..eat it from my hands then…..you are lucky that the Arjun Mehra z feeding you…
She pinced him and replied…. Oh really?
He left out a painful grasp from his mouth and stared at her angrily….
After a matter of seconds they both burst out laughing…
Arjun….you know this z what I like about you…..your fiery attitude….this z what differentiate you from other girls…..
Sam…..yaa they can keep you in bed for a night but they can’t keep you for the whole day….which only I can do…..I am happy that I am the only girl who can make you talk endlessly whole day…..
Arjun…..yaa that’s true Sam…
Sam……I hope you remember that yesterday I told you about new entrants… many are girls in them….

Arjun…..do you think I forget anything about girls…..moreover Arjun Mehra never forget anything….
Sam……yaa I know so I will be interviewing the boys….you handle the girls….
With a mischievous grin he replied…. Ofcourse….
Sam….you are too much arjun…
……,,………………………………………………………………..
Radhika was getting ready for the interview when her maa reminded to seek god’s blessings……

She turned towards the idol of Krishna and closed her eyes to have a a good conversation with god……

She whispered….. Today I am going to enter a new world…where I don’t know anyone and I don’t want to know anyone…. Please give me the courage to walk on the right path…….please give me the courage to keep the promises I made to someone……keep me away from love and commitment because you know I can’t commit to anyone…… I desperately need this job please give it to me if I you find me I am worth it……
Her thoughts were interrupted by her mom who asked her to have dahi shakar for good luck…..
She stuffed it in radhika’s mouth…
Radhika touched her feet…..
Radhika….. I just need your blessings for good luck….
Maa….they are always with you…..I am sure you will get this job….my heart z telling me this….
She just gave her mom a smile in return….
Radhika was about to leave when her maa stopped her by grabbing her hand….
Maa …stay away from people….especially man….they are not good here…..god made you both beautiful inside and out don’t trust anyone…. There are many wolves out here……
She could see the worry on her face….

Radhika….. You don’t worry,maa….I know to take care of myself…. I have the pepper spray in my bag…..the person who misbehave will curse himself for even stealing a glance at me……
…,…………………………………………………………………..
Radhika had reached birdsong…..although she had assured her maa about the job….but she was nervous…..
All the girls were dressed in western clothes but only she had worn traditional…..she was feeling awkward about this because all were staring at her as if she belonged to different world….
Her thoughts were interrupted when a girl in green tank top and jeans greeted her with a smile…..
Girl……hi,I am neetu…what z your name?
Radhika…. My name z radhika….
Neetu…..you came here for job?
Radhika……yes and you?
Neetu…..only to see arjun…I hope you know arjun right?
Radhika….I have heard about him actually I am new here so don’t know anyone here….
Neetu….I am sure you will have love at first sight if you see him…he z so much handsome….
Radhika…. No I will leave him for you…

They both burst out laughing…..
Radhika….can I ask you a question?
Neetu….you can ask me anything…
Radhika….why are this people staring at me?
Neetu gave her a smile and answered….. Boys are staring at you because you are too much beautiful and girls are staring at you because they are thinking why are boys staring at you….
Radhika chuckled at her answer and replied….you are too sweet neetu…
Neetu….you are too beautiful when you smile but I guess you don’t do it often so I had to crack the joke to make you laugh…
Radhika…. Thanks neetu…I wish you get the job so that we can work together. I loved your sense of humour…
Neetu…I hope so….
Arjun had entered the office with sam….

But today something was different… Today he was not the centre of attention because all were busy in staring at someone else….
He followed their gaze and noticed that all of them were staring at a girl
Indeed she was worth staring… for a moment he thought his whole world had stopped…..he examined her from head to toe….
She was not dressed in western clothes but still she was getting his attention and even he did not know why….
Her long hair that framed her face in such way that she was a treat to watch…her big brown eyes that had some mystery had captivated him…..her lips which had the light strawberry berry lip gloss were indeed very lustrous….
Her fair ivory skin made her look like a fairy who had just stepped down from heavens…..
Everything about her was driving him crazy….
She was talking to someone but even her smile was arousing him…her expressions were simple but then to they were driving them crazy……
She was indeed beautiful no actually amazingly beautiful….. He had not seen anyone so much beautiful and pure…..
But then he noticed that along with him even others were staring at her….he didn’t know why but
his blood boiled….

He gave a angry glare to everyone and shrieked ..are you people here to waste your time in silly things come on everyone back to work……
He continued staring at her somehow he was not able to shift his gaze from her….
Sam interrupted his thoughts by saying….. She z not your type,arjun….
He shifted his gaze towards Sam and replied….Sam how do you know my type?
Sam gave it back….because I know you since 15 years and she z sari savitri….you won’t get her in bed….such girls don’t lose the virginity before marriage and you have marriage phobia…
He laughed at her sentence and replied…..send her in first….
After a matter of minutes his wait was over when she asked him…..can I come in sir?
Arjun…yes come in…
She entered his cabin….
Arjun…plz have a sit miss….
Radhika…..radhika..
He was not able to figure out why but even her voice was seductive….each coming moment was driving him crazy…..he felt as if he had not heard anything good until now then this name ‘radhika’
She gave him her file….

He took it and glanced through it …
He came to a conclusion that not only she was beautiful but also intelligent…. She was indeed beauty with brains……..
But what surprised him was that she was least interested in looking at him….this was actually breaking his confidence on his looks and personality…..he asked her questions which she answered and indeed her answers were too good….
He could not stop himself from asking…. Don’t you find me handsome, miss radhika?
Radhika gave him a surprised look and replied…..excuse me sir…
Arjun….miss radhika half of the girls present in my office are here only to see me…and you didn’t even glanced back at me…
Radhika gave him a rather confident answer….sir, instead of seeing you I will like to see my appointment….
Arjun….you are quiet focused miss radhika….so the job z yours….you can join from tomorrow…
Radhika… Thanks sir but before that I have a request…
Arjun…..what z it?
Radhika…. I can’t work in evening shift….
Arjun…..why?
Radhika….sir,it z personal so I can’t share with you….
Arjun….it z kk miss radhika….you can tell me…

Radhika…. No sir I can’t tell you….it z quite personal…
Arjun wanted to know more about her but he didn’t wanted to make her uncomfortable……
Arjun….the job z yours..
Radhika….but about the evening shift…I had heard that there z no vacancy in morning shift….
Arjun….I said the job z yours…I don’t feel I should answer any of your questions…
Radhika… I am sorry sir….thank you…
She left his cabin…..
He was completely occupied by her thoughts…. Her image was driving him crazy…he closed his eyes to live all the moments he just passed with her….
So guyzzz this z it….hope you liked it….I will update next one soon….till then love you all….
Plz let me know your reviews…. They are most important for me….

Precap……aradhika first fight….

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    38 Comments

    1. Kavina on April 17, 2016 2:12 am

      I loved the episode. The precap is something I am looking forward. Please update soon

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 4:46 am

        Thx kavina…..will try to update soon…..tc dear

    2. maandey on April 17, 2016 5:32 am

      As beautiful as u

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 7:10 am

        Thx cutie pie…love u tc

    3. Dhara on April 17, 2016 7:13 am

      Amazing supriya.

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 7:47 am

        Thx dear….tc

    4. Hayathi on April 17, 2016 7:15 am

      What fighting but why

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 7:48 am

        Have some patience dear….will update soon

    5. ammu on April 17, 2016 7:30 am

      nรฎce part.plz update soon…

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 7:49 am

        Thx ammu…will update soon

    6. Gayathri on April 17, 2016 8:22 am

      Completely awesome episode dr waiting aradhika fight….luv u tc dr

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:29 pm

        Thx darling…. m happy u loved it…will update next one soon….love u tc

    7. Naaga on April 17, 2016 9:02 am

      Wow priya i just love this epi. Thank u soo much for long update. Ardhika lst meeting semma (supper) ๐Ÿ™‚ And i like neetu such a sweet girl. Interesting precap. Asusaul im waiting 4 nxt 1 ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:33 pm

        Thx naaga….ur comment z also superb…I really loved it….will update nxt1 soon tc

    8. suga on April 17, 2016 9:27 am

      Oh dear u drives me crazy ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ I loved each nbevery part of aradhika ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ it’s really awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ pls update ASAP pls pls ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:36 pm

        Even u drive crazy when u comment darling… I wait for ur comment…. will update nxt1 soon dear??????

    9. Brin on April 17, 2016 10:17 am

      Awesome episode, I’m really curious to know why she can’t work evening, is there a big secret? ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:38 pm

        Ohh brin u r very sharp…yes it z a big secret…..will reveal it later….I liked ur comment becoz u asked me this questions…… Stay blessed

    10. Diya on April 17, 2016 10:17 am

      First fight, cant wait.. loving your ff ??

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:39 pm

        Thx diya….will update soon dear… Tc

    11. usha on April 17, 2016 12:02 pm

      amazing.

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:43 pm

        Thx usha…tc

    12. sweety on April 17, 2016 12:05 pm

      Wowww plss upload next one as fast as uu

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:41 pm

        Sweety will update soon if time permits…tc

    13. alex on April 17, 2016 12:26 pm

      just fantastic epi ….eagerly waiting for next part….update asap…nd long one just like this

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:44 pm

        Thx alex……will update soon….stay blessed

    14. Sam on April 17, 2016 12:48 pm

      Hi I really like this ff but I want to say that I see this story quite similar to Marathi movie MITWA right cause I have seen this movie 58 time and I can see that you have included that dialogue between Swapnil Joshi and Sonali in the movie… But whatever that be I like your imagination and writing skills..so keep it on…… And update soon.. Can’t wait…Love u alot and stay happy and blessed…

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 1:49 pm

        Hi Sam thx for ur lovely comment darling… even I have seen mitwa movie many times dear but my story z not completely similar to it….I have made a different story from many things which I have watched….m happy u asked ur query….I loved ur comment to the core….will update soon love u loads tc??โ˜บ???

    15. Gianna on April 17, 2016 1:06 pm

      This is so amazing waiting for the next one?

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 2:29 pm

        Thx Gianna…will update next one soon…tc

    16. Gauri on April 17, 2016 1:15 pm

      Supriya dear, you nailed it…their first meeting was so amazing…loved it…now waiting madly for the next want to know what will he do to get her….pls post the next one soon ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 2:32 pm

        Thx di…m happy u loved it…if I receive a comment from u then I feel I have achieved something grt….will update soon di…I loved ur comment….love u loads tc muaaaaahhhhhh?????

    17. susi on April 17, 2016 2:41 pm

      Oh my dollu..its just amazing…fantastic..mind blowing…superb..u nailed it baby…ardhika first meet…was really awesome…finally dm ki fish puri hogai…precap , wow ardhika cute fight…can’t wait pls update soon dear…thanks for the pong update…love u ..tc…

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 2:55 pm

        Oh my darling u made me feel soo much spl today…..I srsly wait for ur comments and today I loved it to the core….I don’t have words to thank u jaan….will update next one soon….love u loads muaaaaahhhhhh

    18. aastha on April 17, 2016 3:05 pm

      Priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa it was awesome……………..happy that Arjun also stared at her and felt his blood rising when everyone stared at her………….and you described Rads frm Arjun’s pov very beautifully………………..after hearing his question ” am i not handsome?????? ” , i broke into a laugh…………….but dint like Sam…….I’m sure she will be a villan in ardhika love story……………dm’s thoughts about Arju reveals that only she has understood him completely until now…………

      u r are an amazing writer my dear………..and i am extremely grateful to you coz ur story helped me to get out of tension…….i hope it last for longer time………..by the by how did your exams go ??????? all fine ?????????????

      • Supriya on April 17, 2016 5:36 pm

        Ohh assthu has anyone ever told you that you are toooo much cute don’t worry I am telling you now srsly assthu u and words make me feel soo much special.I feel as if I am floating in air…..I srsly mean it that you remind me of my bestie madhura…even she keeps praising me every second…..I don’t have words to thank you dear….but I will just say that may god bless you…may you get all the happiness of this world…..about Sam if I talk then don’t worry she loves arjun but she also wants his happiness…. the girl needs time…..will update soon dear…..love u forever…. Tc muaaaaahhhhhh?????

    19. Bhabya on April 18, 2016 10:53 am

      Amazing. Its a flawless story.

    20. Roma on April 18, 2016 11:28 pm

      Awesome episode, superbbbb n very beautiful. …..you nailed it my honeyyy. …it was mesmerizing scene when arjun was lost in rads first glimpse. …wowwww awesome narration n the interview was mind blowing. …dm n arjun convo was good…Sam is now scared of arjun’s behavior n don’t want to loose her best friend….lovelyyyyyy dialogues….is sam going to interview neil???…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

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